Reviews by RAH07890
Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

GAH!  That was INCREDIBLE!  Well worth the wait :)  I really cannot wait to see what happens when they go to Forks ;)  I really loved it all so much!  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  Edward and Mojo are absolutely precious with one another ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Edward and Bella are so amazing together!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I hope that Bella's trip won't be too horrible. Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

GAH!  That was AMAZING!  Happy Birthday!  I do have to make one comment...if Bella was to be ready by 6:00 P.M. her time (in New York), it would be 3:00 P.M. in Seattle.  But, if she was to be ready by 6:00 P.M. Edward's time in Seattle, it would be 9:00 P.M. in New York.  Just so it was clear.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  So...Skankya is gone for now, YAY!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next ! I love Marley, so adorable :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it SO much!  Loved her first training session!  I cannot wait to see what exactly the surprise means...although I have an idea ;)  I cannot wait for the next one!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...

GAH!  That aws amazing!  I really loved it So much!  Gah...cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!

Krazi

xoxo

FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!

Hope to see you soon!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination

SO amazing :)  Even if I help beta this, it is still not complete in my eyes until I see the pictures that go with it :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

Gah, that was amazing!  I loved it!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 A Moment of Clarity...

I know I have seen this before, but I LOVE the pics!  Question, are we going to ge to see the ring?  I really want to, because I am such a visual reader.  THANK YOU!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  Go Bella for sticking with Edward, through the good and the bad :)  I cannot wait to see how everything wraps up after this :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

OMG!  Twists and turns all around once again!  Jeepers!  I cannot wait to see what happens next, you are constantly surprising me!



Author's Response:

Well we have to make sure u stay awake...its so easy to go crossed eyed as u read so u know we throw some shit in there and then Bam u pay attention hahahahhahahha Were glad we surprised u and we hope u enjoy the rest

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club

OH MY GOSH! That was amazing :)  I really loved it so much! I cannot wait to find out where they went!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

This story is absolutely amazing so far!  I really hope something can be resolved soon!  I love it all :)



Author's Response:

Were glad your liking it.....my chap is with the BEta's soooo it wont be long xoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

That was incredible!  Can we just solve all of this with Bella and Eric divorcing since they aren't happy AT ALL?  Then something with Angela and Edward...hmm.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

WHAT? I really hope Bella can figure out what to do so she and Edward can get back together!



Author's Response:

Yah not sure what Bella's problem is....oh wait, yes i do i write her POV...lol....welll my next chap will be up soon enough. Hope it answers some questions....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

Wow, that was amazing! I really am happy that Bella is deciding to leave Eric, even though sometimes I get annoyed with people who divorce, this time it is right, they aren't happy.  I wonder how long it will take Edward to do the same thing with Angela?  Amazing job, once again :)  I cannot wait for more of Kitten and Spartan ;)



Author's Response:

I am a firm believer in trying for your marriage...to many give up to soon....but their marriage was over years ago.....thats why i had bella not be with eric for a while now....I wouldnt have felt right writing her being with one and then the other....xoxoxo I want more kitten and spartan too.......DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I really hope they find Eric soon!  Amazing job, once again :D  I cannot wait to find out what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

I cant wait to see ur reaction to what happens next ;) xoxoxoo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  I really am glad Edward is going to leave Angela too :)  I cannot wait to find out how it all works out :)



Author's Response:

I cant either...but dont forget...Rome wasnt built in a day soooo we cant have it done in one chapter....so go make some tea or coffee, sit back relax and enjoy the ride....:) these chapters are gonna be fun....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it all so much!  I really cannot wait until the next chapter :D 



Author's Response:

thank you sooo much... as Soon as Ari has time and strength to write we will love to update as soon as we can xoxoxoox

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody

That was INCREDIBLE :)  I really cannot wait to find out what happens when Bella finally moves out.  Also, what happens when Edward tells Angela about the divorce.  Wonder where she was?



Author's Response:

I know...I cant wait to write the rest. The new things we think about as we write excites us...xoxoxoox 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Please let them have sexy lemon time again soon, pretty please?  Anyway, cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Well .....part 2 is just around the corner.......xoxooxoxox

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I wonder who the mysterious phone calls are coming from?  I am so happy for lemony times ;)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Huh we are wondering the same thing? Who could it be DLIR? *DLIR smacks Ari upside the head...You already know!* Oh yeah I do! Duh I forgot! Never fear we are working on the next chapter as we speek! Yaaaay we can't wait to get it posted!

Thank you so much for you review!

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved their time at Emmett and Rose's, lmao!  I cannot wait to see part 2 :D



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing xoxoox We enjoyed writing it and part 2 I think is better.............

