Reviews by Twilight2Midnight
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

I didn't know if Phil was going to be doing things to Renee as well as Bella - by the sounds of what I have just read.... she's in for just as much trouble as Bella!

Why oh why did she trust someone like him! YUK - makes my skin crawl!

Great chapter as usual but I'm luck ... I get to read another chapter posted already by you wonderful girls :)

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Oh Bella - why didn't you just tell them what they wanted to hear? 

Isn't that the best way for someone.... horrible to think this sort of treatment of a person is happening in our world today! So sad but Bella has to let them think they are right - but then again, she doesn't know what is happening to her or her Mum. So I suppose she is trying to hold on to her sanity...

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Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

Atleast Renee - well, now Marie is smarter than Bella! She's fooled them (hopefully)

I know Bella is young, but my goodness, she needs to get her head together to get out of there before "Father" gets hold of her!

How horrible been locked up like that... naked & tied up with your legs spread - MEN! horrible & perverted men! I know 99.9% of men aren't like this but there are some out there with these intentions.... scary stuff!



Author's Response:

Part of the 0,1% population - - - - - -   Jim Jones, David Koresh, Charles Manson....yeah...it is a scary world...hahaha. 

 

And it is always..MEN...what is up with that.... 

 

Anyway.. we are thrilled that you are enjoying our story...  See you next chapter

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Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

OMG - 5 WEEKS!!!! Bella has been going through this torture for 5 weeks now!!!

She must be extremely strong to survive this. Her mind must be totally & utterly confused & exhausted... hopefully she'll be out of there very soon now.

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Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Pass the tissues - glad he has a heart... thought he was just as ruthless as the rest of those bastards!

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Oh dear - Poor Bella/Elizabeth.... I just hope there is hope for her and SOON!

Scary chapter - like all of them!!!!

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I GOT MY POST!!!!

As creepy as it is - thanks for the chapter... I can't even review his creepiness!

Scary thought - what if the girls don't fall pregnant on the "only" night he is with them? Would like to know what will happen to them then?!?!

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Ok... so Father Aro is the freak we all knew he was but really - scrubbing her raw... is that really called for or is it his way of dealing with his own "sinful thoughts" for Bella?

Oh boy - she is really confused now.... poor Bella. I just hope she gets through all this one: alive & two: with her sanity!!!!!

 

Great chapter :)

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

OMG - how frickin scary is this - "Allow me my right as your Father to plan the first seed!!!!" YUK!! The thought alone is ewww...

Don't you just hate RL getting in the way - we just got back from State C'ships as well! Way too busy right now for all the sport & music that is on... but still love coming home to read your darling stories :)

Hope it all calms down for you sooner rather than later....

 

* Happy Easter *

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Oh boy - I'm so glad Carlisle is smart & wise enough to know something is going on in that "Blessed Be's" weird head!!!

I just so hope Bella/Elizabeth is ok - sounds like her Mum is off with the pixies & thanks to Phil, she'll never get her back :(

 

Just hope Esme, Carlisle & Edward with the rest of their family can get out!

I'm actually hoping for all of them to be ok now... now we know the truth behind those walls!!!!

 

You guys are wonderful with your constant updates - don't worry too much, we all know that your busy with the website & your other stories etc...

Love that you can keep up with it all... Blessed Be! (ha, yeah right!!!)

T2M x

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

GO EDWARD... run to Bella!!! She's there... go quickly 

AND Blessed Be.... bunch of freaks! Well, Aro is anyway!!!! haha

 

Congrats on finishing your Masters & Happy Birthday Jenny!!!

Hope everything starts to slow down alittle for you now...

T2M x



Author's Response:

Blessed Be!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

AWESOME - so it's going to be Edward that saves her... as he is so jealous of "Father Aro" touching her already! Then to question (in his mind) about Father taking her first, even though he knows it is "the way"!!!

 

This is a very interesting turns of events :) So exciting... can't wait for the next chapter :)

Thanks for the update TSO & welcome home! Back from the USA - WOW!!!! How long were you there for & where did you go?

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

*** MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU & YOUR FAMILIES ***

                  *** WE LOVE YOU TSO & FOOTROZA ***

I cannot believe you have left us hanging like this after the last chapter with Charlie & Felix!!!!! OMG... now we have to wait until AFTER Chrissy - so not fair :(

I so LOVE the review at the top - that reader rocks :)

Perfectly written about Aro - just perfect!!!

Love you guys... enjoy the holidays (& please post again VERY soon!!!)

