Reviews by amanzo828
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

Oh my! I loved the twist an turns though they confused me especially that cliff hanger! I want no I need more have I told you lately that I love this story!? Pleaseeeeee update soon

-Amanda* 



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors

I've read this story during the course of 3 days an it has me simply hooked!! I love it! Such a unique story line! Your writing is amazing!! Can't wait for me! Never thought if hate Alice an Rosalie so much! I mean in most fanfctions rosalie is the bitch but surprised with Alice! Anywho love this start immensely can't wait for an update!! 

-Amanda* 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  The next chapter will be a great one for sure, but as a loyal reader and reviewer pointed out so far most of the chapters have been just that... a great one.  I know many of you are sick of Rose, and we assure you that there will be closure there soon.  There is not much redemption for a character like Rose, however there are things happening that will at least show that Emmett is not in fact an idiot who allows Rose to be poisonous to all.  Many of you are worried that the introduction of Mr. James Hunter will be a dangerous situation for Bella.  James Hunter has been in the story all along, and he is a very volatile person, and there will be more to come that involves him in the near future.  Alice is showing a bit of a change, but I think she knows she has made her final stand alongside of Rosalie.  Keep in mind within days of chapter 24 posting that Enduring His Cimmerian View will post and the first out-take to post will be Bella’s POV up to and through chapter 24.  We waited to give you Bella’s POV until Chapter 24 posted for a very good reason... sex.  Yep get out your big girl panties and prepare yourselves for that, because it is going to be posting on Thursday, the BPOV will post hopefully next Saturday.  There weren’t a lot of questions, but there is still some confusion.  Rose and Jasper are Esme’s niece and nephew, whom Esme and Carlisle were given guardianship of when they were around 10/12 respectfully.  Rose is older.  Edward’s mother is MIA, but for all accounts and purposes he believes she is still alive.  Bella’s birth mother was Renee who died of Cancer when Bella was 3.  Charlie is Bella’s birth father and he is dead.  Sue Swan was Charlie’s wife and Bella’s Step mother.  Harry Clearwater is Sue Swans brother, and tormentor of Bella.   We are excited to see your reviews from the next chapter as well as the BPOV that will post.  Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 24 teaser... subject to changes in the beta process.

I’m in the middle of teaching when my phone rings.  “Excuse me. Tia, please carry on for me.”  Tia gives me a smile and takes over from where I left off.  “Hello, Caius. I was just going to step into my office.  How can I help you?”

I hear some chatter in the background.  “Edward, I’m sorry for bothering you.  Everything here is a big clusterfuck right now.  I was just calling to give you an update on the Bree Tanner situation.  We’ve had three more ex-students come forward with allegations claiming that Mr. Hunter did similar things to them, so the state police have taken over the case.  I was one of the people they called in to assist, as they’re planning to speak to all of his ex-students. The officers got here yesterday and worked through last night and this morning.  They need to speak to you, as well.” I sigh, rubbing my face, even though I had already expected this information. “This looks really fucking big, Edward.  From what I’ve gathered, he targets a student in their junior year, mostly just degrading them at first. Then, when they enter their senior year, he starts to get physical with them at the same time he begins the process with another student.  The three girls that came forward were manipulated into sleeping with him.  Due to the fact they were all over eighteen at the time, they can’t get him for statutory rape, but are charging him with aggravated rape and extortion.” 

I pull at my hair, hoping that James gets a shitty lawyer. A good one could use this to their advantage. “What’s the bond amount he’s being held on?”

There is a loud sigh and a chill travels down my spine.  “Nothing. He was released pending charges after questioning.  The charges were just filed, so now the officers are on their way to pick him up again.”  We talk a little more about some other things before saying our goodbyes. 

The rest of the day passes in a blur. The State Police being here is making life more stressful than it already is.  Marcus sent in extra counselors and staff to help out with the backlash of shit that’s going on in Forks. 

By the end of the week another three ex-students have come forward claiming that Mr. Hunter forced them into physical relationships with him. A current student has also come forward to say he had just recently started verbally abusing her.

