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I am a wife and working mother of three. And I am a rabid Twilight fan. I also love good wine, good friends and skin art. Oh, and I live and breathe the music around me. Currently, I love 100 Monkeys, Kings of Leon, Killers, Pink, Death Cab For Cutie, Van Morrison, Bruno Mars and Adele. But like the weather where I live, just wait five minutes and it could change.
I discovered fan fiction by accident while looking through Twilight websites and have been addicted ever since. My husband never complains about my hours of computer time because he always reaps the benefits in the end. ;)
Not only do I love to read a good piece of Twilight fiction, but I am working on several stories of my own.
I had a most incredible opportunity to meet the one and only Peter Facinelli on October 23, 2010. He was absolutley amazing and gracious and sexy as hell! I got pictures and a new tattoo out of the deal so all in all it was one of the best weekends of my life!!! Check out the link if you are so inclined.
http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/awesome-fan-encounter-with-peter-facinelli/
I had an even better experience meeting Jackson Rathbone at a 100 Monkeys concert on July 9, 2011. What an absolutely amazing group of guys. If you ever get the chance, I highly recomend you go and see them. I am now a total Monkey Junkie and can not wait till they come my way again. And yes, I also got Jackson to sign my leg and immediately had it made permanant the very next day. Check out the link to read the whole story.
Use Somebody A/N:
I have removed Use Somebody. I am attempting to have the story published which is exciting and scary as hell!!! Follow my updates on Facebook, 'Nickeyd26'.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
That was one hell of a chapter! I find myself being more upset with Edward than with Bella. He has been in this lifestyle for years where she is a newbie. This was their first play party together and he should have given her more warnings; especially about how the women would interact with him. How can he expect her to ask questions about something that would never occur to her? And I think that it was totally disrespectful, as her Dom, to allow another sub to kneel in her place.
Bella was wrong to show her emotions when she was jealous or possesive, but like she said, it is a learning curve. If I had to place blame on the things that went wrong, then I think they can have equal shares. And hopefully they will BOTH learn something before the next party.
I know, I am all emotional. Your story does that to me. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review and comments and it's okay to get emotional - I do too :)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
OME!!! Just when I think this story can't get any better, you totally out do yourself! The beginning was so emotional with the punishment and Bella not being able to sort her own feelings and thoughts in order to share them with Edward. And Edward being torn between needing to punish her, but not wanting to break her. Ugh, it makes my heart hurt when they are like that.
The talk was fucking awesome!!!! It was so needed. I loved that Bella voiced her concerns about the other women touching Edward. I think she was absolutley right to say that she wasn't ok with it. To me, that would be a hard limit.
And to end with the make up sex...AWESOME!!! It was hot and perfect and just fucking incredible!
I need a bottle of wine and my husband after reading all that.
Oh, and to answer your question before the chapter...yes please! I will take a dose of Domward anytime you are willing to dish him up!!!
Author's Response:
oooh Nickey, you naughty girl, now are you going to lock your husband up in the closet when Domward comes over - DO NOT ANSWER THAT - because all the husbands in the fandom would find themselves in the closet xoxo
thanks for the review sweetie xoxo
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
As always, fabulous chapter!!!!!!!
I have to say that I love Garrett. I am so glad that he pointed out Edward's short comings about preparing Bella for the play party and his inattention to her feelings at the party. I am glad that Edward was upset with himself. He should have been.
The rope play was incredibly hot and sexy. You did a fantastic job describing it even though you say you have no expierience in this world (I am starting to have my doubts in the truth of that particular statement). ;)
The game night was very funny. I loved when Bella sent Kate for a punishment when she screwed up.
Finally, Edward should trust his instincts. This weekend is not going to go as planned. I have a feeling that two very unwelcome guests are going to show their slime ball faces at the girls' party. I am so not looking forward to that part. I really hope Rose kicks their asses before they can inflict any real damage on Bella (mental or physical).
I freakin love this story! Your updates are the SECOND best wake up call a girl can get on a Saturday morning. ;) Oh, and I believe I am joining Bella as I too have an 'Edward fetish' (nice termanology).
Author's Response:
you are so funny! And I promise - I really don't have any experience - but you should see some of the research that I've had to look up - some of it fries the brain - but shibari is really quite exceptional - most of it is for visual effect, while other is for part of bdsm and is pure erotica.
You keep me on the straight and narrow with your reviews and comments - makes me go back and make sure that I've got it right.
The upcoming weekend is going to be....eventful.
Have a great week, Nicky xoxo
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
Ugh! The whole time I read this chapter I felt like I was watching the time tick off of a bomb. I am so stressed now and can not believe I have to wait till Saturday to see what happens next. And knowing that the guys are out of cell phone range and the security detail won't be there for at least two more hours, not to mention your warning; my mind is all over the place with how this next chapter is going to play out. Ugh!!!!
On a less frantic note, I liked the sit down that Kate had with Bella. I am so glad she agreed to mentor her. I think she is a much better sounding board than Alice. Alice gets into too much trouble on her own to be a good guide for Bella. And all the symptoms that Rose is having...I wonder, could there be a little Cullen-bun in the oven??? I hope Rose doesn't get hurt when the shit hits the fan.
Damn, this is going to be a long week. :(
PS. And to answer your question...YES, I need Edward to sort me out again!
Author's Response:
thank you for your amazing comments and your review - I'll give him your number should I?
xoxo
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Michele, I love you!!!!!
This was an amazing chapter!!!! I can hardly breathe much less think straight after reading this. I can not pin point any one part that I loved or hated because the whole thing completely captured me and pulled me in. I swear I was in the den; I was in the master suite; I was in Carlisle and Esme's house; I was in the helicopter. I was everywhere you took us in this chapter. Thank you for not beating up on the girls too badly. My only complaint is that Asshole 1&2 are still breathing.
You absolutely amaze me and I bow down to your greatness!
Ps. Thanks for posting early!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
That was just killing you that you posted it without that little snippit, wasn't it? LOL, I know it would have bugged me too. ;)
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Drink two since Rose can't have any for a while!!!! I am so glad she is prego and not something serious! This was the best timing for this news. I think it will help the family focus on something positive instead of the nightmare they are soming out of.
Foolish Bella. Did she really think she could hide her feelings from Edward? I'm glad he is such a good Dom and beat her just enough. ;)
Excellent chapter!!!
PS. That whole thing with the guys and Carlisle...fucking hilarious!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I don't know how you do it, but each chapter seems to out do the last. The scene in the playroom totally eclipsed the rest of the chapter. It was so incredibly intense that I have to go back and skim over the rest to make sure I remember it for next time. All I have to say is...whoa!
It made me so sad when I saw what Bella wrote in her journal. I understand that Edward doesn't want her to be negative about herself but he also insists on complete honesty. He really can't have it both ways. She comes by her feelings of inadequecy honestly and that can not be undone just by a spanking. I think that Bella will learn to love herself as much as her new family does, but it is going to take time and Edward will just have to work on his own short comings (i.e. patience) in the mean time.
I am so glad that James is maggot meat!!! It couldn't happen to a nicer guy. With any luck, Jake will be nothing more than a drooling turnip for the rest of his days. But no one mentioned anything about Vicky. Is she going to slink off and lick her wounds or is she going to take a lesson from SM and seek out revenge?
Another fantasticaly, wonderful, erotic as all hell chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the great feedback in your review! I am really humbled by the time that you give to each chapter.
xoxo
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
I am so sorry to hear about your family's loss. It is never easy to lose someone even if it was only the promise of someone. <3
This chapter was excellent. I loved the whole scene with Aro, Felix and Heidi. Especially when Aro explained Bella's importance to Edward.
Bella's reaction to the news about J&J was so real. It was very well written.
Ahhh, and now we meet Charlie. I thought it was awesome how he was making Edward sweat when Bella introduced them. This is going to be an interesting and eventful holiday.
Author's Response:
thanks nickey.
and thanks so much for the review
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45
Ughhhh, that was so unbelieveably heart wrenching to read. But I think you are 100% right; it was absolutely necessary. There was no way to have an honest story and let Charlie and Bella just skate over his complete and total failure to be a father to her. As much as this chapter broke my heart to read, it was an amazing chapter. And being a person with a similar personal past as Bella (absent, neglectful, alcoholic father) I felt you gave it a very true representation.
I look forward to the good stuff to come.
Nickey
PS. I laughed my ass off at Alice at the tree lot. She is certifiable and needs professional help. I fucking love her!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Nickey. My dad was similar to Charlie in that he was a man of few words and wasn't very comfortable with emotions but he was a great dad. My step-father was an alcoholic and an abusive one as well. This was painful to write but it was good to put some things on paper too.
Alice, omg, the tree lot scene had me sniggering like a lunatic as I wrote it!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
First of all...AHHHHH YOU REC'D ME?!?!?!? Holy fucking shit! Huge honor! Totally blown away!!!!