T2M x

 

P.S. TSO - I'm back down on the Central Coast for Christmas - if you're around... we could meet up for a coffee?!?!

 

 

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I'll leave you some lovin... Blessed Be!!!!!

OMFG - what an absolute creep of a man... scary even!

Get the frig out of there now Bella/Elizabeth... whatever you think your name is now!

Where's Edward to get her out of there..... I think she needs him more than ever now...

 

Thanks for the update... full of awesomeness as usal :)

T2M x

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Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Phew... thank goodness Bella can lie!

Now - meeting the sisters should be good (well, I hope so!!!)

T2M x

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Yes you two are crazy as shit!!!! LOL

But you think up the most amazing stories & write them so believably as well!!!

Now that's some seriously shit....

You girls so rock (I say that to you two alot but you really do!!!!)

 

Can't wait for the next chapter - meeting the sisters!!!!

T2M x

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Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Someone's watching them.... dun, dun, dun!!!!

(sounded better in my head, by the way!!! LOL)

 

Awesome chapter.... so sorry I haven't reviewed lately, just got back from holidays on the farm (yes TSO - to Gosford) visiting the family, and there is no internet in my house down on the property - only in the top house. So I had to go to the top house, load pages I wanted to read, then go back down below & read them in the quiet of the night - ha, once the kids were in bed that is!!!!!

 

SO I have really missed reviewing but now back on the warmer Gold Coast & loving catching up on my chapters I have missed!

I think Felix is watching now... especially after the last chapter... or maybe Scary Father!

Great chapter by the way - Alice is going to be any awesome friend :) 

T2M x

 

 



Author's Response:

and you didn't call? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!???!!!

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy Anniversary Mandy - mine is on Saturday (17yrs) Oh boy, doesn't time fly!

Hope you enjoyed celebrating 10 yrs :) ... wink, wink... LOL

July is always a wonderful month to get married in Sydney!!! 

We have so much in common... us Aussie girls :)

 

Loved APOV - looks into this "weird & wacky" world from another perspective! 

Awesome chapter once again girls!

T2M x

 

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Oh boy... Blessed Be - you've got to be kidding me!!!!!

What a total & utter freak show... I think I say this EVERY review :)

Glad you got so many wishes for your anniversary!

Ours was good too (17 yrs remember) Yes, I agree - could be dead within 3 years for me!!! And no, I don't know about WiFi in jail!!!!

Sydney jails aren't that nice... hehehe - I'll visit you thou!!! LOL

Poor Jenny - with the Father - oh YUK!

FINALLY Bella is working through her issues that she isn't meant to be there & all isn't right in that wacky world... *jumping for joy*

Just hope she gets Edward out with her & Charlie is on the outside waiting for her... 

Yeah right - as if you guys would make it THAT easy!!!!!

Thanks for another freaky wacky crazy update - get onto the next one lovies!

T2M xxx



Author's Response:

Blessed Be.. my daughter..

Yeah I know freak show.. LOL

when are you next down to visit the jails here? wouldn't mind a dinner? LOL an none of that jail cafeteria style food either my friend...

email me when you are in this neck of the woods and book in the brisbane Twilight convention next May.. you tell me your busy and i will kill you.. and the obviously find out about the wifi..if I kill in Queensland do I get a Queensland jail? and if so.. do they have aircon? LOL

Love ya.. xxx

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

OMG what a frickin awesome chapter - cant' say it enough with you two....

YOU BOTH SO ROCK!!

 

Now I'm "stuck" reading - Not so Average - thanks to you both... another story to keep up with.... hehehe... got to love that!!!!

 

Hope your weekend is going well & Father isn't annoying you too much!

Blessed Be (oh yuk - can't believe I just wrote that!!!)

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.  We love that you guys all love the story.  So FUN. 

You are going to love that story.. It has brought out quite the passion in me.  AND IT HAS JUST STARTED...

Father seems to think he deserves ALL of the chapters.. He thinks only his POV is important...HAHAH..

Hope YOU have a wonderful weekend... or what is left of it. 

THanks again.

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Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

This was just a tease - but a good one all the same :)

Thanks for the update!!!

T2M x

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

OMG - edward is going into the OUTSIDE!!!!!

Ahhh - not what shall this bring :)

Oh blessed be... could he just happen to run into Charlie or even one of the flyers that he has been handing around? Maybe see Felix & he'll fill him in on something!!!!

Oh I can't wait :)

Blessed Be oh great TSO & Footroza.... WE SO LOVE YOU :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

Blessed Be..

Lol.. thanks for reviewing honey..

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Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Well what an interesting challenge that was for her....

