Reviews by Sleeping_Beauty247
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514659
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Shit, I just remembered the chip that James had gotten to put in Victoria-the tracking GPS chip is going to lead him right to them....I just know it!!!

I love this story but am kind of upset that they are making the school out to be a bad thing and I really hope that Bella sees that it really did help her in the long run and that Edward and Bella will continue that type of lifestyle in the future, once the shit with James is dealt with...I would love to see them play on weekends or some shit like that and still live a somewhat "normal" life during the weekdays and I want them to get married and have babies too...LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Its got to be fucking slut Tanya....Uggghhhhh!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

WTF....are you kidding me..."until I leave you with a bitch of a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 25"....that is just plain CRUEL!!!!!!!

You are seriously killing me here with that author note...I think I would have preferred that you didn't even warn us...so now I am stuck worrying about your bitch of a cliffhanger...and all I have to say is that if you are going to be mean like that then you at least better post the first chapter of the next installment very damn close to that cliffhanger and not make us wait for ever in fricking suspense!!!!!!! Mean, Mean, Mean....Big Meanie!!! *pouts....

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

Ok, so you say chapter 25 is not drama filled; then I am totally hoping that it will be Bella & Edward finding out that she is PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't want to have to wait all the way until she graduates from college, jeesh....she just started college, that will be too long of a wait!!

I totally want them to get pregnant right away...and I want their first child to be a boy...a little Edward junior!!!! Ok....pretty please with cherries on top!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315695
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

Fuck, please don't let it be Jacob's peen; I hate that fucker!!!!

I am 100% Team DenialWard all the way!!!!

LOL

I love this story HARD!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Irrevocable

WTF....I am so totally lost; how and what.....???? did this get posted to the wrong story????

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

stories/1036/images/edwardsclan_Banner_by_evilangel813.jpg

**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List

I love this story; originally I had been following it on FF.net but after all the bullshit that happened over there I stopped reading on their site and now only read on this lovely new site & twilighted!!

I am so glad you moved over here and can't wait till you get this story posted up to date with the chapter that had last been posted on FF!!!!

That last one on FF was a doozy and I am so dying to see how this all plays out!!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

ok...chickie...where the hell have you been????

I was faithfully following you with this story on FF.net until of course they pulled their bullshit, which honestly...I can now say turned out to be a blessing in the long run because it brought us all together here on this lovely site!!

So with that being said...I am totally dieing for you to get all caught up on posting this story here on this site up to date like it was on FF.net!!

I have been re-reading the chapters as you post them on here but it is killing me knowing that we were so much further along before...please just don't give up on this story....I am begging you!!

This is truly one of my most favorite stories and I want to see it thru right till the ending.....OK!!!!!!

Anxiously awaiting your updates & the continuation of this story!!!

~ your faithful follower....

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

It was nice to see this update...as I have been going crazzzzzyyyyyy waiting for you to get this story (which is my most favorite) all caught up to where we had left off when it was originally on FF.net.....

Keep plugging away...it coming along great!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

Yes, now we are finally moving right along...almost back to where you left off back on FF.net!!!

I love your Edward....he is so yummy and he can do whatever & I mean whatever he wants or needs to me.....gladly...Matter of fact.....I completely volunteer!!!!!!!!!! *snickers

Looking forward to the ball....I remember quite well what happens there!! *smirks wickedly....que introduction to Demetri & Felix....sick fuckers!!!!

Bring it on BB!!!



Author's Response:

I know!! We are so close! Demetri and Felix..... well yes, those two...... enough said!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

OMG.....I literally squeeled like a school girl when I saw the update in my inbox!!!!

I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY and am thrilled that you are moving us along fairly quickly to get back up to date where you had left off on FF....looking forward to this FUCKHOT  and sometimes twisted journey!!!!

Can't wait for the continuation of the ball!! BRING IT ON BB!!!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

HELLO CHICKADEE....another great chapter from my most favorite story!!!!

I absolutely luv, luv, luv reading about Edward in action....Mmmm so HOT!!

OMG....and the tatoo...holy shit that is awesome; I have a couple tatoos so I could totally see that on someone's back and the skin just looking as if it was peeling away while the demon tried to claw its way out....so cool!!

Your husband is very talented, and I laughed my ass off about you describing how you guys argued like fuck while he was trying to draw it....*snickers.....

I can't even begin to tell you how freeken happy I am that you have edited the story and posted it here on this website and are almost up to date on it; as I have said before this story is definitely my favorite!! I squeel like a bitch in heet everytime I get an alert that you have updated....

Also wanted to say that I am absolutely loving Lykke Li at the moment too! Ever since I saw New Moon and heard "Possibility" I have been hooked and downloaded quite a few of her songs onto my IPOD....have you heard the one she does with Drake....It's called "Little Bit" and it is good and another one I really like that she does is "I'm Good, I'm Gone" that one is really good too!!!! Check em out if you haven't already!!

Looking forward to the next update....and to Edward being his HOT BADASS SELF!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

"Cut the shit Jasper. It was dealt with last night. Or would you like a fucking cuddle to go with your cry?"

"If I said yes to the cuddle, would you actually give it to me"

*snickers....I effing love Edward & Jasper's banter....fucking brilliant as always Greenaway!!!!

Also wanted to say thank you from the deepest darkest bottom of my masochistic heart for the fuck awesome reply/PM to my last review...see you next chapter BB!!!! Hugs & gropes until next time!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

I want to hump your edward...*snorts LOL

The pic was a perfect fit to your description of Edward in Africa & as for the song well what can I say....perfection at its best!!!! It went perfectly with the ending of this chapter...loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!

Oh and I really appreciate you getting this chapter out to us so quickly since the last one...we seem to be moving right along now and am not sure but think we are only a few more chapters out before we are back up to date from where you left off on ff....Can't wait to continue on with the journey!!