{Deep breaths, trying to calm down, may need some time with Domward to sort me out}
Amazing chapter! I love, love, love the idea of the 'picnic carols'. It is so sweet and incredibly creative. This whole Cullen Christmas was fabulous! I felt like I was there as they opened gifts and sat around the table together. It was perfect.
Sexy time with E&B was hot and yummy as always. I love that no matter what they are doing the sexual under tones are ALWAYS there. I LMAO when Bella was verbalizing her desire to lick Edward's happy trail in the bathroom...classic!
The earings and cuff links were the perfect gifts for them. I can not wait to see the last gift Bella has for Edward. I think I have an idea of what it is, but I will be patient and wait. And Bella and Charlie's gifts to each other were so heart touching. I love that he is making such an effort.
I am glad to see Bella and Charlie working on their relationship. And I am glad that he is being open to her relationship with Edward. Him staring down Edward during dinner was awesome, by the way.
As you can tell, I loved the whole freakin thing!
Oh and now that I can breath normal again...thanks for the rec. ;)
Author's Response:
oh come on Nick - you know that I love your stories - it just so happens that Fiorella and I happen to read the same stories - she thinks that she finds the best ones and so do I but the funny thing is we read the same ones!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Sorry it has taken me till now to review, but you know I was very busy the weekend with Peter and getting my tattoo. But tonight I finally finished this chapter and I have no intention of burning you at the stake. I can't imagine how you write this when I can't even get through it without tears. The lunch with Carlisle broke me. I thought Esme was a bit out of step with what was going on. She should have stayed out of it.
Jasper and especially Edward should be ashamed of themselves. I totally get that the girls were wrong. BUT Alice told Bella about the situation when she wasn't collared, so I don't see how she was under any obligation to tell Edward shit! He may be her Dom, but she is not a 24/7 slave and she has her own friends, Alice being one of them. If Alice can't confide in Bella without knowing it will go straight to Edward and in turn to Jasper, then why would she ever talk to her about anything? I think Bella was handling it best. She wasn't going to allow Alice to go into that situation without telling Jasper the truth ahead of time. That is being a good friend and no deception was intended. If anything, it was allowing Alice to make the right decision on her own.
And then for Edward to ignore her? WTF?!? Seriously, he couldn't have come up with a less emotionally damaging punishment? She had voiced her fear of him rejecting her and then he does basically that exact thing?!? I feel the need to cane his ass!!! He is her fucking Dom and it is HIS responsibility to care for her physically, mentally and emotionally. He totally dropped the ball and I really hope that Garrett calls him out on his shit.
He is always accusing Alice of pitching fits and acting like a child, but what was he doing? He might as well have been sitting in a corner holding his breath until he got his way. I really think he needs a timeout.
I am glad to see that Ricky got taken care of. I fucking love Emmett. He and Carlisle are my favorite boys right now. Jasper and Edward can lick themselves in the dog house.
Sorry, but you get me all worked up with the story. ;)
Author's Response:
Hey Nickey,
Wow you really are worked up with this chapter - I hope you will let me know what you think of the next chapter coming up tomorrow - love you so much.
Michele
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Damn girl! I bow to your greatness. This chapter was...sorry, there are no fucking words for how incredibly mind blowing this chapter was. The training is blowing me away and I am actually impressed that Bella went through all that and didn't suffer from a sub-drop. She is getting better at this and you, you kinky little minx are coming up with some very creative citrus!
Now, back to the vanilla section of this chapter...I fucking love Esme big time! I love how she pretty much put Charlie in his place with a firm but gentle hand. It surpises me that she does not dominate Carlisle. She seems like she could easily be a switch. Anywho, loved the interview and the photographer getting all hot and bothered over the guys...classic!!!
I could write paragraphs about how I love this story and this chapter (like the others) is fucking perfect!
Nickey
Author's Response:
oh come on now! You are making me blush! thanks N, you rock!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Now THAT is how their first party should have gone!!! I loved this whole freaking work of art from the first word to the last!!! I love that Edward owned up to his dad about seriously screwing up with Bella and how he is trying not to be so overbearing with her food and weight.
The feather sex was amazing and if that wasn't enough having Bella take charge at the end here damn near blew my mind. It is taking all my self control to write this review before I go upstairs and have my wicked way with my hubby. ;)
I thought their costumes rocked and Bella truely was perfection at the party. I loved that she crawled to him. I can only imagine the hard-ons she caused. That simple act was so incredibly hot. I thought the whole 'kissing his foot' or resting her head against his leg was incredible, but that took the prize. I seriously don't know how Edward did not fuck her in the coat room after that.
Oh and the bitches of eastwick and their ring leader, Mandy...Edward was awesome!!! He so gets the best Dom award for the way he handled that! And the fact that Bella allowed him to take care of it was amazing.
As always...excellent chapter. There is just one thing...Edward is dying to propose, isn't he? It seems there are moments where the words are right there, but he holds back. Am I right?
Author's Response:
thanks so much Nickey - awesome review and comments as always.
And yes, he will propose - but they need to get through some therapy and the movie first....
xoxo
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Tell Paul that I need some time on his couch too. Ugh, your story always brings out my emo side.
I love that Rose totally put Emmett in his place. He needed to see it from someone else's POV to see how fucked up that whole situation was and the fact that he REALLY should not have been involved (other than scaring the shit out of the pissant).
I appreciate the way you write Bella. She is a cluster fuck of emotions and mood swings some times, but that makes her so real. People don't just resolve an issue and never think about it again or only feel one way about it. That is what is happeing with Bella and therapy and her forced distance from Alice. FYI, I think Bella hit the nail on the head in her journal. Jasper is more pissed at himself for not seeing the problems Alice was having and now he doesn't know how to move forward.
I'm glad Edward was able to step in for Alice and Jasper like Garrett and Kate did for them. They needed a swift kick in the ass to get them out of their staring contest. They were both so miserable that a downward spiral was inevitable if something didn't give.
Speaking of Kate and Garrett...I love the idea of Bella and Edward playing in front of them. That is a very, very hot idea. PLEASE make it happen!!!
I can not believe after all that happened that Billy is trying to get Bella sent to jail for Jacob's death! Would he have been happier if his son had raped and murdered her?!? Fucker!
Author's Response:
you are such an amazing champion - Seriously Nickey - your reviews and comments really encourage and make me think about what I'm writing - so thank you - and here is a little out take that's my way of saying thank you that Fiorella suggested I write xoxo
PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6
OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE
"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"
Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.
"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?" Jasper said.
Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.
Jasper smiled at her. "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."
Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."
Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice. She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control. Seeing him looking ill at ease was new. There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.
She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.
Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.
Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view. Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them. They had also taught them to stick to their guns.
This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place. Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with. She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.
Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them. They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest. Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!
He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his. Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves. Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.
Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had! Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name. Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.
Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with. He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else. Someone better.
So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated. He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college. The first one was on finances. Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.
He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character. Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.
It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on. He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was! Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice! His Alice! Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.
How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!
Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet. His face was a cold, furious mask.
"Jasper please! If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down! I can't reach you when you are like this! If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there! If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.
"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother! I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!" Jasper spat out as he held her.
Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes. "Jazzy, you are scaring me..."
This wild man wasn't her Jasper...
Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.
Suddenly she was free.
Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could. Her whole body was trembling.
"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..." Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.
Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.
This was all her fault!
"Come to me..." Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.
Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.
Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.
"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.
"No. You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.
Her eyes searched his intensely. The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.
Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.
He cursed and rubbed his head.
Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!" She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.
Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself. Alice giggled and winked at him.
"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!" She said with determination.
"Gladly, Darlin'."
"Okay, I'm going first. I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me! Do you promise?"
Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.
"I promise."
Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off. I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way. The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room. He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him. I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.
Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode! That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD! I. will. Kill. Him.
Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.
He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise. I won't freak out on you again."
Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean. The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again. He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."
SON OF A BITCH!
Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.
She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz! I know better! I was raised to know better than that! With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect. You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty. And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better. Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'. Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.
His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.
"Jazz..."
"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen. Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again. Especially not me! God, Ali, I love you so much! Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck! It's too much to even contemplate! Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you? When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then! As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you! And about how I was going to take care of you this time! I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'. I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."
Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.
"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock. You own me mind, body and soul. If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out. Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it." Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.
"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love. I am sorry too. No more secrets."
Their kiss was a relief. For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving. Lips touched, brushed, nibbled. Tongues dueled and teased. Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.
Alice panted into his mouth. "Can I get my clothes back?"
Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."
Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"
Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."
Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"
Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.
Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!
"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest. Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.
"Alice?"
"Yeah?"
"Supervised visits only..." Jasper kissed her forehead.
"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.
She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session? She had heard that Gap was having a sale....
Everything was right with the world after all.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
I hope that you liked it!
Love
Michele
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
I love, love, LOVE that Bella finally spoke her mind to Renee!!! It was a long time coming and it shows just how much she has grown since the beginning of this story.
