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Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187926
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Reception Part One

Gah, amazing job, once again!  Addy is adorable, really love her so much :)



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Reception Part Two

Gah, amazing job, once again!  Poor Bella, I hope they can be alone soon :)  



Author's Response:

It won't be long until the honeymoon night.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Reception Part Three

Wow, that was amazing :)  I think James deserved that violence ;)



Author's Response:

LOL, You didn't mind violence to James' manly parts, huh?  He is a mean character in my story.  Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion

WOW, amazing job, once again!  Really loved it!  



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review!  Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Morning Lovin'

Gah, amazing job, once again!  I wonder what their sex life will be like whenever Bella gets pregnant?  Maybe just like this ;)



Author's Response:

They are always going to want sex.....lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books

Wow, that was amazing!  I think I know what is "wrong" with Bella ;)  Hehe.  Is there a difference in these pregnancies, just wondering :)  Is the picture of Bella what she is supposed to look like now that it has been discovered she is a faen?



Author's Response:

Each time they have sex and his fluid is entering her, she is changing to her authentic self....which is a faen.  She is changing little by little.  So I doctored a picture to make it look like she sort of glows.  She still looks the same, other than she grew a few inches and glows and is now immortal.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage

AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I also LOVED the picture someone (I don't know if it was you or not) drew of Addy on your blog, so precious!



Author's Response:

I drew the one under the link that says Adanna Esme.  I didn't draw the one where I think she would look the age 5 or 6.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party

Amazing :)  I really loved it!  I would love the ability to talk to animals, mostly because my cats do some things that annoy me and I want to knwo what they are thinking ;)  



Author's Response:

I am not sure I would want to know what mine are thinking...lol.  They would probably be fussing at me about something.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella

Amazing job, once again :)  I really loved it!  I am starting to think Bella needs to wear skirts all the time...you know as Edward would say "easy access" ;)



Author's Response:

She only wears long dresses.  Except when she works in the garden, she gets to wear leggings.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon

Wow, amazing job!  So precious to have Addy start so young, but still have her enjoy it.  She will love it because she probably wants to be "just like Mama Angel" :)  I know sometimes I wanted to be just like my mom when I was younger :)



Author's Response:

If you start them out young helping, they get used to it and think of it as normal.....she still has plenty of time to play and be a kid.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington

Wow, amazing job, once again :)  Really loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby

YAY!  I KNEW IT!  I am SO happy for them :)



Author's Response:

It wouldn't take long as much as they are doing it....lol.  Thanks!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: You Have Value and Addy's Excited

Wow, amazing job, once again!  I wonder if it really is a girl?  I love the list for the dairy :)



Author's Response:

I plan on it being a girl.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime

That was amazing :)  I really loved it!  I was worried about Addy's bath time too :)  



Author's Response:

I was thinking, her being similar to a cat....she might not like a bath, but what kid doesn't like a bath...lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries

Wow, that was amazing!  I really love homemade bread, so jealous they get some ;)  I hope Bella won't overwork her self anymore :)



Author's Response:

She learned her lesson and spread her work out more, so she wouldn't do so much at one time.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Jasper Explains and Smores

So amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Question, since you mentioned Bella is now immortal, is Edward immortal too?  Just curious, because I am sure she cannot live without him and he cannot do the same.  Man, reading this chapter makes me really want some smores!  



Author's Response:

The Twilighters have a very long livespan, so the story will be over long before we have to worry about that.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males

Wow, amazing job, once again! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid

Wow, amazing job, once again!  I think I may need this Edward's help sleeping some times ;)



Author's Response:

It would be nice....lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here

Amazing job, once again!  I would be just as confused as Charlie if I had been told all of this information in only a few hours ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, who believes in aliens and I would think it would have to be some big elaborate joke.  Well some people believe in aliens...but anyway.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy

Wow, that was amazing!  So happy that Addy and Charlie bonded so quickly :)  Sue is so pretty :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting

That was amazing!  So happy for everyone :)  I love that Addy purrs.  Tink purrs LOUDLY ;)  I have wondered this for a while but kept forgetting to ask...does Addy take naps in the afternoon, since she is so young (and being half felinas, cats nap constantly)?  Just curious :)



Author's Response:

I hadn't really thought about naps, but I am sure she would.  She gets up about 8 o'clock every morning, so I am sure she would tire out in the early afternoon.  I have been writing in some of Bella's naps, so you could say Addy is taking one at the same time.  My daughter took naps till she started school and my son, once he got out of the baby stage...never took one unless he was sick.  So all kids are different.  Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'

I really loved it so much :)  That chute is a great idea ;)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Although she lost some of her clumsiness when she changed into a faen, she still doesn't need to be carrying laundry down the stairs.  Since they can afford to put in a chute, then that is the way to go.  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Rosalie, What are You Doing?

