Reviews by Julia-S77
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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34749
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh definitely no cockblocking allowed!!! Aw so sweet they are going to be partners in everything. 

We have just got back from Crete and it was wonderful

Great chapter, loved it xx 



Author's Response:

We'll make sure there's no cock clocking lol

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

mmm sounds like a very tasty dinner to me! Great chapter, loved it xx 



Author's Response:

Very tasty lol xx

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love these two so much! They are so cute together. So humming the turtle song. 

Great chapter x



Author's Response:

imagine me and you, you and me...

 

hehe... thanks for reading darlin'!

 

xoxo

tb and true

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Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow so glad they decided to stay home!! making a home movie sounds a very good idea to me, can we watch!! 

Great chapter xx 



Author's Response:

lol, maybe one day we'll let you watch it, but we erm... have to check it out first, you know, to make sure it's good enough hehehe

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What a way to remember the parthenon! Hopefully that lucky girl managed to see the boys up to no good! 

Great chapter, loved it x



Author's Response:

Mmmm, I bet she did hehe

True & TB xXx

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Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait to hear all about the very naughty things they get up to House hunting! I am sad that their honeymoon is coming to an end.

Great chapter, loved it x



Author's Response:

We still have loads of chapters to come, so don't fret lol

True & TB xXx

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Tsk tsk naughty jasper stripping like that. I did laugh at a visual of jasper in white socks and trainers aka porn!

Great chapter, loved it x



Author's Response:

*whispers* tb kinda likes it when the socks get left on.... hehe

thanks for reading!

 

xoxo

tb and True

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well the boys were very restrained this week!! only one blow job!!

Edward is so sweet to take them on a little break to santorini. 

Great chapter, loved it x 



Author's Response:

Well, we didn't want you guys thinking we ONLY wrote smut *snorts*

 

xoxo

tb and True

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That last picture is hilarious!! tsk tsk naughty Edward, I hope Jasper thinks of a very naughty way to punish Edward for being so sneaky infront of everyone on board. 

Great chapter, loved it x 



Author's Response:

I blame tb for that pic! hehe.

tb & true

xXx

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jasper is definitely turning into an exhibitionist, it would be very hot to see those naughty boys getting up to things in public like that. 

Jasper didn't really make Edward suffer that much, perhaps later when they are back at the villa. 

Great chapter, loved it x



Author's Response:

Oh just you wait and see what the boys are up to next! hehehe, I think you're gonna love Jasper :D

 

tb & true

xXx

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Jasper's plans to tease Edward always seem to back fire on him! its so lovely that they are thinking so far ahead in the future when they return home. 

Great chapter, loved it x 



Author's Response:

They do backfire a little, but with amazing results hehe

tb & true

xXx

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Sounds like they had a wonderful time at the club. Oh dear not the kind of surprise they wanted when they got back to the villa, especially if they were half naked by the time they got there! 

Great chapter x

I have donated and can't wait for all the out takes. Such a great amount of money for such a worthy charity. 

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am so going to miss these boys!! nice of the family to just drop by, but a little notice would have been nice!! we missed out on sexy times. 

Maggots invitation was hilarious, loved how you managed to sneak her back into the last chapter. 

Great story, thank you so much for writhing this and keeping me entertained with the boys antics every monday. Off to down the PDF now xx 

Kismet by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary:

Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?

Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?

 

kismet


Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - My Boys

No wonder its all a bit overwhelming for Olivia, a lot changes in 10 years and expectations become skewed. 

Great chapter, loved it cx

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

You reall captured that first lost love feeling. Great first chapter, loved it x 

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

he was definitely hitting on her, wasn't that kiss at the bar an indication! Bastian seemed so disappointed with her thought she was with Sam. 

Great chapter, loved it x 

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn

Loving how their evening ended! Bastian is so not allowed to leave! Great chapter, loved it x

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession

Wow new panties are definitely needed now. That was a seriously hot chapter. Loved it xx

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Of Memories, Mario, and Me versus You

ooh how is Bastian running away from? an ex? 

so funny that that boners were the only reason to stay in the pool for so long! the shower scene was very hot! 

Great chapter x 

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Someone Like Me

Well that was certainly a surprise finding out bastian was married! No wonder poor Olivia felt betrayed. Great chapter, loved it x

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Spoon You Surprise

I think the boys deserve a spanking for pulling a surprise party! Although the marathon sex session more than makes up for it.

Bastian's inscription on the bracelet was so lovely. 

Great chapter, loved it x

Summary:

 

I was given 3.5 days to come up with a story for the Drabble War 'DYAC' prompt.

 

 

 

JA Mash and Texasbella said 'You have to use this one' and showed me the picture.

