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PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995728
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

That cliffy was just evil.  I can't believe that they would actually allow the charges to be pressed in RL.  She was totally acting in self defense, he held her captive for fucks sake!  Oh, and I would have to guess that Charlie will be hunting down Billy?  No?



Author's Response:

sorry for the cliffie sweetie - this is for you!!

 

 

PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

 

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Yes please. Move to Seattle.  Oh and Bella is keeping too many secrets, she needs to tell people what she knows, and Victoria and James need to go away now, please and thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254954
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I still think Leah is a little-miss-judgey-judgey-bitch who is bitter because her friend, who she thought would never have her own life, went off and got a life and is happy. Also, it feels very much like she is degrading Bella for her choices. Although I am glad they came over this impasse. 

Poor Bella and the memories this trip is forcing on her. I have to wonder...will we be seeing James while they are there?

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

No, you have never said that James is lurking, but with all the little instances, I got the feeling it is him.  Just curious how long till he makes himself known.

 

I am starting to feel for Bella here, and anxious for that foot to be clean!



Author's Response:

She wants a clean foot too...How long? all I can tell you is my story is a slow boil and it;s just at the little bubble stage. I will also tell you that I orginally slotted 40-45 chapters, I believe that has incresed to 55-60 ...it shouldn't be more then that unless I get a little long in my writing, kind of like now,,,lol ...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

The Tanya thing confused me, I feel like I missed something, even though I reread it several times.  Why was she there and where did she come from?? That girl is nothing but trouble.



Author's Response:

ummm,,, that will be answered in the next chapter... she was a surpise visitor and I sort of wanted everyone to feel that surpise... (did it work? Becasue now you know how Bella felt...lol..).....Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a yeaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

At first I was thinking Tanya, but it couldn't be. But I really do think someone from the club is behind the break in. I also think that Hawk is up to no good, dirty cop stuff.



Author's Response:

Why couldn't it be Tanya ((I'm not saying you wrong )) I was just wondering why you think that, because I want to make sure that I'm getting the right info out there, so that people can start pieceing it together...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh my heart is breaking for Bella here.  I do see where Edward was coming from, but for someone who was so abandoned and abused before, how could he just walk away from her while she is crying so?  And part of me almost feels as though it is bordering on mental abuse with the foot thing.  Bella is going to take that to heart and torture herself with that while it lasts.



Author's Response:

hmmm...remember this was only Bella's side of what happened. Edward will tell his side on Thursday...

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ok, I can't for the life of me remember who Mason is.  It is possible I am just forgetting as I have mommy brain with a 6m old and a 3year old at home.  If he was already mentioned can you refresh my memory please?

 

Other than that, I do feel more understanding of Edward, but still feel worse for Bella.  When will he find out just what happened to her when James last found her?



Author's Response:

mason was only mentioned in passing up til now, you will find out soon who he is. all I can tell you is he will hear the story or at least part of it before they go to Forks,,,thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ok, so I don't get how if they are not in a 24/7 relationship, he can deny Bella when they are not in their D/s mode.  That scene irritated me a bit, and I really do feel for Bella here.  It seems as though she just can't catch a break.

Also, just how long will James be lurking in the background before things start to come to a head with him?



Author's Response:

They are not 24/7, however punishments carry over. They have to, or it wouldn't make as much of an impact and also it would confuse the submissive. Is James lurking? No one has seen or mentioned him.  Thanks for reading and leaving a comment..lml

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Glad to see at least one of her punishments is over for now.  Was really hoping to have that damn foot clean!  Do you have any pics of what her clothes from Alice may look like?



Author's Response:

I have some pictures that are simalar I will post them on the extra's page sometime before thursday....lml

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well, permission for the bathroom would irritate me to no end.  Also, I'm just curious how she will be able to do that without drawing the attention of Alice and Jasper too much.

 

Pleeeeease let her foot be clean already!