Edward gets 'Best Dom' award for taking care of Bella when she had her meltdown over her dream and her fear of being arrested. He really took care of her in all the ways she needed him.
OMG! Edward is a smart man, but he basically called her a fatty?!? WTF was he thinking. He is lucky that Bella loves him so much that she was willing to forgive him. And his second mistake was calling the guys for advice. He should have called a woman. Granted all of them were out with Bella, but they would have at least given him better advice (after bitching him out for his stupidity).
I really like Paul as their therapist. He seems to handle them both really, really well. I am glad that he is addressing Bella's self-esteem issues. And the whole not collaring Bella thing was kind of funny when Bella flipped shit on Edward over it.
As always, an amazing, fantastic, wonderful chapter. You completely deserve the 2000+ reviews.
Nickey
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Michele,
You never, ever disappoint. This was such an incredible chapter. When Edward distanced himself from Bella it brought me to tears. It is hard to read her self-doubt, but she needed to realize that everything is not about her.
I love, love, LOVE Kate. She truly is the best friend and mentor that Bella could ask for. She helps Bella embrace her submissive side and it is absolutley beautiful.
Edward's punishment was harsh, but it was what Bella asked for and desperatly needed. He really is such a fantastic Dom.
I hope you never stop hitting the curve balls with these two. But I know that time will eventually come. Just promise me that you will give us enough notice to prepare ourselves for losing these two. It won't be easy. ;)
Excellent job lady!
Nickey
Author's Response:
Thanks Nickey - I'm truly humbled by your comments. You are such a wonderful storyteller and writer, that it means a lot to me.
xoxo
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Michele,
Oh holy hell! I can't believe you are leaving Bella and us like that! This is going to be a loooooong week. ;)
Edward was so cute when he got excited over Bella asking his opinion. Dirty minds...simple pleasures.
I am glad that Alice apologized to Bella. It was a long time in coming, but it was most definatly needed. Alice is the more experienced sub and she should have been a much better role-model than she has been (loved the Thelma and Loiuse reference).
I like the transistion you are giving Edward from acting to music. It was cute to see Bella giving Emmett the stink eye so he wouldn't make fun of Edward. She is barely over 100lbs, but seems to have the ability to scare the shit out of Emmett the bear. lol.
Can't wait till next week,
Nickey
PS. Did you get your copy of Eclipse yet? I am having way too much fun with the special features. I love the 'jump to' feature on the 2nd disc.
Author's Response:
hey there sweet thing - thank you for the comments and the review - and no I haven't got my copy yet!!!! *pouts like crazy* but I will and then there will be no stopping me! is it good?? that good? are there lots of Rob perving!
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Michele,
You totally blow me away! That was hot, intense, kinky, forbidden and a little angsty. It had it all and then some.
I got annoyed with Edward cause it seemed as if he wanted Bella to fail if for no other reason than the fact that he wanted to spank her. And then I got annoyed with Bella cause she should have safe worded yellow when she knew her mind wasn't in the right place. They both deserved a punishment for that fuckery.
I love that Alice actually gave Bella good advice. :)
The scene they did in front of Kate and Garrett was very hot and I would love to see that happen again! I know, I am a dirty girl.
Please, oh please do an out take with Carlisle and Esme after the Riley debacle. We have already seen his Dominant tendancies. I can only image what happened, so please write it!!!
Nickey
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Michele,
First off, I don't know how you have kept up this pace thus far with this story. So, don't appologize for slowing down a bit...just don't stop because it will take a lot more than Edward and his twitchie hand to settle us down if you do that. ;)
Excellent chapter (as always). My jaw hit my laptop when Edward 'reded' on her. That was intense. He was obviously right to do it, but I totally understand Bella's POV as well. Their playtime has been limited by other things and it is easy to see how she would internalize that. I loved their day out. It was nice to see them escape the confines of the house without the whole entourage.
That is really cool that Riley wants to show her work. Now, maybe she will relax a little about the money thing. I was impressed with Edward. I thought he might pee on Bella to mark her as his.
The hot tub sex was blazin' hot. These two are as bad as bunnies. ;)
I wonder how they are going to survive this time apart. This is the first time they will be away from each other since the Jacob/James incident. I wonder if he will collar her over the phone to help keep her calm. A phone scene could be very hot. Just a thought. ;)
Have a fantastic Christmas and I look forward to reading the Carlisle/Esme outtake. I can not wait to see what kind of punishment he doled out to her.
Nickey
Author's Response:
You are so bad!!!! Putting ideas into my head about phone sexing.... hmmm, I wonder.... (great idea btw). Thank you so much for understanding. This story owns me and there is no way that I can keep the words in for too long!!! As for Dr C and E - let me just say that I HAD TO TAKE A COLD SHOWER while I was writing it!!! Oh boy, a possessive Cullen man....
I will post before Christmas in the outtakes.
Love you Nickey.
Michele
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Michele,
Once again, you leave me breathless. That punishment was so intense, but so very, very needed. Everyone can get lost in a single focus (i.e. writing fan fic;)), but Bella and Edward live a different life and she does not have the priveledge to lose track of time like she did. Her health and wellbeing are not only for her own benefit but for Edward's as well. She knows that she can't forget to eat or sleep, so for that reason, I think that Edward was completely justified in his punishment for her.
I loved the visit with Sue, Seth and Charlie. I love the relationship that Seth and Bella seem to fall into so easily. I can not wait till he and Edward come face to face. I hope he plays the protective brother card (just a little).
Excellent chapter! I can't think of a better way of starting the new year than with my favorite Domward!
Happy New Year Woman!!!
Nickey
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words! Geez, there are those that think that he is being a prick, but you and I know different. I love Seth and I am looking forward to seeing how he plays out with the rest of the gang! Seth gets Charlie and he has a way of drawing him out that just seemed to fall off the pages.
He is protective of Bella and he doesn't know about her lifestyle and he will be protective over her, especially if Edward gets a bit Domward with Bella.... hmmm.
Love you so much, Nickey.
xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
Michele,
{Taking a deep breath to calm myself}
Just because I love you does not mean I have to like you and right now you are NOT my favorite person!!!
UGH! Here I was all set for a fabulous wedding and fuck hot honeymoon and you give me THIS?!? Now, don't get me wrong. I loved the wedding (perfect 1st dance song, by the way) and the first what, 24 hours of the honeymoon and then you let Edward get all fucked in the head?!? Talk about the honeymoon being over. I can't believe you did that! I was crying through what was supposed to be the best time! The tears were literally pouring down my face as I could practically see him pulling away from her. It broke my heart!!!
Then you let them get past this little blip and then icky Vicky shoots him and Jasper?!? Damn girl, you need to stop listening to the evil voices in your head! And again I started crying when Bella was on the roof with Emmett. FTI, I freakin loved Emmett in that moment. He was everything Bella needed short of being Edward.
I loved how Bella made it clear to the nursing staff exactly who she was and that visiting hours didn't mean shit to her. I loved how she was so strong and stayed by his side 24/7. I love Bella when she is strong like that.
But don't think that gets you off the hook. I am still angry with you. And don't think I didn't catch that little slip about 2 fatalities. We know the bitch bit the big one, but who else? Hmmm?!? And you know I haven't forgotten about the contents of a letter that we are still waiting on.
You had better fix this girlfriend or I am sending Garrett to put you in your place. Edward is going to be laid up for a while (not in a good way), so Garrett will have to step in with a good firm ridding crop and a single tail to teach you it is not nice to hurt our Edward like that. ;)
Love ya babe,
Nickey
PS. It truely was an excellent chapter. I don't enjoy the tears, but you have a gift for pulling them out of me like no one else. ;)
Author's Response:
you are so good for my soul! truly and absolutely, that's what you get for making me think all sorts of evil things about Carlisle and BELLA!! Talk about a mindfuck, young lady, here I am writing an epic chapter and all the while I'm wonding if C & B are going to get down and dirty soon!!! YOUR FAULT ENTIRELY. And after Edward's bullshit during his honeymoon, I WANTED TO SHOOTER THE LITTLE FUCKER MYSELF!!!
You don't miss a thing do you? Yes there was another fatality and you will find out next chapter (next weekend - so no reading for me) And the police will fill in the gaps for Bella and Edward as well - JUST WARNING YOU NOW - Edward is not a good patient and it's so funny that you mentioned Garrett - he comes to visit... with ramifications... poor Bella has her hands full with Asshole - sexy asshole, but still he is an asshole.... hmmm.
Okay, going now. love you lots and more,
Mitchie xoxo
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Michele,
Can't stop smiling!!! Fucking loved it!!!!!!! The proposal was simple and perfect. I loved that he went to ask Charlie's permission. And the rings are fucking gorgeous!!!