Keep up the great work Greenaway....I completely appreciate your hard work and bow down to your greatness....*chuckles...see you next chappie =)

 



Author's Response:

LMAO. Yep, we are definately getting closer and thanks for the comments. It always inspires me and pushes me on when I know how anxious people are to read the rest of the story. ;-) see ya next chappie, hopefully tomorrow!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

God, I love how your brilliant lil mind is able to create such wonderfully sick twisted individuals such as the voltori bunch....LOL instead of the "Brady Bunch" we get the "Volturi Bunch" 3 girls...Kate, Irina, & Tanya and 3 boys...Alec, Felix, & Demetri....sick bunch at their best....*smirks wickedly

Thanks for the back to back updates....I too, am desperate for a new chappie so keep up the great work and bring it BB!!

oh and by the way, I still want to hump your Edward...he is yummy in all the most delicious of ways and I completely volunteer to sit on his lap anytime in his office like Bella gets to....*sighs longingly ;-)

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Edward's reaction to wondering what if Bella became pregnant was so totally Edward!!! Laughed my ass off at that and his reaction to being in the mall & the big pregnant woman...he is so clueless when it comes to everyday living and relationships....God, how I adore him!!!!

The further I continued to read in this chapter I began to remember exactly what happens from when I had read this chapter & the next one on FF and I want to say that I think it really great for you to post both this chapter and the next all in one day...it may be gory and the violence may not be for some people but it is a great releif to get thru both chapters in one day instead of waiting....at least that is my opinion and not to mention I love seeing Edward in action!!!

I am actually kind of impressed with the detail in this chapter...yes it may be gory detail, but nonetheless, it was brilliantly spelled out and I could completely picture the scene that they walked into at Jane & Peter's house!!!

I am now on to read the next chapter of what occurs at Charlotte's and I remember quite well what happens and I remember quite well cringing when it happens!!! OUCH!!!

See you next chappie and keep up the great work!!! Hugs & gropes BB!! ;)

 

 



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks heaps! :-)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Awww, my poor, poor, Edward...he is so stressed; I gladly volunteer to give him a massage and help calm him down....granted, my hands may tend to wander during said massage, but nonetheless, I completely volunteer!! ;-)

Now If I am remembering correctly we have one more chapter or so and then we are all caught up....which means *squeels like a banshee that a NEW chapter is coming up real soon....can't wait!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

ok....so tell me if I got it all right; because I think the next chapter is a new one...

1- Felix is dead

2- Demetri is alive

3- Esme is the fucking TRAITOR BITCH in the Clan

4- And holy batman...Charles Swan is alive and now fucking Aro has sent his men to get him so that he can be used as bait for Isabella to leave Edward without telling him if she wants her only last living remaining relative to survive and even after she just promised Edward she would never leave him and would come to him to fix any problem, obstacle, etc......

Jesus woman, you are killing me here!!!! But I love every single moment of it! I think so far this chapter is my favorite!!!!

I got to see a lil bit of everything that makes Edward so fucking fantastic....

Can't wait for the next chappie....bring it on BB!!! ;-)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

You my dear, have totally made my day!!

I was away yesterday and had a shitty day at work today and when I got home and logged on, you can only imagine my surprise that not only do I have an update from my favorite hot storyteller, but you also referred to lil ol me...in your author note....*squeels & does the happy dance...Yay me!!

OK....so I have a small confession to make....*smiles sheepishly & blushes...I completely forgot about this chapter, until I read it just now and then it all came back to me!!

If I remember correctly, I don't think I got to read the next chapter back when it was on FF because I had to go out of town right after you had updated and while I was away is when the shit hit the fan and it got pulled along with quite a few others I had been reading at the time; so it means that next chapter will actually be a new one for me...* does the happy dance again LOL

Your hard work has really paid off and now we are strapped in and ready for the drama & the angst...oh the angst...I can already feel it...

BRING IT ON BB!! ;)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

Ah Greenaway....my favorite lil storyteller...you are as ever brilliant in all the most perfect ways, especially when it comes to writing this FUCKHOT story!!!!!

I have officialy declared myself as "Greenaway's Cheerleader".....If I was able to write such brilliance as you do I would surely be reccommending your story over n over, but alas I can't write nor have the time to write so I have settled for reccing you on my profile pages instead!!!

I wish I had the time to go to the Clan's Forum/Thread but I lately I am barely getting my reading in nevermind doing other things....

This chapter was completely new for me and I absolutely loved it of course and laugh my ass off at the "demon's" smartass comments as always!

Oh, and I want "grandbabies" lots n lots of grandbabies....Edward will be able to handle it because of Bella...she will of course help him just like she already is; he may not quite fully realize it yet, but she is completely showing him how to live & enjoy life outside of "The Clan"!!!

I am looking forward to the next "NEW" chappie and their lil wager too!!!

Keep up the great work BB....see you next time!!

Let's here it for all Clan readers & reviewers!!!! WE ROCK!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

omg...I am so giddy right now and excited to be getting to the nitty gritty of things....bring it on!!!!!!!!!!!!

This NEW chapter was awesomeness!!!! I loved the ring that you picked out for them....it is perfect!!

I can tell you that by the time I reached the end of this chapter I was getting a lil jittery....you are really starting to freak me out as to whether or not Bella will run right to the volturi for her dad or will she tell Edward first to get his help....hmmm she will or she will not....she will or she will not; I am going to have to go with...she will tell Edward....HOPEFULLY!!!! But then of course if she did tell Edward it wouldn't be so dramatic....I guess I will just have to wait & see what you have in store for us....my chickadee!!

I am looking forward to Carlisle's reaction to Edward & Bella's engagement and looking forward to the wedding too!!

see you next time chickie!! Keep up the great work!! =)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

oh Greenaway....you are surely setting us up nicely for what is to come...*smirks wickedly - bring it on BB!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

AWWW Greenaway!! I have goddamned tears in my eyes!!! Shit!! LOL

I was being really patient waiting for you to update and almost bit the bullet a couple time and pestered you, but I know you are a busy woman and I appreciate all the hard work that you put into this story so I tried to be a really patient good girl......and apparently it payed off with this fucktastic update!!!

Perfection!! Enuff said!!

I am both excited and saddened that their are only 2 more chapters left....it's kind of bittersweet....although the fact that you are going to do a sequal definitely sweetens it right up!!

