Reviews by Remi_Capulet
Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

i dont kno any mother tht would risk exposing their childs life by asking them to come home to a house where they it is almost guaranteed he will get sick ...i am enjoying this story but i cldnt not say anything about tht.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: The harem

im sorry but i must say i find it a little hard to believe that bella would put up such a fight about getting undressed in front of a stranger and then not give a second thought to actually doing it and letting him was her...i am enjoying the story so farbut i feel that was a little out of character for her in this story. she is supposed to be strong willed and smart mouthed not silent and compliant.

Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The training room

i cant read thia anymore im not trying to be rude but the way u talk about bella being and the way u are making her react are two different people and im finding it difficult to read this. as a person who is strong willed i can tell u i wouldnt have just sat there while a man tried to whip me and then not put up a fight when he lifts her over to the bed. she is a prisoner for gods sake shes juat gonna trust all these random men to touch her especially when she is a virgin.i think not.



Author's Response:

You don't have to read this story let alone love it. Bella is in a state of shock ever since she's been kidnapped, and she doesn't know how to act and react anymore. And of course, as we all know, it was way more plausible in Master of the Universe that Bella accepted to be beaten by Edward and didn't stop him when she realized he went too far. It was so much more plausible that she started as a young innocent girl and knew how to make a bj at her first attempt, and that by the end of the story she was asking to be restrained and act as a submissive when at the beginning of the story she wanted nothing to do with that kind of behavior. But hey, I'm no popular writer so I guess if I unleash my imagination I can't do it my own way. Oh, and by the way, this story is to be taken second degree, there is nothing serious about it, so if you're trying to analyze all the doings of the characters, you won't find anything remotely credible. My inspiration to write my stuff is Manara. I suggest you go google him.

Best regards

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184416
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward

im looking for the fanfic u mentioned in this chapter please let me know...Remi

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella suffers after the sudden death of her mother, which changes her life completely. Charlie hope she can adjust to life in Forks. It's just going to take some time... and maybe some supernatural friends.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72219 Read Count: 15403
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 May 2011
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i'm not trying to flame you or anything but earlier u said that alice snapped the deer nek and then yo said that bella could hear the heartbeat, ive noticed this kind of thing a couple times and i just wanted to bring it to your attention. i do enjoy this story though and i think you are doing a good job of writing it.

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63783
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

my theory at this point is tht carlisle is edwards dad....i originally thought tht carlisle was gonna stop and see bella at school and meet and fall for esme but after this chapter i realized tht tht isnt gonna happen

Author's Response:

Hi-

I am sorry you don't seem like you are enjoying the story.  I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea.  I do have another Bella/Edwad story and I am currently working on one if that is more your cup of tea.  I understand the older man/younger woman thing isn't for everyone.  Feel free to look up the other two if that is more your style (one is complete and the other is in progress).

Thank you for attempting to read the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

i wasnt trying to imply i didnt like it i was just simply saying what i thought was going to happen.

Cougar Town by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 451]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2011 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed starstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Statuses

I think he is 16 I kno the story is written and u prolly dont read these reviews but I thought tht as soon as u mentioned he has to tell Bella something

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27183
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box

why wouldn't she burn the gloves?? im enjoying this story, very funny. i like that she writes children's books but is a serial killer too lol.

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77464
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Battle

idk if its the site or what but a couple chapters arent readable towards the end

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Bella is forced to do something she never imagined she was capable of. A FAGE 3Some gift for Life-in-the-shape-of-a-Girl

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5952 Read Count: 5059
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

i kinda wish there was one more chapter but i like this. i usually dont read shorter stories but i think u write well and have fantastic ideas!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I really appreciate it.

Dangerously in Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought she had found everything in Edward Masen while she was at high school, but when he mysteriously vanishes from her life without a trace Bella has no choice but to move on.

When Bella moves to Washington DC three years later her past comes back to hit her in the face and she realised that loving Edward is going to be a dangerous game, full of fear, pain, action, but most of all passion. AH    

Thanks to my Beta'a Sally and NeeNee.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133255 Read Count: 66670
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

bella gives in too easy....especially with charlie she shld have left him to wallow in some self pity for making edward leave and she gives in to edwarx to easy he shld prove to her tht he wont leave before she lets him get some lovin....great story so far tho im enjoying it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.     

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

i effing love this story..it drove me crazy but i like tht it had substance it wasnt all fluff after they met. i hate stories where they immediately fall in love and its all rainbows amd sandcastles. GREAT STORY!

Author's Response:

Thanks, if you liked this one you should check out the sequel. :)

Through The Woods by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sisters, Alice and Bella are worried over their sick father. Bella takes it upon herself to travel through the woods to see Zafrina, the witch. She will be sent on a quest to prove her worthiness to save her father. Along the way, Bella will find herself bargaining favors with ogres (Emmett), elves (Carlisle) and even fairies (Edward)...which one will win her heart? Consider yourself warned that this will be an ADULT fairytale!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11895 Read Count: 14750
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Forever

i dont usually read short stories but enjoyed this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33296
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i just wanted to let you know that the font is black on this chapter...i believe its chapter 30...great story btw

Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

this chapter as well is black



Author's Response:

How odd...

 

Thank you for letting me know.