I thought she was settling in too well there for a brief moment...

BUT as always you are on to us & change it all around - jsut to make sure we are on out toes!

 

Love you guys

T2M x

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

My goodness you two - my heart is in my throat right now!!!!!

How dare you leave us there - the most terrifying cliffie I think I have EVER read!!!!!

NOOO - I do hope you have the next chapter written & ready to post tomorrow???

PLEASEEEEE......

OMG - my heart is still racing - like a bull in a china shop....

Love ya both :)

Blessed Be!

T2M x

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Blessed be..... what a nut case!!!

I so hope Felix helps Charlie get Bella & Edward out & soon!!!!

OMG - my heart is in my throat right now....

T2M x

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

AHHHH - trying to catch up  on my reading.... haven't had time over Christmas :(

Hope you wonderful girls had a wonderful Chrissy & a great New Year!

Look forward to many more stories form you both :)

Have to get onto the next chapter...

T2M x

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Arghhh - NO!!!

I need another chapter.... PLEASE!!!!

Well, ok - I'll wait but boy oh boy... I do hope Charlie cools it long enough for Felix to help him!

Great chapter too - getting so close to getting Bella out. (hopefully anyway)

Safe & sound...

T2M x

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Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Hi Girls,

Great to see you back in the land of the living after so much going on...

I haven't been on here at all - too busy with kids, hubby & all the activities growing kids keeps us busy with :)

I didn't even get to see Mandy when I was in Sydney at Easter :(

Have to make sure we catch up next time!!!

I do hope the book is going well - sounds fantastic...

Take care both of you! I'm at the airport about to hop on a plane for the US.

Holiday time (without the kids too) Party time for us :)

1st time without kids in 13 years!!!!! SO excited!!!!!!

Take care,

T2M xxx

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514753
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

I'm so glad Jacob came straight away to help!

My only concern is - doesn't Victoria have a GPS style tag in her? So James will be able to find them no matter what anyway... but she seems to have forgotten about this (or does she even know? I can't remember)

Oh so stressful! But great non the less!

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Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Finally Aro has made contact - but to what expense!

OMG - closing down the school...

I'm still worried that James will get home to his place, set the tracking device on & track Bella & Victoria down anyway!!! 

My heart is in my throat just thinking about James on the loose!!!! Scary just thinking about it & I'm not even living it!

 

Thanks for the update - phew, need to calm down the heart rate now!!

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Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

OMG - they are leaving... he has a bloody tracker on Victoria - doesn't ANYONE remember this?!?!?!

 

James & Laurent WILL find them sooner rather than later & if Laurent is in this MORE so than James... we are all in for it bad :(

 

Ok. so now I'm getting scared!!!! Great chapter!

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

OMG - he did find them.... I knew it wouldn't take him too long to get there!!!!

But how did they - meaning Edward - check all doors & windows to see if they were locked properly? 

 

Not really wanting the next update as we all know what will happen to Bella, Victoria & Edward.... but hate this cliffie just as much!

If that makes any sense.... *screaming for Edward right now*

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Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

OMG - he is one sick bastard!!!

Laurent gone - good luck Heidi.... 

Can't wait for more updates.... thanks for this quick update!

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Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

FINALLY - they know James has the girls.... what a chapter - full of just everything!

Who was the undercover person in the school? Was is Jacob? If so, what was his name in the school - just so I know which one he was or did he not have a main role in this story until now?

 

Thanks for a extremely packed chapter - just like all the others - so intense :)

 

Good luck with the upgrade of your server! 

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Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

YEAH!!!!! *jumping for joy*

Thank goodness he dropped his phone & Alice found it :)

I really was worried how they were going to find Bella... but of course you have to give us a HEA!!! After all Bella & Edward have been through - they so deserve it!

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

ARGHHHH..... so unfair!!!!

So many stories with cliffies this week!!!! WHY OH WHY do you writers do this to us readers? And all in one week :(

 

But geez, thank GOD he is out.... now - who hit him???

Please let it be Edward!

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

My goodness - that was SO GOOD :)

So happy, in fact... jumping for joy & celebration that James is getting what he so deserves!!! Aro has him & shall do whatever he pleases... I know hope he doesn't doe too soon.... hehehee!!!! What more could we want for him? Absolutely nothing....

Oh you are so good at endings, sad to see it ending, but so happy with the way it has ended :) 

 

You both SO ROCK!!! I don't even know who to express my happiness for you both in this saga & TWSC library & all that you have achieved! 

Thank you & I know we shall be hearing from you both soon whether together or seperately.... enjoy your break from writing but can't wait for more...

