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Fan of twilight fiction and of course, RP. I enjoy reading as my outlet from RL. Think that I've found some of the world's best writers and am in constant awe and appreciation. So thank you and keep doing what you are doing.
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life
Interesting start...Phil sounds very overprotective...
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother
wow....you certainly have my attention
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
Great POV From Felix, who has a heart
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Very good writing. A very interesting story -- yes, Aro is creepy
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514852
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
Another great chapter...but can Edward really leave his dom side behind?
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Interesting turn of events...hmmm
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
A perfect ending. Thank you for sharing your gifts.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
You write so well. I can actually feel the emotional pain that Bella is suffering, as Edward leaves her alone. It's heartbreaking.
I love all of the little details that you include that make it so much more believable.
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting premise...I think we all dream about running into Edward :)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I like that Bella is trying to be strong and a friend. She's treated him very well, so far.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Good chapter and backstory. Now we know where both are coming from.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great first for you!
I enjoyed the conversation between Edward and Jazz -- and Edward being vulnerable
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
For a new relationship...it seemed pretty intense. I hope that they make it.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Bella has got to get a grip if she really wants this. Good writing.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Hilarious...but man oh man...trouble is on the way
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Good writing. Thanks for sharing your story.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Good chapter. I'm glad that it was well balanced and that Bella is appearing somewhat stronger
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Edward and Bella's insecurities are almost too much to take. WTF?
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Very interesting story..Poor Bella is such a magnet for trouble.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I hope that Bella starts to "get" everything that is going on...it's time to smarten up. And Edward...he's been good, but has to get a grip! Good stuff
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Wow...the whole ceremony and the playroom were outstanding.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I can t believe that Edward is reacting this way. I understand that he is upset--but he the way he is making her feel is wrong.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I liked this chapter and the couples interaction. I hope that they are on the right track.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I really enjoyed this chapter. Even though they had tough times with the paparazzi, they still had great times. :)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Good work, Michele. Thank you for sharing your talent. Nice chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I hope that most D/s boyfriend/girlfriend relationships don't go through as much drama as these too. It would be exhausting.
I'm glad that by the end of this chapter, they are starting to live a somewhat "normal" life and can just be happy.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Queen of angst and drama...that's what you are!
Good chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I love the Cullen family get togethers. You make them sound so fun and awesome. Wish I was there.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
First -- thank you for starting each chapter with a review of the previous chapter. It makes finding my right place a whole lot easier (especially when I review and re-submit my over 18 status)
As for this chapter and Bella -- I too agree that her continual weaknesses are almost too much to bare. I don't know if Edward is happy with his decision, when they have issues just about every weekend or event. :(
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Interesting evening at the Cullens. Glad to see Bella more confident.
As for the next chapter...they will be at Rose's. J and J are likly to cause problems?
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
A very exciting and action packed chapter. It was the best.
And I liked the humor you added, with Rosalie's line about being a poor shot!
Thank you.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45
Thank you for putting such effort into this very emotional chapter. Alot of the focus was on Bella and Charlie, but I love Edward and Esme's reactions the most. Good stuff.
Author's Response:
thanks love. glad you liked it
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Wow...this chapter was really long. It felt like a Christmas present. Thank you for the gift.
There are so many parts to this chapter that I liked... Esme-well, who wouldn't love her and all her kindness
I enjoyed their traditions..the Christmas Eve picnic...sounds wonderful and delicious (its great to be a Cullen).
And the lemons, of course Edward and Bella have it right!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the great comments and review
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
I love your very long chapters. Start to finish, this was one of my favorite so far. Play session was hot -- and I need to get me some water! Great writing.
Author's Response:
thanks wendy - I drank some cold water just writing it!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
I'm glad that Bella and Edward have worked things out...but no make up sex? That's almost too mature!
I like that Bella was assertive and that she held Jasper and Esme accountable for their actions. Yeah Carlisle...he rocks.
Great writing, as usual.
Author's Response:
sorry about the no make up sex - they will make it up - I promise!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
You pack so much into one chapter...most of all, I'm glad to see that Alice is getting the support that she deserves from her brothers and that Jazz is coming around.
As for Bella...its such a roller coaster ride. But I really would like to see her move forward. Her moods are draining. I love her and Emmett together and the humor between them.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Long ass chapter...but I love them all.
One of my favorite chapters so far.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I enjoyed reading this chapter and I like the direction that their relationship is headed. I guess I'm not a fan of too much agnst.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Esme's reaction was so unexpected. It really threw me...outtake "yes"
As for Edward and Bella -- many good parts. I just wished that she didn't screw up so often.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
great chapter...it had a little bit of everything
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
There are so many parts to your chapters (they are very long, but I like that). I did enjoy the Sue/Charlie engagement and Bella's time in Forks.
As for another ruined weekend, it's getting a bit much. I want them to be happy and move forward...they just dont ever seem to get there.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Great chapter
loved it all
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review xoxo
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Always very long and full chapters, and they get better and better each time. I like the stronger Bella much more and the stronger couple.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for your review
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123454
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months
Good writing. Interesting story. Good lemons. San Fran was hot.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Great opening chapter
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I like your Edward and that he knows what he wants
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I don`t care for the ``Little Eddie`` nick name. It takes away from his DOM persona.
I thought that the rest of the chapter was great.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
I hope that you will continue writing this story. You`ve really captured my interest and I like your writing style