Reviews by smlpate
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

Hell Yeah! Aro Rocks in this story!

Poor Bella!  Holy hell! 

I can't believe that Leah & Seth are both Edwards!

Fing A!  soo much info this chapter, it all makes sense!  Tanya & James are fing crazy!

I can't wait unti the next one!  Soon!!!! Please:)



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil

I am sooo proud of Bella!

First with the gossip, helping Emmett, dealing with the scumbag Royce, and then Paul! She is Soo strong!

Got to love Aro and his guards!  Go Felix and Garrett!

Get that fucker Jane!

Stupid sue, she is such a dumbass!  

I hope when they get her that James gets a go too!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come.  I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far.  And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she?  Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh.  I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter.  A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter.  Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise.  Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out.  There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat.  I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue.  She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun.  I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are.  Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them.   There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31.  Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up.  See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...

Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night.  I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in.  “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”

She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”

I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her.  “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.”  I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye.  “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you.  The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers.  Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band. 

“Baby, what’s wrong?”

She looks up at me and frowns.  “I was just thinking about my past.  There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.”  Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it.  “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me.  Her friend... he gave me a muffin.”  Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts.  “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?” 

My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head.  “Yes, baby, it was me.  I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”

Bella shakes her head at me.  “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you.  I wanted you to come back and take me with you.  At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch.  If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here.  They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”

I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly.  “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them.  I will not fail you or my children again.”

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Faith Within

Finally! That bitch is caught!

Why does Jane need a lawyer?

So everyone knows:)

How many more chapters?  I hope we get to see what they have;)



Author's Response:

Well it seems that most everyone is happy that Sue is caught, but many of you are unhappy that she wasn’t tortured first by our dear Jane.  No worries our little Jane will eventually be paying Sue a visit.  Many seem to be worried that Sue will escape or get away; well rest assured that we have no intent on letting that fruit-loop free.  She is toast.  It seems that less people are disgruntled by Bella being pregnant, now that chapter 30 posted.  As the next few chapters post, I am thinking most if not all people will understand why Jess told us it was the perfect fit.  Nikky and I have added to but not really changed much of the original story-line.  I love when you all make suggestions and we’ve already written it into the story.  The next chapter has a few suggestions in it, that oddly enough were written before they were suggested.  I know that some of you are sad that this will be coming to a close, but there will be MANY – MANY more out-takes to come.  We actually discussed some future plotting things today and have a whole other out-take to add to the Enduring His Cimmerian View, in Edward’s POV to boot.  A lot of you want a Jane’s POV and well we have decided that it will be the next one released, do I hear the cheering already?  Yep... pretty sure I do... LOL.  We really want to say THANK YOU again and again, for reading, reviewing and loving this story so much... it has become a HUGE part of our lives and we both put a lot of work into it, as well as the wonderful group of gal’s we have keeping us from looking stupid. Jane will make a visit to jail and that is why she needs a lawyer and chapter wise of HCV is around 35 when complete with Epi.  However Enduring His Cimmerian View will have at least 8 to 10 more added to it by the end.  Including some future takes of this story.

Thank you, and we will see you with the next update.  Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Chapter 31 teaser, subject to changes during beta process.
Tomorrow we are scheduled to be in court.  Since it is the same day as my birthday, I have refused to do anything but celebrate us getting full custody of Seth and Leah.  I am thinking positive.  Bella has refused to let my twenty-ninth birthday go by without doing something.  Seth and Leah soon joined in and I lost the battle.  So tonight we are having a family dinner, and everyone is going to be here.  Bella decided that I should also receive my gifts tonight from everyone.

I watch her making sure everyone has drinks before she sits me in the middle of everyone.  Seth and Leah come up to me first.  Seth hands me small box, and Leah hands me two envelopes.  I open the envelopes first.  The first envelope contains a certificate for being the best dad, signed by both Seth and Leah.  The second envelope holds a homemade birthday card from them.  I whisper out an emotional thank you to them in their ears, before opening the box Seth gave me.

As I open the box, I see it’s a necklace.  It is platinum with dog-tag like disks of metal hanging from it.  The first tag says ‘Dad’.  I look at the next which says ‘Seth Masen’ on it as I turn it over I see the other side has his date of birth.  The next has ‘Leah Masen’ again the back has her date of birth.  The last tag is blank and I look up questioningly.

