Ok i was thinking how the hell did Laurent get to Victoria... well that made sense......this is so messed up ........James is truly a sick bastard..but now what is he gonna do ..take Heidi too so now he will be traveling with three prisoners... the man doesn't think which is a good thing i am hoping but what will Edward think when he finds them gone?? And I am totally lost on where James planted this GPS on Victoria unless it was somewhere nasty in her body.    but u would think she would feel that...... Oh not good at all.

Oh come on how the hell did he find them??? Did he follow Jacob?? Did they trace their phones?? Did Carlisle tip him off? I just knew something was gonna happen but if they don't come down soon Edward will come back up and check on them... what does he plan on doing shoving them out the window? I mean how is he planning on getting out of there with two women one pregnant.. and who the hell is it James or Laurent?""

Oh i'm so behind again........ I couldn't think James would be this stupid to try and come take Bella back knowing Edward was there....but then again u would think after what he just escaped from he would just run away and be happy he got out but i'm sure James isn't that smart..... I am so happy Bella was able to tell Edward she loved him too..... And Poor Victoria but idk something about her just doesn't sit right I got a feeling she might be stupid enough to forgive James if he came around..... which would get them all in trouble.....

Holy shit what just happened?????? the banging was that some one or a fluke... no cuz it happened twice so i am hoping that means that Edward found them.. I don't know but I am so glad they got away and knocked his ass out... i just feel sorry for Heidi if Bella and Victoria did just manage to escape on their own because she is passed out and they can't carry her and they sure can't wait around for her to wake up incase James wakes up.......alright i'm gonna stop guessing and just wait for the next post...... really good chapter.

Oh i loved it ........the whole chapter wrapped everything up perfect.... I was wondering what she would decide to do......I just wonder if she chose to be him Sub 24/7 or just weekends? Or if she just wants to play once in awhile and not be a submissive persay...... Anyways i am so glad she is going to college and glad Victoria's baby came out healthy (thanks for letting us know what she had)... I am glad to know what is going on with everyones life.......... Now i will miss my dose of this story.......i'm sad but i understand it did have to end.....don't like it but understand............ now i just have to figure how to add you two for any futher stories you may right because i would love to read more of your new  stories...........

OMG he is for sure dominating and Possessive his a tid weird but very sexy...kind of mean to her but he is hot.......i am liking him a lot....he can bend me over any table he wants at  any time...........

Ok now he kind of pissed me off........does he love her?? If he loves her he has to trust her and if he trust her then he has to let her go to the dance.. he can't think she would "cheat on him"  but does he love her??? IDK  but he does except a lot from her too... i mean I know at 17 i couldn't come up with a reason to be out of town all weekend on short notice.........but i kind of hope she tells him to fuck off and  goes to the dance......maybe if she is lucky he will spank her for not minding...........love Edward spankings....almost as much as against the wall sex and bent over the table...........

Good for her.........loved it she took control tonight and wearing the little catholic girl outfit.....loved it........ she should have kept him in the handcuffs a  little longer though make him beg for it........lol........i was kind of hoping he would make her wear them too.... now Alice is going with Jasper and Bella is with Edward where was Rose going anywhere or she is driving them to the places.??

OMFG NO u can not leave it like that..........what the hell happened....... this is not good..i'm dying i hate cliff hangers......oh they never should have went and to get drunk and do drugs and shit.......ok now i sound like a bad after school special but holy shit.  u have to post soon.............how is Edward going t osee her...........no i so didn't see a accident coming i was still so pissed over that whole Tanya thing,

well i love this story.........i think u post just fine,at a reasonable time frame.. i am a mother of 3 and I have my husband here.. but still do the bulk of the work/chores and taken care of the kids by myself.. he works all day...I don't want Edward to change.......the only thing I did say in my last post was that the dominating, possessive is sexy ... but do much controlling is not good.. i hope that did not hurt your feelings I don't feel anyone should be totally controlled..

with that being said I love this Edward and i want to keep reading him like this.and Bella should be happy Edward and Emmett came up with that punishment cuz that's a pretty good one compared to what her parents could have given her........as far as Seth goes... that's messed up if she asked and he lied about not drinking and doing drugs... he could have killed them all...still want Bella to bring up the whole thing with Edward and Tanya at the place that day... when he let her talk to  bella like that it was bullshit and he needs to understand that........i'm afraid he was lying and there might have been more going on between those two then he is letting on.. i mean he slept with her right before he came here so that means Bella was already in the picture... not his girlfriend but still.....Can't wait to read more ...

