Reviews by patch138
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

why does felix always have to be the bad guy...kinda makes ya feel sorry for him...i bet he will become her friend before its all over...

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

I kinda feel bad for felix...at least he's finally realized that what he's been doing is wrong..wonder if he'll save her at the end...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I got my post....He's such a creepy bastard! Ewww...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

wow...gonna be a long dark road...

 

~tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

Im kinda shocked that She didnt even flinch at the mention of Aro being the first to "plant the seed"... I dont remember Esme mentioning that to her...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

wow...i remember my first pap test...*shivers* 

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

her memories are trying to surface....I would love to know what Phil is telling Renee...she has to be wondering whats happening with Bella, since she cant see her...

 

~tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

finally, glad to see you made it safely!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

wonder where the picture in her head came from...a memory of some sort??

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Thanks for the view into Esme's world, I knew there was more to her than Bella was seeing...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

The really scary part to all of this is that somewhere out there this could be happening right now...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Crap...wonder if he's gonna tell Aro...who am i kidding, of course he is!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I cant help but wonder what happened to Renee and Phil...And if Felix told anyone about her dad....

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy anniversary! Spent teh day at my cousins wedding...must be a good day to get married!

 

I am a little nervous for the next chapter...ok, maybe more than a little...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

wow, I was worried how that whole event would go...Now whats gonna happen to Bella?

~Tiffany

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514952
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

man...i have a bad feeling about this...i really hope that Jake isnt in on all of this...


~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

For some reason it doesnt surprise me that Jake was involved...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! how did he find them???

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

OMG...HE KILLED HIM!!!!!what will happen when Edward and teh girls find out their gone??!!!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: The Training School Saga

well, the tracking device should help...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

ohhh....as much as i hate him...he still hasnt had enough torture for what he's done...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I'd love to read it!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

This has been one crazy ride! Can not wait to the how it ties together in the end. I knew Aro would have a fun time with him!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow, Its finally over...is it weird that im kinda sad about that? I guess I'll jsut have to buy the book when it comes out and put it on my fanfiction shelf!

 

~Tiffany

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625275
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

oh my...shits gonna hit the fan when they tell him tomorrow...i love teh interaction with Esme in teh beginning of the chapter, so sweet!!


~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

so sweet! and her freak out...lol, guess that would be normal...Glad ur here to stay!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate Carlise right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I was really worried about the punishment, but im so proud of Edward for teh way he handled it! adn Bella finally told him about Carlise!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Its so not what i thought it would be...but amazing in its self!


~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

GRRR!! I thought for sure it would be Carlisle or someone else...now i dont know!!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I honestly cant blame her for asking him to let her go...she never really had a fighting chance in all this...its that saying all over again.If you love something set it free; If it comes back to you, it's yours; If it doesn't, It never was...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Wow, amazing ending to an amazing story, I'll never forget you telling me to just hang on til the 12th chapter...So glad i DID!!

~Tiffany

Muffin Man by JustBiteMePlease Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

When Bella's sexy new neighbor insists on teasing her, she bakes him muffins. And he takes a bite. AU AH Bella/Carlisle


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2286 Read Count: 519
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Muffin Man

that was fuck hot! who knew muffins would make such an impression!??!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and rating ! Glad you liked it :)

Taming The Bear by AzureEyedI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Emmett's wish for a tryst with his brother's wife takes a turn he never expected. O/S for winner of author auction from The Fandom Gives Back. MATURE for lemons of the BDSM variety. I mean it. Don't try this at home. If you're under 18 or can't buy porn legally, turn away now!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4724 Read Count: 1432
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Taming The Bear

Nice...had a feeling that it was rose...sneaky bitch...LOL

 

~Tiffany

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ohhhh, just came across this little ditty...cant wait to read more already....I'm sucked in!!



Author's Response:

Well, welcome to Ripple Effect. I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i have a bad feeling about this...hes gonna go psycho isnt he....