“It’s for when Bean’s born.”  I look up at Seth and Leah and pull them both in for a hug a kiss the heads.

“Thank you Little Man and Princess.” I watch them go back at sit down, after we share a few more hugs.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers

I'm Soo glad she went to "talk" to sue!

Now she can move on happily with her family!

I think it's cute that Seth slipped, M... :). She is in every way!

Cant wait for the wedding!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the major fail in getting this review reply in a timely manner.  Been stressing with the issues of moving and getting the net working, but on the bright side things are working well now.  Chapter 33 should post on time, I’m working on 34 right now and Nikky is working on the Epilogue right now.  WOOT WOOT!  Not much for teasers after this chapter, but keep those reviews and thoughts coming in, we love to hear what you have to say.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

TEASER!!! For chapter 34 – subject to changes during beta process...
With the help of Garrett, he got his hands on a large poker table, and even hired a dealer for the night with Aro’s help.  He asked Bella and Esme to make us up snacks, and then sent Emmett and Jasper to get the big people juice.  We kept the card game light while Seth was playing with us.  After he went to bed, we gambled a little harder.  Emmett’s only complaint about the night was that there seemed to be the lack of strippers. Actually, he was upset because there were no strippers.  

The night was relaxing and rather quiet, so it was perfect for me. I don’t see this as my last night of freedom, but the last night of my old, solitary life.  I can’t wait to have Bella as my wife.  I can’t wait to call her Mrs. Masen tomorrow.  Tomorrow I marry my soulmate, and my true life will begin.

~HCV~

Here I am, standing up at the front of the church.  Everything is so beautifully decorated.  The girls made it look perfect, and I know it’s exactly as Bella wanted it.  The ladies of the church made sure that every single detail of Bella’s wishes was precisely the way she had envisioned it.  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Wedding Bells

I love that Seth said "you don't have to go to her, she's coming to you!". 

So they are married! 

I love the speeches!  I really thought that Leah and Seth were going to declare that they wanted Bella to be called mom, but they did say that just haven't said it officially yet!

Gotta love Jane!

So Edwards mom is back, mixed feelings on that. Not that she is back, but that she might have been in cahoots with sue. I hope I'm wrong!

Heaeded to the honeymoon!  Soo sweet!

Cant wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

As things are winding to a close Nikky and I wanted to take this opportunity to say that we are very grateful for all of your reviews and the time you put into reading our story.  Our next plans are to work on the several POV’s that you have all asked for.  The Jane POV will for certain be the next POV chapter we post. 
As for the next story we plan to write, well Nikky has this uncanny ability to get a tiny idea and go freaking CRAZY with it and so now she has already hammered out a decent start on a new story...  AND what a story it will be... How about a story of a virginella who loves to dance, and an olderward who lives in the BDSM lifestyle – we know been done before right?  Yeah well knowing us... do you really think it won’t have a few twists?  Besides as wonderful as we write bad guys, you know you can’t wait to see what kind of crazy this will bring on.  This BDSM story will of course have SEX in it, but it will not be all about sex, nor will the next chapter of HCV. 
A couple people have mentioned that they hope the whole next chapter is not just full of a bunch of sex acts, and honestly HCV has never been about a bunch of sex acts.  Yes there have been some explicit scenes in the story, especially regarding Edward when he was attending the club, but this story has never needed sex to be readable... and our next story will be the same way.  We also have a stalker story on the burner, and the BDSM may turn into a really big drabble or one-shot.  Either way you’ll be seeing MUCH more from Nikky and me. 
I am also writing a story with Jess that will start posting fairly soon under the name JessAndTAT that will be called Bases Loaded. 
I don’t think that there are any loose ends yet to tie up, other than Rose, and you will learn more about her in the Epilogue.  If there is something else you want to know let us know right away and we will get it answered and or addressed in the Epilogue.
As always and again, thank you so very much for being such wonderful and loyal readers.
Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser for Chapter 34: Subject to changes during Beta process.
I look at Bella who is sound asleep, in bed.  I smile pushing her hair from her face. I rented us a villa and we haven’t left the bedroom for longer than half hour all weekend. I know that things will change today.  She still has no clue about where we are.  I chuckle remembering the car ride here and how she looked around trying to work it out.  All she knows is that we are still in America.