Oh god i love this Edward.......yum,  as far as Seth goes.. again i can understand both of their points........they have been friends to long to walk away but he did lie to Bella and could have killed them all or someone else..  Way to go Bella giving some loving down below to your man.... So is Bella still even upset at her mother for smacking her? I was a bit confused by that she was so upset last chapter over that and now she is accepting food from her and
acts ok ....... anyways can't wait for the next chapter .....and more jealous possessive Edward......i am wondering if old fuck buddy Tanya is lurking some where in the back round............. something was up with that ...

OH Fuck NOOOOOOOOOOOO, damn it..... I am sure it's gonna be Damon of course perfect timing when Bella is so upset with Edward.. Which she has every right to be... I can't believe  he slept with her without a condom.. and if i was Bella ya i would be freaking... in this day and age pregnancy is the least of your worries there are sooo many STD's running around.. not to mention Aids and HIV.. please don't let that be the case.......Now I'm all for her being pissed i was pissed off at Edward since that day in the diner with Tanya but Damon NO cuz he is just a jerk i can already tell.. he isn't a caring sweet guy he is a total player for sure...........and he will only end up breaking Bella's heart.. I love Edward and i love the way he is but he is wrong on a lot of things and this whole thing with Tanya he was wrong with......from the moment he let her treat Bella the way he did.. he did it because he didn't want Tanya to know about him and Bella for some reason..i don't blame him for sleeping with Tanya his reason makes sense he didn't know if he would ever meet her again.. but everything after that was BS.......... i hope she tells Damon NO and waits for her friends.

How do u forget to show Edward the birth control.. OMFG ....... I would have wiped them out in the waiting room.... when she went to pee..... and told him all about the condoms.......

Now Nasty......... i know kneeing works great on guys but screw that.. the minute that nasty bitch put her lips on mine I would have kneed her so hard in her "private" it hurts not as much as a guy but it would hurt......

This is not good...... i am pretty sure she isn't pregnant but now i'm worried she may have some disease...... and she gave it to Edward who gave it to Bella... but if she wasn't pregnant would she really have come all the way there to see Edward?? Would she really be that stupid?? If i was her I just never would have gotten on the plane once he called my bluff... and even after Bella found the condoms and the pills she still stayed now i am worried somehow she may have gotten pregnant and if she did by Edward I wonder if she slipped him the date rape drug??? Oh please post again soon.. i'm dying to know.

i just want to know why Bella wouldn't let Edward tell Emmett about the mom putting the pill in her drink?? And yes Emmett has no room to talk ... and now Edward is going to go to jail this sucks... and yes it is Bella's right to have a abortion or not....... i think it should be decided between both ppl  but it doesn't have to be...... Edward is of age where children aren't a "big deal" but Bella is in high school still with her whole life ahead of her.....so yes she does have a right to consider that  .......she shouldn't be forced into mother hood if she doesn't want to be.......no matter what.

OK i know it always seems like i am complaining but come on .. does Edward not know how old he is???   I mean first he sleeps with a underage girl, gets her pregnant lucky doesn't have to go to jail just has to marry her.. but now he goes to a high school and pushes a teenager.. u can't do that shit.. he should be in jail.. I don't want him in jail but come on u can not hit a 'child' when u are a adult he is what 25?? Damon is a lying sick piece  of shit.. but u need to walk away and ignore that annoying piece of shit.. If he keeps this up he will miss the birth of his baby cuz he will be locked up.

Now on the bright side i am so glad that Edward didn't believe a word that came out of Damon's mouth....

I can't imagine who would have told Damon from the hospital unless

OMG Tanya listened at the door...... and Damon is her brother........

I don't know.........this story sure took turns i wasn't expecting.... i truly loved this story when it first started... now it's just almost tragic.. she gets pregnant with a baby she didn't want and now she is being forced to be married at the age of 17 with a guy who she has only been with for 3 months.....

I am not trying to be mean it's just how can i be excited for her at all her life isn't her own anymore..... and her parents are controlling idiots and it's a bunch of bull.    Like she said shot gun wedding or Edward goes to prison...this is turning out to be a sad story and i feel very bad for Bella..... teen pregnancy is hard and now forcing her to marry before or right after graduation..... gee wonderful life .... So sad,

I loved when there was no baby and Edward was jealous and she wasn't sure what she wanted .... and there was that other boy who was  interested in her (Damon) and Edward was controlling and sex was wild and crazy ...

