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Broil by SexylexiCullen, ashma0407 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella, with help, once escaped her abuser. Can she find her strength once again to help her daughter out of the same situation? Rated M. O/S Dark/AH/OOC/Violence/lemon. Collaboration between ashma0407 and I which we donated to Fans against domestic violence. R&R

 

Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, and Alice.....Bree and Riley too.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8595 Read Count: 2458
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hadn't read this one before. Sad, but so good. 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717327
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I love when you update this story. Something is obviously going down with Carlisle and CJ. Hmmmm

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

That was good to hear Edward's thoughts on his time in the service. It's such a part of who he is, so that gave us some good insight. I also think he's probably right about Bella having depression, but is it from trauma or chemical? 

Good chapter (of course :o)!

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Hopefully these two will learn some communication skills!  Geez!

Another great chapter (as well as the last 8...I had to catch up :o).

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I'm glad they really are back on track (for now, (sigh)). The baby is coming soon, right?

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Another couple of good chapters. Poor Bella...I hope Edward convinces her to see a therapist. 

I hope readers aren't giving you a hard time when there's a delay. If they do, I hope you are able to ignore them. Just remember that most of us respect that you have an actual life to live and sometimes that means a delay. It's called life. We get it. :o)

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I just got caught up with the last several chapters. I'm so glad to see this updated. They are finally moving forward.

Cj, huh, that guy reallllly sounds like bad news. It's nice to see that Edward won't go down paths he's not comfortable with, even though he isn't always sure what he's doing. I like that he believes in his own ability to make rational decisions. 

I just started getting myself updated on the last (5) Storm chapters and then got kicked off the internet (I was at a hospital). So, I have to finish those last 3 tonight, so I'll be all caught up. Such great stories...all of them! :o)

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Just caught up with the last several chapters. Things are getting interesting. 

I don't understand the Bella hate either. She's a bit emotional and immature, but she's also very young and is in need of a good therapist. She's not a bad person though, just flawed. I don't understand reading stories a person doesn't like either. I never leave bad reviews, I just move onto something else.

I really like this story. Even though it's a mob story, it's very different from the Storm series (which I love!). I like that it's different and the characters are different. Keep up the good writing and ignore the haters. :0)

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

This story is so great! It was difficult reading what Jake did to Bella, but I'm so glad Edward was able to figure out what was really going on and I'm sooooo glad he took care of that problem! ;o) It's funny, because I'm mostly a pasifist, but when someone abuses women/children, that goes out the window. I just can't help it.

I was getting caught up last night on FF (I hadn't read for a few days) and then, the story disappeared. So glad I could read it here. I always review your stories as Guest on FF, cause I never remember my password. ;o) But, I've been following you since early on in Quiet Storm and love them all. It pisses me off that people give you a hard time about updates. Firstly, because you are one of the most consistent with updates, and, secondly, we aren't paying to read your great stories, so what is there to complain about? Some people are just a-holes! Please ignore them and know you have SO MANY fans of your stories who respect your time. Whenver you update Storm and Offbeat, I'll be there to read them, but in the meantime, I'm loving this story! Thank you for sharing your gift!

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Glad to see these folks back. I'm anxious to see where you take this story. So good!

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Glad to see you back! 

Good chapters. I'm glad to see E & B FINALLY really talking. They need to teach more Communication 101 over there in Jersey! ;o)

 

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

So, sometimes stupid shit pops into my head at weird times...like when I first wake up. I think in my review from chapter 67 I referred to them living in Jersey, even though I know it's Brooklyn. I do know my tri state area, because I lived in NYC for about four years. I can only blame it on the late hour/being tired. ;0)

Hope you are having a great weekend!

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Poor Edward. ;o) 

I always enjoy catching up on this story. 

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

That was great! He's so adorable with her...so sensitive to her needs, her history. :o)

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Welcome back! I'm curious to see how things play out with CJ arrested. :o)

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Wow, he is changing. I hope Jasper never loses that disgust for that part of the job. I hope Edward can get back on track with Bella. :o(

(I always have faith in you and your stories. :o)

Reviewer: GrnPanther Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Wow! That surprised me a bit. I wonder what Riley wanted Jasper for...or did Colleoni just set him up? Hmmm

I think Bella is gonna pop soon! :o)