So, what's wrong with going on forever? Oh, yes, carpal tunnel, double vision, injuring your forehead on the key board.

Turning Seth, still able to phase to wolf form. Didn't think of that. Boo-hiss to his father. What a douche bag.

Excellent story, however, I am disappointed. I thought this would be a happy ending, in that the vamps that kidnapped Bella would meet their final death. Painful final death.

When anyone says they won't be responsible if more isn't eaten I'd suggest running as fast as possible to another state.

You bet she was to easy. The first place would be to my father's, the police Chief. Then to an attorney laying out all the facts, if it would be too expensive to fight him in court, then legal documents setting out the parameters for the year. Gotta use the brain that God gave you. Never let them back you into a corner. If they want to play hard ball play right back.

I've always believed when someone uses the terms 'baby' or 'babe' it is because they can't remember the name of the person they are with.  I worked in a field predominately male and found those that constantly cheated of their wife's or girlfriends always used one or both of those terms to the exclusion of the given name. The women that cheated did the same thing. Sweetheart, honey, not to the exclusion of the give name.

As usual to short. I'm the impatient type, I want it all, and I want it now.

How much drama can one person handle. After everything that has happened to her one would think a sixth or seventh sense would develope.

If she only wants the team and nobody trusts Mike and Tyler why would they mention the name of the hotel while Mike and Tyler are in the room? Actually I'm just guessing at Tyler but Mike stood up which would indicate he was in the room when the hotel was mentioned.

Holy molely! Hell of a bunch braver than I.

I'm with the families! Let's move this along and get the scum bags so they can get back to the families.

Wonder how long it will be before anyone realizes she is missing.

Cut off their testicles and penis and stuff them in their mouths. Pour hot tar on what is left of their groins so they don't bleed to death and drop them off in front of the bar.

She has to do what is right for her! Not what everyone else wants. And any person who tells you they understand what a rape/torture victim has gone through by reading the reports is kidding themselves. It's like the male GYN doctor who says the speculum doesn't hurt, ask him if he'd like to have it shoved up his you know what and watch him change his tune.

Teaching folks to think outside the box seems to be the ticket.

Never a good idea to get drunk AND naked.

Good thing this is fiction, otherwise I'd be getting out my soap box and writing about lawyers and forced marriages. I don't get why Bella doesn't let the parents on both sides know about Tanya and the child. It doesn't sound as if Carlisle and Esme know they are grandparents to Selene. That ought to put a kink into the business, as well as Edward being the one to impregnate Bella.

The stories that can come out of the emergency room, what tv shows are made of.

You had John Mayer at the end of the chapter, I am talking about the "John" in the paragraph about 3/4 of the way through the page/chapter. Didn't seem to be in reference to a singer/musician.

Bella sure is brave. If I lived near vampires I would be taking birth control pills ALL the time. Just to be sure I was safe.

All this police involvement and she doesn't think to let them know she was sold by her mother and stepfather and bought by the Cullens. Seems like a six-pack short of a six-pack to me. Yes, I do mean a six-pack short of a six-pack--the gap is way to wide. Someone must be really dumb not to understand the implication.

How does a judge in Arizona have jurisdiction in Washington State? How can a therapist(?) get a judge in another state to give him custody? Doesn't make sense. Course this is your fiction.