This journey has been incredible and the way things are changing for the clan is really fascinating!! Can't wait for more!!

Sorry to hear that you are feeling under the weather...get better sweets!!

Great chappie as always!! xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

AWW, I didnt wanna make you cry! LOL. Well, maybe a little. LOL.

You were so patient, but dude, you should know, its not pestering if you are emailing me. I would never consider you a bother.

Thanks for the review. I am always looking forward to them. :-)

 

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

Well first off, let me thank your brilliant generous mind Greenaway and apparently thanks are owed to MistyDarling too for the lovely lemon you gave us before the proverbial shit hit the fan....LOL

The pic of Esme goes perfectly with this chapter!!

I am seriously worried about Edward's reaction to Bella being gone; I don't like a weakened Edward, but we all know that is the whole point of the Volturi going after Bella...to bring Edward to his knees, which apparently they are succeeding, at least at the current moment anyway!

But I am going to have faith in Edward's demon and look forward to the vengence that he will hopefully set into motion....bring it on BB!!!!

And I for one, could never hate you; not when you provide such a fascinating, entertaining, thrilling, addicting ride!!! I am strapped in right to the end BB!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks! Im blushing! I'm glad the lemon made you happy, I never would have sent them apart without a good shag first anyway. Just seems cruel not to. LOL. The pic of Esme drove me nuts, do you know how hard it is to find a pic of that woman not smiling or looking all happy? That was the only sinister looking one I could find, so thanks for the kudos, it was a real bitch to hunt out! lol. I dont wanna ruin the story, but like I have said to everyone, there IS a happy ending. Eventually. LOL. I'm glad you could never hate me honey, you are one of my best readers and I LOVE seeing your reviews pop up. Seriously, i was sitting there waiting for Sleeping_Beauty247 to pop up in my inbox! LOL. Im working on the next chappie now and I tell you....... Its gonna shock the pants off ya! lol. Thats all im saying. :-)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

OH MY GOD....Greenaway....where do I even begin??!!!??!!

First off, I love how you are getting us thru the angst quickly by speeding up the timeframe and not drawing it out; I could literally kiss you for it!!

Most importantly, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE that Bella is pregnant!! It is so perfectly brilliant and holy shit, the timing was awesome!!! Seriously your brain amazes me with the shit you come up with! What a friggen shocker and who would of thought Kate would step up to the plate and help her out!!

So awesome; I can't wait to see how Edward is going to rescue Bella & the Baby and OMG, I can't wait to see his reaction to finding out she is pregnant! I want Kate to be rescued too and go live with the Cullens and then I want Edward & the Clan to kick some motherfucking Volturi ASS!!!

Bring it on BB!!!! This was a great chapter and you did a really great job moving us along seamlessly!!

I will be of course anxiously awaiting the next chappie as always!!



Author's Response:

LOL, awwww. I love your reviews. Im not a big one on useless angst. I'm always of the mindset, 'use what you need and leave the rest'. LOL. Plus Im just a big freaking sucker for a Happy ending. LOL. Next chappie same time next week I HOPE.

Thanks again sweets, your reviews kick motherfucking ass! LOL


Greenaway

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

Oh holy fuck....this is going to be so effing goooooooood!!!!

LOL...I got your fanfiction author note and voted for you and left you a review comment before I had even gotten this update email alert so when I commented about voting for Edward's Clan I hadn't even realized that I had this sweet mother of an update waiting for me....

I had a shit day; had to work on the holiday and to come home and find this badboy waiting for me was fucking perfection!!! Thanks babe!!

So, I can't wait for the action that is surely coming our way next chappie...it is going to be SWEET!!!!! So much going on, Esme confesses, Esme goes to sacrifice herself, "the boys" are ready for the mission of all missions and Alice, holy shit.....who would of thought sweet lil Ali could pull out that gun and aim it at Edward so quickly & deadly...that was brilliant; and now she is hacking into powerplants and shit....so freeken perfect!!

I love that Carlisle & Eleazar are working together to help bring Bella home too, even though they were both mean to her at first!!

All of this is so thrilling and beyond exciting, but I must confess....I am a little unnerved by Edward thinking that he can't trust Bella after this and how this is going to affect their relationship and I would love to slap Jasper upside the head for stating that she chose wrong by going to her dad....what the fuck ever.....Anyways you promised a happily ever after, so I am not going to dwell on how this will affect their relationship....I will say that I am absolutely anxious to read about Edward's response to when he discovers Bella to be what around 7 months pregnant if I remember correctly?!!?!!!

Like I said, so much is happening and I can't wait to see how it all plays out!! Thanks for the great update Greenaway, you're the best!!

See ya next chappie BB!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

LMAO @ "Her body was no longer her own, it belonged to the tiny parasite living within her.".....I couldn't help but laugh my ass of at that thought from Edward....oh god, our boy is so fucked in the head right now!!!

Part of me wants to just slap him right upside his noggin, but I completely understand why he is reacting the way he is.....he is completely terrified of his child being raised the way he was and having to go thru what he did and he doesn't have the slightest clue about being a father; but at the same time he should know by now that Bella being Bella would never allow it, I mean she influenced so much change already in Edward for the good before the shit hit the fan that she surely isn't going to just let her child be raised the way that Edward was and Edward isn't Carlisle!!

Although he is being a complete ass and I am completely holding onto the mantra of Happily ever after, Happy ending, etc. etc. etc......LOL

I was sad for Carlisle having to witness Esme's death, but can already see the changes it has brought about in him in his demeanor towards Edward & Bella & the baby and I think it is going to be a good thing in the end!!

I can't wait for the next update and am curious to see what type of conversation takes place during their long ass ride to Canada with just Edward & a very pregnant Bella alone together in a small lil car....hee, hee, hee....I can just imagine the kinds of shit he is in store for; he has no idea about pregnancy hormones, cravings, having to pee every 5 minutes, leaking boobs, etc. etc. etc.....

