Reviews by JustJillian16
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Urgg, write longer chapters!! -sigh- I really can't wait for the next chapters.. haha.

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Ahh, finally.. i'm sorry she is camping again.. <3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

He is SUCH a creep!! Can you saw rape??! I certainly can! Haha, write more soon!

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Oh my god.. fucking creep!! Haha, geez.. i knew he was fucked up in the head.. god, can you say pedophile??! Haha, i can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry, hurry!

<3



Author's Response:

You know the really crazy thing about the FATHER.. is that he gets really angry with himself for his thoughts.. It is like he has a split personality.. He wants her.. but he HATES that he does.. lol   that just makes him even more twisted.  Thanks for the review.

 

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Stop looking for her.. that my best bet.. but gosh, everytime you write a story from their point of view, i get soo depressed. Haha, but i still love the story. :]

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Ughh, please! Kill him off at the end!!

Summary:

There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is?  A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.

 

Banner by mkystich72  .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Mar 2010
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I was hoping it would be Bella.. but i suppose it would have been too obvious, huh? Maybe it was the butler.. it's always the butler.. haha..

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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625095
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I would have freaked and left. oO

 

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Creep..



Author's Response:

If you'd rather skip the graphic beginning send me a pm and I'll summarize for you. Just start at chapter 11.  I promise the story doesn't stay this way for long.

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

My god.. you're very good at writing this.. even if it is a bit.. questionable?!

It's interesting.

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Well, we all knew James would want her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I promise the story gets better soon

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

God, i just want to say to Edward 'You don't deserve a salvation you fucked-up kid.' But i suppose everyone does.. and it's not his fault.. he was brainwashed into it.. kind of makes you feel bad for the asshole.



Author's Response:

That's the real heart of the story is that even though Edward is one of the villians in the story, he is also a victim.  Not that it justifies his behavior at this point, but you feel a little sympathy for him so that you're willing to give him a chance as he struggles to change.

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

What a nice change in pace.? Haha.

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I love it!

Can't wait. ;]

You're really talented.. i've been reading non-stop for the past 2 weeks.. i've spent more time on the computer then i normally would in a month.. my mom thinks i'm talking to some guy. Haha

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Bitch!! Take forever to post, and then a cliffy?? Urghhh, the best story on here, and you're turning the main, finally nice, male character into one of thoosse, again... -sigh- Haha, i can't wait.. i hope he's not too rough with her.

<3



Author's Response:

lol! Everything is quickly coming to a head.  I promise to get the next chapter out quickly.  Trust me...

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Aww, well, isn't nhe smart?!

And his cousin is soo going to rape her.. i can see it.

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh my god.. i did not see that coming.. damn.

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OH MY GOD!! Sooo, didn't see that coming.. but what happened to her being in love with him?

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Awww, how cute... i knew it was him when you said wildflowers.. ;] Nice.

I'm sad that it's over.. what a fabulous story. <3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Awww!!! :')

Loved it!! I've loved reading this stpory for soo many weeks.. amazing. <3

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Take long much?! I was ready to remove it from my favorites.. sorry.. haha, but it's just too bad that he'll have to get rid of his income.. ;]

Can't wait for the next chapter!! <3

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

Loved it!!! :]

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Misguided reality

Ughh, really, a cliff hanger?! Ahh, hurry to write more.. i love Bella's relationship with Carlisle.. ><

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aww, way to go Bella.. didn't even tell him. :] I like it. Write more soon!

<3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Rosalie isn;t dead.. atleast i hope not. ><

I have not idea.. he needs to take her, though.

He enjoy's sex WAYY too much wkith her as a human.. :]

I want to say edward, but i don't know..

 

Hurry and write more soon!! <3

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.

Finally!! My god.. haha. :] I'm quite happy.. write more soon!! Like, now-ish..

<3

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

safe

Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my god.. this story is amazing!! I haven't read anything this good in a long time.. like, the first time when you read a book and there are those moments when you have to put the book down because you're so giddy with excitment for the characters to have those moments or sexual tension and to finally say what needs to be said.. i love it. =] Write more soon.

<3



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words!

I have had those moments when reading a novel, and for you to say so about my little fic, it warms my heart and makes my fingers type faster.

Thanks again!

 

T

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh my god!! You're rotten. :] I can't wait for the next review!! I can't believe she's pregnant though.. one of my biggest fears; being prego before being married.

<3



Author's Response:

Is she or isn't she? You'll just have to stay tuned to find out!   Hehehehehe!

T

 

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh my god!! I knew it!! I knew it was too much for Bella.. nice! But shit.. Rose is pregnant AND she fucking let Edward in.. mhmm.. very interestng and fun. :]

<3



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading!

T

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh my god.. what a fucking bitch!! Shit, that has happened to me once when my ex girlfriend brought me home to meet the family, and the mother decided i wasn't the girl for her daughter, and invited someone that worked part time in her office.. my ex damn near slapped her mother accross the table.. the other girl looked so confused.. it was the best. Haha. Stupid bitch. :]

I loved this chapter!! Hurry back with more.

<3



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sharing! It's amazing what some mothers will do to their children's spouses/love interest. My mother in law was a beast--that's part of why she's now my EX MIL!

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Knew it!! Wayy creepy.. haha, hurry to write more. :]



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad that you liked it!

 

T

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my goodness.. i love it!! I can't wait until Edward comes into the picture.. :] Poor Alice, though.. i was thinking Bella would be like 'Let me try..' and they would sort shit out.

<3



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying.  Edward is down the road a little more.  Alice will have resolution by the end, don't worry, although Bella is not her cure.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Summary:

Alice is hosting a Criminal Minds marathon, and Jasper's a little flustered when he learns that his crush will be attending. Awkward, slashy fun ensues. Written for Yogagal's birthday. AH/OOC


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2821 Read Count: 179
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha, i loved it! :]

Summary:

Isabella Swan couldn't care less about Edward Cullen's perverted perception of her relationship with his teenage son, Seth. And yet she keeps finding herself on the defensive with the need to change his mind at every given opportunity.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116998 Read Count: 25021
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 26 Aug 2010
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. :]

<3



Author's Response:

Thank you! Well, this story is almost 80 percent written so I update at least twice a day. :)

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What a sad, strange, creepy old man!!!

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hmm.. Clair hunting.. good for him. :]

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god.. what a terrible person!! I love it.. :]

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135059
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmm.. i like it.. might want to look over the post one more time before posting.. i found a few errors.. but i like where this is going. :]



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

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Hermione contemplates her life since her capture by the Dark Lord. She has one last act of defiance up her sleeve, one last desperate bid for freedom. Dark, dark, dark!!! You've been warned....


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Tom Riddle
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6910 Read Count: 1163
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2011
Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it!! Really, this pairing can get a bit tricky, especially when it is of Voldemort and not Tom. Really great job… write some more! :]