This is my first ever review yeah me :-)

Okay so Bella completely spazzed but it wasn't without provocation, Edward allowing other women to kiss him on the lips is just plain disrespectful to his submissive nevermind his girlfriend (because although Edward is Bella's dom they are also in a monogomous relationship) . As for Edward allowing another submissive to kneel in front of him in front of a play party well that just goes beyond being disrespectful it was embarrasing and humilating for Bella the two things that Edward said he wouldn't do to her and that's before he engaged in a sexual act with Bella in front of another woman major fail on his part. Yes Bella was wrong  to fly of the handle she should have safeworded but Bella put's Edward's needs before her own even when it's too her detriment a fault she must sort out if they are to continue having a dom/sub relationship even so Edward completely failed in his role as a dom to respect his sub, does Bella deserve a punishment for dis-obeying the rules, yes of course she does but so does Edward. Edward would shit a brick if Bella behaved the way he did and Bella needs to point that out to him (in a respectful way). I'm far more pissed of at Edward that Bella at the moment I hope Jazz intervenes and tears strips off of Edward.

Maybe i don't understand, as her Dom, her first Dom Edward promised to teach her and guide her through their Dom/sub realtionship which has been rocky at best even he has admitted that he doesn't really know what he is doing, yes he had a somewhat relaxed conversation before the play party and he didn't push to ask the questions she should have asked but Edward as her Dom knows that Bella has low self esteem and he knew that they were going into a situation that would bring those fears to the fore front of her mind, he should as her Dom have prepared her properly for their first play party and he didn't do that, he should be punishing her properly he's not doing so and as much as he commented on the blurry line btween sub/girlfiend he is equally as guilty and he knows it. I just feel that Bella faults were righted and she is working on her part to become a good sub but Edward isn't being held accountable for his faults.

Don't get me wrong I love this story and am enjoying the journey you're taking us and can't wait to see where they go next!

First off, go Carlisle I hope his rips his son a new one, someone needs to.

I can see why Esme was pissed but there were better ways for her to handle the situation, re-enforcing Edward's abandonment was harsh, and potentially damaging to their relationship.

Bella, well she cocked up no doubt but she was caught between a rock and a hard place. It wasn't Bella's place to confess Alice's sins for her and Alice should never have put her in that situation. Did Bella deserve "punishment" that's a tough one, did she deserve the punishment she got no. What Bella did was fair she told Alice she had to confess and she would not keep her secret for her and gave Alice a chance to come clean I wouldn't have done anything different and doubt many other people would either.

What Edward did was nothing short of emotional abuse and i'm quite sickened by him at the moment he knew full well that Bella has abandonment issues, low self-esteem and has just gone through a traumatic experience, and yet he choses to abandon his girlfriend and his sub with no word leaving her to face the paps with no thought and without caring about the ramifications. How can he expect Bella to put her trust in him when he pulls a stunt like this, infact Bella shouldn't trust him after this it was a huge betrayal of Bella's trust and I hope this will be adressed in the next chapter. He knew full well that Bella had a nightmare about him abandoning her and deliberately chose to make that nightmare come true and that is beyond cruel.

I hope Bella thinks long and hard before she allows Edward to collar again because in all of this fuckery it is Edward that has done the most damage to their sub/dom relationship. Bella is an inexperienced sub and as such is expected to make mistakes but Edward is an experienced Dom and should know better his subs well being should come first and foremost.

For every step forward they take they take 10 steps back.

I can't wait to see the next chapter and how they're going to resolve this and if Edward is going to pull his head out of his arse and realise how much of a thoughtless twat he can be!

Do my eye's decieve me did I just read Edward Cullen acting like a grown up instead of having a temper tantrum hallelujah! Finally steps forward no step back betweeen the two of them. I love that Bella wrote in her journal that she wasn't collared when Alice confessed and that she felt she was given a collared punishment because that's exactly what happen and when Edward read that it gave him food for thought.

Love that Edward recognises that the lines in their relationship are blurred and they need to work on defining them.

Rose the beast had me in stitches I hope she rips Jasper a new one too! Pregnancy hormones are so much easier to deal with when you have somewhere to direct the rage.

Nice cliffhanger can't wait to see what happens.

My only complaint, no carlisle :-( maybe he could stop by in the next chapter ya know lol

Okat first off if Edward and Bella are going to be playing infront of Kate and Garrett can you please post a warning That's a hard limit for me I'll just skim that bit it squicks me out.
More steps forward, good communication, very nice now let's move on to the most important part.....The return of Doctor C he was there and then he was gone *sob* if found please send him to me here in snowy Devon, England,.

Liked it a bit concerned that Bella is losing some of her fiestyness and spark but i'm sure that won't last.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

hey sweetie - okay - be warned now - Edward is planning a surprise next chapter - it will come in about half way and you will see the warning signs! But I promise it won't be too bad  - the emphasis is not on Kate and Garrett, but on Bella and Edward and how they respond to each other.

Wow just when I though I couldn't hate Edward any more what an arsehole, If it's true and he knocked up his skank whore it opens up all new questions did Alice know about this before she tried to excuse Twatwards behavior? if she did what does this say about her friendship with Bella if she was my friend she'd be quickly kicked to the curb. If he has knocked up tanya then does Bella need to be tested for STD's if Edward wasn't using condoms with either of them sheesh, as if ruining Bella's hopes and dreams wasn't enough he's risked her sexual health too? And with someone that works in the same hospital as Bella talk about rubbing her nose in it. I hope Bella get her answers and walks any and I hope Edward gets every bit of pain, heartache and humilation he's dished out to bella tenfold. So so pissed off, How on earth there be a HEA after this i don't know, but I can't wait to see where you are going to take this story.

So we now know who the mystery woman is, I have to say I was convinced it was Edward's bio-mum.

Love that Bella got closure with James one arsehole down one to go!

 Loved it! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Damn so he is the daddy, and he what expects Bella to forgive him and accept his son, the child he concieved whilst cheating on her? He seems awfully blase about fathering a child with another woman.