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Emmett, what is there to say?  I am so happy for Edward wanting to make it perfect :)  I really hope Eric doesn't hurt Bella and that Ang finally signs the papers ASAP!



Author's Response:

Well in the next part Edward goes into more detail of what he is doing to proceed with the divorce...Ro will shop heheheh I love her....and Bella.....well heres a teaser with part of BPOV

 

xoxooxo

 

"Bella?"

 

I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What’s he want?" Jessica whispered to me.

 

"I don’t know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.

 

 He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.

 

Mike, that’s his name.

 

Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I’m Jessica."

 

I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.

 

His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.

 

"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.

 

 He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don’t know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."

 

I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.

 

"An Angela Masen came to me today."

 

My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.

 

"What the fuck did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.

 

"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life.  I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."

 

I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."

 

I shook my head not wanting to hear this.

 

"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

GAH, that was so amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I really hope they find Bella soon, please?  I really cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Awe thanks BB we're so glad you liked it. Bella will be found in due time :) We are workin hard on the next chapter.

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

Wow, that was incredible!  I really love the ring :)  I cannot wait to see what the videotape is and how Angela responds to the order.  



Author's Response:

I really loved the ring too when Ari showed it too me...and the fact it had Edward's name sold it....I cant wait till Ang gets it too....

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

WOW, that was SUPER AWESOME!  I really loved it so much!  I really hope they find Eric ASAP!  I cannot wait to find out what happens next with Edward's mother :)



Author's Response:

Oh where oh where is the lil creep Eric been hiding? Oh Edward/Esme are going to come to blows so to speak. We're so glad you liked the chapter.

Thank you so much for your review.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

OH MY GOSH! NO!  I really cannot wait to see what happens next, that was INTENSE!  I loved it though :)



Author's Response:

we love surprising u...,and sorry but that had to be written..there is reasoning behind it for our story to conitnue

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OH WOW, that was amazing!  There won't be an epilogue?!  :(  I really loved this story so much :)  



Author's Response:

Thank you soooooooooooo much......and I completed here but there is one more chapter to add. I just didnt want anyone to wait......xoxoxox love u thank you for being so supportive

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really loved it so much :)  I want to see the teaser banner AND read the teaser ;)  Go Carlisle for finally standing up to Esme ;)  Cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

not sure if ur on facebook but we have a group for Smw where we add the teaser and banner....heres the teaser xoxoxoxo

 

I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.



I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.



His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.



His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.



My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.



“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.



Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…



I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”



I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

*deep sigh of contentment* That was INCREDIBLE :)  I really loved it so much!  Go Spartan and Kitten ;)  I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)



Author's Response:

;) We are working on the next chapter now! We're so glad you liked the chapter so much! It makes us sooo happy to hear that.

Thank you so much for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  I KNEW Eric had a part in this!  I really hope they find Bella and Ang soon :)



Author's Response:

Aw you're makin us blush :) We are so glad you liked it! Yes Eric played a part in it.

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x00x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

OH SNAP!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  Praying for Ari's recovery!  I saw one minor mistake I need to comment on " her holier than though attitude"  should be "holier than thou" :)



Author's Response:

OH SNAP....I go fix now..........xoxoxo...runs off

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see how everything works out!  So happy Ari is all better :)



Author's Response:

YAy.......so glad u enjoyed it...I just finshed the next one sooooo hope u enjoy it just as much

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

WOW!  That was INTENSE!  I really cannot wait to see what happens next!  I am kind of sad Esme is dead, only because now she cannot be put in jail for the rest of her life, but she will get her karma in hell ;)  Hehe.  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow

Wow, that was AMAZING!  Poor Bella...please let Edward actually talk to her soon!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

Wow, that was amazing :)  YAY for Edwar finally getting it together again :)  I cannot wait to read BPOV and to see these two together again :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer

Wow, that was AMAZING :)  I would LOVE it if Bella said Yes ;)  I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I am so anxious for the next chapter!  I love Kitten/Spartan lemons ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for the review and hopefully the next chapter will be up within a day or two

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

dlir

Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Happiest Man Alive

Awww...YAY!  Perfect ending :)  I really loved it!



Author's Response:

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cartwheels and jumping jax..........xoxoxoxo im gonna miss these two.......maybe a out take maybe :D thank you soooo much for reviewing.........they all made my day when I saw the notice

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Take me home

Wow, that was AMAZING! I am so happy everyone is ok :)



Author's Response:

Me too.....hope u like the epi I posted tonight

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Night

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Edward must have his ways for getting in contact with Bella.  I wonder if Edward is Anthony's father, but I really hope not, if only because that would be really awkward for Bella, since he was dating her sister and then knocked up her best friend and LEFT HER!