Ok, jumping on my soapbox...are you ready? I was very upset by your A/N in the beginning. Not what you wrote, but that there are people out there with their head's so far up their own asses that they would read this story and see anything other than a consenting couple engaging in a D/s relationship. It has my panties in a serious twist! WTF?!? Obviously they know nothing about the power exchange that goes on in this type of relationship and the fact that the submissive truely holds the power, not the Dom. Edward is not abusive or a sadist in any way, shape or form and anyone who says otherwise is a flaming idiot!
Ugh! If they don't like this story, they should go read some other story that is not even half as quality as this one (there are enough shit stories out there to pick from). Please don't feel that you ever have to defend this story! I think you give these two amazing depth of character and emotion. Do not let ANYONE change how you write. If they can't stand the heat, they can get the fuck out of this beautiful kitchen you have built!
And on a personal note, I am so sorry that you have ever had to feel unworthy or unloved. I have been there myself and understand that those are the scars that no one sees, but you carry for life. Keep your head held high sister, and if anyone dares to put you down there are two simple words that are my life's mantra and I will share the with you...FUCK THEM!
Ok, now that that is taken care of...back to the review. ;)
Have I told you I love this chapter?!? Poor Emmett. LOL! He really thought he was going to damage the baby? Thank God Bella was there to help out. And again, Carlisle gets the 'dad of the year award'. ;)
I like that Paul pushed Bella in regards to Renee. It was necessary to show her the weakness in her armor. If you don't know where you are weakest, you are ill prepared to defend yourself. Speaking of defending yourself..go Bitch-Bella with your bad ass self!!! I loved how she put Heidi in her self-rightous ass-kissing place! That was one of my favorite parts of this monstrous chapter (not complaining...you could right 100k word chapters and I would read till my eyes bled).
Oh and the little add in with Jackson..loooovvvveeeeddd it! You wrote his little flirty southern self perfectly! ;)
I love how E&B's relationship both in and out of the playroom is growing. The eb and flow between them is like a beautiful dance. I think you give them such a range of colors when it comes to how they interact. As much as he is the Dom, it is her feelings and mood that show him which way to lead. Simply amazing!!!
Love ya,
Nickey
Author's Response:
Hi Nickey!!
thank you so much for being such a great champion for the cause of Domward and this story. I had such fun writing this chapter. Having 2 weeks to write has just allowed me to expand and really take the time to explore each character. I had to give Emmett his moment - when I was writing about them, I just thought that if any of the guys was going to think something like that it would be Emmett and as for Carlisle, well you know how I love him.
Thanks again and we'll talk soon.
lots of love, hugs and kisses,
me
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
I am already voicing my vote...HELL YEAH I WANT A SEQUAL!!! YOU ARE GOING TO HAVE TO PRY THESE TWO OUT OF MY COLD, DEAD HANDS.
I hate repeating myself, but...loved it!!!! The engagement party was awesome. I loved that he flew everyone in (especially Charlie). Their little tift that night was classic E&B. And the roll play was fuck hot!!!
The flashback of the scene with Edward and Carlisle was amazing. I love those little offshoots that show the strength of their relationship.
I was really impressed with how Bella handled the stress of the show and I loved that Edward showed up to surprise her. Ridden hard and put aways wet...seriously? Too funny!!!
I was surprised but completely impressed that Edward did not flip shit when Bella turned to Paul instead of him when she had her emotional break-down. This would have been a real issue for him before, but now he actually handled it like an adult instead of throwing a Dom-temper-tantrum.
Now, as for an outtake...I am curious about Carlisle and Esme at one of those 'classes' or maybe C&Es after the art show. Hmmmm
Excellent chapter my dear! And so worth the wait. ;)
Nickey
Author's Response:
Okay, so I think I got how you feel about a sequel :) You have convinced me - out take on the way this week. It will be the Doc and Mamma E - have a great week.
xoxo
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I knew she was prego!!!!
OMG! The shirtless football and Mr Cullen Crest contest had me fucking rolling!
The switch scene at the hotel was yummy. I loved how Edward topped her even from the bottom. He was so naughty and that was so hot!!!
Poor Bella had to hear all that from Sue. I don't care who you are, it is one thing to be abandoned and neglected by your parent. It is a whole other thing to know that while your parent was neglecting you they were taking care of someone else's kid. That is a totally different kind of pain. I love how Edward just held her and let her cry.
I also love how they set their wedding date. Bella is right, that whole family is crazy! But funny as hell. And the Easter egg hunt was too sweet. I love how Edward has visions of their children (and I really hope we get a taste of that before you end this story).
I can only imagine the panic when your flash drive died. That thing is like my best friend. It has all my secrets. I am glad that you were able to get this out as I have been missing PLU. Thanks!
XOXO
Nickey
Author's Response:
Hey my sweet Nickey,
I'm glad you liked the shirtless game and I did my own rating in the CC contest! Thanks so much for your review and comments. and as for the sticky thingy - all I can say is BACK UP, BACK UP, BACK UP!!!! and if possible, buy a back up sticky thingy and back up your back up onto it once a week or so, because I lost pictures, notes, my story plan, everything!!!
Love you lots,
Michie
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I wish I had more words in my vocabulary because I always feel like I am repeating myself with this story. This chapter was amazing!!!! I could tell you my favorite parts, but that is pretty much the whole freakin thing! And I totally see where the fighting took over and slowed down the wedding chapter. But bare with E&B, they have their issues that need to be worked out. Better that they interrupt you now and not at the rehersal for their wedding (Alice would have a heart attack).
I loved the 24 hr scene that Edward ran for Bella. He is so incredibly good for her and to know that it was what she needed validates how perfect they are for each other.
Every time Bella doubts her worth in Edward's life I can not stop the tears that pour down my face. It is so raw and so real. Anyone can relate to her in those moments. Well done. ;)
I am proud of how Edward handeled the whole situation. He always talks about how Bella has grown, but HE has grown by miles. In earlier chapters he would have punished her for turning her cell phone off and drinking that way and I can't even imagine how he would have ripped into Brian. But now he deals with their issues so much better and in the end, both of them are rewarded by their strenghthening bond.
The bike sex was hot and the shower sex is mental candy that I will carry with me all weekend. So for that...thanks. ;)
Excellent chapter my friend,
Nickey
PS. 2500 reviews?!? You are the one who rocks. As much as I would never want to see this story disappear from this site, I REALLY think you should consider pulling it once it is complete, change the characters and publish it. I am so not shitting you! You have an incredible gift and this story is simply amazing.
It is not just because of the characters that we love, it is the story and the way you tell it. I have read way more fan fiction than I care to admit and there are very talented people out there, but you are head and shoulders above the rest. I can read a chapter that is 4000 words written by someone else and be bored by the flow of it. And then I can sit and read 20,000 of your words and be completely captivated the entire time. That, my friend, is a true gift and you should share it with the world. Just my opinion. ;)
Author's Response:
You are so good for my ego, Missy! A mere 'thank you' is not enough, but thank you so much Nickey. Your words of affermation and encouragement keep me going.
(so, you going to attempt the shower scene with hubby???)
:)
xoxo
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Holy shit! I feel like I need some time with Paul after all that emotional upheaval. No wonder Bella was so fucked up in the beginning of the story. With parents like Renee and Charlie (old Charlie the drunk absentee father, not the new Charlie, I like him). I am surprised that Bella only needed a good Dom and therapy. She should be on anti-depressants after living through her childhood. Shit, I am surprised she didn't off herself after a childhood like that.
And Renee {shivers}...if you look up skanky-over tanned-cuntbag-slut-crack whore-bitch you would find a picture of her. It made me visably cringe when she got off to her fantasy of Edward. Seriously? She is not normal. Bravo on writing her to be so easy to hate and so believable and unbelievable all at the same time. I loved that Bella not only knocked her on her flabby old ass but that she told her off as well. {breaking out pom poms to cheer for team Bella}.
And the way Edward nearly passed out when he was talking to Carlisle about what he knew of Renee and hhow she treated Bella was amazingly written. I love to see him so strong yet vulnerable.
On to funner things. Alice is so cute how she was worried about Esme and Carlisle's reaction to her pregnancy (FYI, I was where Alice was several years back minus the wedding part. I was off the pill for 2 weeks before I got pregnant. Funny how things like that happen). I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the guys throwing Jasper in the pool and then him doing a full monty for the girls. You have a dirty mind and I fucking love you for it. ;) And the scene with Domsper and the pixie was awesome. I love how he puts her in her place when she starts throwing a temper tantrum.
The fun time in the hotel was awesome. It was the perfect way for Edward and Bella to be after such an emotional evening. Letting Bella have her wicked way with Edward was sooooo hot!
I have to say that Brian and especially Anderson are my two favorite unsung heros in this story. I love how dedicated they are to keeping Bella safe (and Edward, but mostly Bella). The fact that last chapter Brian was willing to lose his job to put Edward in his place about the whole Bella and money situation speaks volumes of how he sees her. I freakin love them and I hope you keep them on to guard E&B's kids when the time comes.