Bring on the next chappie Greenaway and keep up the great work!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

OH HOLY HELL....I don't know if I want to kiss you or whack you upside the back of your head....LOL

Mr McDownerWard needs a serious reality slap....and I am so loving the demon!! I totally get that he is hurt and feels like he can't trust her, but the dude needs to seriously look at the BIG picture and snap the hell out of it, which he did seem to do towards the end and was starting to redeem himself in my eyes!

And I have to say I absolutely love the sense of humor....{"Come in Edward" My father said wryly and I realized that he had known I was there since my arrival. It seemed I had needed more sleep to replenish my subtlety."}.....LMAO!!!!!

You gave me the best present ever for Thanksgiving...a lil baby boy...a lil "EJ"....a lil Edward Junior!!!! I am so doing the happy dance that you decided to go against canon and give them a baby boy!!!! =)

I hate most Edward & Bella stories that get pregnant & always stick to canon and make it a girl....I have so longed for a lil Edward Junior and now you finally gave that to me...Thanks Darling!!!

I am glad you went to visit friends and enjoyed birthday celebrations and from the sounds of it you had a grand ol time!! LOL Good for you!!!!

I missed you tons and am glad you are back and thanks for keeping me posted on the sitch!!! I hope you and yours have a great Thanksgiving and try not to eat too much...

See you next chappie....Keep up the great work!!!

XOXOXO



Author's Response:

LOL 'I don't know if I want to kiss you or whack you upside the back of your head'..... LMAO. Oh if only I had a dollar for every time someone said that to me. LOL.

I know Edward is being difficult, but it is completely in his nature to be that way. 'Normal' has never been a word used to describe Assassinward. LMAO.

I'm so glad that you are happy with a little baby boy for our couple. I think it was the best choice for these two.

Thanks for the Thanksgiving wishes, we don't really celebrate Thanksgiving in NZ, but I appreciate the sentiment all the same. Thanks for the review my lovely, you KNOW i always look forward to them from you.

xxxxx

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

*squeels like a pig in shit!!! My ClanWard is back and I'm loving it!!!

Oh, how I missed you!!!! FanFuckingTastic chapter!!!!

I love, love, love the name Aiden and I was soooooo doing the happy dance that the baby was/is a boy!!!!!!! ;)

I am saddened that Bella moved out and am really hoping they can get past the bullshit and find eachother again along with some much needed HOT SMUTTY MAKEUP SEX!!! LOL...yes, I am still a huge perv!! Enuff said...

Ok, on to the next chappie!!!!!! XXOXOXOXOXOXXXOOOOXOXOXO

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Welcome back stranger! LOL

Sorry to hear that you have had a rough year! Shit happens, real life gets in the way, it is what it is! I completely understand and am glad to see you are still around and doing ok and not giving up on the story!!

Great chapter! Loved Edward's methods of obtaining a preist! LOL

Missed these characters tons!!

Have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!

 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995707
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

WTF...not for nothing, but that was just plain cruel....I think that was the meanest cliffie I have ever read in my life!!!

Normally ones (cliffhangers) that are sexual or impending violence and what not, I can handle, but jesus....this was without a doubt the cruelest one I have ever read; I mean you left Esme in the Kitchen on Thanksgiving crying her eyes out making Bella feel like a piece of shit and running out of the house when she was just trying to help and show her appreciation and this is how you end it.....other cliffhangers I can take and even see how the author might find them funny to leave us hanging like that, but I am sorry this one was not funny in the least bit and was really mean!!!!

I do have to say that this is probably the one thing that I hate about reading fanfiction; at least if it was a fully published book then I could immediately continue on to the next chapter to see what happens but instead now I am stuck waiting for you to finish playing games with us, your readers and ultimately decide when to update to see if Esme is just really happy that it made her cry or if she is upset because she wanted to do the cooking, and to see where the hell Bella ran off to and if she is all right.....And I don't care if your "Beta made you do it" it wasn't nice at all!!!!!!!!!! Cliffhangers should be about suspense where impending doom or violence or impending smut is waiting right around the corner and then you throw a cliffhanger in at that point because the readers most likely are dieing to know what violence is going to take place or are craving the smut that they have been waiting for but jesus this wasn't violence and it sure as hell wasn't smut...it was Esme crying her eyes out after Bella thought she was trying to do something helpful by showing her appreciation and love for the family....it was emotional and I completely believe you just dont mess with emotions like that by leaving it as a cliffhanger....my god, I am so upset with this chapter's ending.....*growls wickedly....wants to take a rawhide flogger to your ass immediately!!!! ;-)



Author's Response: Dearest SB, Wow - thank you for this most epic, and prolific review! (I think). You don't know Fiorella - she is mean and fierce and scary (and that's on a good day!). Now please can you just hang on for a little while *leans in to whisper* she (Fi) is going away and I PROMISE, that you won't have to wait too long...loved this review xoxo

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Now this was a chapter ending that I can honestly say left me completely satifsfied and yet patiently anxious for the next chapter, especially the "play party".....curious to see how that goes down!!!

I wanted to thank you & your beta for the lovely replies to my concerns about how you left the last chapter off....you completely eased my concerns and I really appreciated the fact that you both went out of your way to explain to me the reasons behind your decision to leave it where you did; it just goes to show how thoughtful & mindful you are of your readers because not all authors would take the time to ease a reader's concerns such as you both did and I truly appreciate it and it really meant alot to me and it shows how brilliant you both are....your hard work does not go unnoticed and is truly appreciated!!

See you next chapter!! =)



Author's Response:

Hey there SB247 - thank you for caring enough to write to me.  This story has really become important to me and I am shocked and so flattered that it has become important to you all too.  And it's not just about writing, it IS about who reads it too. Each week I look forward to the reviews, comments - even the negative ones and I am pleased to say that there have been very few of those!!

Have a great week - see you soon, Hon xoxo

Entity by birobird93 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Three friends. Three guys. In the same body. Blood-thirsty murderers, prowling the streets of Chicago, one at a time. "Evil prowls the shadows in this city at night Miss Swan. You will be wise to avoid it...not ask to see it again.” Edward's quest to find the perfect victim. One-shot. Darkward/Mentalward/Sexual content and extreme violence.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8840 Read Count: 543
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really fucking awesome!!!

