i just finished this story. It was good but i wished that you would let see how there sub/dom relationship ended up. and them discussing there past sex life. how did Bella feel about him being bi and how she felt about it. maybe you can do an outtake on it. or a part two...

she should tell him about Jim, as for an outtake from Alice and Jasper as long it isn't repeated in the story.

i would love to see the pictures

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Now that I can do!  look out for them in the next couple of days

great chapter. glad to see you updating more often

i'm voting for the parents telling bella about them.

i'm going to miss this story so much. i was so glad you took it from the one shot it started out to be. i hope that you update your other stories soon.

please update soon  i really can't wait to find out what happens.

i think it was Leah, and noone would suspect her.

i love your story. i look forward to thursday so i can read it. that been said i was wondering if you are going to move this story along after the trip? the question i have for Aro is what did he do to Jessica and Mike. I would really like to know how he handled them. keep up the good work

I was wondering about Edwards sexual past did include sex with Aro?  Shouldn't Bella have know all about before the wedding. I know that you said that there was just a little bdsm but i think thats in the need to know .

i don't know what half of the stuff is on this list and i wouldn't even know where look it up at. i love the story and maybe i will learn a lot. maybe you can do another outtake and tell us what some of the things are that aren't the norm...

great story keep going

this is just to funny, i think she is just messing with him...

Good story, I remember I started reading it a while ago, and you only had a couple of chapters posted. Then my computer broke and I had to get a new one, which I didn't get my saved stories and I had forgot to put it on my favorites list. I hope you are going to finish this story, and the one of your I'm reading.

So who is Casey, I don't remember if you have mentioned that person before.  I hope you update soon or reply and let me know who Casey is.

I will never forget about this story, I will stay with it until you finish it.  I would like to say take your time, but I so want to see what happens next, and besides there isn't much out there worth reading anymore.

I for one am glad you did chapter 13 and this chapter that way. usually when they ship ahead they go back and remember events I like you just use the years and wrote the importan events and got on with it. Can't wait for more.

I hope that they get a happy ending, I can see Alice hating Bella at first but  forgiving because she makes her dad happy.

I couldn't remember why Bella said she couldn't have kids, but I know that my daughter has had endometroisis, and she is about to have her second child in 3 weeks. Granted it wasn't easy, she is in her 30's but she also waited until she was ready to settle down. I don't know if it has effected her sex life thou, she has never said anything about that. I do know she has had to have large cists removed from her overies. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.

Well I hope he gets better at pick up lines.  She lets her guard down.

It was a sweet wedding and I'm glad that Bella got to be part of it. I can see why Alice uninvited Calisle, I wouldn't want him there either.  He would have made all about him. Can't wait for the epi.

Great they had sex, I hope Bella relizes that is all in, and isn't going to hurt her. If anything she is the hurting him.

Well I'm sad it's done but it was time.  I will be watching for your next story as long as it is a Bella and Edward story. I hate when they put them others. I will read it if they are going to end up together. Till next time.

I was hoping that Esme wasn't always that way. I kind had a feeling Calisle was behind how she was. No I don't think Carlisle will ever change, he has his nose up in the air to high. I think he marry Esme to get him to the top, and having the perfit wife. He thinks that is how he got to the top instead of using his smarts.

Hey I have a rec. for you it called Grad Night, by Robzbeanie I don't know if its on here I've been reading it on Fanfiction, and it's finished.

I knew that Carlisle would try to get to her. I hope that it is Bella on the phone, but I have a feeling it's Rose. I hope it's Carlisle's desk he is walking up to, from the teaser.  The only thing I wish is you posted every week instead  of every 2 weeks. I keep looking hoping you have updated sooner.

thanks for the extra, teaser. can't wait for the update.

Well my oldest decide to born butt first, so the doc said C-section would be better, so I had all 3 of mine that way. When my youngest had her first baby 2 years ago I was there for that. She got induced and didn't move along very fast, until the dr broke her water, then put her in the hot tub, and still didn't move her along. an hour later they put her in the hot tub again, and when the nurse went to check the heart beat her little proable dopler would work right so they got her out, hook her back up to the big one, I had went to get me a drink and walk back in and the nurse said I'll be back in 15 mins to check her. I barely got across the room until she was hollering mom I have to push. I call the nurse and she came back and with in 10 mins my granddaughter was there. It had been 3 hrs since the dr. broke her water, and less than 8 hrs since they had induced. She went from 2 to 10 in 30 mins. All she was trying to do was get where she get the epidural. I know it sounds unreal and believe me it was, she only pushed 2 times. Now she is having her 2nd one in Sept. and my oldest is having one in Oct.. My middle daughter was like me she had both hers C-section, but they were both over 8lbs babys. Oh my girls are 31, 28,and 27. I may be one of you older readers but I enjoy most of these stories, In fact my youngest got me into twilight, and they told me about ff. they used to read the Harry Potter ones, but they don't have time anymore. Anyway I'm glad she had the baby and I hope she realizes that Edward is there to stay. Can't wait for the next update.

Is there going to be guy on guy action, without the girls involved? I think Edward should tell Bella a little more about his past in the business. Like if he has done gay porn or if it was only with woman. We aready know that Jasper is Bi, but is Edward and Emmet too. Just kind of wondering.