Okay, now to answer your questions. Bella and Edward want a small wedding but don't want to travel to a destination (because of Rose being prego), right? So why not have it at their home? Edward was talking about the view from their garden in back. How perfect would that be?
And for their scene...hmmmm. So many, many options. He won't have sex with her in front of others, but did he say no oral sex??? Maybe have her start off with getting him off and then having him tie her to a saint andrews cross and with a butt plug in place whip her and teese her till she cums for him, but only after she is made to beg for it. He could also use some of that fabulous hot wax that turns into massage oil when it is melted (that shit rocks!). He could easily pour some on her ass cheeks as she is tied to the cross. Massaging her ass cheeks while the plug is in place should push her right to the breaking point. He should leave the plug in place until they get home and then take her to their playroom and fuck her till she cums all over him. What? You asked.
Go have a glass of wine, hell have a bottle after that marathon of a chapter. As always, fucking amazing my friend.
Love ya,
Nickey
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
Holy hell!!!! What a way to leave a girl wanting, you evil lemon blocker!!!!
First and foremost...love the names!!!! They are so perfect and the fact that the babies are mini E&B is too sweet for words. The labor and delivery were written so perfectly as was Edward's reaction to the babies. As much as I love Domward, Mushward has my heart as well. To see him so moved by them is awesome!!!! And 'Grumpy' I mean Grampa Charlie...LMAO!
The scene for his birthday was fuck-hot!!! I loved him drinking from her and how you gave Bella the right to enjoy it on a sexual level and not make it a dirty thing. I say again, fuck hot!!!
I felt Bella's desperation at her breakdown when Edward was away. Being a new mom is scary and to try and be everything for twins is virtually impossible. Hooray for Esme and Maggie!!!!
Besides the big bang coming up, I am excited to see what antics these two will get into at the new homstead. Is it terrible that I am drooling to 'see' the new playroom?!? I know, I am a dirty whore, but you make me this way!
Excellent chapter! When am I going to see this in hardcover??? ;)
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Where to start? First off...LOVED IT!!!!
The bed-in was awesome. I liked that Bella spoke her mind when it came to Domward being on hiatus. And I thought that Edward took it really well. These two have finally learned how to communicate (it is a freakin miracle!!!).
I love how Bella is the calm to eveyone's storms. She calmed crazy pregnant Rose and got everyone to the hospital to have the baby (love the name by the way). Then she saved the wedding from the pixie form of bridezilla. I love that she has the capability to carry the world on her shoulders but yet allows Edward to take care of her (again, so much growth for these two).
The wedding was wonderful and the two uncles had me cracking up.
I nearly cried as Carlisle realized that his little girl is no longer his. Very beautifully written.
And the sexin' at the end...what a way to end a fantastic chapter! Like I said, LOVED IT!!!!
XOXO
Nickey
PS. I am sooooo looking forward to the playparty and the next set of wedding bells.
Author's Response:
Lots of "playparty" sexing up next and of course the wedding Bells - and hey, WHY ARE YOU READING WHEN YOU SHOULD BE WRITING UP A STORM???? Love and hugs, Michele xoxo Thanks for the review and encouragement Babe.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Why do I get the feeling that Charlie is not Bella's biological father?!? It just seems like something that evil crack whore bitch would do. But onto happier things until you feel it is time to shit or get off the pot and tell us what the damned letter says. ;)
I loved the play party. I felt so bad for the way he teesed Bella all day, but I loved the scene (the costumes and set up were fuck-awesome) and I loved his form of aftercare. I think I could use a little of his aftercare too.
I thought the scene at the lake side with just E&B was incredibly soft and touching. They needed that time together to take a break from the chaos. And the part with Rose, Bella and Joshua was so sweet. I don't see them holding off too long before Bella is carrying a little bean of her own.
The B&B parties were great. I almost pissed myself laughing at the 'questionable age' of the strippers. I did not see that coming at all!!!
And now the wedding is here. Yeah!!! So stop reading the reviews as we gush over your greatness and get back to writing. I am going to have Edward work you over with the single tail if we don't get that next chapter soon!!!
Love ya!
Nickey
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD! Could you whine anymore about how I'm not writing enough!! And okay yes, I will state it right here - I AM A SECRET C & B FAN! Happy now?? You are such a brat sometimes, but I love you so freeking much! And yes here I am on a Saturday night WRITING - OKAY? HAPPY NOW? You will find out what is in the letter soon, okay, now stop buggin me, brat!
Talk about a work over from Edward, you and me both, baby!
xoxo
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Alright my sweet, I don't feel the need to hurt you this time. You done good. I loved the beginning when Edward was being a little bitch baby and Garrett and Paul (in their own ways) put him in his place. Bella, as always, was amazingingly strong and wonderful. Edward should thank his lucky stars that she didn't go running for the hills when he had his head up his ass.
This chapter made me cry, but in the end they are right where they are supposed to be...together. I loved it!!!
Well done hon!
XOXO
Nickey
Author's Response:
Thank you my Darling - now aren't you supposed to be WRITING the NEXT CHAPTER OF YOUR DAMN ADDICTIVE STORY??? Love you stax,
Michele
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
WOW! Renee is all sorts of fucked up!!! Poor Bella. It is amazing that she is not more damaged than she already was from having that thing as a 'mother' her whole life. I am so glad that she has the Cullen's as her family. No matter what happens in the future, they will be behind her 110%.
As hard as it is to see Edward struggle with his PTSD, I am glad that you include it because it was such a tramatic experience that it deserves its place in the story.
I don't know if I have told you lately, but I love your dirty, filthy mind (and my hubby likes it too). Sex in the woods..hot, sex after the party..hotter, sex in the studio with her tits against the glass..fuck me sideways..that shit is classic heat that should never be messed with.
But then you have to go and make Bella all secretive and holding back from Edward again! WTF?!? That is evil and you know it. You had better write fast or I am sending Edward over with a single tail and a Sybian.
Excellent chapter!!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
WTF?!? Did you say 5? 5 Chapters???? That is all that is left? That isn't enough, not NEARLY enough! What the hell am I going to do when this is ov...I can't even say the word. If I don't say it, then it isn't real. Is there a 12-step program out there for people addicted to this story? I think I may need professional help to cope with the loss. Maybe a grief councelor. Ahh man, I just can't even think about that right now. {sniffle sniffle}. Going to have a glass of wine.
Ok, I am a little better now. What a fantastically wonderful chapter!!!. So, you know you are my favorite lemon dealer, right? But the part of the chapter I loved the most was the complete fuckery in the hospital. I laughed my ass off at the visual of the scene as Carlisle tried to kick the shit out of Jasper for having sex with Alice. And then to add everyone else in was simply perfect.
The retreat was a nice touch. Protective Domward is sexy as hell!
And Bella is pregnant!!!!! Her and Kate are going to be big bellied together?!? That is too cool for words. They can compare notes on pregnancy and playtime. I love the way your mind works.
Have you given any thought to publishing this??? I would be first in line to buy a copy (actually 2 or 3, I got friends that need to read this).
Love ya lady,
Nickey
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
Twins?!? Boy, Edward never does anything half-way, now does he? And crazy, bi-polar Bella is freakin hilarious! It's like dealing with Sibyl! Poor Edward...I am surprised he has not run away yet.
Comando Dominant at your service! Holy hell! I loved when Edward took all her stuff away, including her doors! That was awesome!!!
But when he called 'Red' and she felt rejected, I actually teared up. It is so easy to relate to her when she is vulnerable like that. You always make me weepy when you write scenes like that.
I do have one issue to mention...butt butter??? {Cringing} Sorry sweetie, that is one place I can not follow. ICK!
But you know, I love you inspite and because of your kinky fucking mind!
XOXO
Nickey
PS. As for Carlisle and Esme...I have to side with Big Daddy C on this one. Esme was allowed to be upset for a little while, but he has apologized and she should let it go since no one else is holding a grudge.
I have two suggestions on what to do. 1. Lock them together in one of the cottages with plenty of food and beverages until they kiss and make-up. 2. Set them up on a date (without there knowledge) at someplace that means something to them, like maybe where Carlisle proposed.
Author's Response:
Hello my sweet friend - Butt butter? Yes I went there - panty-less I might add - I thought you would comment on that! As for C & E, well you know that the kids are going to get involved and their plans aren't always the best but they do have a way of working out.
I love you too my friend xoxo
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
I think I already reviewed this chapter, but since it is MIA, I get to do it again! LOVED it!!!!! I thought it was hilarious when Edward forgot Bella in the car after the doctor's appointment. Their reactions to the news of the twins was so real to life. I love the way you write this.
Esme is seriously out of step with Carlisle. He needs to put her over his knee for a good long twitchie hand session.