Oh & the last chapter of TTSS.... THANK YOU & heaps of kisses thrown your way :) XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OMG.... is it really over? 

I can't believe after ALL these chapters/time it's over... yes, please pass the box of tissues :( .... sob, sob!

 

What an awesome way to finish - absolutely perfect! I loved this final chapter... you answered every single question I was hoping would be answered just right - so thank you!

You guys SO ROCK!!!!! 

 

Will miss TTSS - but love what you have done just as much & the journey it has sent me/us readers on!!!!

Love T2M xxx

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

Edward has certainly grown up & matured of late but I am fearful of the dreaded Carlisle.... I am SO happy he tried to clean up the ice-cream & that it was Esme who fond him & not Carlisle!!!

 

I love this site - had to sign up to read my favourite story... finally got to it though!

It was worth the effort - I just hope all your fellow readers follow you here & give you the reviews you so deserve!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for following me over here.  It's so easy to post and read here.  I'm glad you liked the chapter. Everyone was so worried about what became of the ice cream that I had to reassure readers that nothing bad would happen...yet  ;)

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Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Oh Mic... why oh why do you do this to us???

Can't we just kill Carlisle? Then we'll be alot happier (& safer!!!)

I know - it wouldn't be a story without all the dramas & scary bits!!!

 

I loved how Bella got so worried that she might be pregnant! How the girls straight away took care of her :) I just so hope that will be her excuse to keep Carlisle away form her now - fingers crossed!!!!

But of course you wouldn't do that to us & keep her safe... thanks for the update but seriously need another one soon! Thanks again Mic.

 

P.S Love the library - awesome new home :)

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

OMG - I'm am just absolutely sobbing right now!

We knew Carlisle was going to get Edward back for all of his lack of training with Bella.... I just so hope Edward explains this to Bella before his turns back into nasty Edward!

I don't think I want to even read what's going to happen next... talk about a cliffie - not a nice one at that either :(

Poor Bella - how is she going to cope with this - let alone Demetri & Marcus as well?!?!

 

Please pass another box of tissues.... still sobbing :( 

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

OMG - they got through that - phew!!!!!

I am SO grateful that Bella FINALLY confused to Edward what Carlisle has planned for Bella - after all this time!

Esms'e garden - WOOHOO!!!!! Bring it on I say.....

 

I am SO scared for bella right now - scared for Edward too. Who knows what Carlisle will just snap & do..... the wait is killing me (oh & Bella too!!!!!)

 

Thanks for the update!

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Awesome chapter - finally the truth is all about therapy - everyone copes & deals with situations differently & Esme had the garden. Love it!

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Surely it's the boys coming to Bella's rescue?!?!

OMG - what a god damn cliffie - geez, there's alot of that going around lately!

What is it & the writers this week - all my favourites have these "terrible" cliffies I have to wait for!!!!!

 

My heart is racing right now... so need a drink!!!!

Thanks for the update though... awesome chapter :)

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Oh thank goodness the boys got to Bella before Carlisle did anything really lasting to her!

I wonder how Edward is going to react to this request.. "Let me go!!!"

Oh boy.... I really would love a Edward POV on that remark/question?!?!?

I know you say Bella will get her HEA - but will this include Edward as well?

I am so sad this is coming to an end - feeling I know these two really well & I am SO happy Carlislie is dead - once & for all!!!! (feel like throwing a party for that one in it's self)

 

Thanks for the update - Happy Easter :)

Hope you get lots of Easter Eggs - dark choc is the best :)

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

OMG - I just sobbed all the way through this chapter - 2 YEARS!!!! WTF?!?!?!

I can't believe you held out on us for then it to be Edward taking her out! 

OMG - my heart is beating SO fast... and the tears are flowing quite freely I might add...

I am so sad but also so happy for Bella.... all the years in therapy, not talking to any Cullens for over a year, then to be only able to contact them through phone calls or emails!!!! Oh boy - I can't stop crying.... 

But SO SO happy it is Edward! I really thought it was going to be someone else the for quite awhile.... I am assuming that's what you were hoping for :)

 

Can't believe it's nearly over - it so broke my heart at the end of the last chapter... but as you stated many times - Bella WILL get HER happy ending - but does this involve Edward as well? Hmmm - thanks for the update :)

 

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Oh geez Mic.... PLEASE pass a FULL box of tissues!!!

Awesome epilogue too.... loved it... finished beautifully! Thank you.