I hope Bella and Charlie make up, I always hate when a story writes them like this.  I don't know why it don't bother me about her and Renee not being that close.  As for Rose and Emmett I'm not surprise, Alice thou does suprise me.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

It is totally up to you when you post it, the sooner the better thou. I won't be able to read it until late afternoon but that ok because by then I'll be ready to settle down for some quite time reading.  Great chapter by the way.

I hope that Angla isn't the next one. I was thinking it was Sam but I'm not so sure. Now I'm kind of thinking it's a woman whose the stalker and killer who I think are the same person.

Well I would love to read this chapter but the pic you posted to go along with it is covering the left side of the chapter. So I couldn't read but half of the sentences. I don't know if it is how it was posted or if maybe it's my computer.

Why don't you just get rid of Tayna already, we all know she don't care about Edward or the baby. Lets get to the good stuff with Edward and Bella.

I loved the story, glad everyone got a happy ending. I have to ask did you see, American Snipper. It is a really good movie. I'm not one for a war movie but like this story it really isn't all about the war but the effect of what goes on. It made me cry and so did this story.

Well I'm caught up now, I read your one shot and didn't realize you have made it into a story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Glad Bella has found a friend in Roselie, sounds like they had loads of fun.

Hope you get better soon..

Wonder who might have been spying on  them. Could Aro, have someone spying on Bella so he can be CEO instead of Charlie handing over the company to Bella?

I bet James and Aro has something to do with this.  Just because he didn't tell Renee and sent her on an errand.  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

I loved it, great ending. You said your going to do some outtakes. If I remember right, in the beginning Edward said he had tried to be with a man, but that wasn't his scene. Could you do an out take on that.

will there be an epi? I hope he's getting her resturant back for her. I know it he's going to use that letter for the million dollar offer to help with the loan.

Loved the epi, can't wait for the futuretake/outtake to come. 

I can think of a few reason's he would want to have full custody, of Bella's boys. One child support, 2, he could get Rose off his back about having a baby, 3 even thou he's sold the house to 3 different couples he probably thinks he can back out of that and have it back too. I wouldn't put it passed his mother to put it in his head thou and helped him get a lawyer. Please this will be the last straw, when Edward and Bella take the DNA test results in and prove he is nothing to the boys.

I know why he wants the hair test done, he can test for drugs. Depending on how long Bella's hair is he can go back a couple of years to see what kind of drugs were in her hair. I know when I got hired for a job back in the 90's they said then that every inch was like a 90 days, and they took it right from the scalp.  Can't wait for Friday to get here.

I'm pretty sure it wasn't "Jack", surely she would have seen the eyebrow pericing, right. But I'll bet he's related older brother, dad.

Damn, I was hoping that Alice or Jasper would see Bella and help them figure things out. I hope that maybe in the next couple of chapters it happens. Well at least Charlie knows what has happen, I hope that when he finds out what was done to Bella's car he does more checking and finds Emmett's DNA in the gas tank. I hope he really gets what's coming to him.

I hope that James beats the SHIT out of Emmett. So Emmett was part of the security team, wouldn't Angla know him. Or did he enter after they left. I don't really care if we hear from Emmett, he's an demented ass, and needs to be put down, one way or another.

As for Bella not telling Edward, well she didn't really have time. The only problem I have hasn't she said James name in front of Edward, so he should have put 2 and 2 together.

So is the next chapter the chapter they figure things out.  Please don't keep up waiting to much longer. I want her babies to be all right, and her and Edward to make a life together. I also want them to get Emmett.  I hope that Jasper shows up to help Edward. Can't wait until Friday

Okay, you said her dr. was Edward, and now in this chapter you suggested he was married to someone name Jane. If that was true and he's the one she met in Vegas that means he cheated on her. If that's the case and Bella finds out it will kill her after what Emmett did to her. Please tell me that she is married to a brother and not Edward, or even they got her name wrong and who she was married to, and it is really Esme and is married to Carlisle. Anything but you can't let Bella think she is attracted to a married man to much longer.

Oh I can bet that one of her girlfriends is feeding Emmett info, on what going on with Bella. I hate to think that Tayna, is the one, but I'll bet it is one of them from the shop. I know Edward said he seen Emmett mother when they came in but how did she find out what room Bella was in? I know that hospitals, don't give that info out freely. I know this because 2 of my daugthers just had babies in the last 6 months, in different hospitals, in different states. One of the hospitals was lock up and you had to be on the list of visiters.

Emmett is a real ass, but we already new that. I hope Rose comes to her senses and finds out what kind of Asshole she has.  Bella needs to wise up too, and start checking things out. I hope she sees her necklace and earrings on Roselie, and accuse her of stealing it. That way maybe Rose will know that Emmett stole from Bella, of course she will think that she is just lieing.

I hope that this stunt puts Emmett in jail once and for all.  With being said I can't wait for Friday. I think Edward is going to be in shock when he finds out that the boys are his, and that Bella is Jill. As for Bella, I think deep down she already knows because of how she feels when touches her, she's just playing it off as him being a good man, that she could have feeling for.