OH SNAP!  I really hope they can save Rosalie and get James and Victoria (and possibly Irina too.  Kate seems like she is going to be a good person :)



Author's Response:

The good guys win.  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 39: The Hunt is On!

Gah, amazing job, so much!  So happy everyone is ok :)



Author's Response:

Victoria is a little worse for wear, but it turned out ok.  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch

Amazing job, once again!  I wish I could sew, but I can barely sew up a hole in my jeans/stuffed animals ;)



Author's Response:

I can, just don't take time to do it anymore.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Family Time and Emmett's POV

Wow, that was amazing :)  Once again, I wish I could sew more than I can ;)  



Author's Response:

I can crochet, but could never could catch on to knitting.  It takes more patience than I have...lol.  Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center

That was amazing!  I really loved it!  Monster's Inc. is one of my favorite movies by Pixar :)  One minor thing I noticed "“Yes, Cutie, I am going to live with you and your pretty too. My name is Angela,” she said to her."  Should be "you're pretty too" :)



Author's Response:

Ok, fixed it!  Thanks for telling me about it.  I don't have a beta, so there is bound to be some mistakes every now and then.  Although I see beta'd stories with mistakes.  

 

I like Monster's Inc. too.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'

AMAZING!  I really loved it once again :)  I also noticed that once again, you used "your" instead of "you're"...here “Oh, baby, your emitting a charge and it makes me feel wonderful, your touch feels different than it has in the past. It feels so good, keep going baby. I'm yours, all yours,” he growled out.  “Your so big and hard and yes, you are mine!"  Just fix that and it will be PERFECT :)



Author's Response:

Fixed it also and thanks again.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting

Wow, great job!  :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, even though it wasn't a glamorous chapter.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Age Begins

Amazing job, once again :)  I really loved it :)



Author's Response:

Glad you did and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Imprints, Ultrasound, Night Out on the Town

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I REALLY love the idea of using reusable things at the movie theatre :)  I wish our movie theatres did that ;)



Author's Response:

Maybe someday when everyone gets earth conscience enough.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  So happy Makenna's babies are ok :)  I also love the birth announcements ;)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower

That was INCREDIBLE!  That baby shower was great!  I love strawberries...my mom always says "The Lord could have made something better than a strawberry, but He didn't ;)"  hehe.  Also, I noticed cloth diapers being used, if you want to also use these diapers, it would be cool, they are called gDiapers (http://www.gdiapers.com) and you can FLUSH, compost or throw the lining away.  You keep using the outside :)



Author's Response:

That is a lot better than disposable diapers.  Thanks for the tip and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'

GAH, amazing job, once again!  I really want to live in this world now...with Edward or Emmett ;)  Hehe



Author's Response:

I am more of an Edward or Jasper fan, Emmett acts like too big of a kid for me.  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I wish movies here had intermission :)



Author's Response:

They used to but stopped it, it was always a good time to go to the bathroom or get food.  So I my theater in my story has intermission...lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chat with Friends and Galleos Jewelry

AMAZING!  I really cannot wait for more!  Edward and Bella's baby is behaving like me, modest even in the womb ;)  But, for their sake, I hope that they can find out for sure that it is a girl ;)  Cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

As always, glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

That was amazing!  Really loved it so much :)  Poor Addy, I can only imagine what her fur looked like after the baby shower.  One of the disadvantages to wearing white or in her case, having white fur ;)



Author's Response:

In her case, you can't bleach it out....so it just has to wear off, but she enjoyed the cup cakes...lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

Wow, amazing job, once again :)  Really loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for much for all the reviews!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Matching up Mates

That was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  One minor mistake I found here "Why is Peter and Alice being so cryptic?"  Should be "Why ARE Peter and Alice being so cryptic, since there are two people involved :)



Author's Response:

Fixed the mistake.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for pointing out the boo-boo.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'

Wow, amazing job, once again!  I wonder what the other thing she wants to talk about is?  