Damn....what I wouldn't give to see this continued!!!!!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

What does "Topolino" mean??? In the story Bella says, "I would love to wear your handcuff, topolino" could you please translate and going forward in your chapters if you don't mind; if you use any other words in other languages could you please translate them in the bottom author note, it would be greatly appreciated!!!

I love this story and especially love your versions of Edward & Bella and can't wait to see where this journey takes us!!

I also really really love that for the most part so far this has all been pretty much Edward's pov and I hope you continue on that way....it is ok to read Bella's pov sometimes but I have always preferred Edward's pov much more....probably has to do with the whole twilight series being in her pov and then us readers aka: twilight fans getting screwed royally on midnight sun which probably would of been published in Edward's pov by now....I could really kill the ass that ruined it for all of us!!! =)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

Yes....I see you are already posting the translations; I just needed to get a little further along in my reading!!

Why do I get the sinking suspicion that someone is going to fuck with the Harry Winston jewelry and make Bella out to be a theif or some shit....I just get this horrible feeling each time you mention the Harry Winston Jewelry!!

Something is going to go down I just know it.....I so want to kick Rosalie & Gianna's asses bigtime!!!!!!!!!! LOL



Author's Response: I'm really glad you are enjoying the story so far! Your support really means alot to me. Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

Esme & daddy "C" are effing brilliant in this and I am definitely routing for "grandbabies"......lots & lots of grandbabies.... =)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

OMG....someone needs to seriously fuck that Colling bitch up!!!

I absolutely love this story and have completely fell head over heals for your Edward & Bella; but I am amazed at how much drama these two have to keep going thru.....they just can't seem to catch a break.....However with that being said, the drama totally keeps me hooked and aching for more!!!!

Can't wait to see how Edward is going to handle Collin's bullshit!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your continued support. It means alot to me! I cant wait for the Edward Collin confrontation...its bound to happen eventually!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone

I love it....I can't wait to see Bella call Edward out; but I have to say I absolutely effing love Edward's jealous, possessive, protective demeanor and don't want him to ever change!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

Damn I love the possessive aggressive Edward you have created in this story...so effing hot....feel free to share him anytime!!! ;-)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long

That was HOT, double damn HOT!!! I love it when Edward is so damn controlling, demanding, dominating when it comes to sex...fuck what I wouldn't give for one night alone with him ;)

The ending was brilliant; I love this Bella...LMAO @ Bella crying because her bag broke but not giving a rats ass about what her mom said to the magazine....priceless!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

Holy effing shit....Please, please, PLEASE don't make her keep this shit from Edward out of some regard for his safety!!!

Edward is perfectly capable of staying safe and this is to effing HUGE to keep from him and not to mention that video involves Edward and the sender is right it would ruin EDWARD'S career, not Bella's so she really, really, really needs to tell Edward....IMMEDIATELY!!!!!!

We don't need this situation to cause angst between Bella & Edward because she didn't tell him; lord knows the whole situation is angsty enough!!!

So, what Bitch sent Collin the video???? I am going to guess it was either Tanya or Gianna...and am leaning more towards it being Gianna!!!

Anxiously awaiting Edwards wrath on this shitstorm and am really hoping you are going to ease my concerns by having Bella tell Edward the goddamn truth of what Collin said to her so that Edward can get on this shit immediately and handle it!!!

I will be chewing all of my fingernails off while anxiously awaiting your next update!! I effing love this story so much and their relationship is so effing HOT in this story....especially Edward's possessiveness - it is just the right amount and so god damn SEXY!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun

I loved this chapter but am getting this awful feeling in my gutt about Bella's last statement...."I vow to myself to use the three weeks I have to come up with a plan to get Collin to drop the charges against Edward. There has to be a way, and I'll be damned if I don't find it.".....Why oh why do I get the sinking suspicion that she is going to do something like go to any lengths (when she really shouldn't) to protect Edward and get Collin to drop the charges and only have it backfire in her face????? Or is my mind just getting carried away....I guess I will just have to wait n see!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

Perfection!!! soooo good!! totally worth the wait!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Miss You

Oh shit....what is that all about??? I am so dieing to know what Rosalie is doing there!!! Please don't make us wait too long to find out!! Pretty please!! LOL

I loved this chapter and especially loved the fact that you went right thru the 3 weeks nice and quickly and didn't drag their time apart...which would have killed me!!

I love that he got her a very unique and personal ring and cant wait for him to put it on her finger!! I also went searching for a pic on your blog and discovered that there wasn't one and that you haven't updated it lately...

I really want to see a pic of the ring, if you have one; let me know if you do and where & when I can see it...

This story is one of my most favorites Edward stories...I fucking love him hard!! I have been with you since the beginning and will be right along with you right to the very end, which I might say, I DO NOT WANT IT TO END EVER!!!!!! LOL

xoxoxo Hope you have a happy safe new year!!!

See ya next chappie!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

OH! NO SHE DIDN"T!

OMG....I could totaly cut a bitch right about now!! LOL

There is no way that she is going to get away with it! However, I just feel sorry for the grief that Bella & Edward are going to have to go thru now to clear this mess up!

Great chapter!!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

Fuck that bitch Gianna! She needs to die! LOL

Great chapter!!

Summary:

One night, I awoke to find his side of the bed empty. I can only describe what happened next to be one of the best nights of my life.

 

Smut, pure and simple. Features a lot of dirty talk.

 

AU-AH, OOC, NC-17 for explicit adult sexual situations and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4225 Read Count: 1343
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Just Thinking - One Shot

Well I must say that your "first foray into smutdom" was pure smutastic!!!!!

I would definitely like more!!!