My phone beeps I pick it up and read the text, seeing that my first surprise will be here in just over an hour.  I get out of bed head to the kitchen to make Bella breakfast in bed.  I play music as I fry her eggs and bacon, being really careful of my delicate parts, since I’m not exactly dressed.  Ha, the naked chef has nothing on me.  Once breakfast is ready I head back with a try and place it on the bedside table.

“Baby it’s time to get up,” I whisper in her ear. 

I watch her smile as she stretches and wakes up.  “Hmm, no – to tired.  Come back to bed and cuddle with me, or better yet help me wake up the good way – like you did around three this morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, but stop to kiss her before speaking.  “As much as I would love to take you again baby, over and over – I can’t right now.  I have a surprise for you and you need to eat your breakfast and get washed before it arrives.  Because once it’s here I’ll be taking you out for the day and you will finally know where exactly we are at.”

She opens her eyes wide and smiles at me.  “You got me a surprise?”

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth

I had faith!  I remembered when r/l seth kept getting hurt too:( I hope he is doing ok.

I knew it was going to be Emmett who would take the hoor down!

Until this weekend!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

That was perfect!  Everything! The proposal, the pool, the shower, his room, the adoption, everything!

 

Im gonna be sad when it's all over!

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

My OT vote: Split!  His in the beginning with asking and then gets with response and after! **wags eyebrows** loL

i love their chemistry!  And I love their connection!  

Thanks for the info on the engagement!  I actually went back a couple to check if I didn't remember!  Lol!  Then I figured you would let us know. 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

freaking hilarious, i wouldn't be able to not laugh either!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

F'ing Tanya. She's gonna try to get into beg with him, huh. 

Hell who wouldn't want Edward for dinner, dessert, breakfast, lunch, hell even a snack!

 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

too freaking sweet!  totally funny!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

that was his declaration of love to her! soo sweet!

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412095
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i frraking love them and their sexually deviant ways!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

im sooo glad i found your story again!

i missed papi! im glad that they came to the agreement of misunderstandings and neglect!

 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

that was beautiful! i love how he did it and the little notes as it went!  perfect!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i love them! they complete each other!

charlies wife is too sweet!  how she opened up is endearing and tells bella, it truly doesnt matter what you did in your past!

Kismet by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary:

Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?

Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?

 

kismet


Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

You are such a tease! Making us think that it was Bastian!

Poor Olivia!  I can't imagine the longing!  I surely would've hired a PI after all that time:)

Sam, oh Sam... He just wants a little some some:)

Love the emotions!

Onto the next chapter!

Shelli

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Whew!  I'm fanning myself over here! 

Love, love, love the reunion!

So happy that he feels the same way!  It's kinda sad that he figured out of site, out of mind:(  

But good things come to those who wait!

Amazing Cat!!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

You, you, you, are a tease!!!!!

Holy hotness!!!!!

I freaking love it!

So, when is the next update??????  Like tonight, within an hour, or a minute??? 

Wow, oh Wow!

At first I was getting sad with her when he said he was going to be leaving again.

But from the sounds of it, he's not leaving without her this time!!!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Ok!  I said F it!  The pool can wait:)

Holy hotness mother of Gawd! 

That was freaking hotter than hot!  When I get home I'm reading it again in privacy, so j can take care of some issues!  

I couldn't wait though!  

Seriously freaking freak!  FLUV it!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Of Memories, Mario, and Me versus You

I love their banter!  I'm glad they are talking about the past. They need that!

Bastian 4.0!  Look out boy!

I want a shower like that!

I voted last weekend!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Someone Like Me

WHAT! Married!  Wow!  I figured it was a ex, just not ex wife!

Wow!  That is crazy that he was pretending it was Olivia! That is kinda freaky and endearing at the same time. 

I can understand her disappointment, especially after all the pining she has done. 

I love that he said thAt he would've walked right out that door with her:)

Perfect ending of the chapter!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Spoon You Surprise

I wish all my birthdays were like that!  Or at least ended like that:)

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

3up

A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222305
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2

shes preggo?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In

well c& e took it well and are understanding and have valid ooints about how it would look if or when it got out  

jasper is scared running  what a fool!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2

well im glad he is manning up!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions

Baggage yes!