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: First Times

Awesome chapter! It was written wonderfully! Can not wait for more. In a nut shell Harry's an asshole an rose is a bitch but who cares because everything else in this story rocks! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! 

-Amanda*



Author's Response:

Well after this chapter how will we ever get better?  I hope that you trust me when I say, it will!  Many of you want Aro to get his hands on Uncle Harry before the police do.  I will not say who gets to Uncle Harry first; because well that would just ruin the surprise, but I will say this... his capture is already written, so feel free to speculate.  There are some seriously some great chapters coming up, but Nikky says I need to warn you all that some of them are rather drama and angst filled.  There also may or may not be a few cliffhangers in the near future, oh heck who am I kidding the next two chapters are rather cliffy in nature.  The next chapter has a big surprise within and MOST of you may be very shocked.  Nikky, Jess, and a few others who have already read the chapter during BETA processing seem to think that the next chapter may generate a lot more reviews.  We may even get some from people who have not reviewed before now, because it is quite a twist.   There is your warning.  Nikky and I have been called diabolical for the plot twist that is coming, so we sure hope you all like it.  I will say this out of all the readers and reviewers we have, only one time has someone guessed a good portion of the plot and got it right.  We of course didn’t tell them, because well then they would know it would ruin the story telling process.   We had a few question about Sienna’s ability to place a phone call since she is deaf.  Deaf people can make phone calls using a Telecommunication Device for the Deaf (TDD).  Special telephone services have been developed to carry the TDD functionality even further. In certain countries there are systems in place so that a deaf person can communicate with a hearing person on an ordinary voice phone using a human relay operator. There are also "carry-over" services, enabling people who can hear but cannot speak ("hearing carry-over," a.k.a. "HCO"), or people who cannot hear but are able to speak ("voice carry-over," a.k.a. "VCO") to use the telephone.  Couple of questions came about Charlotte’s nick-name of Chas, in our story Charlotte was the youngest raised by her father among her several brothers and she was quite the tomboy growing up.  Char is a girlie name and therefore her brothers tagged her with Chas, because it is manlier.  Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we are proud of it, and are grateful to our loyal readers.  If you have more questions or want to discuss some of the story line, feel free to join the group on Facebook you can find us by searching for: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT FanFiction.  Kasi (&Nikky)

PS….Enduring His Cimmerian View is now POSTED... Please go read and review.

Chapter 25 Teaser:
“Pajama day is when you stay in your pajamas all day and eat lots of bad stuff, watch movies, and play games all day long.”  Seth and Leah nod their heads at me and Bella gives me a small half nod with her smile.  “Okay then, pajama day it is in our house.  I just need to make a few phone calls. Why don’t you all get your robes and slippers on, and I’ll meet you for breakfast as soon as I am done.”  Seth and Leah hug me before walking out of the bathroom to get their slippers and robes.

After they leave the room, I look to see Bella biting her lip, and I know she’s worrying about something.  “I’m sorry that she wet the bed. She’s never done that before.”

I walk to Bella, wrapping my arms around her. “Baby, its okay. She’s upset, and her body is reacting to that, so don’t worry about it.” I kiss her head and push her hair out of her face.  I hiss as I see the large bruises that go all the way up one side of her face.  “Baby, how are you feeling? Are you in pain?”

She shrugs her shoulders and tries to give me a smile.  “I’m not sure. I...”  She stops and rubs her head.  “I feel like I failed them.  He hurt Seth, and I should’ve been able to protect him better.  I’m upset that it was Uncle Harry that broke into our apartment the other time.  I don’t understand why he did that, or what he was looking for.  How could he do that to Seth and Leah?  I mean, I know that he doesn’t really like me much, but they’re his sister’s children.  I thought he would love them.” 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?

LOVED THIS CHAPTER CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! Awesomeness! Please update soon 

-Amanda*



Author's Response:

Thanks again and again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  As the story comes closer to an end, it seems we have a lot of questions or comments that are geared toward answers already given in the story.  So we decided to give a little background to clear up the misconceptions and questions. 