I can not believe TPW s finally over - through all the problems on FF to joining this wonderful site TWSC.... which by the way SO ROCKS!!!! Thanks TSO & Footroza :) 

 

Good luck Mic in all you new projects... I'll be waiting for your new story crossing my fingers it will be VERY soon :)

Love to you & also thanks to your family for all the time they have released you from your family duties to write for us... WOW what an understanding family you have!

Take care,

T2M xxx



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with me.  Tissues on me.

Mic

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
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Date: 02 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love the library & love the story! Great chapter, poor Bella - when is Charlie going to talk to her again & now Rachel has a job.... AND Mike's creepy - oh no!

You guys so rock :)

 

Congrats on so many readers joining the library in such a short time *jumping for joy* 

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Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ohhhh - so now she wanting more of Jake!!!

I would too - but with that shirt off (all the time & never let him out of the bedroom!!! LOL)

Loved the date... perfect!

Bella's Gift by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Bella only wants one thing for her birthday. She has always been the strong one. She’s been dreaming of a tall, dark & handsome man who can take charge. Could he be real or is he only a dream?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5269 Read Count: 2734
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this story on the other site but I just had to reread it & review it :)

Oh Jake is just SO HOT & YUMMY!!!

OMG who could reject a pet like that!!! LOL

Thanks for posting it here just so I could red it all over again - I do hope you do continue on with it AFTER TPW of course :)



Author's Response:

When TPW is finished I have plans to turn this concept into a full story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153111
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

Wow... this is going to be an interesting story....

Can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Spankings - I can only dream of being spanked by this Edward... but really only in the sexual way - hehehe!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Edward is sexy as hell and I would probely let him do anything he wanted to me....

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts

Love how Edward, Alice & Rosalie are all very willing to speak about their life!

I understand Edward & Alice but Rosalie.... is she or what is she hiding?!?!?

Interesting lifestyle that's for sure :)



Author's Response:

Knowing that you are reading it all at once so I think this question is answered.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

I loved Edward at the hospital... then Rosalie at home with "her babies" ... then Alice with her spending - OH NO!!!

Edwards description of his childhood & teenage years... all makes sense now!



Author's Response:

I wanted to keep with there characters but with a little extra twist.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

BELLA.... OMG - watching Alice being punished.... OMG!!!!

Poor Edward for having to do this but why punish them with spankings?

Do they really enjoy it underneath or do they understand the punishment side of it & their in no pleasure?!?! Why would an adult want this if not for pleasure?



Author's Response:

All will be revealed.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

Alice & her handbag - what a crack up! And then the purse! LMAO!!!!

I'm glad Bella is relaxed enough to ask Edward why he was punishing Alice - I know he explained it & they all agree but really spanking an adult like that.... I personal don't understand like Bella I suppose!!!

Also Alice being naked in front of Bella... Edward not caring that she is, to me is a bit strange - Alice doesn't mind but Edward should care if there is an outsider in the room - shouldn't here?!?!



Author's Response:

I love Alice's obsession with shopping so I thought the handbag would be so fitting.

I am going to try and explain the whole spanking thing but not for a couple chapters, but I promise it will come.

What can I say about nudity... It is natural... There is no shame in the human body... I don't know, I was just trying to show that they are extremely comfortable with each other...

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Bella's room!!!! WOW!!!!

Didn't Bella click to Alice stating that the carpenters wont be finished until next week? Doesn't Bella realise this means they expect her to stay? hehehe....

 

Bella's the next wife I'm guessing!!!!!

OMG - Rosalie & what she has had to go through growing up.... AND only surviving like she did because she was "special" (beautiful) 

I'm so glad Rosalie opened up this way to Bella... is Bella EVER going to do this article or is she just going to joined the family & not continue on??? BIG QUESTION HERE!!!!!

 

Great reading this story in one afternoon - I just wish there was more posted!

Thanks for this story - love it :) x

 



Author's Response:

At this point Alice is the only one thinking Bella will stay.. Plus it is only the sitting room that wasn't finished.

There are no plans right now for Bella joining the family.

She is still doing the article. No matter what may happen this is a story that everyone wants the world to read.

By the time you read this the next chapter will be posted. So you didn't have long at all.   ;) 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

Congrats to your cousin... now the fun begins :)

 

Loved this chapter from Edwards POV.

Full of emotion, caring & understanding form Edward to Rosalie, Alice & Bella too!

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks...

I like jumping pov's but it can get hard to keep everyone's personalities straight. I'm glad that I am getting the emotions thru.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

Oh I don't care what happens... how could I suggest things when your writing is simply amazing in itself!