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG!!! I should have seen that coming!!!!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!! I bet she jsut choked on her drink...

 

~TIffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

thanks for the insight into him...yum...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

:)

 

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i love the way they interact together...when he gets to demanding, she puts her foot down...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was HOT...Lucky Bitch...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Anything with Edward is HOT lol...thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Tanya...stupid bitch...knew shed try to fuck things up..

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i bet it wont be much longer till Edward spills the beans....

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

cavemen...there any more where they came from?

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Enjoyed the chapter...Dont let people push you into posting something jsut because its the "due day"..Write for yourself and be pleased with what you do...even if it takes a little longer than u might want...Real life gets in teh way...PAYING jobs get in the way...If they dont wanna wait on it, then they can find something else to read...no one is forcing them!!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Im glad seth went to her...they needed to talk that out...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I guess i can understand the ban against seth.for now, I have a feeling the Edward's gonna be worse than he let on...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bella had absolutely every right to do what she did, im so glad she stood her ground, Yay for her..in the car...its so gonna be Damon...

as for story rec's..personality by angelanharvey3. Totally consumed my life for about 6 days while i read...its been a LONG time since a story has done that.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I wanna see the visit, but i want the confrontation too...maybe do that part in Edwards POV and then switch to Bellas for the visit...

 

~Tiffany

 

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

why must you tease me!?!??!?!

 

~tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It was kinda predictable, but not the partabout her mom..stupid bitch...

~tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope that Edward doesnt get into too much more trouble...it was more Renee's fault anyway....lol

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thoughts are with you, be safe while traveling and see you next chapter

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OH no...Its a good thing she didnt hear that while in the hospital...she'd have really flipped out!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Im kinda surprised with this Charlie and Renee...Renee I wanna smack...Charlie i just am not sure what hes thinking sometimes...I wouldnt have thought he would have pushed so hard for them to get married...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I hope he hits him....

 

~Tiffany

Summary:

In a world that is rapidly being overrun by zombies, a group people from different walks of life converge, while learning to live and love amongst the ruins of their old lives. AH. Language, gore, humor, lemons. Indie TwiFic Award Nominee! stories/1619/images/Love_and_Zombies_banner.jpg


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61045 Read Count: 8473
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Beginning

Im finding out that zombie stories are quickly becoming my faves...lets see how this pans out...Shall we??

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I hope that I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option

oh dear...wonder where all of their paths are gonna cross..

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

It doesn't take too long

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer

i LOVE the way you ties felix in! And rose!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 On the Road Again

woohoo alice is psychic!...should come in handy!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I hope so lol

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spoons Annoy Me

awww, her hair...but at least shes still alive!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I know..i usually find a way to give Alice longer hair, but the situation screamed for it to happen this time lol

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 To WallyWorld We Go!

dun dun dun!!!!!!! Now its gonna get really good!!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I'd like to think it does!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Incoming!

wow, im kinda shocked Tanya showed up...nice!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Yeah, she'll be around for a while just to annoy people lol

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Game Plans

at least they're working together now....

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

yeah, the whole mutual survival thing cures a lot, doesn't it? lol

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Race is On

id say we're about due for some drama at the hospital..

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I'd have to say that you're right

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Luck is Always Two-Faced

had to giggle at the "double tap"...Lesson number 4...LOL

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I had to do it lol

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Stupid Smart People

awww, i wanna hug him!!! Jasper has seen so much in just a short life...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Yes he has, poor kid

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Thank You's Target Practice and....Bait?

I have to agree with Seth...it could have been a lot worse..but i have a feeling that its not over yet...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I doubt it is too

Thank you!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Missing

Carlisle is still determined that he can save Esme and i hope he can, but i wonder how long it will take before the others reallize thats what hes doing..

