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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER. But fate has plans. In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams. It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need. But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....
WARNING: This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content. Hence the NC-17 rating...
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
All I can say is Bella is a much better person than I! I would have a real hard time being so self-sacrificing in the same situation!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
A happy Halloween for Adam and Eve! Love the description of his house, by the way.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I can't imagine having to evict a thousand families! Kind of cold, in my opinion. It sure gave Edward the opening he wanted and Bella sees nothing wrong with the situation. Neither do I!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Meeting Emmett and Rose went pretty well, after a while. Alice and Edward are lucky Bella didn't shoot both of them! That was a very risky thing for them to do and they are lucky it turned out as well as it did!
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
This guy is really too good to be true! What a great idea, to cover the sad memories with happy ones! It was kind of cute when Bella got after Jasper for guilting Edward over leaving.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Oh yeah, happy birthday Edward! The nursery was a fabulous surprise and the cradle in their room is a neat idea.
...Immersion...
Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High?
Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available. AU...Canon Couples
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46809 Read Count: 6473
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So, Bella is the vampire and Edward is human, nice switch. The heavenly scent thing is good,too, and from the sound of it, Bella can read his mind. That should help immensely. I can hardly wait!
Author's Response:
There you are, Kathy!!! You've found me over here! This was also posted at the other site! So lovely to see you here!
You know me and VAMP Bella...lol...I like a strong woman...as I have 3 daughters...lol
Thanks for the support, sweetie!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Of course it's something wonderful, it's each other! Evidently, Bella and Edward are perfect for each other, fancy that! This is a unique way for them to meet and recognize that something amazing is happening. You do write the best stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
There is some scientific basis in our noses leading us to our mates!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I don't know about fun, but it is a delight to read this version of Bella and Edward. I do see a recurring theme, though. In the Twilight stories, you ever notice how it's always the eager human that has no qualms about immortality? Wonder why that is? I really like how the mated pairs can share their gifts, that is too cool!
Author's Response:
That theme is out there!
Sharing gifts could be fun...sometimes...lol
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Like you need me to tell you, that was really good ! Edward is amazing, the way he's just going with the flow. Bella is the most important thing in his universe now, and no doubt forever.
Author's Response:
LOL...I like to hear it!!!
Yes, forever...this is an ANGST free fic...lots of UST, but no angst!
Thanks for reading, sweetie, I do appreciate it!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
You did a fabulous job, in my opinion. This is going to be a major problem and I'm hoping Carlisle can come up with a solution. There has to be some way for Edward and Bella to be close without having to disappear.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU, Kathy!
AH, you know that Carlisle is going to be of help...
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Pretty good plan for the time being. Carlisle is a smart and practical man and his ideas sound like they will get Bella and Edward through the difficult time ahead. All the Cullens are doing what they can to ease the strain of the mating imperative.
Author's Response:
Well, MOST of the Cullens were helpful, I think that Emmett wanted to stir up trouble!!!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue
What a stroke of good fortune that Edward got to keep his parents in the loop. It sounds like his vampire life fits him like a glove. Great story
Author's Response:
LOW angst...so his folks had to be kept in the loop!
Again, thanks for reading, Kathy!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Side Shot...Sandi, Debate Team Captain
A sweet and funny moment, handled just right!
Author's Response:
My good friend, LJ Summers, is such a great writer...she did wonders with this bit.
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Side Shot...Lauren
That's enough to give you the creeps! Those two girls are just pathetic
Author's Response:
KRIS did a great job creeping us out!!! LOL...
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Side Shot...Alice
It's a wonder the whole school didn't give that little trick a standing ovation! Served thos little bitches right.
Author's Response:
Thanks, again, Kathy, for reading all these bits!
