Reviews by Linn from IA
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Linn from IA Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

oh, boy, Aro's head is a scary, scary place to be.  The world is full of unsuspecting girls indeed!  Probably Edward & Bella are safer in the reeducation center than near Aro, although the upcoming darkness and pain does NOT sound good.  Thanks so much for updating this story!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171536
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Linn from IA Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What a huge chapter!  Charlie steps up & is totally prepared for Renee, Bella trusts, and there's this cute fluffy puppy running around everywhere.  I'm so glad I followed this story over to TWCS -- I hope it will be a good home for you to write the story that's in your head. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/12/images/ForTheLoveOfMyObsession.jpg

He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Linn from IA Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm not sure I understand (yet) what's up with the dishes (perhaps he pulled out Edward's jerseys out of one of the other opened boxes?), but I certainly understand that Emmett is full of rage *and* has an uncanny skill at switching faces.  Not dumb Emmett at all, but scary Emmett who leaves Bella feeling **decisions were constantly taken out of my hands by circumstance and events beyond my control**  Of course babies do happen, but Emmett's smugness is telling, plus he clearly drugged her before their first time together.  So much of what's been driving Bella's life since college has been Emmett, and not for the good. 

And lord knows there are enough cues in this chapter that it ain't going to get any better:  **I’m much smaller than him and can’t take some of the intensity in which he likes to make love...I shifted uneasily as his eyes narrowed slightly at me...I was so relieved he wasn’t angry about the baby. ... “I’ll go through them again tonight and make sure everything is labeled. Thank you for catching it.” (when she could be/is upset about him breaking her stuff) **

[shudder]  I'm finding evil, manipulative Emmett enormously fascinating & am delighted beyond belief that you're continuing with this story (and that my votes for it *worked*!).  While I wish that you could perform an authorial resurrection of Edward and have him ride in on his white horse and save Bella, at this point I'll settle for her finding a way for her and her child to break free of Emmett and escape, with no man in her life for a long while.  Because, really?, once she figures out what he's done/doing, how is she going to trust someone else? 



Author's Response:

Everyone keeps hoping Edward will come back from the dead to save her.  But to take Emmett to the level of evil I needed for this story, he has to be gone completely.  Doesn't mean she can't have a guardian angel watching over her....