Reviews by oopsadaisy
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

Edward is the Edward I like. At the very least he seems to be. I love that he's telling Bella the truth - exactly what she never realized she wanted to hear. I really love that Jacob and Bella are all platonic now. It made me go into fits of giggles when he offered her his carl. It was so random and so fitting that I loved it. It got her attention at the very least and I was dying for him to answer 'you' but I don't suppose they're quite ready for that yet. Sure the closet sexing is one thing but talking and confessing is not exactly this Edward and Bella's way. I cannot wait to find out what Edward has to say for himself. Cheers.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

No. No. Oh, no. Dear Bella, poor dear Bella. Edward is so going to regret not ever trying to contact her, I mean one letter in four years? Really? Golly. I am so excited for her inevitable spurning. Will there be spurning? Because I would kind of really like some spurning.
I love Aro. A lot.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reunion

Brave little B - playing it all mature and void of all contemptuousness. I love that she wants to protect the Cullens from her sad secret - Alice and Esme is particular. Carlisle knows who Felix is and what he is doing in the suite, or at least he suspects, I think. Does anyone other than Aro (and Felix, I guess) know that Ed cheated? Gah. Quite unnerving.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: How To Make An Entrance

He has to have an explaination. This is Edward. There must have been something ... Gah. Edward POV? I mean, I am so on Team Bella that it's ridiculous. Espec due to the constant Cullen tag teaming. At one point I almost want Felix to outbid Edward. I mean, really? Where does that sort of thing come from? Ridiculous. I love what this story does to me. I want Edward to offer more than a flower to Bella. She deserves more than a flower, no matter how rare it is. I want him to have a very good reason. Okay, I am seriously expecting too much from him, aren't I?



Author's Response:

Thank you Soooo much for your reviews!  Well no as a reader you can never really expect tooo much! LOL.  Well i hope to have the next set of chapters up soon! just remember one thing when reading this fan fic.... NOT everything is as seems....

Summary: Past Featured Story

whacw

What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home

Awesome. I love every detail. Charlie and Esme are really sweet together. Alice is right, there are unparalleled experiences that come with age.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

I am so switching teams. Carlisle is perfect. I have never read a pairing with as much chemistry and hilariously awkward Bella-moments as this. Her mind wanders rather regularly and I love how he just watches with interest. And the pacing is perfect. I mean, the tension between them is evidently obvious to Alice and maybe Esme senses something - I only hope Charlie isn`t as observant.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

Carlisle is perfect. I may say that too often, but honestly. He`s really rather fantastic. And Bella, oh, if that one does not have a sharp tongue then I don`t know who does. Alice is, also, perfect. Bella is lucky to have Alice around. I like how Esme and Charlie are with each other. It`s wonderfully sweet. Quite a bit learned about the Cullens today. I wonder when Esme`s nephew will arrive. And how Bella will react to her step-cousin. Pfft. I love this story.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bliss

It can`t end now that it`s only just begun, can it? Carlisle is sweet, wanting to save her, protect her - such a kind sentiment. And he does seem to have quite the fascination for Bella. Although I have to wonder the same things she did when he admit that he`s not attatched and hasn`t been ever married...

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Busted

Who?

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Damaged Man

Charlie doesn`t want to know, I`m thinking he enjoys his blissful denial and willingly swallows whatever story makes him comfortable (to a point, of course). I love that Esme is so candid. I`m thinking if it ever gets to the point where they need to tell Charlie, having her on their side will be a very positive thing. Her honesty is helpful and apparently necessarcy seeing as Bella can hardly put words together to question Carlisle about his past, she also seems to forget that he`s been asking questions along the same lines that she fears to venture. I love Alice. She is the greatest person ever.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revelations

I think he likes her. And I`m also pretty sure he`s just figured out how much.