Kathie
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752861
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 41: A Happy New Year
I vote for it just being the magic of New Years, gathering with best friends, and most of all being head over heels in love! Stir all that with sexy, suggestive music and there you have it! Like you, I wouldn't do it, but it's fun to read about!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares
Two or three really good things in this chapter, Bella's return to the ER, planning the wedding and dress shopping. The shower sex was a sure sign that Edward is continuing to recover, too!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Outside The Bubble
Since we all have been focusing on Bella and Edward and their trauma, the repercussions from Trager haven't been on the radar, I guess. It's sad that it's so normal for lawsuits to result from something like this! I knew this was all too calm and trouble-free to last!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 40: The Name Game
I'm really looking forward to the great last name debate, or rather a decision. Edward might as well admit he wants Bella to bear his last name, as well as his babies! We are getting closer to Bella working the ER and I sure hope she handles that well!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
A real grabber of an opening! Hope Bella is right about the swat team coming to the rescue! Her missing Edward the next morning should clue her in to the fact that she has serious feelings for him. It's undoubtedly the reason she hates Slutward and misses the sweet, caring side of him!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
If Jasper can see it, I wonder why neither Edward or Emmett can?Of course, Bella and Edward both have the wrong slant on the other's feelings!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell
In stressful situations such as this, sometimes the truth will out! Edward needs to listen to what Andy said, it's nothing but the truth!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment
Since he doesn't feel worthy of her , how can anyone expect Edward to make the right choice to be with Bella? The two of them love each other, they just haven't quite figured that out yet!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Why do I suspect Mama D of sneaky tactics, suggesting Bella have her friends join her in a girls' night out? She is going to stir the Bella/Edward pot a bit, I'm thinking!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J
I just knew this was a set-up, and Mama D was in on it! Look out Edward, they are after you now!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out
It will be Edwad's luck that Trevor is a player as he suspected. Not only that but he will most likely be a doctor, so he'll be around Bella at the hospital. As long as doesn't treat her badly, Trevor might be competition for Edward.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel
You did just fine with the swat mission, since they all came back in one piece, plus it sounded like you knew what was what. Edward lucked out getting to hold Bella and dream about warm, sandy beaches and holding her. Now if he can just have the balls to tell her he loves her!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Between the Femmes, and the guys, maybe Bella will get through this dating Trevor thing without too many bruises! Edward better play his cards just right, or he will lose any chance with her!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I totally understand both of them, and it's so sad that they can't get on the same page with each other! Hope they get smarter and soon, because it looks like maybe Trevor may be changing his ways. It would be ironic if he had a change of heart and still lost the girl. Not that it wouldn't be karma, which I hear is a bitch! Look what it's doing to Edward!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps
Sleep comes a whole lot easier when you have peace of mind! They may not have it all figured out, but it seems they have at least seen the blueprints! Hopefully Alice will be a good roommate and not drive Bella crazy.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted
I get it, Edward wants everything with Bella to be special and as perfect as he can make it! It was really sweet of Bella to ask Tanya to have dinner and drinks with her and Edward. Even nicer that they both want to help her get back to Chicago. They are both very nice, caring people. Oh yes, and very sexy, too!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For
Carlisle and Esme gave Edward the best advice, especially when telling him to be himself and be respectful. I'm sure he made points when he waited for Bella to get out of the E.R. and fed her pizza!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection
I'm with Bella, they built things prettier 125 years ago! Thanks for the shot of the conservatory, it's beautiful! You're right this was a great first date and I enjoyed it almost as much as they did!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum
Edward sure had Trevor pegged it seemjs! What a sleaze, putting on a show like that to suck in naive women! I'm so thrilled Bella overheard them and told him off! I'm not however happy she's in danger and the guys have to be gone for two weeks!Just when she and Edward are getting closer, this has to get in the way!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting
Not nice to put Bella and Alice in danger from the bad guys like that! God only knows what could happen while the team is out of town training! Now that Edward finally knows what he has in Bella, it's terribly unkind to snatch her away from him, shame on you!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames
Looking forward to this last night out, but cringing at the thought of the girls being kidnapped because the head of security owes the mob!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There