WTF is wrong with EM!  I get defending the Love of your life, but F, not defending his sister!

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

No, don't slow down!

That was alot of info!

I have no clue who it is... My first thought is Embry & Jake.  But, with what Edward said, I'm not sure......hmmmm

Onto the next one!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3

I actually thought it was going to be Rose & Em!

But Leah & Jake, that is freaking classic!

Holy moly!

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4

I called it right!

That is fing crazy!!!!

Until your next one!

Poor Alice, just wanted to spend some time with Bella!

Oh, oh! Is the party up next??

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!

shes got the hots  for bella!  hahaha

fung riley & jacob!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2

Seriously what the fuck is Renee on?

Holy crow!  That was crazy!

Now is the start of the rest of their lives

So when is jacob being dealt with. I have a couple more to read so hopefully in those?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours

poor jasper!  

finally jacob!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Fallout

he thinks bella loves jazz more

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Fallout Pt. 2

hes a dumbass!

the waynhe handled the club i think is best!

now how will bella and jazz respond?

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3

well im glad they talked, now i cant wait for jazz to see him!

edward is a emo dumbass!   but we love him anyway!

poor bella was going to have a panic attack when she thought about his response at the club of her being preggo  

 

cant wait for the next one!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Who's Your Daddy?

A boy! Yeah!  But whose is it??  That is the question!

 

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 - Life's Lessons

Sooo sad. But at least it's out. 

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 - Life's Lessons Pt. 2

Woo hoo!  Go miss Caroline!

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 - Ch...Ch...Changes Pt. 3

So they have a red headed sweet little girl:)

But now Edwards going back to baseball?  He will be gone alot, I thought that was one of the concerns to begin with. Especially now with 2 kids. 

I know it's his dream, but idk. 

Until tr next one:)

Summary:

 

 

On what is supposed to be the happiest day of Edward and Bella's lives, Bella receives news that could possibly destroy all she's ever hoped and dreamed of. Is it real...or is it just a dream?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7099 Read Count: 1287
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 04 Nov 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omgosh!

that was absolutely amazing and heart wrenching at the same time!

i had tears, smiles, and love all at the same time!

i love it!



Author's Response:

So glad you loved the one shot and it brought out so many emotions.

 Thanks for reading!!

EA

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717323
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Awwwwwwwwwww!

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

You know I'm still reading!!! It's Grnidgirl/pâtés greeneyes ;)

yes, Bella's mind is a joked mess still, and it's to be expected. The o my thing that sucks is everyone in her ear about what happened. 

Can I say I wish CJ would have kicked Emmett's ass for the remarks he made!

alice is crazy!  LOL. Rosé is crushing on CJ??  Not that I can blame her, because after him taking care of Bella with Em and checking on her. I kinda am too!  But, his is just as a brother. Will Edward beat Emmett's ass too??  I gotta say if Emmett keeps this up, he should go in the grinder too!

bella is good with Bianca and it makes her happy!  Now Alice not so much!  LOL!

 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

**big smiles**

I'm glad he reassured her and she got it!

shes free!  ;). Love that!

i love thAt he used her purple knapsack!


Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Poor guy!  He just wants to show her he wants her. But, she is Soo freaked out that he now only wants her for what?? Sex?  He just wants something with her. 

I can see his frustration of does she or doesn't she. 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Oh no!!!! That jealous dumb boy!! 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Dumb dumb boy!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Finally they are talking!!!!! 

Silly jealous kids!!!

i hope she stays and they talk tomorrow!

it does make me sad that she thinks its ok to let him have her, because be has needs!

but, then again that is all she has known!  I'm glad be straightened his ass up!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Fucking love it Lexi!

crazy kids is right!  Holy shit!

i can't wait for their talk!  I can see why jazz is pissed And freaked out. But damn! 

I do love that he stuck up for his sister.  But, Edward didnt know. 

Sooo good!  Thanks for the update!!

Summary:

 

 

Edward is a loner of sorts, who thrives in his life, striving for perfection.  What happens when he finds attraction in a broken woman?  When she rejects his normal advances, how far will he go to make sure he has the perfect plan in place?  Will she let him control everything in her life? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20753 Read Count: 5189
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2013 Updated: 05 Feb 2013
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy shit!  