And the lemons...ahhh the lemons. You absolutely write my favorite citrus!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
OMG! I was two seconds away from sending my twitchie hand right through the computer screen at you when you damn near gave Carlisle a heart attack! What were you thinking?!? You are so lucky it was only a panick attack...let me tell you.
As for an outtake, I would love to see Carlisle and Esme when they play in the playroom for the first time. That has a hella lot of potential and I can only imagine where that beautiful dirty mind of yours can take them.
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
Damn, even with babies on board these two are hot as hell!!! I wish my pregnancies had been like that. Mine were more like 'touch me and the offending apendage will be dipped in bronze and mounted on the wall'.
I love the idea that Jasper and Edward will be going into business together and Bella and Alice will still be so close. Just the thought of it all is amazing!
And I love that Carlisle proposed to Esme again. It was amazingly sweet!!!!
You always do such an amazing job with these chapters. I don't know how you are able to do anything else but write!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Holy shit! I loved, loved, LOVED this chapter!!!!
The spa was amazing (minus the ho, Suzie). FYI, I loved the actress you chose, she is perfect for a sluty harpie! And I think throwing Reece (I mean Dana) in here was AWESOME!!!!! I love her and her part in here was absolutely perfect.
I am so glad that Bella was finally able to stand up for herself. It shows how much she has grown and changed. She is going to be a great mother and roll-model for her kids. Speaking of which...I really hope we get to see what she is having next chapter. I hate waiting!!!
And thank you for bringing Andy and Brian back. I have missed them. I love the idea of them coming to work for J&E full time. It is the perfect way to keep them around and keep the girls and kids safe.
OMG! The car scene had me laughing my ass off!!! I often wonder why you named this story 'People Like Us' when 'Fuck My Life' seems like a much more appropriate tag line. ;)
I am going to start my begging campaign again...please, please, PLEASE consider publishing this?!? It is truely the best story I have ever read (on here or in paper back form).
I think this Domward needs to see all his sexual glory in print, don't you?!?
XOXO
Nickey
PS. The naked prego picture was a lovely little addition. ;)
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
As always...FUCKING LOVED EVERY AMAZING WORD!!!! I don't know how you do it, but you continue to blow me away with this story.
Their last scene in the house was hot and angsty and tense and just...everything! I felt a twitching hand when she taunted Edward like that. I have to wonder just like he did, will she ever learn?
I'll admit as much as I love the new house, the scene where they left the house brought me to tears. That was their first home. That is where we all fell in love right along with them. Things really are changing.
So, we are trying something new a couple days a week? Very interesting concept. I think that they can make it work, but I am sure they will both hit road blocks along the way. I do not see Bella coming through it without facing some serious punishments, but I think it will make her a better person and them a stronger entity. I can't wait to see it as you write it.
Loved it hon! You totally rock my world!!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
He expects complete honesty from Bella but holds back at every corner when it comes to this movie?!? I DON'T THINK SO! OMG! He is in deep shit! I have had quite enough of his double standards. I expect Edward naked, kneeling outside my room with his paddle of choice in his teeth.
{Wait...let me just savor that image for a moment}
Mmmmmm, that is just too delicious for words. Ok, focus...focus. I loved the scene with Mr Cullen and Miss Swan. That was exceptionally hot! And yes, I very much appreciated the phone sex. ;)
I love that we have more babies on the way and that Bella is only having one this time. I appreciated her little breakdown when she realized the twins weren't nursing anymore. I remember that feeling with my first, but I was more upset over the fact that he was growing out of the baby phase.
Now, back to the evil little cliffy here with Edward and the whore of the month. You know I love you, but so help me, if you make Edward cheat on Bella...you and I are gonna have words!
Love ya!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
LOVED IT!!!!!
You are very right, outside influences can be a bitch and when the communication breaks down, all hell can break loose. Now add in a hormonal Bella and an emo Edward and you have hell on steroids! I am glad the drama didn't ruin Edward's entire time home and I loved when Bella called him out, in her own way.
I loved the play time. I was just thinking that it had been forever since we got to enjoy some play time with our favorite D/s.
OMG! And Jasper saying, she can't come to the phone right now, Darlin' because I have her trussed up like a thanksgiving turkey with stuffing in all the right places - like I said, she will call you back'!'
That was awesome!!!!
Excellent chapter sweetie (as always!)!!!!!
XOXO
Nickey
PS. Play party with a slightly prego Bella...hell yes! And I can not wait till the little chit chat amongst the couples!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Darling Nickey, you kinky beast you!! I'm glad that you liked Jasper's comment, I giggled like a 5 year old when I thought of it and wrote it down - yes, I was actually blushing!!!! Glad you liked the chapter, baby!
Love,
Michele
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS?!? REALLY??? I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!!!!!! You have totally made my night. I would love to read more about this group! They are my favorite fan-fiction family ever! And the title is perfect!!! Just no matter what, remember that we always want more D/s time with Edward and Bella...ALWAYS!!!!!
This was an incredible chapter and as much as I had hoped that Bella would put that harpy slut in her place, what the uncles did was soooo much better!!! I love the uncles. They are horny, crazy bastards, but they are excellent protectors of their own! It was such a well written part of this chapter that I could go on and on about it, but I won't. ;)
I was a little bummed that you completely skipped the play party, but there is always next chapter to make it up to us (wink, wink, nudge, nudge). I know Bella is as big as a house, but even you said we were going to skip forward a little. Come on, give us a little play time...please?
Either way, you know I love you and this story!!!! And I still think you should publish it...just saying. ;)
XOXO
Nickey
PS. Laughed my ass off at the visual of Edward gagging over having to clean up the poop!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Can I tell you how much I needed this chapter tonight? My Twi-sister came into town for BD which I agree was amazing!!! But now that the movie is over and she has headed home I was very bummed out. But then you my beautiful friend posted this and all is right with the world once more!!!
The sex...oh my hottness!!!! I loved all the dirty prego play! You make pregnancy kink hot and that is a serious accomplishment!
I loved the drama of the birth scene and how Edward was there for Bella like no one else could be. And Carlisle holding him in the shower afterwards when he broke down brought me to tears. Epic my friend.
I love that they named the baby after the uncle and when Esme said that Nicholas looked like Edward Sr...you totally stole my heart.
You know I think you are awesome and I could go on for days on everything in this chapter that rocked my world, but it is nearly 2am and I need to sleep.
Excellent chapter my friend!!!! Can wait to read this in hard copy (wink, wink).
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Oh Sweetheart! What an ending! What a story!!!! You have owned me for so long with this, it is only the promise of its continuance that is keeping me from breaking down in tears right now. I know it may be a little while, but I will wait patiently to see how you carry this story further. :)
The scene with her and the kids in the car with those bastards endangering them...I was on edge the whole time. You always pull the truest emotions from me.
Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!!!!! Did I mention I freakin loved this story? This is one of only 3 stories that I have ever read in fandom that I would ever want to reread and I guarantee, I will reread this!!!
Thank you so much Michele for sharing this absolutely amazing story with all of us!!! And I truly believe that you NEED to publish this! I would buy copies for my friends. THAT is how much I believe in this story and the appeal it has to sooooo many!
XOXO & Lots of love,
Nickey
PS. I plan on starting your new story very soon!!!! :)
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64145
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
What an excellent chapter!!! I loved E&C's first meeting and the fact that he has a grandfather that he has the chance to know, fantastic add in!
I love how he and Carlisle interact as if they have been in each others lives all along.
OMC!!! He gave his family ring to Edward and Edward is going to propose?!? {squeal!!!!!} I CAN NOT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
That was an awesome way for him to propose!!! I'll bet any money that he asked Renee's permission and that is why she was all emo during the visit.
The girls are going to flip when Bella delivers the news. By they way, their new lyrics to old songs...very funny!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I love their banter! It is so teesing yet sweet and loving at the same time.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
I really needed this chapter today. RL is kicking my ass hard and not taking any breaks. So the laughter, the smiles and the smooshing was exactly what I needed.
I agree that the line about no panties was the best one Edward said in the bar. That was too funny and too perfect.
I loved it all. The wedding was sweet and a little funny with the vows. I am really going to miss these two after the epi!
Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society. He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent. Enter Bella Swan. Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both? All EPOV. Starts darker, quickly turns humorous. Language, lemons and some violence.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue #1
Ahhhh, poor Edward. He really did have it planned out so nicely. I love that Bella sent him hunting. She is finally finding her balance in this life. And I think it is cool that she has been able to keep in touch with Charlie.
Author's Response:
Hahah yeah he did but of course it couldn't go perfectly. Never does for the poor vamp! I really, really loved that Bella told him to go kill that guy. It showed that not only does she accept his choices, she encourages them. She's changed him in many good ways but I felt that that needed to stay to allow him to be true to himself. And yeah, she still calls Dad and they're working on repairing their relationship!