Without a doubt, the most fabulous wedding I ever read about! Makes me wish I could have been there to see it! Esme and Edward did a wonderful job of producing this nuptial masterpiece. Bella had the right idea, simple, with family and friends, in the most meaningful place. Edward and his mother just embellished a bit! Their vows to each other took my breath away, they were so beautiful!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected
The ring is lovely, and I'm tickled Edward gave it to Bella! I got goosebumps when she spotted that evil face outside Dooley's! One good thing came out of it, now Bella knows it isn't just imagination on the guys' part! At least they all had a good night before having to leave the girls , Amazing that Edward had the control to not just throw caution to the wind and make passionate love to Bella all night long! It was a close thing there before Andy pledged to guard her for him I just hope all the precautions are enough!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings
Yes, it was kind of mean, but what really worries me is now she's on her own and people want to hurt her! Trust Emmett to charge in there like a bullmoose and half kill Edward before he knew the facts! I'm also a tiny bit disappointed with Bella's reaction, she didn't have much faith in their love it seems!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster
Oh boy, that was great, all except for Edward getting beat up! I know just how Bella felt, going up and down that rollercoaster ride! That was damn scary, thinking Trager was going to try to take her! Poor Tony, now his son is probably going to die because his dad couldn't let a kidnapping happen! Thank God, Emmett told the truth and Edward has his Bella back! The bad part is, Trager is going to keep trying!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation
That's the thing about"what ifs", they will drive you crazy because there's nothing you can do about the past, only try to do better in the future! The swapping playlist thing was brilliant, you really nailed that one! I feel much better about their relationship, but still worry about the possible dangers ahead!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed
That was a gut-wrenching experience for Edward and Elizabeth, I'm sure, and she wasn't very nice to Bella, either! It all worked out a whole lot better than it might have, and it was good for both mother and son to work it out, finally! Lucky the Volvo stayed on the road and rightside up!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment
I'll bet Edward can just barely believe the difference in his life, now that he and Bella are together. It's looking good for Tanya and getting her settled back home in Chicago. Did I mention that Bella is a very nice woman? That it gave Edward the hope that it would mean Bella moves in with him was just the icing on the cake! Can't wait for the big deal on Friday!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time
Perfectly beautiful and damned amazing! Undoubtedly a most fabulous and wonderful lovemaking scene!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
I would love to have been at Dooley's for that night! How exciting that Emmett and Rose are getting married and having a baby! Makes me wonder if it will give Bella and Edward ideas?
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
WOW! That was pretty intense, and I hope it cleared up all the questions that have plagued Edward all these years! No surprise it took a sister to tell Elizabeth what was what! That was so sweet when Edward told Esme she was his real mom!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All
What a mess this is going to be! Who knew Trager had a twin? I'm so afraid this will be the crazy bastard and he's after Bella! Now Edward and the boys will have to rescue her! Help!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss
Well, you finally did it, made this weepy old woman cry! When Edward told Bella all he was , was hers, I lost it! She was magnificent through this whole mess and then to have to see her heart's love shot like that was just horrible! The whole chapter was so tough to read, these are people I care about now!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations
Of course he can hear her, I've always been convinced of that! It's why you should be careful what you say around a comatose patient! I'm so glad Edward will recover, and I hope Bella can forgive herself for killing Trager. It's not her fault all this happened, after all!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love of Esme
Nice little look into what Edward means to Esme and Carlisle, and vice versa.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In the Darkness
Smart surgeon, to tell Bella she's what's doing Edward the m ost good. Too bad that bitch, Michelle, had to say those hateful things to Edward and screech at Bella! I'm tickled that Bella threw her out of the room by her ponytail!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into the Darkness
Great chapter, even though Bella is starting to feel the full effects of the experience. Like Edward said, they will get each other through all this, especially since there is familyand friends to help them.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed
Of course it won't be fast or easy, but Bella is making a good start, and with Edward's help will overcome the trauma. Emmett had a really good idea having her beat the workout bag to a pulp!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Equivalency
That was a winner for Bella, for sure! Dr. Kellison stood up for her, as did Carlisle. Dr. Vandice was kind of a smug ass, until Carlisle told him off. Educators truly need to come down from their ivory towers now and again, to reacclimate themselves. Bella is my hero, she's got buckets of courage, coupled with smarts and compassion! Is it any wonder Edward loves her?