Author's Response:

Glad you have enjoyed the story so far.  She wants to know what is going on with Cassandra.  Thanks so much for all the reviews!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Felix and Bellona

Wow, that was GREAT!  I love these drawings so much!  I wish I could draw :(  My roommate can, she is an Art/English major, lucky duck ;)  Oh well :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and pics!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Family Meeting, Talks, Lil' Lovin'

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  Cannot wait for more!  So happy Alice figured out that now, her gift is really helpful :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it so much :)  I hope you are safe now that the storms are over :)  Also, love the baby drecks, so cute!  So happy the baby finally cooperated!  I cannot wait to see what they name her!  Bella is so lucky to be eating ice cream all the time and NOT gain (a lot of) weight...I LOVE ice cream, unfortunately, my body also loves to show its appreciation for the ice cream in the form of weight, boo.  Wonder what Bella will get Edward for his birthday?



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Yes, we are safe and I finally have power, it costs a fortune to run a gas generator.  Glad you like the drecks, I found a breed of ducks that look like a cross between a chicken and a duck.  I need to get to thinking on names, haven't considered one yet.  My body does bad things with ice cream too...lol.  Haven't decided on birthday present....need to put my thinking cap on.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it SO much!  Perfect name for her!  I really loved it!  The nursery is GORGEOUS by the way, jealous of it!  There is going to be another chapter before you start the sequel, right?  I love this story and am sad to see it go :(



Author's Response:

This was the last chapter.  I am not going to do an epilogue because I am going to do a sequel.  Thanks so much for the review!

Summary:

This is the character list and descriptions and also a glossary of Planet Twilight terms.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3151 Read Count: 864
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Mar 2011
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Character List

Amazing :)  But, shouldn't Edward's middle name Mason, be MasEn?



Author's Response:

When I googled it, it has it both ways....will go to the books or S.M. site to make sure.  Thanks for the review!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2674033
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Round Three

SO amazing :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

GAH!!!!!!!!  That was amazing!  I really loved this! Great first chapter.  So, as a visual learner, do you have any specifications on parts of Edward ;)  Also, how old are they?  Just curious :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

OH WOW...SO amazing!  YAY!  Cannot wait to see how their relationship progresses from here :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

OH WOW...SO amazing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

OH WOW!!!!!  So amazing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

GAH!!!  That lemon was amazing ;)  I really loved it SO much !  YAY!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

Oh wow ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: TKO

OH WOW...SO amazing!

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

banner

Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

OH WOW...SO intense and amazing at the same time...even if I did beta this, it is still AMAZING :D  LOVED IT!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

Oh wow, SO amazing!  I really loved this...and I don't just say that because I beta it :D  Thanks for the congrats!  Anyway, I really hope Bella and Edward get back together soon, for everyone's sake :D



Author's Response:

They will!  But they´ve got heal, first as individuals, second as a couple, and third as a family!  I promise not to drag it out!

Luv ya, girlie!


Krazi

xoxo

P.S. No need for a teaser, you´ve got the whole chapter!  LoL!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Well worth the wait :) I cannot wait for more!  



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, that was so INTENSE!! Please tell me it gets much better soon!

Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading, reviewing and giving my latest little venture a chance.  I assure you that though there will be many bumps in the road, there will be an HEA!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella!  I know that had to be a rough life but she is managing well :)  Question not related to this...when are we going to see the teaser for the next For the Love of Domination chapter?  I miss it :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review my friend! And answer, not related to this... your teaser has been uploaded, complete with your own shout out! Lol! Enjoy and thanks again for giving the new story a chance and leaving me some love!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

Wow, that was amazing :)  Poor Mac ;)  But, so glad they cleared things up :)  Gah, Bella had a really rough life with Renee, so glad she moved away from her!  Cannot wait for your next update (of both stories) ;)  I already voted for For the Love of Domination :)  I miss it :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Edward...I know it is hard, but I really have faith and hope that he will come back.  Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I am sad that the prologue is coming soon though.  Cannot wait to see how everything works out though :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, we´re right upon it! Next chapter will have a tissue warning! Glad you´re still here! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: When the Music...

OH NO!!!!  I did cry while reading this...honest.  Cannot wait for it to get better :D



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...