I am so in awe of this story - I just can't wait to see that there's an email in my inbox from you saying there's a new chapter! I go to it straight away (drop everything & I mean EVERYTHING!!!!) to read it.... poor darling children & hubby didn't get feed tonight! They had to feed themselves... LOL

 

But honestly - it's just perfect the way it is.... my only concern is - how will Bella just up & leave her job if this is the life she wants to live? Move across country to be with Edward, Rosalie & Alice? Surely she'll have doubts like any normal person would & how will this effect her career, family etc... so many things to think about! 

She realises she does love Edward but doesn't she need to love Rosalie & Alice as well?

Also, want to know - is there any sex between Rosalie, Alice & Edward or is it a simply case of one man & one women in these families? (sorry, I don't quite understand how that works!!!) Just interested.... hehehe

 

Can't wait for more - thanks again for a wonderful chapter :) x

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh I'm so glad to hear that I'm not the only one that gets dinner on table late because of fanfiction... LOL  I am completely addicted to my iPhone because I can read my updates and reviews when they come in. I just wish I could reply to them on my phone, but for some reason it won't let me :(  So sorry it took so long to reply. It means a lot to hear what you think.

No there are no threesomes with Edward, Rose and Alice, Polygamy isn't about that. Bella is going to have a lot of things to work out if she descides to let her feeling for Edward known..

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

Awesome chapter in RPOV - didn't expect it to go that way but wow!!!!

Even I understand so much more now in that lifestyle!

Thank you for such an amazing chapter - loved it :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

WOW - what an emotional rollercoaster of a chapter!!!

That was intense, that's for sure... Rosalie at the end was just a spoilt brat - THEN she gets another 6 whacks... OUCH! After what she had been through to then get more! And Rosalie not understanding Edward been torn between the two of them, let alone his feelings for Bella - how does one man cope with two women & their emotions let alone another one.... haha - good luck Edward :) LOL

 

Thanks for the update - always get very excited when I see this email in :)

Enjoy your sunny time with your family - nothing like it! I'm off on a weekend away with my family (hubby & 2 girls) for Mothers Day....

 

Happy Mothers Day to all the wonderful Mum's in the world :)



Author's Response:

I know. The people that really live this life must have the patients of a saint.

Have a Happy Mother's Day. I hope you enjoy it I know that you deserve it with 2 girls

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

Had a fantastic holiday - just got home after a month away!!!

Glad to be home safe & sound... I live in Queensland, Australia. And it is extremely wet here & floods everywhere... fortunately not in my town! We are the lucky ones...

 

Great chapter by the way... I loved it :)

Can't wait for more,

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

Loved Alice's POV - I think it was a very important part of this story/family!

Also inviting Bella to the family meeting - I think it will show Bella how much they all love each other... maybe she'll love that part too well & realise she can't leave (or wont want to leave!!!)

 



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be in Bella's POV..... So you'll 'hear' a little anout what she's thinking.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Not good enough - how can Bella think that AFTER all the days she has spent with them?!??! OMG.... if only Edward knew Bella's feelings & Bella his - all would be awesome in their world :) Well, that would be until Rose & Alice got involved... Alice the good.... Rose the bad.... LOL! Sorry, just had to say that :)

 

Now... the part about short verses longer chapters.... well.... it's a very hard decision, but I think I have to go with short & updated more often! Only because I love seeing your email stating there's a new chapter! I get so excited & read it straight away!!!!

 

Sorry, but I know summer is there BUT winter is here & I need updates often :)

Yes, I am being selfish!!!! haha

Thanks once again for another brilliant chapter.

T2M x



Author's Response:

OMG you are too right. They have a tell all conversation ;) Then for two seconds all is good and then real life hits. Edward and Bella both have issues that make them feel like they shouldn't have it all. Mayb eit will happen.

I know what you mean about winter's I wonder if your's is as bad as mine. And I think we all have to be selfish sometimes too bad we can't always get what we want.

I promise to update as fast as I can.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

How can we not love it!!!

There are so many emotions in every single chapter you write!!!

I don't know whether to laugh or cry!!!!!

 

Just awesome as usual...

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

This story can be so twisted at times that i always wonder what people really think..... I personally love the drama, but that's just me..... 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

WOW - brilliant chapter! 

Loved it.. can't wait for the next one!

Greedy aren't I!!! haha

T2M x



Author's Response:

Well just between us. My daughter is away this week :(    So I may just be able to get the next chapter written by the end of the week. I am going to start it tomorrow....

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Office sex is ALWAYS a great thing to do :)

The rest of their conversation went well.. I suppose as good as it's going to get for awhile anyway!