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

I think it might take a while, but things are always changing. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Two Months

EWWW Ewww EWWW!!! It was more the sex that grossed me out than her dinner..*shiver*

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

lol I had to remind everyone that this was a horror story hun :-)

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Where There Is Smoke....................

good for you! Write for yourself and dont give a shit about what other peopl elike or dont like....if they stop reading and move on...who cares...dont like it...Im here til the end...even if that means its jsut you and me...

oh...DUnDUN DUN!! wonder what carlises gonna do when they find out what he's doing down there...

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

thanks so much for sticking with me and my craziness *hugs*

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?

u do what you gotta do...its your story, and if you dont tell us, we'd never know any different!!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

thanks hun!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: What Can Go Wrong Will

At least for the most part they're ok...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

maybe *evil laugh*

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Blondes and Bombshells

Real life takes top priority sometimes...happens to everyone...*Hugs*

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

thanks for understanding hun *hugs*

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Five Years Later.....

I understand ur feelings about ending the story, but i think you did it well!

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

thank you hun :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366885
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: patch138 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Gonna Make Fools

glad to see another chapter! starting to hate ff.net so its great to have somewhere else to follow you!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: First Date Insanity

what a date!!  is she gonna talk to alice and rose about what happend to him after??

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

No. By the time she sees Alice and Rose again, she'll have put it out of her mind, not finding any reason not to trust what Edward tells her.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island

very interesting convo...and i'd have totally smacked Edward for being a know it all...

 

~Tiffany

 

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: He's So Yummy

awww, bella needs to open up a littel more to him....

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Why Can't You Stay

Totally fucking typical!!! Dick brain move! Grrr...lol Cant wait to see what alice says to him!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Walk Away

Amazing...and im glad she didnt jsut brush off what happened...and she'll remember that too!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moment of Perfection

LOVE IT!!!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Angry Men and Farfegnugen

totally LOL'd at drunkward...he's funny, and totally gonna believe what ever they tell him...

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'm Not Afraid of You

cant wait to see what Edward has planned!



Author's Response:

I'll just say this ... By the time the chapter was over, I was mega-jealous of my own damn character. It's that good!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: You Got My Head Spinnin

perfect...so perfect!!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All I Needed

loved that little game!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: I Won't Back Down

loved the after lunch ritual! Nice touch...was kinda expecting him to try and shoot the gun and Jam his shoulder or something...lol

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Morning in the Meadow

awww, how sweet! And i would totally love to see that as an outtake...esme being all fiesty...could be interesting!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

We will write that idea down for once the story ends. We're making a list of scenes and chapters that might be interesting to see from other characters POV and we'll add your idea to the list.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

awesome! thanks!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Longest Day

Im proud of Bella for not punching Mary....I probably would have...;)

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

awesome chapter, Love the back story of her scar...cant wait to see what happens at teh party!



Author's Response:

Thanks! She's got a little more backstory to give too. But first, she has to get through the party.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Drive

i knew he would come and get her!

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

There was never a doubt in anyone's mind except Bella's.  Kate could tell Yummy was coming anyway and knew if Bella felt like it was her choice, things would go much smoother.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Next Contestant

I bet he looked smokin hot like that! i can totally see the scene from remember me where he hits the guy in the street...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

So hot! And a little like in Remember Me. He's waited so long for Bella and there was no way he was going to let anyone mess with her!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: New Start

Have lots of fun and enjoy the time away! So much accomplished in this chapter...Cant wait to see whats coming next!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: The Past Laid Bare

Amazing chapter...Could have used a tissue warning tho...lol Glad to see her open up to Edward about some of her past...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Ah! That's what I forgot!! I put the warning on FF.  I will go add it to TWCSL right now!  Sorry!!  But really glad you liked the chapter all the same!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: That's How You Know

Awww, I love Esme, shes like what every girl wishes she could have as a mother figure...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

That's the most amazing thing to me about writing Esme. She gets it right because she cares enough and takes the time. Too many of us never get to know that, so now we can through Esme!

High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Meeting

looking forward to seeing where you're going to take us on this journey!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: patch138 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Renesmee

I think Jake too that well...but i dont see him staying...

 

~Tiffany