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Mmmmm, very hot beginning. I love this vampiric Edward. He is not all emo like most people write him.
Author's Response:
:) Thank you, I'm glad you like this Edward. He's definitely not emo, he loves himself very much. Maybe too much as you'll see!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Another excellent chapter! I love that you made Jacob a stalker and her first meal (as well as the scape goat)...fantastic idea.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked that! I must say that killing Jacob was a lot of fun for me. It was highly therapeutic!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
She thought he gave her an STD??? Too funny.
And now she wants him offer her blood options. I can only imagine what Edward will think of that.
Author's Response:
Hee, poor Edward didn't get what he thought he was getting there, did he? She's going to keep him on his toes, no doubt about it!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Cockblocked by a dead guy...classic! I am so glad Jacob did not last longin this story, he is always such a pain.
OME!!! Bella is blocking him unless he eats more humanily? That is just wrong. She needs to be put on vampire prozac..she is the moodiest vampire ever!!!
Author's Response:
Hee! Well she's very much a newborn so of course her mood changes are going to be rather swift. She took the whole vampire thing pretty well all things considered. The refusing to kill is a lot of fun to play with.
It was my pleasure to rid the story and the world of Jacob Black quickly :) Glad you liked the cockblock!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love that Edward took out the bitch of a mother. She had it coming to her.
Edward is the devil..spilling the human blood on himslef like that. Bella better have her 'A' game on or she isn't going to last long.
Author's Response:
Ha, I think she can handle him! He needs someone like her to challenge him or he'd get bored rather quickly :) I'm glad you liked the death of Charlotte, I enjoyed writing it!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Whoa that was a lot of information in there. That is sad that Edward had a shitty upbringing. You just want to wrap your arms around him and his over inflated ego.
I think it is hilarious that Bella wants him to go on a date with Angela. I wonder if his plan to make her jealous will work? His plans have not worked all that great up till now...
Author's Response:
Well, his plan to get attacked work. It was a temporary thing but he did get some fun out of it! We'll see about the date, it's gonna be amusing to see how that plays out with Bella.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
LMAO!!! I love it!!! He finally got Bella to attack him. That was awesome!
Author's Response:
:) Hehe yes, Edward got a win, finally. For how long remains to be seen!
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Cockblocking Rose is evil!!! But I love that Edward is giving in and willing to show Bella more of himself.
Author's Response:
Hee, yeah not much love for Rose after this chapter! But she was pivotal in getting these two to take a step towards being more than lusting after one another. He's already pretty much there but she needs some time, understandably! ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Loved the date. And I don't blame Edward for kissing Angela. He was right, it was the appropriate thing to do at the end of a date and he was trying to not hurt her feelings. I am sure Bella will have a temper tantrum, but once she puts herself in Angela's position, she will forgive him. Especially if he comes home with the smell of human blood on him as I expect will happen from his last thought.
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! He got a little flak for that kiss, more than I expected, but I truly believe he did the right thing as well. He's showing some growth...some. hehe He really likes Angela and compares her so much to Bella in his mind that he legitimately didn't want to hurt her. And I think not kissing her after outright rejecting anything else with her would have been cruel. And yeah, hopefully Bella will listen after the initial rage. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Excellent! I am starting to warm up to mood swing Bella. She's a fucking riot! One minute she is jumping him the next she is smashing his guitar. Can vampires take prozac? LOL.
I can not wait to see Bella with the donated blood. Don't they add something to the blood to stop it from clotting? I bet that will leave a nice little after taste in her mouth. ;)
Author's Response:
Hee, she's just as nuts as he is! She's a lot of fun to write, especially since I only see her through his eyes. Thus, his reactions are very real! She's very volatile, that's for sure. I'll suggest the Prozac to Smugward, I'm sure he'd be happy to give it a try!
Yeah, the feeding should be an interesting experience. I think Smugward's going to be snarky. hehe
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
You had me LMAO as Edward mocked the Vampire Diaries. Too funny! And I loved Bella's reaction to the donated blood. You had to figure it would taste like shit with their hightened senses and all the additives.
New Jersey, huh? I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
Author's Response:
Hee...I love watching shows I watch through his eyes. It's very enlightening! I think he would grow to love Damon if he didn't get more tame. Of course, Edward himself is getting more tame but doesn't quite see that!
Yeah, the donated blood thing was a failure. Edward expected it to be but Bella sure had her hopes on it. hehe We'll see how she does on the hunt.
Jersey is close to NY so yeah...hehe Not quite Smugward's style but it should be fun :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interview With The Vampire
Starla had some excellent questions, but she never asked one that I am dying to know...in al his expierience throughout the years, what is Edward's favorite position???
Loved the interview, but 10 more chapters before he gets some? Seriously? I couldn't hold put 10 more chapters. I don't know how you expect poor horney Edward to. I have to agree with him that you are being kinda cruel. What did that blood thirsty bastard ever do to you? ;)
Author's Response:
Hee, I'll add that to the list of questions to ask him!
It's less than 10 now, as that interview was conducted 3 chapters ago. I really don't have a set number. I know when it's going to happen but how exactly we get there remains to be seen. Sometimes I get wordy. They have other things on their plate, so to speak, that will keep their minds off the sexing for a bit. :) He's a cruel bastard to me, you have no idea what he says and does when you all are not around to protect me!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
He loves her!!! Yea!!!! Shhh, I have a secret...I think she may love him too! ;)
I thought the online house hunting was a cute interaction for them. I can't wait to see what Bella does when she sees the cow. LOL
Author's Response:
Hee, people seem to be excited by the cow. It makes me giggle!
She may! I honestly don't know what is in that girl's head! :) He's making progress and so is she. She's happier now and making allowances for his nature. Progress all the time!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
OMG!!! She wants to keep the cow as a pet and name it Willow? She has got to be the most ass-backwards vampire I have ever scene!
And that teasing in the bedroom was just mean. You tell Edward he can come to my place anytime. Bella doesn't know what a good thing she has with Edward.
Author's Response:
Haha she is definitely ass-backwards. She always has him guessing, as well as me. hehe Though I did know she'd keep the cow. hehe It just seemed fitting for her.
The teasing was mean but he did start it. And he was too daft to realize that she was making some moves on her own while he was pouting. Poor guy!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Oh please tell me the cock block briggade is finally taking a nap??? Poor Edward has waited long enough. He bought her a house a cow for Pete's sake. Give the boy some sex!!!
I loved his inner monolouge about taking care of the cow. Very funny! And the hunt was hot. I think Bella may finally be feeling the positive effects of the vampire lifestyle.
Oh, I am posting an AH story of my own. If you would like to give a try it is called, "Use Somebody". I'd love to get your opinion on it. ;)
Author's Response:
Sure I'd love to check it out as soon as I have a little time to read! I'm trying to get a few FGB pieces done but after that I can find my sanity again. If I don't get to it between this update and next, remind me okay?
As for the brigade, you'll know very soon. You're right, he's made a LOT of progress and she's seeing that so there's no reason for it to continue for much longer!
She's definitely learning that being a vamp can be more interesting than she thought! We'll see soon!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Holy hell! I can't believe you finally let them have alittle fun! It was well worth the wait! I felt bad for Edward when he thought Bella was going to pull away from him again.
So Edward will answer anything??? I am going to be greedy and ask 3:
What is Edward's favorite sexual position?
Now that hs has had Bella as a vamp, which was better? Human Bella or Vampire Bella?
If Bella told him that he needed to go 'vegetarian' if he wanted to keep having sex with her, would he do it?
Author's Response:
From Smugward:
Well hello there NickeyD...aren't you a little forward? That's okay, I like it *smirks*
Hmmm my favorite sexual position? I really, really like to have a woman riding me, watching her beautiful breasts bounce with each movement of her hips, seeing her face as she gets lost in the pleasure that only Edward Junior can bring...yeah, that's my favorite. I love wall sex too...I must do that with Bella whenever we go back home.
Rate my Bellas? That's a bit difficult, don't you think? And if she ever reads it I'm a dead man. I think, ulitimately, vampire Bella was a bit better, because there was a sexiness and confidence there that human Bella didn't have, you know what I'm saying? But that doesn't take anything away from human Bella giving me her innocence either. That was a beautiful and powerful thing that I'd never give back.
If Bella threw down a gauntlet like that? I'd wait her out! She'd never be able to stay away from Edward Junior after having him again. Believe it!
From Nole:
Haha yeah, the time was finally right in my eyes. He's done enough to earn some trust in her eyes...whether or not she loves him yet is another matter. I threw the pulling away thing in to fool you all and I imagine most of you thought I was doing the cockblock again. Surprise :) Glad you liked it!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Oh please, oh please, I REALLY want my husband to be a vamp! Three days of that?!? That is any woman's best dream. ;)
Excellent lemony chapter!!!
