Reviews by renebm1979
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

This Bella is too much a matyr, so she is so hard to read.

Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Trust

This chapter does Bella no favor.

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

I think now, Bella's stupidity has no limits. The original Bella had at least a personal relationship to the original Jacob, but this Bella... Sorry, but she doesn't choose very wise.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed half-star
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I enjoyed your story so far, but this new agreement is only horrible.

I agree Bella has a big problem at the moment, but Edward should talk direct to her and and doesn't go behind her back to her therapist. There are a lot a women, who has problems after the birth of their children. Such a behavior isn't trustful and honest. What would happened if Paul wasn't right? Bella's mental health would be in jeapardy. Did Paul his diploma in the lottery? The good doctor should talk with his patient and not with her Dom.

The negoation of this "agreement" is a sick joke. Edward gives her a false pretense for change. Again he abuse the trust which has his wife in him. The next point is Bella hasn't the chance to say no to it. Edward takes advantage of the situation shamelessly. At first in Bella's unhealthy state of mind she wants to do everything to fulfill the requirements of her Dom. Then she wears his collar during the negoation what is a big mistake. During the negotiation of new agreements Dom and sub must be equally. So they both can't the right consent, because the Dom has so the upper hand. And when a Dom can't convince the sub by substantive arguments, he doesn't play the trustcard, because it's only emontional blackmail, especially when the sub is collared. It's only poor.

In my eyes the fake-safeword proves Edward's status as poor excuse as a Dom. There is a good reason why some munch groups get rid of such Doms with these manners.

I get it, Edward loves Bella and wants to help her, but he has no right to act like this. Mental health issues are a serious subject and the D/s-lifestyle isn't a therapy.

I'm really happy I'm in a munch group which doesn't tolerate such practice. Paul, Edward and Jasper would be long gone here.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

Oh, please, Bella is a little bit too overdramatic.Yes, Edward's choice of words was wrong when he blamed himself but sweet Bella shouldn't had have run away immediately. This is a no go in a seriuos relationship.

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Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

I have a bad feeling Marty will be trouble and Marta's niece is Tanya *shudder*

Great chapter

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Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

The list of possible troublemaker grows. I like it.

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Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

This mutt is only terrible, but it's nice to see Bella isn't muttfriendly.

 

Great chapter

Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

I love Doctor Milli.

Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

Why must Bella forgive Edward? Sorry, but both are the idiots, they BOTH agreed to this separation and so made their lifes miserable.

Sorry, but Bella is only a hypocrite in this case.

Reviewer: renebm1979 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Edward and Bella have both no backbone. Carlie is only a poor excuse. As long they don't have sex in front of Carlie, Jessica's accusations are only hot air. There are adoption agencies which have married BDSM-lifestylers as adoptiv parents.

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Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Nice start

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Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

This is sweet

 

Great chapter