And I am going to check out "Chances" but I am definitely into the smut...it just becomes kind of addicting and this is probably going to totally sound perverted, but if a story doesn't have smut in it then I find it totally boring.....god I am so perverted and I totally blame Twilight Fanfiction for that!!!!! LOL



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I have another o/s that I'll be posting sometime within the next week or two, so keep an eye out. I'll warn you now, "Chances" is very slow moving, and I'm a cock-blocking hooker when it comes to action. I'm a perv too, even before Twilight came along, I was dirty minded. But hopefully it will keep you entertained with laughter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance

I could see myself really liking this story if you were able to cut the violence down a tad, especially the rape & edward punching bella; I would definitely enjoy it more if bella just gave in and accepts that edward is controlling, possessive and a mafia man and if she was able to accept it, submit to it and fall in love with him then he wouldn't need to be so violent...I love a hot possessive controlling dominating edward, but this is too much....It would be so much more seductive and totally hot for bella to love him and accept him and submit to him and then the smut would be much more enjoyable and the possessive mafiaso would be fuck hot!!!!

I really love that Edward wants Bella knocked up with his kids and having his babies....I could totally see him with a fuck hot family and being all possessive and protective of them and Bella could be his seductive lil mafia queen!!!



Author's Response:

im sorry its too much but in reality, would you give in to someone you dont love. that beats you at every turn, gets raped for standing up for yourself.

slowly she is realizing that there is no way out of it. but to keep her babies out of the world edward holds dear, she is going to have to fight back. some how some way.

but ask your self this when a man is raised to belive that women are suppost to be by there side at all times willingly or not, and he comes across a girl that he has loved since the 8th grade and she doesn't want him back, he has gotten everything he has ever wanted except this once, hes going to take it for himself

thnx for the review and i promise it will get better in the future chapters

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254866
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Damn girl...I was so waiting for them to go to the club; but I thought she was supposed to be wearing that outfit that Alice had made for her??? Maybe I misunderstood!!

Tanya....well, we all know she is a jealous BITCH....and I loved that Isabella recognized that Tanya did NOT speak properly when she apologized; as in she didn't refer to herself in the 3rd person like a true submissive would!!

The Hot as fuck smexin that went on back in Edward's bed when they returned home was pure smutastic deliciousness!!!! I completely volunteer anytime to be tethered to Edward's bed....



Author's Response:

Most of us would volenteer for that job...Bella can't wear the outfit. For one Alice still has it, and for two, she needs to the shoes to match.(according to alice) ...Don't worry she will wear it, when the time is right. ....Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment...lml

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far I like it and could really see myself loving it provided Bella tones it down a bit....because right now she is a hardcore bitch and I am not liking her like this at all....I love a controlling, possessive, Edward and him being a Mafia Boss just makes him even hotter; but Bella seriously needs to learn her place and tone it down and somewhat submit to him....Curious to see how this all plays out!!!



Author's Response:

I know she is, but you have to be patient and all will be revealed.

Anyway, thanks for your thoughts on this story, I'll be keeping it in mind.

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was hot and I am glad she agreed to the deal; and am hoping with time she will learn her place somewhat, she can still be feisty but needs to tone down the bitchyness; I am curious as to why she would say she is not his "baby girl" anymore, what happened between them for her to feel so much animosity????



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be updated soon and maybe some of your question will be answered there. See you next update.

 

Summary:

Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer.  At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album.  What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip?  Anything can happen…if you let it.

 

 

 

 

This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift.  She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.

 

My banner and blinkie are thanks to my banner goddess Misskingatyourservice.  check out all her creations at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1831
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters

That was fantastic!!! And, yes, I most definitely want you to continue this!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and rating!  I fully intend on making this a full length story, but I am working on another one right now, and I can only focus on one set of personalities at a time.  But I promise this one is next up to bat.

Till then

Nickey

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389576
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

So far so effing good!!! I am extremely intrigued and most definitely excited to see where this goes!!

I am dieing to read about his reaction when he realizes it is "his" Isabella!!!

Hopefully it will be next chapter that he realizes it and not drawn out...I hate drawn out angst!! I know some people like it, but I am one of those people who gets greedy and wants instant gratification...*smirks & winks ;)

Okay...now on to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Ha ha! Welcome aboard!  Depends on how fast you read as to how long you have to suffer the angst!  The next posted chapter will definitely start to put out some flaming fires!  Lol!  So just hang and enjoy the ride!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

I came across this story recently and have to say I am so loving it!! Definitely hooked so far....I do however, have one concern....

Please, please, pretty please don't drag out the revelation that it is Edward  as the Dom and Bella as the sub....I don't think I could hang on too long with the anticipation of them not knowing it is the one they have always wanted!! Angst is all fine & dandy but too much will kill a person!!! LOL

I am really hoping they are going to finally realize that it's them like....say in the next chapter or two...Hint, Hint, Hint...LOL

Your writing is exceptional!! Makes you feel like you are right there in the moment!! I love Edward POV's the most!!

Great story....Anxiously awaiting MORE!!!!



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG...OMG...OMFG!!!!!!!!!

It was brilliant!!!!!!!!! I am so glad they finally know now!!!!!

Now bring on the kink!!

I have a question? Is Bella still a virgin? I got the sense that she is...did i miss something??? Sometimes when I am reading I get distracted and tend to skim thru somethings and can't remember if you have mentioned this? I noticed in this chapter she mentioned giving her virtue to Edward "Sir" and so it left me wondering as to if she is still in fact a virgin?????

Great chapter...anxiously awaiting the next update!!!!!!!!!! ;)

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

dlir

Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: My name is Bella

Oh...oh....I totally didn't see that one coming!!

I am totally loving this story so far!! I just came across it and it really seems like something that I am going to really enjoy!!

Which means I will probably be up all night reading right thru it!! LOL

Okay...on to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

awwww thanks so much for starting it and love that u r enjoying it so far xoxoxoxo thanks for reviewing...I love each one

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: For now

You're doing really good!! So good in fact, that I had to fan myself a lil bit after that hot makeout session in the car!! LOL

I sooo want to be mad at Alice for cockblocking and fucking this all up, but yeah, yeah...I know it isn't really her fault!!

On to the next chappie!!



Author's Response:

hahah well I hope u have to fan urself a few more times hehehehheheh 

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Night

OMG....that's is all I'm saying!! LOL

That's is all you are getting....I soooo need to get to the next chapter to see what happens!! LMAO!!!