Oh shit.. i think Bella got the worse of the bet... he only has to give up a car yes it's his baby but she has to do it with who he says ... god what if he picked a really loser like the school loser someone really nasty and ugly... or cut her off from sex... I don't know but i thought it was actually kind of funny what he did to her at the end.. she is a bit nasty and it didn't hurt for her to get knocked down a notch or two...not that he isn't totally into his self too and thinks he is gods gift to woman but I guess the difference i see in his is they fall to him and Bella seems to throw herself at the guys.. IDK .. not really liking her character a whole lot ATM... but always like sexy Edward and in a hot tub.. OH Yea

yep for sure this bet is bothering Miss Swan a bit more then it seems to be bother Edward.. Sure she got him with the blow job  but what guy doesn't like it and really like it when the girl knows her way around..lol.. but she needs to take his attitude and stop....... i about died when i read that part with Jacob i thought oh god another love tringle story but thank god his got a girlfriend and Leah the guard of his body to make sure he stays faithful... good story so far can't wait to read more.

OMG that was about one of the hottest things i have read.. the way he looked at her the whole time... the way he appeared out of nowhere.. it was just very sexy........ very enjoyable reading......going to hunt my man down now and well ............

Loved it.. this was a really good chapter........... and the end too good... now it's just the two of them for four days oh this just got a lot more interesting...On to the next chapter.......

Ok so he was jealous but she liked it... and then when he said sorry about that and she could go she got upset because she liked the fact that it bothered him so she was thinking he liked her for more then just a fuck (which i think he does ) but now she doesn't know that and by saying he doesn't care she got her feelings hurt , right??? Anyways god stupid mutt boy gets all in Edwards face hello girlfriend go run back to her u pig.. what gonna fuck Bella out of his system then go back and play the good boyfriend...... i thought he was different i actually fault sorry for the nasty mutt for a minute.. anyways can't wait to read the next chapter........Controlling Edward is very sexy he started to get controlling needs to get a bit my controlling.. make her scream. only him...lmao... anyways loved the biting ....... very sexy...i love to bite and get bitten too...lol

OMG i loved it i just loved it he was so sweet to her and then they made love and then cuddled after wards... and we found out about the night they were together before.. and she told him everything and he never told anyone.. I love it.. best chapter so far.

Oh i really liked reading what was really going on with Jasper...and i loved that Jasper used Alices line when he was talking to Edward in a earlier chapter.about once u been bitten really good chapter...........

Team Edward here........loved it....Jacob finally decided he does love his girlfriend and couldn't do that to her.......but him and Bella are just gonna be friends like they always were meant to be just friends and Edward finally step up to the plate and laid it out for Bella how he felt and he just wants them to be and I loved it.........I was getting so pissed off at Jacob when he kept up with her leaving town cuz i don't want her to leave town without making up with Edward. So anyways as long as the mutt leaves them alone they can go off and work this out between them........loved it.

really good chapter....... i am so glad she left with him

the sex as always HOT

i am so glad Edward opened up to her also and in return she opened up to him a little bit. Jacob is a idiot i'm glad he is gone.

Can't wait  for the next chapter.

maybe she isn't happy cuz she doens't know how to be look at her life.. god look at her drunk mother........

i am so happy they are together now and said fuck the world and doesn't care who knows (except Renee of course)..

The sex on the car or aganist the car OMG hot as hell....... loved it.....

i do feel bad for Edward he is trying really hard and he has no clue what is going on in Bella's mind........ and why she is the way she is......... he is gonna get his heart broken by her........i can feel it...........

Omg he is just ............perfect............i love him........ what is wrong with Jordan.....oh well her loss is Bella's gain........I love how he can flirt but it seems almost innocent......and yes he can make buying beds sexy.......that was too funny with the sales lady.....can't wait to read more.......

Ha i knew he knew about Jordon having a affair or god it could be affairs who the heck knows........ and pole dancing oh i so what to learn how to do that.....and he was watching her......so sexy and the lap dance......... and the kiss.......I do not like cheaters at all but with these two it just fits........and i so know she is cheating on him..........he just needs to divorce Jordan....i loved the part about what if you're my soul mate ...........

