Reviews by swino
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251334
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: swino Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Sorry to be so slack in my reading and reviewing but this is for your last three updates.  I was glad to see the outtake on Charles conversation with Bella, Bella's ability to handle the media and be the professional woman she's always been.

It was interesting to see EPOV on how he felt about Bella when he first saw her and how he feels like failure now for hurting them both, that he needed to make peace with his son to allow this family to move forward.

I actually dont blame Bella's reaction to Edward not letting the "scandal" go, she just needed some space with all those hormones going, but Edward thinking she was leaving him, poor boy, this all seems to be a bit hard on him too.

I am actually glad he didnt go back to Cullen Inc and will develop his own company and career independent of the family.  But most of all Bella finally feeling like she is part of the family.

One chapter left - wow.  Thanks for sharing this story with us.