Author's Response:

gah....that is a interesting theory...omg ur the first to even suggest that. Good one oxoxoxo keep reading babe

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Then dont

Wow, that was amazing!  I am glad that Bella said yes and that Edward let Alice know the truth :)



Author's Response:

xoxoxooxoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The night part 2

Wow, that was incredible :)



Author's Response:

xoxoxo thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Welcome to Seattle

Wow, that was amazing ;)  I really cannot wait to see what happens at Edward's.



Author's Response:

ohhh Edwards place .....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Angel Eyes

WOW!  I really loved this chapter so much :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)



Author's Response:

One of my fav's.............xoxoxoxoox

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Good Morning

OMG!  I really loved this so much :)



Author's Response:

if only we woke up every morning like THAT.......

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Pictures

Wow, that was heartbreaking but I can sorta see where Renee is coming from with this story.  I really cannot wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Dream

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: My future

Aw, that was amazing :)  I am so happy Bella is going to school and is staying with Edward :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Tender Kiss

Wow, that was amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Ms. Cupid

Wow, that was amazing :)  I cannot wait to see how the night at the bar goes :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Saturday Night

Wow, poor Bella!  I did NOT expect Alice to blow up like that.  I cannot wait to see how this is resolved :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Happy Fucking Birthday

OH NO!  NOT GOOD!  Please let them find a way to be together again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Bella was here

WOW!  That was amazing :) I really hope Bella turns out to be ok.  I also love that Edward is so sweet and caring :)



Author's Response:

WOW....ur amazing....thank you for reviewing each chapter .....really....thank you...xoxoxo enjoy the rest

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: November

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really hope Bella wakes up soon, please?  I am also happy Charlie finally came around and accepted Edward :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: December

OH THANK GOD!  I really loved it so much :)  I am so happy right now :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Meant to be together

OH NO!!!!  Please don't let Bella forget forever!  I hope she can remember soon :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: OUTTAKE- APOV

Wow, that was amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Remember Me

Wow, that was amazing :)  I cannot wait to see if Bella remembers again :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Remember....Remember

Wow, that was amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Are you mine yet?

Wow, that was amazing ;)  I cannot wait to see how this continues :)



Author's Response:

Muah thank you for reviewing sooo much,,,,,Im almost done the next chapter so hope u dont have to wait to long....xoxooxxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Yes...

Wow, that was amazing :)  I am so happy for them :D



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much and Im  so happy to have them back together

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Happy Valentines Day

Wow, that was incredible!  I loved their little limo moment ;)  Cannot wait for them to get inside Edward's condo!  I am so happy she is remembering bits and pieces :)



Author's Response:

Im happy with how it turned out and people reading it....I wanted her to remember slowly/...sooo yay...im glad u like it 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

OH SNAP!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

It's coming!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

OH SNAP!  I really loved it!  Cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you cant! Cause i'm writing now! lmfao

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I really want to see said guide!  I cannot wait for more of this story and the other one too (LAV) :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! =D

 

I'm working on LAV. I'm hoping to have it completed in just a few days *crosses fingers* lol

 

Thanks again!

 

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

OH NO!  I really loved this chapter so much!  Please let Bella and Edward be together soon!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

We'll post more asap.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

This is amazing so far!  I really love it so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

Wow, that was amazing :)  I was thinking that is who the vampire parents were ;)  Will Edward grow up faster so he appears older than Isabella when they meet again?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Yes, vamps do age faster until they reach a certain age.

Thanks again. We're happy that you like so far

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Wow, that was amazing!  I was NOT expecting that!  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks again! =) We're so happy that you like. Lots more twists coming ;)

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really cannot wait for Bella and Edward to officially meet!  I wonder how they will be together if it is illegal?



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm actually working on the next chapter right now. I'm almost finished. =) One more scene to go.

Thank you for reading and your comments along the way.

~Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really love a Darkward ;)  I wonder if he is a dirty talkingward too when the time comes ;) hehe.  I also love his long hair and fangs, although I don't know why.  I know you said you don't write fluff but will there be a HEA for Isabella and Edward?



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you =) Glad you like his long hair and fangs.

 There is supposed to be a HEA for them although....we may make a sequel for that  to happen. I guess it depends how many chpaters the story will be. lol

Thanks you so much

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Please let Bella and Edward be together soon ;)  I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hiya!!!

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

I hope you'll like part 2 coming up really soon.

