Whew, Rose, Rose, Rose, me, me, me is all she can focus on it seems.  I thought I was going to have to vote her out of the family, but in your last paragraph she saw the light!   Just maybe there is hope she can change for the better!  Poor Bella and Baby Girl are crying and Edward wants to break and cry too.  Please Rose work at trying not to be such a Bitch.

Love it!

Wait!!! He's married to Alice AND Rosalie??  Normally that would be just creepy, but you really make it work.  He is just so sexy in your story.  He seems so comfortable and smooth with Alice.  And the discipline scene was smoking hot.  How did you do that?  He spanked Rose and she blew him to say Thank You? This man is amazing.  Again, sign me up.

It's hard for me understand how Edward can "discipline" his wives.  And to spank them, over his knee????  And they let him :) !!   Bella already wants in this family, it seems and Edward and wives seem to want her too.  He is a hell of a man, because the girls thank him after he spanks them.  Amazing.

Good Lord!  Rosalie's dad... I'm just to offended to type.  What a waste of human skin and bone.  I hope someone killed him by now :)  .  The detail of his actions brought tears to my eyes.  Excellent writting.

????  Rose needs spankings to cry, she just can't do it on her own ????  Wow.  Edward has his hands full already, without Bella joining the fold.  But I agree with Baby Girl, he is going to have to man-up, stand up to our girl Rose... He loves Bella, and he needs happiness too.  (I can't believe I'm agreeing with their lifestyle !)

When you say dark, you mean dark, don't you.  Glad Bella and the two other girls were found.  Sounds like their master was a vamp, and drank from Bella.  Who was the master??  Oh sh*t  this is going to be a twisted story and the girls have a long way to go to come back to normalcy.  Good start.

Edward could train me any day of the week.  Anxious to find out his methods of training the slaves.  Sounds like Aro and his brothers are just torturing folks, makes reading damn interesting.  Can't wait to see the evils revealed in next chpt!

That was Hot!  Tanya was a dam* lucky slave that day.  I'm loving this Edward.

 Your story is awesome so far.  I must say your end AN scared me a bit, I'm sensitive :) .  I pray readers stop and review because we want you happy and writing.  A lot of the time if a fic is juicy, I want to get to the next chpt ASAP to see what happens next... and cruise right by the Review button.

Felix, that dog, taking advantage of B., so disgusting  :) !  Bella sure is headstrong, walking thru the halls unattended.  Love the story.

Well Damn!  Way to scare me stiff in my own home, Nice writing.  Royce King, now that's a interesting twist.  Can't wait to read more.  Oh, now I get it, you mentioned the master and his friends raping Rosalie last chapter... just like our beloved Eclispe :) . 

Fork, you are killing me.  I never, ever want to go on a safari because of this story, you've got me thinking twice about leaving the country.  James is a sick S.O.B.  I wish Edward could take an axe pick to the side of his head and shut his mouth permenately.  So glad Em and Jazz are there for him.

Whew, OK, a ray of light in this torture-fest of a story!  OK, I have faith again you can see our characters to safety soon, before I have panic attack reading it.  I know Edward can pull off a pretend breakdown, if it means escape!

Very intriguing!  Edward is so smooth, can't wait to see that other side.  I hope B is in for a treat... soon :). 

I agree with Edward, James is an animal.  He should be in jail doing hard time being punked by a gang of inmates for treating B the way he did.  Oh, I can see Edward is going to be just what she needs. He's giving tongue sex standing up, this is going to be good.  It's meant to be, they keep running into each other!

This story is so much fun to read... exciting to see what Edward has in store for B.    Oh my  *** smiling ear to ear *** !!  He's good.  And when Edward calls Bella "Baby", I think My eyes cross!  Thank you for making my day.  I am so hooked.  WAIT!  Is she begging him already. Damn :) .

Excellent detail on the playroom!  So our Edward means business just like he stated.  I can't wait to read some action down in that playroom.  B. shocked me by sharing she fantasized about being watched by others as they sat in the chairs ....  Great chpt.

What an emotional roller coaster you are taking us on!  I am impressed on one hand how E. can withhold orgasms and control her.  But can also show true emotion with her, real kisses, hand holding etc.  Why are they both taking so lightly that a car tried to run her down :) ??  And learning more of the treatment B. took from James makes me see red.  That bastard needs to be taken out.  Diamond is a joy to read.

Glad E. realizes he needs help training B. and Actually asked for help from Aro.  Poor Bella's self esteem is non-exsistant thanks to that loser James.  I think E. really has to walk a fine line to bring light back into her life.  What do those numbers for the lock mean?????

Bella and Peggy's exchange was so touching. And Carlise  overhearing it and telling B that his son is lucky to have found her *** wiping tears and mucus ***  Powerful.  Oh wow, and then when E. presented B. with collar and she accepted the way she did... *** where are my tissues?? *** Loved it.