 

 

 

Of course, never one to turn down a challenge, I agreed.

 

 

 

They gave me a maximum word count of 9k and a couple of extra words to use, can you guess what they are?

 

 

 

This is an Edward and Bella story, with a sweet Esme thrown in :)

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4666 Read Count: 54767
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great first chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Eww lots of nasty things going round then! Great chapter x

 

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am sure Edwards parents aren't that naive! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Whore 1and 2 line was hilarious! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Men will do anything to get into women's pants sometimes! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Kinky fuckers are always the best. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why do I think Edward is going to regret ignoring bella. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hilarious! Great  chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Esme is soon going to find out it doesn't mean eyes! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nosy mums! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Now I wants to know what they were up to after church! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am so gong to send that to Mr S and see if he can work it out! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Why wouldn't bella cave? I am sure she needs it after the trauma. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Mmm love kinky Edward! He he great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So eager to be married then. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Has Edward been hinting to esme about a wedding! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

If only Charlie knew about the text! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Is esme stalking Edwards phone?! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

A heavy dose of kink should cheer bella up. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So lovely Edward was a surprise and so loved. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Never good if your MIL cooking is that bad. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am sure Edward would like bella in a pinny and nothing else. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Nothing like the heavy hints about weddings. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

The mini snacks sound gross! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ewww and dinner just gets worse. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Omg just realised what esme said was for dinner! Hilarious x

 

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh how mortifying! I once had to explain to my mum what a twat was so I feel their pain! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Poor esme needs a brandy herself! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh bella! I am sure Carlisle won't forget! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

If your parents are that elderly you just want to give em babies. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Things are going to well, disaster waiting to happen! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh bella fancy introducing esme to that at her age! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Definitely and intervention needed. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Stag night outfits sound lovely. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

They could always practice bellas text while Edwards parents do too! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

It must have been a good night to over sleep that late on your wedding day. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I bet it was the phone confiscation! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh no I dread to think what e surprise is. Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I am sure bella ranted long than needed just to get bent over like that! Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Of course esme is still being nosy! Great story loved it x

Summary:

Beautiful Banner moved to chapter 1 comply with Google requirements

 

One is the mayor, happily married to the perfect woman, adored by the townspeople.  The other is the sheriff, distant, gruff and feared. They both have secrets that can only be shared behind closed doors.  Written for the pick a pic challenge.

 

Banner made by vbfb1

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4664 Read Count: 2378
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the ending it must be so hard to admit you are gay in such a small town that you think might ostracise you.

Great one shot, loved it x



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading Julia! Always love hearing from ya!

 

xoxo

tb

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jessica was so lucky to get this wonderful one shot for her birthday! Loved it x

Summary:

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Two men, lifelong friends, set out on their journey as lovers as they travel to Scotland for their honeymoon.  Will a secret wish they made so long ago come true?  Birthday shot for nmydreamz.

Thank you to Arc Morpheus for making the banner on such short notice!


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4472 Read Count: 968
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 17 Aug 2012
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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a wonderful and very sweet one shot for a very lucky Cheryl! Loved it x

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248479
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I hope that RL is a bit better for you now. It must have been so exciting to have a Christmas tree for the first time. Great chapter x

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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Loved their very happy first Christmas together as one big family x

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

i am sorry that you now have a hiatus hernia, thats not nice at all, and that the other issue still haven't been resolved. 

Loved this wonderful christmas chapter, and such a lovely surprise for Emmett and Rosalie. x

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

it must have been so exciting to have a honeymoon at the pavilion and see the sea side for the first time! Loved that Bella shocked Edward by riding him! x 

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

bella was so angry about the governess! I feel quite awful that somedays I would happily send my only child off to a nanny!! of course Edward likes isabella to be on top! x 

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I am presuming Isabella is pregnant already!! there must have been much baby making activities! so sweet how much isabella missed the children while they were away. x 

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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I loved that little Elizabeth Cullen arrived safely! great chapter x 

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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Loved that Alexandrina was amused at the all the fawning girls being diappointed that Edward and Isabella were married. great chapter x 

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Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

aww so sweet how over protective Edward is, but would get annoying very quickly! great chapter x 

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Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

aww such a lovely chapter! 

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Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

oh dear, what has upset Isabella so much in the hot house! it must be so hard to have all those strange people in the house and your marriage is still a secret! great chapter x 

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh Bella, Edward most certainly doesn't think any less of her, how was Bella to know it was him at the door.

I hope this misunderstanding is sorted out quickly. 

Great chapter x 

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am presuming from your AN they won't have to wait the full year before they can court!! 

No wonder or Isabella is so nervous about going to dinner, but I am sure she will have a wonderful time. 