Oh lord.......ok so she didn't like the dinner not surprised....and Jordon opened up to Bella abit about how she feels about Edward........god what a bitch..i mean i know everyone is not perfect but god he is like close to it......and he likes Bella so much but i understand why she is like that Edward is married. he can't keep flirting with her then acting like a friend then flirting again he is married to her friend and something has got to change

OMG what a tramp........fucking her boss on his desk.(Now if Edward was the boss)>hmmm.. but i knew she was cheating I knew it i knew it........ dirty tramp and there's poor Edward with a surprise lunch for her and to walk in and see that.........ugh .......slut.......whore........Now lets have some Bella and Edward time..........Yes .

hello repeat Red Flags...... i mean yes it's obvious Edward likes Bella more then a friend so Jude has a right to have a problem with Edward but the way he handles it and the things he does and says makes it a bit more threatening then just being pissed over Edward and her closeness so ya he scares me and I agree with Edward he may end up hurting her physically. This really sucks Jordan is gone but Edward and Bella aren't together.....I am glad everyone including Rose took his side even though Rose continued to stay friends with Jordan.......

Ok i keep forgetting to comment on this........I love how
"Bella hates Babe from Jude well actually hates that but doesn't seem to mind when Edward calls her baby......hmmmm. So i guess Edward was right again (and so was i this Jude had Red flags everywhere and Bella is damn lucky she didn't send Edward home for the night or Jude would have finished beating and raping her. now let's stop this shit and get these two together for real

Awwwwww what a sweet romantic guy he is.........and come on she screwed Jude the first night.......ya she was drunk but still it's time for some Edward and Bella loving.........

OMFG all i can say is HOT>......... controlling dominating Edward sex is fucking HOT.............SO good........... need more............loved it.

God hot again...........and just great......I am soo happy i found this story so good....... and I just love these two and again I am so happy everything is working out for them finally.........great chapter and it sounds to me like someone might have proposal on his mind...........and Bella tired again.....this time if it's a baby I don't care............ can't wait to read the next chapter.

ok not quite sure what is going on yet... i guess as story goes on i will understand better.......but more or less they have sex with human girls, have fun and then find "certain girls " that will carry half human/half vampire babies for what purpose i don't know yet..but does that sound like i got it right? But these human girls will not be mates they will only ever be for pleasure and for breeding (which i said carrying the half vamp half human)....... ok on to next chapter.

So what does Jasper and Emmett do.. i mean if Edward is taking to much blood aren't they doing the same thing i mean drinking or is Edward just drinking to much i guess...........now why did he eyes turn muddy brown? Alright anyways really good so far......( i know what the red eyes and amber eyes but never heard of muddy brown)

I am still out on Edward .. i don't not like him...........he is kind of sexy in a nasty mean way......... as far as Tanya IDK .......doing up her ass......kind of rough and if she's never had it there b4 .....that's harsh.....  glad Edward finally met Bella this chapter........but i was a bit bummed Bella didn't really go on about him.........and he didn't see to really go on about her either......he just likes the way one of them smells......

so miss Swan is a virgin huh...... alice said something about virginity self.. or something like that......but now i'm confused.....if he wants to use her as a breeding or whatever.......he shouldn't have biten her.........i know Carlisle said something about that in the breeding meeting...........

I would have went down told them off then went off dancing with other guys... now is Edward still messing around with Jessica , Tanya, Linda and whoever else.. i haven't heard anymore about them....... so they can date these girls but have to refrain from sex with them so they can be with the ones they are breeding....(lol) sounds funny but i'm serious.. and Bella was wrong if u are dating then u do have a "claim " to them......Now is Jasper and Emmett "biting" Alice and Rose too?? Or just Edward with Bella (and the other ones).

Oh shit are those 3 guys the new vampires that Carlisle said was coming into town to "help with the breeding." .......but then if it was why did they not "breed them " unless they aren't the right type.....or maybe they smelled like Emmett , Jasper and Edward...... lol....... can't wait to see the plan unfold.

I can't believe that Jasper and Emmett and Edward are not gonna stop them from going after the girls even if they aren't gonna be with them anymore they still care about them and they know these 3 guys aren't up to any good.. so why wouldn't they fight them off or something.........very confusing....

OMG you're killing me here........come on .........they can't go to Seattle and leave this girls and not know what happened to Rose... then story is just driving me crazy now......lol......i still can't believe Demetri took her virginity away......this sucks.

Edward is mad at Bella for what happened... well i am too.. but i am really worried about Rose and now to find out Carlisle really isn't in "charge " anymore this is not good.

as far as comfronting Edward i would think that would be the last thing on her mind i would think she would still be really upset over the fact that she was attacked and raped.(well that's what she thinks happpened) to worry about a fight with a boyfriend.

