I like how he didn't want to know anything about Bella before meeting her.

Their conversation over lunch was cute.

I love how he asked her to dance but reminded her not to pick on his frame.  Too cute.

Alice and Bella are too funny the way they both are chop stick handicapped.

Wow, she is totally falling for him and I'd bet that he is not far behind.

Poor Bella.  How is she ever going to be around Edward when she wants to eat papers that he has touched?

Hmmm, he is pretty perceptive.

That girl is seriously sick and twisted.  And it is obvious from the way she talks about her 'mamma' that we know what branch of that family tree needs to be cut down and mulched!   I would be very worried about Edward if he didn't have Bella and the rest of the family looking after him.

I am so glad Jessica wasn't actually hurt, but still that whole thing had to have freaked her out.

Bella's human story is so sad.  But I like that Esme was the one who found her and took her to Carlisle to change.

Oh and I loved Emmett's comment about her being a horse theif and it being a hangable offense.  I just love Emmett!

This Lauren is creeptastic!  Sending her used panties?  Can you say, yuck?

On a nicer note, I think it is sweet that Jessica is naming the baby after Mike and Edward.

Bella is in love with him, yeah!!!  And Alice's vision is too cool.  So, Edward will be a vampire by spring time?!?  That is exciting, but now we have to deal with freky nutcase 1 and 2.  This mother/daughter team really creep me out.

Beautiful chapter.  I love that Bella brought the whole family to meet Tricia.  I was worried earlier in the story that Tricia might not survive long enough for them to meet so I was glad to see that happen.

I love that Bella and Edward are back to their horney teenage selves again! ;)

Wow, Edward can really rub Bella the wrong way.  I love what you are doing with Bella's character.  First cheerleader, now homecoming queen nominee plus she plays not only the piano but the cello too?  No wonder the girl is exhusted.

Oh crap!  What the hell is wrong with Bella?

Excellent!  A vegas wedding.  Glad to see Charlie got behind them.  Count on Edward to give Bella what she needed even when she didn't realize she did.

Wow, I am surprised how well all the teachers took both pieces of news.  I'm glad Bella is still planning on going to NY.

Don't mess with Bella.  She is a bad ass. LOL.  I love that she doesn't need Edward to stand up for her, but I love that he does it anyways.

I like that Bella and Edward are making a bucket list.  It is something positive to focus on.

I wonder why Bella is so hesitant to tell people.  Everyone can see something is wrong with her and everyone who knows is nothing but supportive.

Homecoming queen is married to the quarterback of the football team..little cliche, but it works for these two.  They have so much shit being thrown at them right now that they deserve something good.

I can't beleive that E&R and J&A couldn't go through normal chanels and get a license and get married there so Bella could be there.  It's not like they are dying too.

Nice ending..I'm glad the chemo isn't killing her sex drive. ;)

Poor Bella.  You have to wonder how much worse it is going to get before it gets better IF it gets better.

Oh no!  They both get invited to NYU and now Charlie is in an accident.  Crap, how much can this girl take?

That was almost as hard to read as the last chapter.  I don't know how Bella was able to sing much less at her father's funeral.  Very sad.

I loved Charlie's letter to Bella.  It was sad but very loving and just what she needed to hear.

Head injury and bruised hip doesn't stop Bella from shopping for new cloths and panties. LOL.  I love it. ;)

I can't believe how brave Bella is to make this trip and keep up with her treatments.  Chemo is a bitch!!!

Edward's interview broke my heart.

That was really hard to read the part where Bella wants to give up.

No offense, but I hated this chapter.  It was hard to read the journal entries.

The song Bella sang was beautiful!  And I love the fact that she wouldn't accept the scholarship money.  Very Bella.

Is Bella trying to die?  She is susseptable (spelling, I know) to illness but she goes put in the cold rain with no shoes or coat.  Is she giving up?

Thank God the chemo has not killed all of her common sense.  I know the decision to accept the transplant does not come without its downsides, but seriously, if she really loves Edward and wants to stay with him, wouldn't she walk through fire for him as well?

It was sad how she was saying goodbye to all of her teachers.  It seems that she is resigned to the fact that the transplant will not work and this will be her last chance to say what she wants to them.  It was hard to read this one.

They gave her a prom?!?!?  That is awesome!  Everyone needs friends and family like that.  So cool! :)

First Prom, now Christmas?  They truely are the best family anyone could ever have.

I like the idea of the blog for Bella.  She will probably be more honest there than she would be with the people around her.

I like the idea of others seeing and responding to Bella's blog. Maybe it will help her stay positive knowing that she is not alone in this fight.

I loved the web cam confessionals.  Very funny!  It was nice to have a little light since the last few chapters have been very dark.  I worry about the dream Bella had of Renee.  Charlie had dreamed of Renee before he died...is this an omen of things to come?

I'm glad Emmett came through his part of it ok.  Now Bella needs to get better, crossing fingers.

Oh no, please don't say she is dying.  She needs to have her life with Edward and the baby. :(

I loved the dream date.  Very sweet.

That was sweet at the end when they fell asleep together.

Loved it!  It is nice to see Bella so positive.  I loved her declaration to her bed and how she swore that she only cheated on it under durest.  Very funny.

Oooh, Carlisle does not know who he is messing with.  I can't wait to see where these two take it next.

I love the last line you wrote here.  It is so true.  Your home is where your heart is. ;)

Loved the final phase and how even Esme got in on the fun!!!  Bella and Edward are gonna rock the world!!!  I love that things are finally working out for them. ;)

Ahhh, it is bitter sweet to see them all say their goodbyes but knowing that they are heading towards good things.

If you wrote more, I would definately read it!!!  This was an amazing beginning!

Very creative and very, very hot!!!

Phew, I'm glad Alice didn't lose the baby, but how long is Bella going to be lost to them?

Excellent beginning.