Great chapter x

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loved that Edward was so nervous and also that he anticapted Bella's arrival so much that he wanted to wait by the front door. 

Great chapter, loved it x 

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It would be awful to wait two weeks for another chapter especially as we have been so spoilt lately! 

It would be nice to see into Isabella's childhood in happier times, but is would also like to hear Edwards thoughts after the encounter in The guest room. 

So lovely how Isabella thinks Edward being away for so long is awful and loved Carlisle and esme taking delight in Edward being so besotted with Isabella.

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: October 7th 1843

it must have been hilarious to see Master Edward milking a cow in his formal attire!

edward is most certainly smitten, I hope dinner goes well for Bella it must be so daunting for her. 

Great chapter, loved it x 

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

I loved the camaraderie between bella and lady Cullen. She seems determined to look after bella. 

Great first chapter, loved it x

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

I love how Esme already thinks of Bella like a daughter and just wants to help make her life so much easier. I wonder if Edward knows of her matchmaking intentions. 

Great chapter, loved it x 

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

So sad that bella's childhood has been taken away from her. I really like lady Cullen and her way to give bella a birthday present she will treasure. 

I hope Edward doesnt just see bella as the poor village girl his mother has taken pity on. 

Geat chapter, loved it x

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

Loved the pictures of Charlotte and Henry, very cute. I can understand why Edward is being so shitty buts its really not Jaspers fault.

Great chapter, loved it x 

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

I love how determnd lady Cullen is to make bella be more of a lady in society even if she really doesn't want to. 

Renee is definitely n her way out, there will be such a heavier burden when this happens. 

I am sorry I hadn't noticed the title chapters either, I am usually too eager to read the chapter :-)

great chapter, loved it x

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: September 24th 1843

I initially thought Isabella might be cross about Carlisle taking some of her land back, but Timothy's idea would mean perhaps more money coming in and a sneaky to get more farm hands on the farm to work and ease her burden. 

I love all of esme's plans to bring bella into their home any way she can. 

Great chapter, loved it x

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: September 29th 1843

Bella took all those changes so well! I think she was a bit overwhelmed with lord Cullen arriving with the land agent. 

I feel so for katalina and will definitely be contributing it must be so devastating for her and her family. My thoughts are with them. 

Great chapter, loved it, can't wait to see Edward at the ball. X

 

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: September 28th 1843

It must be so hard to lose your wife and the mother of your children and then just be expected to marry again because that is what society demands. 

Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

Well that first meeting went very well. It must have been so daunting for bella to attend the ball not really knowing anyone. Loved the teaser Edward is obviously very enamoured all ready. 

Great chapter x

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh poor bella, losing her mother too. At least lady Cullen and master Edward are there to hel and support her.

I can't wait to hear about master Edward milking cows! 

Great chapter x

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Seem is going  to be so smug when Carlisle tells her about the conversation he had with Edward. He was very kind to put Isabella at ease about her worries about visiting them. 

Off to the FB group to find out. 

Great chapter x

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

so sad that Isabella never had her own doll to play with, I am sure Edward can remedy that! 

Isabella wont be able to refuse the offer to take her into town, and maybe she might like it after all. 

I suppose Isabella and Charles aren't used to eating so much food at one sitting. 

Graat chapter x 

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Isabella has worked herself into exhaustion. Well that was certainly one way to get them to move in. I presume Edward will be riding right back. Great chapter x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Didn't think Edward would be able to stay away for long! He brought Isabella so many thoughtful presents especially the doll. Great chapter x

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This story so deserves to be on the TWCS featured list. 

This chapter was so swoony! I presume that Lady Cullen came from a similar position in life to Isabella from her comment.

How is Edward going to manage to wait the period of mourning now that he knows Isabella feels the same. 

Great chapter x 

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Lets hope that Lady Cullen's surprise guest is Isabella! the Cullens are such a kind family to provide a new home for Emmett and Rosalie and to look after Isabella and Charlies like they do. Great chapter x 

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

No I missed it! 

Edward is going to be beside himself at Isabella staying with him and her being out of mourining by Christmas!

Great chapter x 

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

sorry i meant to add in the last review, this TexasBella being published is such wonderful news and I can't wait to read. 

It must be awful to suddenly have to wear corsets when you aren't used to wearing them. Edward was very excited to see Isabella then!. 

Great chapter x 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

such a naughty pair, kissing in public! I did laugh at edward being jealous of every man who even glanced at Bella. 

Eww its bad enough now, let alone using leaves!

Great chapter x 

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Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Isabella certainly seems to be tolerating town more now. Who wold want to refuse a necklace like that. I have some gorgeous amethyst earring which are very similar. 

Great chapter x