Reviews by TVObsessee
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After guest hosting on a morning show, Isabella becomes the new co-cost for the show. Her husband James leaves her out of spite and jealousy and Bella swears off men to focus on her new career change. Edward Cullen was known for being a portentous, arrogant, SOB while running a branch of Masen Enterprises. After the death of his grandfather, Edward becomes the new CEO. His soul focus is on the expansion of the company, and to find out who has been stealing from and framing his grandfather. When Edward visits the morning show to defend the honor of his grandfather's legacy, he finds his self extremely attracted to the beautiful co-host Isabella. In the occurrence of unexpected events the pair cannot seem to stay away from each other. How long can they resist the inevitable? Reviews for this story on fanfic 1,672

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Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the lemonade stand

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, The Inevitable, Shena's Storys to Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306607 Read Count: 206640
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TVObsessee Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: An ending is just another beginning

Really liked this story. It was fun, and mostly engaging. The ending was a little drawn out, but I can't fault you that too much.

But I will say that before you start releasing the sequel, I highly recommend getting someone to edit it. It is a true testiment to the story itself that I continued on and read it despite the grammar and spelling mistakes, because I usually drop a story like it's hot because of them, no questions asked regardless of the quality of the plot. I probably won't read the sequel (I don't believe in them), but it will definitely increase your readership if you found someone to edit your stuff for you.