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Crankward
I knew there had to be a reason for Edward's sudden about-face attitude, and I sure hope it's one that he and Bella can work out! She really didn't need that extra dose of bad karma after her first day on peds rotation! This is such a stressful time for them both, it will test their bond, for sure!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Sympathetic Solitude
Looks like Bella is going to have a good learning experience on her pediatric rotation, especially with Dr. Salazar. Things are sure better with Edward, too, which doesn't hurt a bit! Bella is such a good doctor and can only get better!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Home
I imagine Edward is probably as happy to be home as he was to finally get some relief from that raging erection Bella helped him with!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte
Amazing that Dr. Peters was actually human to Bella, after the crisis with Charlotte, poor little sickly girl! It's always so hard with sick children, you want to help them and can't always!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations
What a fabulous Christmas! The ring exchange had me misty-eyed, the cop ornaments were darling and the Viper was to die for! Life is so good for them right now, I sure hope you don't put them in danger again, at least not before Edward is fully recovered!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Surfacing From the Deep
I had an epiphany when Edward got dropped from the team, and then ran into his dad and heard about the lawsuits! Why doesn't he take on and upgrade the hospital security? He's certainly got the skillset for the job and it woulf be wonderful if he and Bella worked sort of together! Just a weird idea! They both are going to have an adjustment to all the stuff that's coming down the pike, plus Sellers is sure to be skulking somewhere nearby!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 45: A Raft In The Flood
Well, my idea was okay, but this one of Edward's is even better! It lets him do what he loves and is good at, and do it close to home.I think Bella will be cool with it , much more than having to testify in court.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On
No apologies necessary, you did a beautiful job on this chapter and were right about the tissue warning. This had to touch anyone who has lost loved ones, especially parents.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 47: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Country or small town kids have always done stuff like that I guess. It must be harder or more dangerous for city kids to pull crazy stunts like that. This has been a very enlightening trip for us all. It offers a great insight into Bella and Emmett, sort of explaining what made them the people they are.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Surprise, SURPRISE
Very sweet dream Emmett had, even though it made him cry! The name for their baby is lovely. May I just say, Edward treats Bella like a queen and would do anything for her! Now I'm off to see who was laughing!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I'm thrilled that Sellers is behind bars and Bella had a big part in putting him there! The rest of the night was even better, and the thing with the mirror was so hot! This weekend has been amazing from beginning to end!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 50: The Human Incubators
Poor Tanya, what a crappy hand life has dealt her! Sad but true, most of us have to learn the hard way, and she certainly has! I hope something nice happens between her and Benjamin.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Thanks for the info onKKK, but I'm so old, I rememberwhen they were shown on television in the fifties! The Rock Band competition has been a lot of fun to read about, especially the tee shirt face-off! A+ for the shower sex and reunion scene, by the way! Great descriptions!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Rock On
What can I say, but this was just perfect! From the costumes to the music to the outcome and the love between the Docs and the Knights!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Pressure
Please don't tell me that some slick lawyer will try to use Charlie's teaching Bella to shoot , into a weapon against her and the hospital! That would be gross and unfair. What am I saying, we are talking attorney after all!She shouldn't have much trouble passing her internship exam, but the trial will be more difficult, I'm sure.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off
It's getting down to the wire for the trial and Bella's ordeal! I hope she gets through it without too trauma and upset.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 55: On The Hot Seat
I was so glad that Varner finally roared over that line the judge warned him about and he paid the price! Too bad he wasn't tossed in a cell for contempt, as I was pretty damn contemptuous of his sleazy tactics! Good, too, that Bella had the opportunity to refute most of the garbage anyway. It was pretty effective when she explained why she would never join in a lawsuit such as this!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 56: The Eye of the Storm
Justice was truly done and the verdict was the proper one. I'm sure the whole crew is thrilled with the outcome, plus the fact it's over.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
I must be older than I thought, because that drunken mess didn't sound like anything I would enjoy. Watching, of course, might be another matter. This chapter was pretty funny in spots. I was tickled they got their land to build on, and even better they foiled the greedy realtor! After all the grief and agony Bella and Edward have been through, they deserve this wonderful time!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Everything
Loved it, loved it, loved it! They had a great reception, complete with all the traditional trappings, so I'm happy, but not as happy as they are!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
A most memorable Christmas, what with Masen falling through the ice! I knew as soon as his mother told him not to, he would walk out on the ice. Good thing she shooed the guys out of the basement so they could rescue the boy! The years have been kind to the Cullens and the rest and blessed them all with a flock of children, the real treasures in life! You wrote a great story and I loved it!Now I can finish the outtakes!
Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hooray for Edward not caring that Bella is overweight, and nearing middleage, he just loves her, in whatever package she's in! Good for her, too , for not fearing what he is. Of course, living with a shape shifter for the better part of tweny years probably helps!