Oh, god, he`s hilarious. And adorable. It`s ridiculous.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Anticipation

Sure. Of course. I mean, it only makes sense that Edward would come to Esme`s wedding. I wonder how she`ll react to him. Gah. Poor... I dunno? Charlie? Yeah, poor Charlie. I love him for freaking out Carlisle. It`s hilarious how obvious they are though. And really, Alice is too good for words.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies

I like Edward, he`s interesting and has quite a bit to say. I really really like Carlisle. His self sacrifice for Edward`s sake and Edward`s abundance of incorrect information is ... I don`t know. It fits the characters though. Golly, what terrible way to grow up, thinking that the parent that cares is the one that ruined something he probably thinks of rather ideally. Geesh. What`s a girl to do with that information? I suddenly envy Bells a little bit less.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen

Poor Edward. Things would be completely different if she`d met him first. But I think that Esme was right, she`s right for Carlisle. They fit. And I love how sweet Jasper is, and how Alice can`t help but be drawn to him.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Wedding

They spent the night together. It`s so sweet. Umm... Edward is weirding me out... I think that he suspects, if not definitely knows, that there is something going on between Bella and his father and yet he persists. I love that she doesn`t waver. And that she isn`t confused. And that she`s falling for him. And that he wants to continue being with her. I particularly like their dancing. Oh! And the pictures, Charlie was adorable. I love how random he was, I think that maybe he and Carlisle had a little time to talk in the car before the wedding, hmm. It`s all so great. Too great, even.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

She didn`t. He wouldn`t. It wouldn`t be right. She passed out. But she didn`t push him away. He must known, more now than before, about her and well, maybe not. I wonder why good stories make me go all convoluted with my sentence structure. He said it was a competition, that she was only a competition. Nothing good can come of this. And things with Carlisle were moving along so well. He likes her. He had fun. *Headdesk* Fun.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

McNaughty, Alice can only guess at how right she is. I wonder why Bella is so insistent about denying any form of relationship in front of Edward. I find it a little odd, then again, they haven`t exactly put a lable on what they are... although there is the fact that he wants more. I hope it isn`t more than Bella is willing to give.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Finally. Some honesty. It's refreshing. And frustrating. What is with Carlisle and doing things that hurt himself and the perople he loves for their own good. I mean, really. There's a line between altruism and ... controlling. I think Carlisle may have a bit of a God complex. IloveEdward!Heisofunnyandkindofhorriblebutmostlyjustuninformedandangry. Golly. This story makes me incoherent. Love.

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

Seriously, Bella?

I do wonder if he'd have ever done it himself. He could have kept perpetually postponing it, and she saved him a very awkward conversation. I love how she is a catalyst in Edward's life. And how she left out a crucial bit of information which, had she told Carlisle, would have hurt him more than what she'd already releaved. Flirting on occassion. Indeed. But he loves her. And he ... did it again. Granted, she did muck it all up properly. I can't wait until Esme comes home. I am inclined to suppose that Edward is seeking out information about mommy dearest. But perhaps that's only due to my fanciful nature.



Author's Response:

I think everyone is waiting on Esme to come home and have some magic words that will make everything all better. Hopefully, she'll be able to smooth some things, but will she be able to fix this? I'm not so sure. This really is between Carlisle and Edward/Carlisle and Bella. But as always she will have some words of wisdom

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

It's a perfect step. A lot was finally gotten out. I love that Bells brought out his paternal side. It's ridiculously endearing that he wanted to father her children. A little girl. I mean, really. Edward is sort of wonderful. I mean, eventually he'll have to realize that there is quite a bit too much Cullen in him to be even remotely like Kate - nature v. nurture et al. And the fact that he realizes his failings and cares makes him decidedly un-Kate-like. I really do not at all like that woman. She is beyond frustrating and horrible. Esme is so great. I love her. Carlisle and Edward are lucky to have her. 

I love this story. It's real great.

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79309
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wonder what Bella had to say. He was a very sweet teenage boy. I love that he doesn't pretend to have been madly in love with her in high school. Slight inclination (he totes had a crush on her! c:) is more believable and thus more endearing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: oopsadaisy Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They have a 'usual place'. I'm such a girl, I cannot stop smiling and giggling over that. Honesty. Gash, Lauren is such a duck! I do not like that silly mindless chick. Not even a little. Poor Edward. She loves James! Hah, he's such an eavesdropper. How appropriate.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)