Author's Response:

i'm sure Edward has that covered and will explain it to her ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ugh, again, Poor Bella.  the foot must be better.  So we heard Rose's story, when will we hear all of Bella's?  Or rather them.



Author's Response:

Bella will be telling Edward ..soon ...thanks for reading I have a teaser for you...lml

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So no real judgements until we hear his side, but really...I would think he would give a few more explinations at the time to Bella, especially with all her issues, to reassure her that things are good.

Such a slow burn here...while enjoyable, sometimes makes me want to scream!



Author's Response:

He is not her boyfriend at that time, he doesn't have to explain to her ....she was reassued when there was no chastisment...I know...I feel for you, becasue you want to fire not just the smoke....ohhh....think of it like BFF and you have to hold it and wait for your reward ...lol .....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Personally I think that Leah could use a good punnishment.  She needs to get the stick out of her ass, pregnant or not, her behavior is unacceptable.  I would think she would be ecstatic to see her sister happy after all her sadness in life before.



Author's Response:

lol ...Edward should give Jake the whip...lol ...Leah has a problem and that will be coming to a head real soon...lml

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That is one rough trigger to go through.  Will the next chapter pick up where this one left off?  Also, how long till the Leah situation blows up?  I'm still annoyed with her and she wasn't even in this chapter.



Author's Response:

I will tell you that the next chapter is in BPOV if that does anything for you....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

 

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Super curious who Tanya was talking with, and hoping Bella is smart enough to share that with Edward right away before club gossip lets it get to him.

 

So I am assuming we will see more of the horrors Bella lived through soon now?



Author's Response:

horrors ..Bella will be telling more ...this one that she is fussing over was the big one...but yes you will hear a few more stories..lml

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

While I think it is someone from the club doing this crap to Bella, I am not convinced that James is done and gone from her life.

 

I feel like this was a more transitional chapter than anything, it left me with a lot of questions and anticipating a lot of conversations with Bella and Edward.  I really hope Bella is steeling herself up to have a real talk with Edward soon.  She isn't being fair to either of them right now.



Author's Response:

I don't think she is going to have much choice soon ,,,,I have a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

 

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

A storm in deed.  Now as for Leah, truly, she needs to be dealt with.  She just pisses me off more and more every time she comes into the story.  She just seems so self-righteous and entitled. Ugh.



Author's Response:

Leah is being a PITA...lml

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

So, not to sound like a broken record or anything, but...Leah???  When will she be dealt with?  Must get her issue out there, then perhaps flog her ass for being so horid?

 

And Edward...he really should have known he couldn't promise to not let what happened to her change how he sees things.  He needs to learn how to ge better at dealing with his emotions and being open with Bella.



Author's Response:

In time the whole Leah thing will come to a head ... you can't rush things...and as for Edward, emotions are one thing, he loves her and even though he pictured the bruises in his head, they were nothing like the actual event and it threw him off. But you are right, they need to be open with each other...

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I am really starting to think that Leah is both a jealous bitch and has something to do with all the problems Bella is having.  I want her to go down, like yesterday!

Very much looking forward to them going away.  When they go to the beach, with the parents, are they going to have their "usual"?



Author's Response:

Actually their ususal will fall over the time they are in Forks...that should be interesting ...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

wow. how intense. looking forward to the forks trip, how far off is that?



Author's Response:

the forks trip is a week away in their time, but in between should be fun too...they need some alone and lovey time...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

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Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Oh, will Bella's night ever end?

And that pinky mouse thing is just super gross and could be something Emmett would do.  But yeah, gross!



Author's Response:

I agree with you, it is gross but I had to include it in the story, because I told my son-in-law I would...lol... it's hard to believe he is now a father of four ...lol ....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

So I didn't think Tanya because of the timing, it seemed as though she would have been at the Cullen's while that was happening, but maybe I was off? Although things with Heather are just fishy.

Have they really only been together for a month now? It seems so much more! How far along are we in the story arc?