Author's Response:

hahahh Im loving each of ur reviews....hahah keep going :)

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Then dont

Mmmm....I so love Edward POV!!



Author's Response:

:) I do too xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The night part 2

So curious to see how they are going to make it work!!



Author's Response:

ohhhh u keep reading my friend.....it gets better xoxoox

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Welcome to Seattle

Squeels with delight....Soooo looking forward to a nice HOT long weekend with HotWard!!!!!!



Author's Response:

hahhaha....enjoy it and breakfast

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Angel Eyes

That was really sweet....and nice lemony goodness too!!



Author's Response:

:) xo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: New Chapter up next.

Flouncing! So annoying when you get an alert thinking that a story you were really enjoying that hasn't updated in forever has finally updated, only to find that it's another typical pity party excuse for why there is no update!



Author's Response:

*yawns* Sorry for having a life. Those do seem to get in the way of fanfic doesn't it? Oh..sorry. My bad. You must not know. lolol Bye kidd! *waves*

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

OMG! I was like WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKK!

Dude, seriously! You have left my head spinning a few times with this story but today reading this, I was like....Fuck this, I give up!

That is, until you referenced the April Fools date! Jerkface! LOL

That was sooo not even funny! ;)

You owe us bigtime!!



Author's Response:

LMFAO! *dead*

 

No worries, while writing this little masterpiece *snorts* we were also writing the actual chapter. We will be finished some time today.

 

Thanks for reading and being a good sport about it!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

This story is so freeking HOT!! I love that it is Twilight's Edward & Bella but I get glimpses of the the black dagger brotherhood in it too!! Damn what I wouldn't give for J R Ward to let us write about her characters!!!

Great chapter!! You have me hooked!!!!!!! Anxiously awaiting the next update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much! =) We're happy you like!

IKR? I would looooooove to write about the BDB bros! Would be so much fun!

Thanks again,

~Jells

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2671993
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

WOW! I am pretty sure this is the first time that I am leaving a review for this story which is kind of sad seeing as it is the last chapter but I just had to let you know that I have read the entire story and loved every bit!

In my defense for not reviewing sooner...I only found your story a few chapters ago and was instantly hooked and became a selfish hooker and didn't want to take the time to review when I could just click to the next chapter and keep reading and feeding my newest most favorite addiction!

I love this story, it was a complete "page turner" and I couldn't get enough!! I have never laughed as much as I have when reading a story as I have with this one, not to mention cried, cringed, freaked the fuck out, and squeeled like a cat in heat too!! LOL

I could relate to so much in this story; I am from Boston and my mother's family was born and raised in New York and so yeah, all of that "slang" is something I am quite familiar with! LOL

I am so anxious for the sequel and solemnly sware that I will review more often with that one!!

Kudos to you for a great journey!! Looking forward to the continuation of this "FUCKHOT" story!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Yes....you're the best for posting these all in a row to get us caught up!!!!!!

I must say that Edward is quite the fucker in this story...although I sadly...I still want him!! LOL

Nearly pissed myself at his comment "I like my work space clean" while referring to her "hair"...LMAO!!!

Great chapter!!! Okay...on to the next chappie!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

WOW....what a dick!!! However, there is obviously something that has happened to him to make him this way!!

I am going to give him the benefit of the doubt and see if he redeems himself!! LOL

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Love it, just found my new favorite!! You just brought the spark back to twilight fanfiction...I was totally starting to get bored with it lately!!

Can't wait for more, more, and much more!!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

HOLY HOT SHIT!!! Is it sick that I just got totally turned on by this beginning??? LOL

Can't wait to see where you are taking us!! Bring it on!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

OMG....CLIFFHANGER......ugghhhhh!!!

But, it was a great chapter!! I am so dieing to know what is going on with Edward and where this is going to lead!! Please, please, pretty PLEASE update soon!!!

Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness...quite the lil twist!! So, I am assuming the girl in the picture was/is Edward's daughter.....now I want to know what the hell happened and where is said daughter?!???!!???

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

LOL...that was cruel!! I know it is only Jasper, but the way Alice did it was totally to catch Bella of guard!! Sneaky conniving pixie!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

You go Bella!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

WOW....holy hell....can't wait for the newest update!! I am so dieing to know what happened!!!!

 

Great story!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532810
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity

Great chapter! I am so hooked on these characters!!

Laughed my ass off at "salami smugglers"!

Anxious for more!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

Whoa! This chapter was intense!! Effing Carlisle....never ceases to amaze me!!! *shaking my head

Loved the length of this chapter...last chapter felt a lil too short....or maybe I am just a greedy whore when it comes to this story and always wanting more!!

I do not trust that Ms. Eleazar!! Enuff said!!

Anxious for more as always!!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

Oh my....well you didn't lose me with this update! Hell to the NO!!

I can't wait to see how this plays out and I am kinda afraid that Edward is going to have to kill Aro now....I don't want that to happen!!

I love Edward & Aro's "bromance"...LOL

I am so anxious for the action coming our way and for Edward's POV!! Bring it on!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

Loved this chapter!! I Love the interactions between MobWard and his kids!!

Carlisle is such a shit! I am kind of on the fence about the killing of Esme! She was really becoming a royal bitch, but she is still the mother of Carlisle's kids and now he (Carlisle) is fine (made his peace) with Edward killing her because he gets all that money...Bastard! LOL

Anxious for Edward & Bella to talk!!

Saw your tweet...hope you feel better!! Thanks for updating even though you are hurtin!! They could have at least given you some muscle relaxers or something! Like I said in my tweet...Take a nice long hot soak in the tub...it works wonders!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep

Oh yeah! Now this is what I was waiting for! Don't worry babe...I have complete faith in you and totally have your back!

I hope Aro pulls thru and can't wait for another EPOV next chapter to see what happens!!!

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

Oh my god! That was perfect! I love that Edward finally showed up there and claimed his wife right in front of that asshat Roger!!

Sooooo good!!!!

Didn't want this chapter to end!! Really wanted to keep reading, and reading, and reading.... LOL

I love this story soooo much!