Glad Rosalie is being putting her place once again! Tuff little thing she can be!

Will Alice always be this accepting of Bella coming into their lives?

I do hope so....

Great chapter - thanks!

Can't wait for more now you have the time...

Enjoy the quietness :)

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

My daughter came home 5 days early, so there is no more quite at least not for 2 weeks. but thanks, I enjoyed it while I had it.

I always thought Alice is so easy go lucky she always go with the slow. She knows how things are going to end so how they get there doesn't concern her to much.

Rosalie is a tuff cookie and I love it.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

Brilliant chapter - Rosalie is going to be a tough one to break in!!!

LOL

Alice is just as gorgeous & spritely as ever :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank T2M!  I just have no idea what we are going to do with Rosalie....... Maybe we should get Edward on her.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

Loved Bella & ALice time - their talks, their time the next day together at the apartment... great idea for Bella to do s story on her charity too.

 

Can't wait to read all about their lunch - sounds like it's going to be fun... always is when Alice is involved!!!!

 

T2M x

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another AWESOME chapter - I just can't get enough of this story... I hate the fact I need sleep & can't keep reading!

Fortunately for me, it's a new day - so off to the next chapter!!!!!

WOOHOO :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG - what a seriously hot & awesome chapter!

I am totally in love with your two characters - they are so perfect!

Well, almost perfect if Bella got over her issues :)

Hopefully soon.... LOL!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's like a cliffie!!!!

So have to get to the next chapter...on with it now!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome 1st chapter - finally got some time to read your awesome story....

Already love it :)

And I have heaps of chapters to catch up on.... yippee for me :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awww isn't she sweet - doing his laundry :)

What more could a man want!!!!! LOL

 

Flashback to Jacob was alittle scary... hmm - will we find out more about that I wonder??!!

 

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Another awesome chapter - I am SO glad I decided to read this tonight!!!

Hot.. hot... hot - can't wait til this tension explodes!!!! Pardon the pun there :)

Loved how Edward exploded before :) haha

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG - this chapter was so seriously hot! I really can't review as I have to get to the next chapter NOW!!!!!

AWESOMENESS :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMFG - Bella just sat there & told Edward WOW!!!!

What guts did she have to just let it all out like that... jsut wait until she finds out about him :)

Then it will be on for young & kinky!!!!!! hehehehe

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

AHHHH so intense - sorry straight onto the next chapter.... so GOOD :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Was it good for me... OMFG - NOTHING can compare to the rollercoaster of emotions that both Bella & Edward went through in this chapter!!!!

Hot, sexy, sweaty, orgasmic orgasms to tears, wrong words & hurt!

Oh boy - I need a drink after that chapter... but nope, I'm straight onto the next chapter :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

I love you :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

finally got time to get back to this tonite - sad, it will only be for another chapter but oh so GOOD was that citrusy lemon :)

We LOVE those lemons :)

Thanks for the awesome hot & sweaty chapter....

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hehehehe... payback is a real bitch isn't it!!!

Poor Bella - how horrible for her!

Alice just cracked me up - she's just perfect in this :) Oh & gorgeous Jazz... yummy!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

AWESOME chapter - another hot sweaty sexy citrusy lemon!!!

Wow... can I breathe now? I'm exhausted & need a drink now :)

Talk about Bella getting a workout - what about us readers!!!!

Alice & Jazz are just brilliant too...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Throughout this chapter...I cried (pass the tissues please!!!),

I laughed,

I got SO emotional,

I got scared (for both Bella & Alice)

I feel in love with Edward all over again....

Then I cried some more - the collars did it totally for me!!!!

 

Phew.... thank goodness that's over - couldn't handle anymore without a dinner break!!!!

Back soon for more.... you so rock!!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ok - cliffie... need too get to the next chapter... sorry - can't stop!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMFG - pass the tissues - I totally & utterly sobbed my way through Edward leaving....

I think I cried just as much as Bella did!!!

Phew - glad that's over with.... I'm exhausted :)

Awesome chapter by the way!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ohhh the night is just so young!!! Goodie :)

This chapter was so full of emotions -  Ican't even really review it as I just loved every part of it!

 

Edward's house sounds simply amazing... wish I could live in it with him as his sub!!!! LMAO - red arse at that too... fresh from a spanking from Edward!!!! Oh how wonderful would that be.... hehehehe

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hot, steamy & sexy chapter - BRILLIANT!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMFG - you & your cliffies...

have to get to the next chapter NOW!!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

AWESOME FRICKIN AWESOME chapter.... loved every word of it!