Thanks again

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next!  I would love to beta for you both, but I am SO busy with school and I help beta for 4 other authors.  While these don't keep me that busy, school does; I am an early childhood education major in college and am about to start student teaching soon, which will consume most of my time.  I will still be here, supporting you both in your writing of this and the other story :)



Author's Response:

It's all good babes! we're just glad you guys are so supportive of the story! next chappy is coming!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

OH WOW, that was amazing :)  I really loved it and hope that Edward slips up soon to mark her as his true mater.  But, I also hope he can do it without being condemned to death.  Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

ikr? Edward is feeling the pull and it's only getting stronger. ;)

I'm working on ch 9 already.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

OH SNAP!  That was amazing ;)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait for the next installment of both this and LAV :D



Author's Response:

Sorry for the very late reply. Crazy life im livin' lmao

I posted LAV today. I'll work on ch 19 lav and possibly another chapter for lah.

Thanks for reading and commenting. It means a lot.

xox

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

Wow...that was really weird.  I am still confused...sorry.



Author's Response:

LOL!

 

No worries, it was an April Fool's joke. We are almost finished with the actual chapter and we'll post it sometime today or tomorrow. The next chapter coming up will clear some things up. =)

 

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Oh snap!  That was amazing and intense all at the same time!  I cannot wait for more of this and the other one, "Living Amongst Vampires" :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* Thanks so much!

 

I'll have an update for LAV hopefully this weekend.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

OH SNAP!  That was amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

OH SNAP!  That was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I also cannot wait to see how everything works out for Bella and Edward ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Calving by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Volturi Dairy by fetish-fanfic fan piece. What happens the first time Bella gives birth.

 

stories/1176/images/calving-1.jpg


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2285 Read Count: 4667
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 24 Feb 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was PERFECT!  I really loved it so much!  That story is amazing ;)  I really wanted to see her first calving too!  Amazing job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my take on Bella's Hucow birthing experience. I was very excited when FF gave me permission to write it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

forever

A group of friends meets and hooks up with a band  and see where this wild ride takes them.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102825 Read Count: 11318
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2011 Updated: 27 Jul 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sounds like a really good story...unfortunately, it is really hard to read.  You don't have quote marks where people are speaking, so it all runs together.  I really liked what I could read, but I couldn't get very far, it was hard to follow.  I hope you can fix this little problem, so more people can read it :)  I love "Across the Lines" and am working on reading it now.

Summary:

 

flod

Banner by: edwards_girl_1918.. Author & Co-Author of some great fics... check ´em out!!!! Thanks Ari!!!

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5311 Read Count: 4508
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake #1: Submission 101... Playtime with Mistress Rose...

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much ;)  Cannot wait for the next chapter ;)

Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187926
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Cannot wait to see what names they come up with :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'

Wow, that was AMAZING :)  I really loved it so much!  I cannot believe only one chapter remains :(  But, I am happy about the sequel :)  YAY!  I cannot wait to see what they name their daughter as well as what the nursery looks like!  I loved the Winnie the Pooh themed baby shower :)  So amazing!  I cannot wait for the last chapter :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and pics.  Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

Wow, that was AMAZING, as always :)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see who is behind the trouble!  I also hope they get rid of whoever/whatever it is soon!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tattoos and Gowns

This story is amazing :) I really love it so much!  I cannot wait to learn more about this planet ;)



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past

Amazing job, once again :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and thanks for the review.  You are fixing to get to the chapters that have pictures.  When you go to the blog, click 'March' under 'Blog Archive' and you can pull up the chapters.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns

Gah, amazing job, once again!  I will DEFINITELY check out your blog :)



Author's Response:

Again, glad you are enjoying the story and thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

Wow, sounds amazing!  Poor Edward!  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Rape

OH SNAP!  I really loved this so much!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

Wow, really loved it so much!  Addy sounds adorable :)  Cannot wait for the ceremony :)  So happy Bella is giong to adopt her :)



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it!  Their house is GORGEOUS!  I have a question, what does the tattoo look like?  



Author's Response:

Thanks, I have put up pics of the tattoo.  Although I need to touch up the one on Bella's arm because I never intended to blow it up that big.  It is under chapter 6.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I was not happy to see Tanya but I hope that she can stay away forever!  Addy is so precious :)  How old is Bella?  I know Edward is 35, but just curious on Bella :)



Author's Response:

Bella is 18, a character list with all the ages is posted under my profile as Planet Twilight Outtakes.  It has a glossary of my terms and a character list in it.  But Rose, Alice, and Bella are all 18...the age they can be chosen as mates.  Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Binding Ceremony

Gah, that was INCREDIBLE!  Guess I should have read this chapter before asking how old Bella was...she is 18 right?



Author's Response:

Yes, but I have no problem answering your questions.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: First Taste

HOLY SHIT!  That was INCREDIBLE!!!!!!  I really cannot wait for their wedding night now ;)



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks for the review!