Edward Masen: Father is dead, mother is bi-polar and left him in the care of Esme and Carlisle.  Mother is alive, but whereabouts are unknown.  Edward met ‘Tanya’ in college, they had a short affair and she left, after being caught in trying to get money from him.  Edward then shut down and treated all women as if they were not worth his time.  He refused to date or trust any women and he instead only was with a select few at Aro’s club, where he paid for sex.  Edward owns the restaurant where his parents used to take him to eat at, before his father died and his mother went off the deep end.  Edward is also one of the youngest English professors at UW. 

Bella Swan: Bella was born the child of single mother Renee Higbottom.  Renee met Charlie during one of his planned scams to get money.  Renee was very rich, as were her single father.  Charlie ended up impregnating Renee, but he was already married to Sue Clearwater.  Renee paid off Charlie and Sue to leave her and her child alone, but then subsequently died of breast cancer when Bella was three.  Renee’s father fought for custody, but grand-parents rights are not acknowledged in the state of Washington, therefore after Renee’s death the state went in search of Charlie Swan.  Once he was found Bella was placed in his and Sue’s care.  After Bella went to live with Charlie and Sue, she was treated iek a slave and was never allowed even normal things such as schooling, food, new clothes, and every other basic thing as parents we give our children without second thought.  Bella grew up starved for affection, so once she got to take care of the twins she gave all that affection she has been starving for to them.  Her love of the twins is unconditional as is their love for her.

I hope this helps answer a few questions and clears up a few things.  I’m not sure why, but we have several who think Sue is Bella’s real mother, and that is not the case at all. 

Thank you again so much for all the wonderful heartfelt reviews you all leave for us.  It is amazing to us that we have managed to instill such a deep devotion in our readers to our characters, and we are blown away by just how much emotion our readers feel for our characters.  I know that the character names belong to Stephenie Meyer, but these characters and the way they are in this story are in fact ours, she owns the names and appearance descriptions, but the attitude and demeanor and words are all ours.  Thanks, Kasi (& Nikky)

TEASER Chapter 28: Subject to changes during beta process.
I am so proud of Seth and Leah this past month has not been easy on them, but they have held their heads up high and got on with it.  There has been some name calling at school.  Now I know kids can be cruel but the things that they are saying, is coming from older mouths first.  Things no parent should be saying in front of their children.  Bella and I have addressed the school regarding the problems, but we’ve been brushed off like nothing is going on.  Mrs. Crown the principle said that people will talk.  She went on to point out that I was after all, Seth and Leah’s father, and I was shaking up with their big sister.  The way she said it, implied that Bella and I were doing something wrong.  After her rather rude little speech I called Caius and explained the whole thing to him.  To say that he was angry is putting it mildly.  He went as far as taking the principle in front of the school board, and she was put on a written warning.  Not only is her job and tenure in jeopardy, but her career as a whole is.  Since we have proof that she knowing let kids and adults harass the kids, she was warned that a lawsuit would be filed if the behavior continued.  Her biggest mistake was she was aware what the twin have been though these past five months, yet did nothing to help stop the harassment.

Caius informed me of another school that had room for more students.  It was little school that only had a little over one hundred students.  It went from kinder-garden to fifth grade and each class had mix of around fifteen children per classroom.  It was a private school, and ranked in the top ten of all schools in the state of Washington’s education program.  There was a sister school that managed the grades sixth through twelfth, also ranked in the top ten.   Both schools are quite prestigious and expensive, but cost is of no matter.  There are a few nice things the school is located close to where Esme and Carlisle live, but that also causes us transportation issues for to and from school.  Both Bella and I have talked about this and we all talked about it in family therapy.  Seth and Leah asked to just finish out this year of school where they are before deciding.  We agreed that this was the right choice for right now.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: One Down

This story is very intriguing can't wait for more :D 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Awake My Soul

AWWWW this chapter made me tear eyed at the end! Can't wait for more please update soon 

 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: You're My Best Friend

Awww this chapter was lovely! Can't wait for more!!! :D 

 

-Amanda*

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh no!!! Assuming its Edwards! Ahhh need more!!!