OH WOW...that was intense and amazing!  I am SO happy Edward is getting better!  I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

SO amazing :)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/46180/images/where_she_belongs_banner4.jpg

Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, that was amazing!  YAY for Edward wising up :)  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Gah, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I cannot wait to see what the rules are ;)  Also, I know Edward says love isn't part of the plan...famous last words ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, that was amazing :)  I cannot wait to see how everything changes between them.  Good to see how old he is ;)  Loved it so much :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wwow, that was amazing!  I am glad Edward is slowly but surely getting closer to understanding Bella :)  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, poor Bella!  I really hope this helps Edward realize what he did to Bella was way too fast for her.  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gah, this sounds amazing so far!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Will we find out how old Edward is, since Bella is 16?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait to see the rules and things ;)  YAY!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

GAH, that was AMAZING!  I think Isabella is just ignoring pleasure right now because she is scared of it.  Edward will hopefully help her through that ASAP :)  Cannot wait for more! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing!  I really hope that she can get used to him soon!  Also, I thought Edward would want to rid Bella of her barrier before actually entering her, so that he wouldn't have to worry too much about the pain it would cause her (because not only is he taking her virginity...he also is huge, well, at least in my mind ;) hehe).  Just wondering ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, that was amazing!  I know Edward is trying, but maybe he should try a little bit harder.  I know he and Isabella will be AMAZING together, once they can work out their problems :)



Author's Response:

He needs to try harder.  He amazingly thinks he is trying.  One day he'll have his 'Aha' moment.  Thanks for reading & reviewing.  :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I don't mind waiting for updates, RL gets in the way ;)  Cannot wait to see what will happen next :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it!  At least Edward listened to Alice and didn't shut her out :)  Cannot wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, that was amazing ! So happy Rose is nice to Bella :)  Even if Edward is stubborn, I know he will make it :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, that was amazing!  I am glad Edawrd is realizing that he needs to consider Bella's feelings.  Even if Bella is enjoying it, it will take some time for her to realize she wants this too (in her mind).  I wonder how the conversation with Emmett will go...hmmm.  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, that was amazing!  I am glad Edward is starting to make progress...slowly but surely.  I actually like him being domineering ;)  I cannot wait for more...hopefully RL will calm down for you soon :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OH MY GOSH!  I wonder what is wrong?  I really don't like Aro and now...I am not liking Edward's dad either.  Glad Edward is learning to take his time with Bella...hard as it may be (pun intended ;) hehe).  I cannot wait to see how long it takes her to get ready for him :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella :(  I really hope she feels comfortable soon :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

SO amazing!  I am excited to see what happens next :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OH MY GOSH!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OH SNAP :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

SO amazing :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

SO amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I hope Bella and Edward get some more happy times soon.

Common Ground by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

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Bella has come to accept that her unusual fetish may mean she spends her life alone, that is, until she meets handsome OB Edward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11008 Read Count: 23187
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Gah, this is great! ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what they decide on when they finally talk ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

AMAZING JOB!  I really loved this!  I cannot wait for more!

Summary:

 

 

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36400
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Wow, that was amazing ;)  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait for more of this and FTLOD :D



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

OH MY GOSH!  That was SO hot!  But, I have a few questions, how old is Bella?  Will we see how Bella and Edward met?  I cannot wait to read more ;)



Author's Response:

Bella is 37 and yes little by little we will get into Edward and Bella's backstory and how they came to be! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You always keep me on my toes!  Love you bb!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo


Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Oh wow, that was amazing!  So happy they are all together now :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Master to you by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 188]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After Isabella's transformation into a vampire, her life changed as well. Edward changed and her whole world changed. Sweet Edward is no more and Bella has a potty mouth. Sit back and enjoy the ride between Bella and Edward. This is a BDSM story, if that offends you, don't read it. You have been warned, there are also a lot of lemons. E & B will have a HEA.

 

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Beta'd by RAH07890

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43263 Read Count: 84240
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 May 2013
Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 "The Table's Have Turned"

Loved this :)  Pictures were hot, as always ;)



Author's Response:

thank ya ma'am

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

This sounds great so far, but it is very hard to read.



Author's Response:

hard to read ??? tell me what the problem is maybe I can fix it !

I am new to this my first story . I can't get better if you don't

tell me what's wrong thanks for the review.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Prologue Edward's POV

WOW, that was great :)



Author's Response:

I'm thinking its easer to read this time

chapter # 1 was not beta'd  the rest are

thanks alot I am glad you like it

;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Biggest mistake of my life

This is great, but what is hard to read is the big paragraphs, break them up.  Also, the grammar/spelling issues are hard to ignore.  I am copy/pasting into a Word document and making corrections so it is easier for me to read.  I really love this, don't get me wrong, it's just I am so anal about grammar/spelling.  Cannot wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

Great I understand I will work on this  and talk with my beta

  I will split tha paragraphs up some  thanks alot !

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

Really loved this :)



Author's Response:

THANKS SO MUCH

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Master awakens

AMAZING :D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it thanks alot

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Collared

YES!  Loved this ;)



Author's Response:

your the best thanks so much for all your work

***Smiles to you***