Reviews by kidnurse123
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I am glad that Edward did not turn into the monster again.  I was sick after the last chapter and wanted to beat someone.  I still think Carlisle needs to die but now, add Marcus and Demetri.  Why can't Edward take bella and run?  She is 18 isn't she?

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh, Come on!!  Hasn't Bella been through enough!!  I hope this drama doesn't last too long because really, more!!  Things were supposed to be starting to get better not worse!  I love this story but am starting to get whiplash.  Hope the updates come quickly.



Author's Response:

It's always darkest before the dawn.  Next chapter should be ready next week.

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

What a great chapter!!  It is hard to believe that it is almost over.  I would read your novel, especially if you were to let readers now the title and release dates. You are a great writer and I, for one, enjoy reading your stories and your writing.  I can't wait for the epilogue.

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love the story, love the chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love this story! I have been following it for a while. I love the relationships you have devoloped and look forward to each chapter, I just wish they were a little more often. I can't wait to read about the New Orleans house. Hopefully the wait won't be long!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The Rules Of The Game

So so far things are good, but I am worried about how the prologue went.  Please tell me there is a HEA??!! It is, after all, a Bella and Edward story right?  I am loving it so far, just nervous about how it started.



Author's Response:

Sorry it took me so long to respond to your review. I had a nasty case of some upper respiratory virus and was sick. Yes this is an Edward and Bella story and as far as I'm concerned it would be wrong for them to not have a HEA. So yes there will be one. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the rest of the story.

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 World Champions

Well, obviously Bella has gone into labor.  Edward is being a complete insensitive jerk.  How could he not understand where Bella is coming from?  Is he having 2nd guesses about his marriage, he seems to be acting in a very selfish manner.  Why drop everything to help Emmett when Bella needed him, I know she didn't say anything, but if my husband did that, he would definetly know that he was sleeping in the garage!!!  Please update quickly!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah he is the doghouse for now. He is not having second thoughts about the marriage. He will explain to Bella what happened in the next chapter. It's really not a big deal though. Yep you bet the baby will be coming very soon. Thanks so much fro reading and reviewing.