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Awesome story! I've read most of it yesterday an some today in the morning! Can't wait to see what happens I find myself yelling at bella like TELL HIM ALREADY! :D can't wait to read more you write great! 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh no.... I need more loveee it. 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Ahhh neeeeed more! This is awesomeness! 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMGGGGGGGGGGGG I WANT MOREEE I NEED MORE. THIS STORY IS AWESOMNESS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Jzjahsjsyejskfhsiskabdn OHEMGEEEEEE TALK ABOUT A MEAN CLIFF HANGER AHHHHHH I NEEED MORE I CAN'T EVEN FORM PROPER WORDS LETS ALONE SENTENCES NEED.MORE.NOWWWWWW! Oh awesome chapter by the way can't wait for these two toget it ON! 

 

-Amanda 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

SWEET BABY JESUS THESE CHAPTERS ARE HOTTTTTT!!!! Can't wait for more AWESOMNESS ;D 

 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Lmao! At emmett an rose talk about cock blocking!! Loved it lol! Can't wait for more ;) 

 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Lmaoooo I can't with Emmett!! The best!! Can't wait for more 

 

-Amanda 

Simply Promised by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella, best friends since kids, have promised to have each other's baby someday. Now, Edward is married and Bella has a Fiance. Edward reminds Bella of their simple promise, when he learns that his wife is unable to conceive. HEA E/B Lemons. Drabble

Banner created by: Mina Rivera

Beta: HollBeth

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 105611
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome chapters makes me happy to know that it's already completed an you'll be posting 2 a day :D love it!!

 

Thank you for writing 

--Amanda* 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Amanda. There are 62 chapters and one outtake so it shouldn't take long. 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued! Can't wait to read more! 😉



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'll update daily.

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Awesome chapters! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome chapter!! Can't wait to hear from an see where this goes :)! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Little Bella is so cute! Loved this chapter. Not a renee fan really. Are Edward an Bella going to get together like happily ever after? 

 

Thank You for another amazing chapter! 

 

--Amanda* 



Author's Response:

Hi Amanda,

Yes, this will have a HEA for Bella and Edward. I love them and can't stand for there to be a different pairing among them in the end. I'm not a fan of Renee either. Bella says scatterbrained, I say neglectfu.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

~Norma

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

YAYYYYYY FOR PRESENT DAY :D love it! Can't wait till Edward comes into the picture an juicy stuff starts happening! I'd love more than 2 but I'm not greedy I'll take what I can get. 

 

Amazing Chapter! Thank You! 

--Amanda* 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think I'll upload 3 chapters from now on. Edward is coming soon. Thanks for reading.

~Norma

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awesome chapters so happy we got 6 :D I'm sorry for whatever is depressing you :( hopefully you'll start feeling better soon!! Can't wait for more! I want to see Edward approach Bella already about the baby an se E/B action lol!! How many chaps is this story? I may have asked this already forgive me I have terrible memory! 

 

Thank you again for the amazing chapters!! 

--Amanda*



Author's Response:

There are total of 63 chapters including an outtake. Thanks for the well wishes. I'm learning that when life throws lemons at my head instead of just handling them. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ahhh now we are getting to the good stuff!!! Ahh love it! I hope Bella doesn't go through the whole Riley charade! Can't wait for tomorrows updates!! :D 

 

--Amanda* 



Author's Response:

We'll have a little angst, but yes, the good stuff should come in soon. Thanks for reading.

 

~Norma

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awesome chapter can't wait for more!! 

 

 

Amanda



Author's Response:

Thanks, I tried to update the 3 chapters but my internet was like "no, too much work." So yeah, 5 updates coming up. Thanks for reading. 

 

~Norma

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awesome chapters!! Giddy to have seen soo many! Wish they would've had sex already!! Lol! :D can't wait to see where this goes!! I'm incredibly intrigued now! 

 

-Amanda*



Author's Response:

They can't have sex if they don't like each other.... right? Who am I kidding? It's Ed and Bella, they should do it out of default. LOL. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ahhh!! ::throws temper tantrum:: is it tomorrow yet!!? I love this story I can't wait to see where this goes! Is it safe to say good riddens to Riley already or too soon? I hope when the baby kicks sonograms make it more real for her :D 

 

Awesome chapters! 