Author's Response:

it's been a month,, the story was orginally 45 chapters but I didn't realize that when yyou actually start writing the characters take on a life of their own and sometimes they get away from me... so I know where we are going and it is a slow boil, but we are a little more then half way through...I know... who knew? ...

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

So my thoughts go to Mike having been the one to see him enter the code. But it was a woman they thought trying to get in, right? You are quite good at masking everything to keep guessing. And I fully admit to being someone who will read the last page first just to know, and be less frustrated along the way. So this is VERY frustrating to me! But I love the story.



Author's Response:

When a story or book gets too angst filled I will read the ending,,, because I have to know that there is a HEA in there ....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

While I don't buy Irena's excuse for anything, I don't know quite how much she is involved in it all, it feels as though she may just be a pawn.



Author's Response:

A patsy like Oswald? ...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I reallllly want to know why Bella, or Rose for that matter, didn't fully explain the bitch that is Jessicunt and her actions. I would have smacked her, and I think Bella's semantics were used wonderfully!



Author's Response:

Rose wasn't and she can't just blurt it out...just try to hold on to your panties until you get EPOV.....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

This may be a dumb question, but wouldn't sleeping on the floor, as hard as it is, be bad for Bella with her back issues?

 

Oh, and that was just plain cruel only allowing her one O, then demanding it before the actual sex!



Author's Response:

No ,,not a dumb question. The duvet was folded in half and was actually very soft so no damage was done. I'm also telling you from experience that the surgery and damage Bella has to her neck will not cause her any discomfort at sleeping on the floor. A lower injury to the Lumbar area would...but not Cervical...she would be fine. OHHH...he didn't demand it before the actuall sex ...he told her and she ,,,begged....lol....i think it was worth it...lol....and then look how nice he was to slap her ass from keeping her from having another orgasm...look how helpful he is....LOLOLOL.....

Thanks for reading ...I have this weeks teaser for you..lml

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I still think that Edward should have gotten Rose to give her version of the events in the bathroom at the time. And Jess needs to go away and be dealt with better than that. It is as though because nothing happened to her, she will think she can get away with something like that, or worse, again. But, I really do think she is just part of the bigger issues going on.

It is obvious that Edward is all in with Bella, now everyone else just needs to see that too.



Author's Response:

I think Jess is going topay for what she did, just not by Edward ....

Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment. I have a teaser for you....lml

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

There has been shockingly little Leah in here as of recent. Does she still have that stick up her ass? Will it come out during Forks, or get lodged in deeper? I hope for comes out and we find out what put it in finally.

 

Will we get to see the Aro/Jess confrontation? Perhaps in the extras?



Author's Response:

Ummm... there will be some Leah talk in the next chapter and Forks should be interesting ....Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

 

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

This really is a sloooooow burn. Wondering what Edward's errand was just there. Hmmm. And good for Bella with her confidence being so strong. Will there be some resolution to the Leah drama storyline soon? I feel like something has to be resolved, so much is left out there.



Author's Response:

I think putting Leah and Bella togther in a small house is going to be the boiling point ...

Thanks for reading ..I have this weeks teaser for you...

“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.

 

Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”

 

At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”

 

Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”

 

Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”

 

Why?

 

“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”

 

“What is it?”

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Yay a ring is coming!!

So, maybe Jacob finally got sick of Leah and her shitastic attitude and has her gagged somewhere? That's why she can't answer Bella's calls!!



Author's Response:

lol ... on the gagged Leah...lol.,...I sent you a seperate email as a thank you for leaving me a comment...lml

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

It has to be Edward coming toward her. I can't believe it would be someone else. Or maybe I refuse to believe that. Are they off to Forks next?



Author's Response:

yes they are off to Forks...

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

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Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

This chapter has just made me so mad at Leah! She is just a plain old judgemental, rude, ignorant, unhappy bitch! She hasn't been answering Bella's calls, how can they make plans when she ignores the calls? Also, maybe knowing she can't get pregnant, being with Leah so much would be hard for Bella? Ohhhh, I really just wanted to slap her!!!