Can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Great update! The girls were funny, hoping for strippers! I am excited for the time jump and to read about everyone's lives!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

OMG! This chapter was FREAKING AWESOOOMMMEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

One of my favorites to date!

And I have finally made up my mind about Esme...She needs to go! Enuff said!

Drama, drama, drama! Love it!!

Loved the little alley stint! Fucking Bella kills me!

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

That was a great start to the sequel!! I absolutely love Edward's interactions with the kids!!

Is it me...or is Sonny going to be just like his Daddy!! Whether Edwards wants or likes it or not!! Just saying!

Can't wait to see where this one leads! Bring it on!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Come Hell or High Water Part One

Great chapter!!

I loved the interaction with Edward and Kylie! So cute! Edward is one HOT Dad! DILF!!

Enuff said! LOL

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

When I was growing up my parents (Italian parents) let me have "sips" of their beer all the time! Shit, we even have a picture of me at 3 years old in this pretty lil sundress out in the yard grabbing onto my mother's beer and drinking it! Of course that was back in the 70's so shit was way different then! LOL

Great chapter...excited about some action going down with the "Jersey Plates"!! Can't wait to see where it leads!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Knee-Jerk Reaction

Loved this chapter!! I absolutely love seeing Edward in action "conducting business"!!!

And am I the only one who thinks Bella is bat shit crazy for not taking sex from Edward whenever he is in the mood??? All I'm saying is that you most definitely would NOT hear the words "I'm tired" come out of my mouth if I had a fuckhot Edward as my husband who wanted to bump & grind...you know what I mean?!?!?!!!!?!!!! ;-)

Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

It wasn't boring! This story could NEVER be boring!! Just saying...

Although...I do tend to like Edward's POV more!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

Oh! This was a really good chapter! The tension and action and worry were great! Hoping that Aro pulls thru!

Absolutely loved Edwards response to Sonny's breakdown! So sweet!

Anxious for more as always!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

OMG! Wow! Glad Carlisle is going to be all right....sad that Anthony lost his mom! This is some crazy shit! But I absolutely love it and can't wait for more!

I have a question...is the outtake going to be posted with the other pieces of Quiet Storm outtakes? Or will it be a stand alone outtake? Are you going to post it on here UNEDITED along with the remaining chapters if FF gives you shit???

I have you favorited on both sites but only read on this site because I don't wan't to be reading any edited bullshit! Plus FF pisses me off!! LOL

Great chapter!! Thanks for the early update too!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

Wow Edward....down boy! LOL

That last part with Edward grabbing Caius like that was totally HOT! LOL

Bella cracks me up! Shoots a motherfucker and then asks Edward what the hell he was waiting for!! Laughed my ass off! I absolutely love these two!!

Edward had better back off of Aro! I get the concern he has, but seriously dude...this is Aro we are talking about!!

So much going on in this chapter! Loved that Bella busted Esme's finger! Esme needs a lil more then a busted finger! She urks the living shit out of me!! Just saying...

Thanks for the additional update! Two chapters in two days make me a very happy girl!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

I'm glad you didn't split this chapter!! It was perfect!!

A little stressful towards the end there but I think they will be better off!

I really hope Aro gets his memory back soon...I don't like this Aro! Sorry, but it's how I feel.

Great chapter as always!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

Oh Lex...your story could never be boring!

I am glad you are taking the high road and not giving up or letting these miserable no life fuckers get to you! They only say hateful things because they have no life and don't seem to grasp the understanding that THIS IS ONLY FANFICTION NOT REALITY MOTHERFUCKERS!!

It is entertainment...not a fucking true story...HATERS!!!

Your writing is brilliant and I absolutely love every single chapter from the very beginning of Quiet Storm!!

Keep on doing you!

Great chapter as always and anxious for more as always!!

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

Ohhhhh....I totally had a feeling it was Esme! Just knew it! That Bitch!!

Go get her Edward!!

Thanks for the update! You have totally spoiled us this week!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

Carlisle is giving me fucking whiplash!

Edward makes me laugh so hard with the way he is with his kids!

OH! And Sonny is most definitely going to be dangerous when he is older!!

Like father like son! Enough said!

Great update!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

Go Bella! Damn she is one tough cookie!

I am still reading...and I know I've been a total fail at leaving reviews the last couple chapters but real life has been crazy and I have literally had to sneak in moments to read the updates before getting back to the grind!

Great chapter as always! This story is my absolute favorite!! Love the characters!!

Happy Holidays!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Damn! Now THAT was the Edward I fell in love with in this Story! This chapter right here, is exactly why I only read & review on this site! Because you know damn well that Fanfiction would pull it!!

I do follow you over on fanfiction (SleepingBeauty247) but only read and review here!!

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

I was dieing all day to get home and read this! Woke up bright and early this morning to see that you had updated but had to hightail it to work and this is one story that I can't risk sneaking in on my work computer!! LOL

Finally got to read it! Great chapter as always!!

As for Alice's father....well I could think of many things that should be done to him! Like for instance, cutting his fuckstick off and shoving it up his own ass! Although, I like Edward's idea of shoving his glock up the guys ass too!

But wouldn't want to dirty a perfectly good glock!! LOL

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

Wow! Cliffhanger....

Great chapter!! Loved, loved, LOVED the "button ceremony"!!!!

I really love this Edward! Just sayin...

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream

Whoa! I am getting a scared, nervous, kind of excited  feeling that some shit is coming our way! Arizona here we come! LOL

This fight between Edward & Bella scared me! Especially when he started talking about needing space and shit! And Damion's dream scared me thinking that someone is really watching thru his window or something plotting to take the kids or some shit to get revenge against Edward! And hopefully it was just my crazy imagination going all batshit on me and that it really was just a bad dream! LOL

Then the Edward & Aro scenario...Geez Edward...you need to be nice to Aro because I don't want what happened to Marcus to happen to you!

So much happened in this update! Loved every minute of it!! When I am bored I constantly reread Quiet Storm! I just love these stories and the characters that you have created sooooooo sooooo much!

Thanks for another great update as always!! Keep up the great work!! I don't ever want this story to come to an end...Just sayin...