 

-Amanda* 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Loveeeed the updates!! I feel bad for Bella no one really gets her. An it's upsetting how people are getting mad at her namely Edward! But I'm seeing little sparks between them do hopefully soon they'll both get their heads out there asses!! :D love your story writing an everything! 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awesome chapters! Love it! Things are starting to come along nicely with bella an Edward. I'm not going to tell you everything will be ok because I don't know that but I am going to say hope you feel better! You are an amazing write an can't wait to see the outcome of this wonderful story! :D 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Awww!! YES!!!! Can't wait for me 

 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

............ And I'm dead!! That was hot! Yay ::does happy dance:: finally we are getting somewhere. Now all he needs to do is Dutch tranny an be with Bella an they live happily ever after :D I know I know I'm jumping the bullet but I can't help it I'm madly in love with this story!! Can't wait for tomorrows updates! ::impatiently waits for it:: 

 

-Amanda* 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

This story is fucking AWESOME! I love it an to be honest I'm very sad it's almost over already! Everything about this is amazing!! Your doing a wonderful job! As for the guy that didn't show up oh well his lost! Not yours hun! Pleaseeeeee update :D 

-Amanda* 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

:'( why did it have to end! I fell madly in love with this story an now I am madly depressed because it is over! Loved the last chapters an especially loved the epi. Your writing is wonderful this story was truly enjoyable to read! I look forward to any other stories you've wrote. You have a faithful reader in me! Thank you again for this amazing story an amazing characters! 

-Amanda* 



Author's Response:

I can't express how much your support mean to me throughout this story. When we get reviews, it is exciting... but when we get reviews from the same people through the process, the reviews become kind of like a life line. As an author, they are something that we look forward to at the end of the day because we know that the words are far from simple praise. So, thank you for sticking around and reminded me of why I love to write. I truly appreciate your words and I sincerely hope to continue to hear from you again. 

~Norma

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324437
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

YAY! I found it so happy!! Hopefully you can update to where I was up to! I absolutely loveeeee this story awesomeness that I finally found it :D 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Absolutely loveeeee dominating Edward!! :D kinky!! Love this story tremendously!! Update soon! They allowed it to be post on ff.net? Miracle!! 

 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Confidant

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more! Love this story! 

 

-Amanda* 

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104537
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

Love it as much as the first time!! I would love for a new chapter because this story has me hooked! Can't wait for the next update!! Keep up the awesome work honey!! You have a faithful reader in me :D 

 

-Amanda* 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Edward's side

You have got me hooked! I am absolutely in love with this story! It is awesome an I am intrigued can't wait to read more! The emotions I'm reading feel so real your writing is amazing! Can't wait for more!! 

 

--Amanda*



Author's Response:

omg, thank you SO much, Amanda! You have no idea how happy your review made me. I'm not a native english speaker so when people compliment my writing, I feel proud for days!! yay! *twirls you*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Your so very welcome! Aww really!? I couldn't tell! Your writing has me hooked can not wait to see more!! Keep up the GREAT work! I wanted to ask will this be an E/B getting back together fic? 



Author's Response:

Again, thank youuuuu!!! Now about your question, I don't want to spoil anything, but just so you know, I wouldn't be writing a divorced E/B story if I wasn't planning some kind of HEA ending. ;)

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

LOVED IT! Hope you update soon!! :D can't wait to see E/B get back together. I know there's ways to go till then an also possibility of not happening but crossing fingers here! 



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review!!

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

Have I told you lately how much I loveeeeee this story!? It owns me! Can't wait for the update I went to ff.net to read the other chapter you posted on there. I'm anti-against ff.net right now for taking down some of my fav stories! But if you post there before here I'll read! Loveeee it! Can't wait to see more into the future for these two! I want them back together again lol! 

 

--Amanda*



Author's Response:

Amanda! *hugs attack* Thank again for you sweet words!

As for ffnet, from now on I'll post the chapters simultaneously on both websites so you won't have to go over there anymore! I'm just running late today to post the chapter 6, but it will soon be disponible here as well as on FF.

