Reviews by AzraCullen
Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53869
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

I wasnt sure how i felt about it at the start, but i think i like it! the story is great! Im a londoner so i LOVE all the UK stuff.

One thing though, why do you have these massive gaps between lines? its a tiny bit strange.



Author's Response:

I know! The gaps annoy me too, I don't know why they're there, I think it's because I can't upload the document, so I have to paste it in, and that's just the format, it would take me HOURS to delete the spaces between the whole thing. Sorry about that, I know it's a pain, but c'est la vie :(

Glad you're enjoying it though, thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

ah- not to worry mate. Cant wait to read more...really excited about this story! x

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Family Time Part I

i love the face touching. So sexy without all the smut! not that smut isnt good btw. lol.

And Jacob needs to learn his place. Hes a friggin driver. Where does he get off being rude?!

Cant wait for more! x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

Bella couldnt be more fickle even if she tried. She sees this vampire kill, yet a few days later shes in his arms? realistically, that doesnt make sense. Nobody in their right mind would process any of the events that way, and that quickly.



Author's Response:

well if you dont like it, you dont have to read it. thanks for the review anyhow :) xx

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

Good chapter- i think i would definitely act the same as Bella is acting. Because technically, he is a bit of a whore- he called on tanya for a booty call didnt he? he cant just expect her to forget that.

I like that shes finally, even though its in this little way, taking control of herself. He cant make her change her thoughts, and im glad he cant read her mind- he deserves some angst after what hes put bella through!

cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

hehe well karmas a biotch haha And our little Eddie will pay :) however little bella probably cant stand the heat of the kitchen so she is being silly messing with a vampire, so eddie is gna get his own back too. but thats angsty stories for you :) I'm glad your stil reading. And the next chapter wil be up as soon as i can :) xx

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189019
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dude

i highly encourage you to extend this- some backstory of how they met, and then the future? its SO GOOD! x



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm definitely thinking about going back to their first meeting, first date, first sex, some football/bonding with the boys, then after stuff like her meeting the family and them dealing with the scrutiny of the press and the playoff pressure.  I think I'd have a lot of fun writing it so I'm definitely keeping the idea open. Hehe Like I don't have enough going on, but I have the bug on this one.  Thanks for leaving me a review!

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved it, so i will def read whatever you put up- are you on fanfiction by any chance? i'll fav u there too.



Author's Response:

I am on fanfiction, under author nolebucgrl.  Here's a link and thank you so much :)  http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1901714/Nolebucgrl

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you're welcome girly! x



Author's Response:

I saw you mark it :) Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 21077
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just read this through from start to finish. Got to say, i really don't like Bella. She thinks just becuase she apologised some lame ass apology, withuot anyone hearing it, or her changing her attitude in front of her friends, it makes it better? She's just a sheep.

I hope Edward meets someone in your story who is actually a niceperson, and isnt ashamed of Edward. Becuase hes unique, and theres perfections in imperfections.

I like the thought of your story though, definitely a good idea.

Are you on fanficion? i'll add u there.

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I feel really sad after reading this chapter. Is this how people really are?

Rosalie- once a bitch, always a bitch- A leopard never changes its spots.

I really want to see bella be ONE person. Right now shes just so many different personalities, i just wonder who she really is.

and Edward and his friends can definitely do better than that.

good chap- cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey AzraCullen, thanks for reviewing! I think some people in high school and in adulthood can be like this! Hope you enjoy chapter 10 and 11!