I also enjoyed Edward's inner argument. It really is a funny visual imagining him pounding away at Bella while he is yelling at himself in his head. Thank God she isn't the mind reader.
Author's Response:
Ha, oh man, could you imagine if she was? She'd have kicked his ass all over the state if she heard what was going on in that head in regards to her day in and day out :)
I've had several girls wish for the human male to have some vamp stamina. It would probably kill us all, but what a way to go! :)
So glad you liked it, hehe!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue #3
That was a most excellent ending!!! I absolutely love what he did to those three ass holes. It was a fitting punishment for the way they treated Bella. And I love that she wasn't angry with him for doing it.
I love the man that Edward has become because of Bella and I love that she didn't beat the vampire out of him and make him conform to her ideals. She accepted him for the way he is and he changed to make her happy. Fucking perfect!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! I had a blast torturing the boys and letting Smugs slip right into that darker persona that he doesn't show all the time but is still lurking inside.
I'm so glad you love how he turned out. He changed a lot, but he's still fundamentally the same. He just learned to put someone else first and make compromises. So did she for that matter. They both came a long way and I'm so happy with how they turned out.
So happy you loved the way it ended! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'll have some outtakes down the road :)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Bella's Past Outtake
I'm glad you added it. I think it deserves its own place in the story and not just as an out take.
Author's Response:
Definitely! I just wrote it in some kind of nebulous time and this story hasn't really skipped any time but I figured I could afford it here :) Thanks!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
WTF is right! Doesn't Bella know not to talk to strangers? Oh boy, I do not see Edward handling any type of competition well at all. So much for telling her he loved her as soon as he got home, huh?
Author's Response:
Ha, yeah, I'd say he got loveblocked again! And in a very unexpected way. He's not pleased, to say the least ;) You know Bella, she never does the sane thing ;)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I am so glad he said it. I was sorried that Demitri would sife track him some how. I hope she will say it back or at the very least tear the clothes from his body and fuck him senseless. But knowing Bella, she will probably acuse him of saying it to distract her. Guess we will just have to wait and see.
Author's Response:
Haha you never know what she'll do. Heck, I haven't written it yet so I don't 100% know what she'll do. She surprises even me. But I promise, it'll be fun :) That much I do know!
I'm glad he said it too. It was the perfect way for him. :)
Thanks for the review!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
{Doing a happy dance} Yeah!!!! I loved it!!! Excellent chapter!!! She called Charlie and didn't let him bully her around and she loves Edward and knows that he loves her! Perfect! Fuck all the rest! E&B are together and in love!
Author's Response:
Haha thank you! I'm glad you're so into the two of them! She did feel guilty but she knows she's in the right place and with the right vampire :)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Ahhh, he is going to go veggie sometimes? That is so sweet. He loves her so much.
I love how fierce Bella is over protecting what is hers. I really hope she gets to kick Victoria's ass. I know Victoria is older, but maybe Bella will have a secret power up her sleeves. After all, Edward can't hear her thoughts. Maybe there is something else as well.
Author's Response:
Yep! They compromised. He'll hunt with her when he's home and hunt alone when he's out :) I think it works for them! I want him to still be him, albeit a more loving him. hehe
Bella is fierce and she's not about to let Victoria get her claws into her man again. Vicky is older but Bella is stronger and more ragey. hehe We'll see what happens!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I loved it!!! That was awesomw the way Bella called Edward her husband and then kicked Victwhoria's ass!!!!
I hope they get married before or during an epilouge!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! The marriage issue will be addressed, I promise :)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue 2
I loved it! These two are anything but traditional.
Author's Response:
Haha so very true! Traditional doesn't fit them, this did like a glove. So glad you liked it!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cowtake
OMG!!! That was the funniest damn thing I have read in a long time!!! It was classic, the vision you painted of Edward with his hands up the cow's crotch when Bella snapped the picture! Fucking hilarious!!!
Author's Response:
Hahah Thank you! Everyone wanted more Willow and I just imagined Smugs having to help her give birth and it just killed me. I had to share. So happy you liked it. Oh to get my hands on those pictures :)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
OMG! I was laughing so hard when Aro was musing about the show. This was really fucking funny!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! Joss better watch out. When Caius sees it, he might be ready to murder :)
Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Bella is the devil and Jasper and Emmett are her henchmen! I love it!!!
The whole going comando, very sly. And loved the silk nightware. It was a very nice touch. Edward should just wave the white flag in surrender. He doesn't stand a chance.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I LOVE THIS BELLA!!!! I hated how weak SM's Bella was when Edward left. I can not wait to keep reading to see what else she tries. Maybe she will cut herself in front of Jasper. LOL
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I love the Cullens!!! I was pissed that SM made them leave 'like sheep' as Alice said (perfect analogy). I am glad you wrote them so that they actually have an opinion on this and are sticking by Bella.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Excellent chapter! I love how Em and Jasper are there for Bella.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love girl time. And I so appreciate you not making Rose a raging bitch like she is so often portraited.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
First off, Carlisle rocks hard! I am so glad he is going to change Bella if Edward refuses!!!
It is about time that Edward actually removed his head from his ass and took Bella on an actual date with goodbye kiss and all! Now we have some progress. ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Drunk Bella sounds like fun!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I forgot that Bella did not have a chance to expierience the wolves first hand.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I love the non verbal interaction between Jacob and Edward.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Tanya strikes again. That girl brings trouble with her in every story I read. She is probably the reason why Edward never got Bella's calls or messages.
Crap, is Victoria going to kill, torture or change her???
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Is he going to get her a Hummer? That would withstand a pretty signifigant hit.
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
OMG!!! That whole chapter was hilarious!!! I love manipulative- ballsy Bella! I love the comment she made to Carlisle about whether vampires could go into shock! Too funny!!!
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Loved it!!! The new car is perfect and the fact that Bella and Edward actually agree is amazing!
I don't get why Edward considers have physical contact with Bella some sort of competition? It is not like there is a bet...or did I miss something?
I thought it was one of the Denalis who messed with Edward's phone. I didn't expect it to be Kate though. I thought it was Tanya in another ploy to get her claws into Edward.
Author's Response:
he figured out when Bella confronted him about the maybach that she was playing a game and he doesn't want to lose. in reality it is! but more on that later... as for the Denali well i cant let the cat out of the bag on that one either, lets just say there are a few more twists to come. thanks for reading! michele
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Go Team Bella!!! She is so going to kick his virginal ass! LOL
So Vegas, huh? Is he going to propose before or after they get there?
Author's Response:
my lips are sealed but remember alice is invovled so anything can happen! thanks for reading michele
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
An old family recipe?!? Loved it!!! Where do you come up with this stuff???
Poor Bella is so sexually frustrated, I am surprised that she didn't let Edward leave just so she could take care of business herself. Ooooh, there is an idea. She should double click her mouse when she knows he is on her way over. I'd bet the Volvo that he couldn't say no then.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
OMG! I love this Bella! She is wicked smart and just plain wicked. That was so awesome how she used Jasper's power against Edward and everyone else. Loved it!!!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
That girl had better say yes!!! Loved the almost mile high club! Very hot!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I was laughing as I wrote that one, had the let Jasper have a little revenge.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
YEAH!!!! They finally did it! Get married that is. ;)
It is funny cause I was just thinking about this story a couple of days ago wondering when you might update...and here it is!!!
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the lovin!
Author's Response:
We were hard at work while you were thinking of it! Love ESP! Next chapter is in the works, thanks for reading it! :)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Closet sex is hot!! I hope we get a nice of E&B exploring the rest of the school.
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and read, sorry can't give it away. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Totally worth the wait!!! That was hot and sweet and all kinds of sexy!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it and you'll be happy to know that the honeymoon weekend is continuing into the next chapter.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Ahhh, they are too sweet together. Why do I feel this secret is going to blow up in their faces? I see something being sent to Bella Cullen from Vegas. I think it is a good thing that Edward is bullet proof.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Oh dear. I wonder what Emmett has in my mind for Edward.
I love this Edward. He is so much more relaxed with Bella. and the thought of him and her in the shower...good times. LOL
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Edward is so cute the way he is seeing his family in a whole new way. And everytime someone said or thought 'the dance with no pants' I had to giggle. That is too funny.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it. The 'dance with no pants' line was something I heard on the Big Bang Theory show and who else but Emmett could pull that line off so perfectly when saying it out loud. I still laugh myself when I think about it.
Slash: Most of the tenants in Jasper's building were seniors who'd lived there for decades. Dr. Cullen was the exception; that alone was enough to pique Jasper's interest. The fact that Dr. Cullen was dead sexy didn't hurt, either. Sexuality.
Written for SubtlePen in the Winter 2009/2010 cycle of the Twilight Gift Exchange.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23171 Read Count: 524
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Open Heart
What a fantastic love story!