Reviews by Mary Mary
Summary: Past Featured Story

prelude

My version about what happens between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.  Bella and Edward push the boundaries of their relationship, while Emmett, Jasper and Rosa must go abroad to keep the Volturi at bay until after the wedding.  Alice is the only person that knows everything.  B/E/Emm/APOVs.  Rated M for future chapters.  Canon.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84289 Read Count: 10852
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Arrival

ahh she is trying to seduce him.  Poor Alice

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hell I still say wait for him to go to sleep and then shoot him start out with the penis and then knee cap him. Perhaps his wrists next then Tell Royce Rose has been cheating on him.

 

Yep that should work.



Author's Response:

lol! Sounds good, but wouldn't work with the direction of the story.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart

What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart?  He claims her, of course.  Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong.  Peter x Bella pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81723
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Sicko CITY

 

They want Bella the most!  Funny Edward has given her up. Nope don't want her no more, but Carlisle and Stphan do.



Author's Response:

Edward thinks that Chelsea is his eternity because of her mind.  Carlisle and Stephan, though, are sick.  They want her as a sexual plaything.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

Banner by the wonderful Mehek18. Check her other amazing banners on Mehek18.tumblr.com

OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

ahh now don't do that.  

 

I am Mary Mary as always, just had to use my husbands pc until our move is completed.

There lives are so messed up.  That is what you get when you cheat and you lie. Just stop that, tell the truth and when you can not because of hurting someone's feelings then just be quiet.

Even if Jasper knew why Edward kissed Tanya. At this point it makes no difference who did what. He should have never done that. PERIOD  He just has to say why he did it and he knows it was wrong and he has regretted that decision ever since. He hates Tanya.

I say buy that damn Mansion and then give it to Bella. Just for her if that is what she always wanted. Or buy it and then keep quiet about it until she is more receptive.

 

 



Author's Response:

Edward is sorry he did what he did. He actually admitted he was wrong in the earlier chaps. However, he is having a hard time accepting that Bella won't be coming back to him.

Thanks for reading. =D

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three

what did you do? See it coming? HELL NO.



Author's Response:

Your comment made me smile!  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  I'm hoping to still have it posted by the end of the week...we'll see though.  there will be a resolution I promise...it might take a few chapters but there will be one.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty Four

Let me say this. In this day and time with Amber alerts and identification regarding air planes and children. You would need lots of time to do this and pull it off, or she is close by or transported by car. This kid is smart and she will not be quiet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :)

Who knows how long this has been planned.  it was Tanya after all and she seems off her rocker.  The next chapter should be in a few days.

-LIsa

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty Five

Get Molly, Then HANG Tanya. This is her worst yet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

There will be a resolution soon.....I promise!

I'm hoping to update soon!

-Lisa

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing

wow what a chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533202
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

I wonder if there are any females Edward didn't screw?   Well as long as he stays with Bella and resumes their sex life. 

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing

Poor girl. She has got to stand up and say, I am WOMAN HEAR ME ROAR.



Author's Response:

In her way, perhaps. This is new territory for her, she'll find her way through it.

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drafted

no I do not want anything from him. I want Bella to have a guy that Jasper will approve of and then let her grow away from Edward and the need for him. Let him see that she DOES NOT NEED him anymore.



Author's Response:

I must admit I was surprised by this, You don't want them together? Or you just don't want her to 'need' him? And... I'm not so sure Jasper would approve of ANY guy ;)

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 64988
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was not sure about Paul and Bella. I trusted Mama and she never lets me down. Good story. I love a strong and confident Bella.  Thank you

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh my...



Author's Response:

More to come soon.  Oh my...yes...  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Summary:

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People can't eat people alive, and frozen men don't exist. Bella's secret knowledge of vampires is inadvertently brought to surface when she & her friends are all thrown in the path of fate.

Banner by the awesome LunarEclipse1

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90817 Read Count: 20309
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward and Alice need to stay with each other as they have been move on "with each other".  If Jasper, Charlie or any of the guys get a hold of Ed he will be a gonner.

 

I love how Charlie looks at things. "I  am alive".



Author's Response:

The problem is that Edward can't move on from Bella's blood--it's his heroin.  Charlie has a fantastic outlook on life.  

P.S.  I'm so sorry that I somehow missed replying to your review.  

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good and funny, as usual..

 

Thanks Mama.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mary.  More coming your way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Summary: Past Featured Story

"The worst lies are the lies we tell ourselves. We live in denial of what we do, even what we think. We do this because we're afraid."
The lie he told to protect her has had nine years to destroy her, and it's time to pick up the pieces.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19550 Read Count: 23621
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2011 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He is a joke. Please there is no LOVE in him. He is all about himself. He does not love her and if she is the town whore now why should he care. He sent her there. She clearly loved him and he clearly told her he had someone else he loved. HIS OUT. Please he is shitty

 

I probably can not stand to read this I hate Bella being so beaten down. I get sick of the Edward is better all the damn time.  She trip she falls, she pretty and poor and stubborn and not popular.  That is written so often.



Author's Response:

Oddly enough, you've proven my point.  When an author gives only small bits of information, mostly based on hearsay, and entirely from one character's perspective, readers tend to jump to conclusions based on other stories they've read.  While I'm tempted to correct the points you've made, doing so here would simply spoil it for everyone else, and honestly, I'm having far too much fun watching everyone jump to conclusions.  

Duplicity by loopylou992 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

duplicity

 

A pair of golden handcuffs keep him married to a woman he despises. Then a chance meeting changes his world, he discovers the true love he always wanted.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54352 Read Count: 8222
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it will take some time before I have an opinion. Is Maria, Bella?   Edward seems like a jerk. PERIOD



Author's Response:

Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together. Maria isn't Bella, they are two different people, he hasn't met Bella yet. Edward migh be coming across that way as he is desperately unhappy in his marriage and doesn't see a way out.