I gotta say crazyward! Possessiveward, physcoward!

He knew he was pushing it, he had to of. 

Poorguy! He just wants to be loved.

i can't wait to see what happens next!

i really can't blame Bella. 



Author's Response:

Wow the reviews we have gotten for this have just blown us away.  First thanks to all of you who reviewed or pm’d us saying you can’t believe we didn’t place in the contest.  We were sad that our story seemed to not get the attention that some did however there were a lot of great entries.  The next chapter is being worked on for this story.  We are planning to wrap things with this story in the next chapter.  It will obviously be a future-take and show things over a period of time.  I like the plotted out plan that Nikky and I have for it and we think you will too.  Thanks again for being such wonderful fans and great reviewers.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Ps.. sorry for the timely manner in which this review reply arrived to you, PI’s wrap up chapter is just about ready to go off to the beta and will be posting soon.  Thanks again for all your patience and thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814499
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

Hopefully some hot shower sex!   

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

I can't wait to find out!  But, I have a feeling Charlie nor Jacob will be smiling!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

Get him Charlie!!! I'm still mad at him though!

does he really think Edward is going to let Bella go with them?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 203: Chapter 203

What an asshole! Charlie that is!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 200: Chapter 200

Omg!  I fucking love Emmett's pov!!!

hilarious! 

Bella is such a tease!  Just like you two!  LOOOOOL!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 199

Truth!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

Damn!!!!!  How did he think that Jacob was sooo old?? Isn't jake younger than Bella?  Or was Charlie there aNd left?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

SMH!  Uh maybe he is her dad!  LOL

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

I love jasper!!! Truly!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

To jasper!!! How many times have I said this now??? LOL

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

:)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

OMG!  Head two are fucking, literally, hilarious!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

Hopefully both at the same time!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 242: Chapter 242

Oh!  I don't think he's anything like jake! 

I mean he's acting a little domineering, but he has had Soo much pent up passion right now, that it makes sense. And it's not like she has said No. Soooo....

 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

O.O

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

I can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

Yes!  And he is showing his sweet side!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 233: Chapter 233

One full push! Ughh!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

Aww!

Glad your back safely!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

Oh my is he ever! Whew!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Omg!!!!! Fucking intense!  Bwahahaha!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Get it Alice!  At least someone is! 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

LOL!  You are a god damn tease!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 211: Chapter 211

Hmmmm.....what will happen???

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Oh Edward is finally seeing the truth!  And it killed him to hear it!

Now, lets see how things change!  How his attitude is with her. Can I bet that Angela was feeding him a bunch if bullshit the whole time!

i hope you are doing ok!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

OMG!  Fucking yes please!

i love what she did to him!

Ughnnf!

I need more!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Awe! They each have their own insecurities!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Lmfao!  I fucking love it!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Aww!  Finally his head came out of his ass!  ;)

she is going to be fish mouthed for a min. 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Love!  Bella!  Ha!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Bwahahaha!  I fucking love it!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

He's going to spank his toddler for acting like a fool!  Lol

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yes!!! My god!  I have always been bigger than my friends so it was always like that!  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Love rose!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

OMG!  I fucking love it!  Woo hoo! Get it girl!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

0.0. 

 

Wtf!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Love it!  Jasper is a fucking stud!  I hope Alice comes around!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

HHmm finally he Admits it!

wellnim hoping for a kiss, but a thank you, maybe

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You mean besides rob?  Lol

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

LOL!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283

Oh my the possibilities!  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 220: Chapter 220

Awww!  Finally ;)

love jasper! And I agree neither girl should be there!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

He is s dumbshit. But, LOL her toy rabbits!!!!!

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bwahahaha!  Lol!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lmfao!!!!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hmmm, maybe his doesn't like her, because she encourages Bella to travel and want to leave. And that would ruin his Nd Charlie's little plan!  LOL

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Dear dumbass and dumbfuck,

Now that's how I would have started it. Lol

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

WTF!!!! Jake needs to get a dick up his ass! Mother fucker!!

Now, Seth has a good head on his shoulders!

charlie is a dumbass!  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Oh no way!  She had to say something!

*giggles* love it!

Smh, at both I them. Insecurities no more!  Woo hoo!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Lol!

boo!!! Monitors!