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

Loveeee this chapter can't wait to get on with the future stuff already! For some reason I didn't get an email saying you updated :( I half to figure out what happen there! Hope you update soon :D I have a question when Edward an Bella were married did they ever say I love you to each other? 

 

-Amanda*



Author's Response:

hmm. That is strange. I hope this site isn't having problems, too!! -_-;

omg, girl!! I love you so much right now!! You just put your finger on one of the biggest problem in Bella and Edward relationship!! Most people blame it all on Edward, for being selfish and everything, while all that time Bella never even told him she loved him. That will be all explained later, but yeah, you got it right. ;)

Kat

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8- The first day

Ahh loved this chapter can not wait for more!! Pleaseeeeee don't make me wait long! I loveeee this story an missed it!! 

 

-Amanda* 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9- Family time

YAY!! Finally you are back!! I was becoming desperate I missed this story! I want an need more of it can't wait for another update!! Thank you for updating!! Pleaseeeee update soon :D 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- Explanations

Oh no!!! 10-11 days!!! This chapter was wonderful I'm greedy an want more :( hope you have a wonderful time in Disney world! I wish this story was completed :( I get so happy when I see an update for it! 

-Amanda* 



Author's Response:

aww, thank you so much for your sweet words, Amanda. DisneyWorld was awesome. I hope you'll enjoy the new chapter :)

Kat

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

Awww this was a bitter sweet chapter!! Loved it!! Can't wait for more! I just want Edward an Bella to wake up an realize what's in front of them ;D! Thank you for the update hun! It was AWESOMNESS 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

LOVEEEE this chapter!! I can't wait until the next one you don't know how happy I get when I see an update!! Please update soon!! 

-Amanda*



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

Ahhhhhh!!! I sense a reunion sooooon!! Pleaseeee hopefully my senses are not wrong! Have I told you how much I absolutely LOVE this story! Pleaseeee update soon!! 

 

-Amanda*

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Loveeeed this chapter! Love every chapter love this story!! Would never give up on you! Just wish the story was complete or regularly updated "/ but I know RL gets in the way! I just absolutely love this story!! :D can't wait for the next update! I was some E/B action already! Sorry I'm impatient lol you've got a faithful reader in me!! 

 

-Amanda* 

 

xoxox

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15- Fireworks

LOVE LOVE LOVE!! Ugh leave it to rosalie to ruin the moment! Hope she's not to harsh on them. Tanya is beginning to agitate me! Hope he ditches her soon!! Once again loveeeed it.  wish it could be completed so I can read it over & over!! Looking forward to more 

 

-Amanda* 

xoxoxo! 

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Confused

OMGGGGGGGG I LOVEEEEEE THE PASSWORD! It's so freaking adorable!! I love this story soooo much!! Please update whenever you can!! I LOVE IT! Thank you for writing such a cute story :D

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

:'( oh they are an absolute mess!! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!! Can't wait to see E/B action! 

 

-Amanda* 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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"Divorce is like an amputation: you survive it, but there's less of you."  -Margaret Atwood

Bella and Edward Cullen; they were the envy of couples everywhere. Until the Denali sisters came into their lives, that is. Did Edward cheat on Bella? Or is there more to the story than what it seems?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 147580 Read Count: 61763
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This chapter had me a bit teary eyed when she was thinking back about the past :'( you write wonderfully the emotions are so raw I can feel everything she's feeling! Hopefully they can reunite after some much needed groveling an begging on Edwards part! All in all loved this chapter! Amazing! Can't wait for tomorrow! 

 

-Amanda* 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Amanda. I'm really glad you liked it  :)

~ Casey

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh Bella an Edward :( 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awesomeness! Update soon :D



Author's Response:

Thank you, I will

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well my assumption was a baby but since that's a no I have no idea now! Pleaseeee have him tell her what it is! This iz killing me I want to know! Awesomeness update soon :D 

 

-Amanda* 



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far

The One by naughtydreamz Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward meets Bella on the first day of elementary school.  Their story as told by him.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2495 Read Count: 26301
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Jul 2012
Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This story is so cute! Can't wait for me 

 

-Amanda