I have cried, laughed, felt sorry for them both with all these emotions running around & been jealous of their sex life!!!! 

So wished I had all this going on - even just the "no play" rule!!! 

How hot was that make up sex :) WOW!!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Your writing is just brilliant!

You have had me utterly enthralled with this story from the very first chapter - I simply love it!!!!

 

THANK YOU for such a wonderful story :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I don't know how long ago your birthday was - but...

*** HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!!! ***

 

How can Bella always find trouble in a city like that....?

As soon as it was Jim & Vicki - I guessed something wasn't right!!!!

Thank goodness Bella got out of that apartment block ok!

Surely she wont go back... NEVER!!!

Bella, take my advice, suck it up princess & move in with Edward :)

If you don't I will ....... hehehe

 

 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh no... trouble is looming once again ;)

I swear she just wants the pain.... when will she EVER learn!

I have & I'm not a sub .... or a Dom!!!! LOL

Good luck Bella.... I'm praying for your ass right now!!!! 

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Boy oh boy - when will Bella learn?!?!

I might get into this story & kick her ass myself.... 

The neighbours have me worried still - now she has mentioned them to Edward... I'm sure you're planning on them being in this story more!!!!! (sneaky little writer that you are!!! LOL)

 

COMMUNICATE BELLA  - that's the big secret here!!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG - how intense was that!!!!!

Frickin' awesome writing! How do YOU feel after writing such an intensely full on chapter? WOW - I'm still coming down - forget Bella, what about us readers!!!! LOL

 T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ohhh another cliffie - need to get to the next chapter & FAST!!!!!

At last Bella is finally opening up to Edward without any pressure from him :)

Love the lemons & pass more tissues please....

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yeah - jumping for joy!!! Bella's finally understanding this lifestyle :)

Opening up more & I'm hoping she'll even take Edward up on the offer & just move in... so I gather lunch will be soon where the Cullens talk her into it?!?!?

 

Love this story more & more - can't believe I have finally caught up but so excited I just received another email for a new chapter!!!

Love your work :) YOU SO ROCK THE D/S WORLD :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OH THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH for that kind comment about my reviews!!!!

How could some people read this story & not review you?? ....

It's a frickin awesome, brilliantly written, wonderful, hot, sexy, erotic & very wet between the thighs kind of story that I am loving SO much :)

(in fact, my hubby & I even went so far as to discuss our sex life & it has gotten ALOT better since I have been reading your story!!! I've even been reading some chapters to him as well..... he loves it almost as much as me!!!!! haha :)

 

AUSSIE, AUSSIE, AUSSIE .... GO THE AUSSIES!!!!!!!

I so hope they beat Germany in their first game :)

 

Again, thank you for your very kind words .... but now I have caught up - I need more! I'll get withdrawals now... sob, sob, sob :(

 

T2M x



Author's Response:

I will be thinking of you when I watch the game!  Thanks for all of your kind words and encouragement! I hope your husband hasn't been too put off by this!!

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I don't even know where to begin to review this awesome huge chapter!!!

It was brilliant - not one part stuck out more than another - except maybe Edward jumping into bed with Bella ( & getting her naked before she realised it!!!! LOL) but not being able to go any further!!! WOOHOO - yummieeee :)

 

This story has me SO enthralled... I want more & more chapters posted NOW!!!!

Sorry but I'm getting alittle anxious & wanting to know what happens so bad it's hurting to wait..... there I said it :)

 

Love your story loads... oh & you of course.... hehehhee

T2M x



Author's Response:

thank you for the awesome words of encouragement!! I promise  - the wait is worth it *winks*

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awesome chapters lately - I have had no internet access :(

So I opened up all the chapters I hadn't read & kept them open until I got the chance to read them... I must say - WOW!!!! Hot sexy stuff happening there (just wish I was Bella)

Also, so sorry I haven't reviewed all of the chapters as I usually do - but without the internet it was very difficult!!!! LOL

 

Brilliant chapters anyway - you so rock!



Author's Response:

Hey there, glad to have you back, bb!!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved this chapter but all is going too sweet!!!

What is going to happen once James & Jacob find out Bella isn't going back to the apartment... will they get in on the act of trying to deliver her belongings or something like that - I'm more scared of them two together than anything else!!!!!

 

This story SO ROCKS just like you!!!!

Thanks for the update...

T2M x



Author's Response: Hmmm J&J - what a diabolical combination!! Next week some of your questions will be answered. Promise. Thank you for the review!!