Author's Response:

lol ... violent !!..lol...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Ohhh, so is this a turning point with the drama starting? James...such a vile creature. How much longer are they in Forks?

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Gained weight? It seems like Bella I am stuck on that. Elluding to something more?

I can see where she came from, it is amazing how many good, smart women get stuck in bad, harmful, hurtful relationships. Horrible and saddening really.

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Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Go Bella!!! I really am looking forward to the demise of James.

Yes Bella, why go out with him in the first place???



Author's Response:

That's a good question ....

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Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I don't know what happend, but somehow I am just reading this chapter now for the first time. 

 

Maintenence, huh? Not a bad way to get her into the present again. I feel like I am dense, as I am not pieceing this together yet. Grrr!

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

How long have B & E been together now? I lose track as it seems like so long, but it really hasn't been, right?

Oh, and I would vote on giving Jake hell for a looooong time, that was just so many shades of wrong!

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Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

They are all nothing but trouble, maggie, james, all of them. I think they all need to drive off a cliff, together. ugh.

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Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Curious about what happened at the club and will make things easier for Bella to go there...And looking forward to seeing them meet with the PI.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

please tell me there is a HEA on the horizon for them? I have loved this story and where it was going, but this is just too much!  Breaks my heart for them,

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Oh that is horrible.  Just awful. I truly hope there is a day of reckoning coming for Jessica. How, how, how, could Edward just let Bella go like that? And poor Carlie? Talk about turning her world upside down? Oh my does Jessi-cunt need to be dealt with!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by ChildOfSummer!!  THANK YOU!!!

If someone gave you three wishes, would you use them? That's the question Bella Swan, practical psychology major, has to decide when her grandmother presents her with a story that she can't believe, and a blue sapphire ring that she's always coveted. If you could go to any time in your future would you make the wish?

AU-Human. Cannon Couples. OOC. Not angsty, but a few tissue moments in places. Language, Lemons (of course...you know me). It's different than anything else I've written. Interested in a little magic?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've read
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72920 Read Count: 15590
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Did grandma Marie spill the beans about the ring??

 

Oh, and I think it was kind of a big thing that his research was inspired by finding out if BELLA would be predisposed to getting Altzhimers. 

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Reminds me sort of of the Gift of the Magi. Very sweet concept, looking forward to seeing where you take it. How long do you see this being?



Author's Response:

It will be about ten to twelve chapters.  It's complete, I'm just breaking it into chapters (which is very difficult!).  Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - "Wishes Won't Wash Dishes" (American Proverb)

So is this going to be sad and angsty? Poor Bella seems so lost!



Author's Response:

No angst...like break-up/make-up/break-up crap.  There will be a little sadness...like when her Grandma died, but for the most part, it's happy and funny.  She was a little lost before the wish, but I think you'll see a change in her in the next chapter!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh Bella...so confused. Maybe getting a glimpse into your future just isn't a good thing. Will Edward man up and tell her what is up? 

 

How long is this story going to be?



Author's Response:

this story is going to be 12 chapters.  I'm so glad your still engaged.  thank you.

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just a little confused, has she had the dejavu yet?



Author's Response:

She did...it's about midway down in the chapter before she talks to Edward and agrees to pick him up at the airport.  Thanks for reading

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think my heart might have melted a little with Dr. Feel-Me-Up's confessions. Now do they get to move onto their happily ever afters??

Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh Charlie, Charlie, Charlie...so out of line there. And why would Bella want to be with someone younger than her? What a dumb move to isolate your child like that. He needs someone to knock some sense into him.

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Edward and Bella had dreams, and a plan to chase them hand in hand.

Side by side they thought they could do anything, but what would happen when Edward had to leave Bella behind and chase them alone? **Drabblish little love story.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48417 Read Count: 33237
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2012 Updated: 18 Jan 2013
Reviewer: centralmamommy Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

This just made me laugh. Hard. We had pretty much that very scenario play out in our home with our son. Darn these cooridinated children!