"Who? ... Who?" So erroctic to me when E. corrects B. when she saids "I" or "me", he has to have it right, Oh My!!  That was cool of Rose to warn B. about the wall of jealousy she was about to walk into. OK, so Tanya is still a bitter bitch.  Glad B. shot her down.  It's shocking and funny to hear Rose say "Yes Sir" to Emmett!!    AND Steaming, Hot Lemon in the playroom, thank you. !

I am getting a bad, bad feeling about the collar missing.  I smell James' rotten ass all over this.  Glad B. opened up some and told E. a little more about that asswipe James.  He was even with that crazy Victoria while he was married.  Plus he seemed to enjoy torturing/choking B.! OH NO!!!! He permenately damaging her Physically, not to mention Mentally!!!  There goes my blood pressure again!  I really hate him.  Awesome wirtting.  Edward was a perfect boyfriend as she shared....

So much going on, another great chpt.  I know it was hard for B. not to bite the waitress how was trying to breast feed her Master :) !  But E. wants to know Everything she and Jane speak about, no private matters?  Write it in the journal?    Glad B. put the scank in her place for touching E, so funny. B. should have verbally told E. she had an uneasy feeling as well as journaling it!!  James is going to be attacking next!  Wake up Bella!

"...can you even get pregnant?"  That was so damn insensitive for Edward to say, shocked me with that!  Shame on him!  WHAT IN THE HELL?? Are you serious, this is so disgusting.  We all knew James was sick, but this is too much.  Now I get why she is the way she is.  That was hard to read, and I'm not a punk :) .  It's been a long time since a fiction character pissed be off so...  At least they both shared verbal love you's.  That was a brutual roller coaster ride!  Phenomenal chapter!!!!

I think that was a brilliant move to use the permanate marker on her foot.  Menatl vs Physical punishment, in this instance, walking on him/his feelings/others feelings for her, effective punishment.  I think I love Edward more for it!  He also explained why his release was not a pleasure for her, until she got the nutrition together.  I agree with Edward.  His POV really let us see how much he loves her (the call to Aro for advise!), and how much it hurt him to punish her!     Excellent chapter, fast becoming a classic in my humble opinion.

Sweet!

So many new folks to meet.  And yet some old folks I wish hadn't survive the trip from earth, like Newton :) !  Still up to his same old antics.  Fun look at all pics on your blog.

Rose, Rose, Rose.  Damn it, I'll come live with Emmett if you a too offended to be there :) .  You know, a well written lemon with get a 10 rating out of me everytime.  Add scarves, mounted rings in headboards, and butt sex and I am down right happy.  Excellent work.  Thank you. 

Carlise is a good actor, he looked after B. for 17 years and didn't let on!  How special.  Creativity of the story is off the charts. 

*** clapping ***   Perfection.    Worth the build-up.  And all thru story, luv when he calls her Angel.  Wait, did Carlise hear them from his house?  That is some skill Edward is putting on B. 

That was mean :) .   This tramp had better not be pregnant after raping Edward!!!

?.  What in the hell?  What did Tanya do to sleeping Edward?  This is SOOOO good.  That tramp!  I'm scared, he is crying about it, oh shit.

** looking around **  Is it hot in here, or is that just me (and Bella)?  Can't wait for the binding ceremony and activities that follow.  I love that your Edward is a real man with real needs,  ready to handle some business.  Great chpt. 

That damn Royce King!  Great story, I can see I'm hooked already.  No productive work for me today.  I hope Rose is ready to give Em a chance, ASAP, before she starves to death and is kick out.  Nice each girl shared their backgrounds.  I'm so impressed with Edward, hearing Alice's request and getting the article quickly so they could read about that creep Royce.

Wow.  Soundproofing the bedroom, cool!  I love that your Edward roars, and purrs. 

A Cullen crest tat, really?  Really?   Talk about being property.  I could see if the girls wanted a tat later... but, OK, I'll trust you.  The Rose drama is a nice touch.  Poor Rose.

Thks for access to your blog for pic's right in your A/N.  I'd be scared to, but what is up with Rose?  Great chpt.

:)  That was hot as hell.  This is why I read TWCS!  So in love with Edward right now. 

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OK, Charlie and Sue, that was quick!

Amazing work, really.  I feel I need to print this out!  Thank you for sharing Planet Twilight with us.

I am almost speachless, your Cullen men are so Dark!  And so good,  I am still smiling after reading this chpt.  Lovin' it.  But it does seem that Edward really likes B.  Plus you have dope dealing Jasper and Section 8 Alice.... wow!  Excellent job.

"Is it because I am black?"  Funny as hell!!!  Outstanding chapter.  I haven't laughed so loud and so long over a fanfic in a while :) .  Also loved the baseball bat reference.  All characters are great along with all the nicknames, too.