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying the different spin you have put on our favorite characters. It's fun to read how life has been for everyone, still canon couples, for the most part, plus some new characters . I love that Edward is a veterinarian, but am curious as to how the animals tolerate his vampirism. Speaking of which, how and when did he become a vampire?
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
What are the odds of them meeting again after all these years? Dare I ask why his eyes are gold, if they were green eighteen years ago? I hope Bella pulls up her socks and tries to be happy after the divorce. Maybe Edward will help her with that!
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Damn! Bella has had a tough time of it, from the sound of things. Life is hard when there's not enough love and not enough money. So, the ultimate rejection, Jake has imprinted and Bella is going to be on her own with the twins, Thirty-six is at least young enough to start over and I hope she does well, it will serve Jake right and make her feel better too!
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I see Bella is still a danger magnet, that hasn't changed, either! Those creeps deserve whatever Edward did to them, and I love that Bella punched the hell out of her hand, defending herself! At least medical assistance was close.
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Tia may be a problem and irritate her uncle with her unfounded prejudice. It's unusual , especially when Rose and Alice both are friends with Bella, and Carlisle and Esme are thrilled to see her again!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Vampire, human or hybrid, teenagers seem to all be brats at one time or another! I hope Tia gets over her jealousy and gets to know Bella. They might even like each other!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I see Jacob Black is still his ususal tactful self, with the addition of wife-smacking! I am beyond thrilled that Bella broke her cast smacking him back, and also that her son took his father to task for hitting his mother! With the twins in the house, maybe little Miss Tia will get het attitude adjusted.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
How could you resist loving him when he's so sweet and caring and considerate and beautiful? It's great that the twins get along with the Cullens, McCartys and Hales so well, except for Tia, of course.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Hell of a thing for your final divorce papers to show up on Valentine's Day! I kind of think Edward did a great job of counteracting the sorrow, though! I liked that Bella has given her children middle names associated with the Cullens.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
That was a really nice way to end a really crappy day! Wonder what she will answer?
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Despite Bella's stubborness, she now has a car that won't die on it's way to work, school or the grocery store! I guess she just never wull learn to accept a gift or help, graciously!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Damn Jake, anyway, why does he have to be such a bigoted ass? Bless Alan for coming to Bella's rescue, silver bullett and all! Kind of spooky that he knows about wolves and vampires, but he seems to be oky with it!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Too bad about the puppies, but luckily Jasper and Emmett are close and able to watch over Bella. Jake is being a giant pain in the butt over Edward and his family. Since they don't want to get Alan in trouble, I guess a restraining order is out of the question. Can't wait 'til Bella gets a load of the Lear jet!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I wonder if Jake is ever going to get a clue and grow up? Happy for Bella, now that she and Edward have truly connected again. All she has to worry about now is preventing a big fight in her front yard.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I sure hope Jake won't really try to kill Bella, that would be insane, as the kids would never forgive him! Good thing Sam is regaining controlof the pack and has a much cooler head on his shoulders. Bottom line, Edward isn't about to let harm come to his Bella, whatever he has to do to keep her, and he chioldren safe!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Wouldn't that be interesting, if Tia and Seth end up together? Looking forward to this meeting, to see what they all come up with to keep everyone safe.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Looks as if push is about to come to shove! Bella will either die or change, and I dare those wolves to say no!
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Okay, Bella , what's so funny? Not that I blame her for trying to find something good about the situation she is in. Hope the kids take the news as well as they can, it will mean a lot to their mother.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Never rains but what it pours it seems, at least in Bella's world! I can't decide whether Emmett is an idiot or a welcome distraction.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Bella is going to have a talk with Seth about that, I'll bet! It sounds like the twins got back just in time, since their stubborn mother wasn't about to change without their approval.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
All I can say is it's about time! If they had dilly dallied around any longer, Bella would be beyond help of any kind! There's an awful lot going on right this minute, what with the new wolves and the hybrids imprinting on each other while everyone else trys to save Bella.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
That has to be frustrating, to hear what's happening and not be able to do anything about it! Bella is most likely going to have some sort of talent, gift or power, whatever you want to call it.
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I'm with Ben, Badass Bella saved the day! She is the goddess of destruction now, so nobody better piss her off! What a relief that she came through the transformation with battle flags flying!