UGH ..Carlisle........ Ok i couldn't not comment on this chapter... First the whole thing with Alice and Edward...oh you choked me up . .. she wanted him to talk to her like he use to and the reference to her, Jasper and edward making mud pies... when they were little and innocent and children having fun.. and his like Ok Alice just like old times.. i loved that part (then it was all ripped away)..ugh

The whole part with Edward and Bella up in the bedroom .. i love when Edward gets 'rough' with her.. he is still holding back but i'll take what i can get (don't get me wrong, don't want him bringing out 'knifes and cutting her).. but just the whole thing... and letting her 'take control " that is such a 'big deal for him and I love that he is willing to do that for her....that is such a Big step.. i hope Bella understands that. (do love his dirty talk he must do that more often).

The whole thing with Esme . omg.. that is so fucked up on so many levels but in a sick warped why i get it.. in Esme's eyes her son is dead and the 'monster' in front of her is what killed him.. I truly think she believes she is seeking revenage on the monster for taking her son away but why wouldn't she hate Carlisle to he is the one who 'released the monster' ..

That whole Christmas dinner was just sad.. poor charlotte and Peter... all i will say is good for Rose to get them away from that.. and good for Alice to say that to her dad.. didn't do a lot of good but still glad she did it.

The whole part with that other couple was just sad.. really Bella is that clueless to not know Edward is a 'ass' and quite scary to anyone who isn't 'in his 'family'.. or he loves.. she couldn't see the 'fear in their eyes'..lol

I love how he was 'getting umm turned on' lack of a better word at the thought of killing someone in front of Bella without her knowing.. he is so hot. and that whole part when he opened up to her.. about he'd kill for her, he trust her .. that was HUGE for him..to open himself up like that.. and then to ask her to marry him ...'trying to be normal.' god how sweet is that..

The whole flashback just made me what to throw up ... just ugh... i won't even go there.. it was sick... just ugh made me sick... poor Edward.

Demetri.. so glad his 'friend is still there" lol sick bastard.... lol Aro is a fool to think he has Demetri on a 'lease' or any control over him ...

Poor Charlie survived that brutely attack , wakes up from a coma and now this...

Just loved this chapter.....so good........

Oh Charlotte  is just to cute with her 'crush' (can't say i am blaming her)..I am sure there are things i forgot but this is long enough...lol.

I honestly can not remember if I reviewed this chapter or not.. But I love how Edward wants to try and "be normal ' for Bella..  for all the fucked up horrible things the sperm donor did (nope what call him the D or F word cuz he is not. Edward is still a kind hearted person.... Yea he maybe a ass to other ppl but if he loves you.........he would go to hell and back for you.......

Carlisle ............i hate him.......you know how I feel .....not going there.. just hope he dies too..

ugh how did I not know there was two chapters? You posted two chapters without me..  : (

Anyways this was really good. I actually felt for Esme once again. As messed up as she is I get her , I understand why she is that way, but it all boils back down to Carlisle doesn't it . He destroyed so many lives the only one he didn't was Alice but Esme took care of that when she slept with James.

I really thought Esme was going to tell Edward about the baby either to his face or in the letter but she didn't.  I have to agree with Jasper on this one Bella messed up big time and I don't know how you get passed this she should have waited for Edward or talked to Jasper or Emmett .. I don't care what Esme said to her. Oh well off to read the next chapter this one was really good.... I am glad Edward is back.

OMFG..NOOOOOOOOOOOO Now i am pissed.. I mean okay i understand that he wants to take care of the threat but damn it they have been apart so long already and now he is leaving her again and what if that baby is born while he is off hunting. what if they come to the house to get Bella and he isn't there.. Will Carlisle protect her can he. I think he will protect her because of the promise to Esme but still I want Edward there. I want  Bella with Edward okay that can't happen right now but damn it at least in the same house still.

And what the hell did Elezor however you spell his name say to Bella to make her so quiet on the rest of the way home... UGH that makes me mad if he upset her.. IDk ..

Bella fucked up so bad leaving him like she did... i don't know how this is going to get fixed.. and now I am so depressed.. i don't like Edward being hurt but I KNEW he wouldn't be able to train his son like he was .. and I love him for that.... he is a superhero...

Good chapter glad they finally worked things out. Charlie is a ass..Edward should throw him out on his ass.. I loved the convo with Edward & Charlotte. Good for Rose making him hold the baby so she could give him the third degree..