Reviews by dragonfly
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

and the mystery deepens ... love this story ... thank you for sharing it with us

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

oh you left me hanging ... hurry and update ... I'm enjoying your story so very much

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

and the plot thickens ... hurry and update

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

excellent chapter ... and Charlie is going to be a force to be reckoned with  I just know it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

what an awesome chapter ... love the discussion between A & R ... love that E stepped in when he felt the need

 

eager to see B & E dating



Author's Response:

I was worried how people would feel about Edward stopping Rosalie from having a major fit. I'm glad that you liked it.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

excellent chapter

I love the subtle way Bella is being folded into their family.



Author's Response:

I figure that it was the only way to make it so Bella wouldn't go screaming to the cops.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

excellent ... the compassion comes through



Author's Response:

Thanks... I always sae Bella as a wonderfully compassionate person.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

yes to the session with Edward

would love to see something from Edward POV

excellent chapter ... love the bit with Alice



Author's Response:

I will do my best to give everyone what the want to see..

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

Absolutely love your story! I was so excited to see an update. Love seeing Edward and Bella start to connect!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

WOW, what a chapter.

Alice's outburst and pushing is so "HER".

Rosalie and the spanking  was/is intense.

Eager for the update.



Author's Response:

I think writing Alice is the most fun. Her character has so many sides to it that the possibilites are endless. I'll give you a little peak Alice's POV is up next.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

Loved LOVED LOVED Alice's POV. What a powerful chapter. Alice showed that she really has a big heart. Love the way she took charge.



Author's Response:

I like the idea of little Alice being the strong one for once. She has such a big heart that it just has to embrace everyone she meets.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Family Time

Awesome chapter. Love the look into the family relationships and goings on. I was so excited to see your chapter as I LOVE your story! Hope life settles down for you.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your continued support. It really helps me want to write more.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

what a lovely chapter ... the flashback was a story unto itself

the scene in the music room was both heart wrenching and romantic all wrapped together

as for posting, do what works best for you ... I love this story ... so original & different ... I just want it to continue ... happy either way



Author's Response:

Thank You for your support. I never exspected this story to take off the way it has.

 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

My sympathies to you and the families affected by tragedy. Family comes first.

Excellent chapter. Lot's of deep emotion. I have to say that any update from you makes me stop and NEED to read it through. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

Thank You!

 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

intense ... love it ... awesome ... the talk between Edward and Rosalie was a great segway into the family meeting



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

excellent chapter

great end of the meeting - love the reminder Edward gives about him being the head of the house

great lemons



Author's Response:

Thanks. I like Edward with a firm hand.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

I was really happy to see that you posted. Thank you for sharing your story and your time to write it.

I really like seeing the girls bonding and sharing. Informing Bella of "how things work" is an excellent idea. Keep going with this. Maybe Edward could share his viewpoint too.



Author's Response:

The next few chapters will be about this topic. I'm glad to know that you like it, and won't get bored. Alice is up next. I hope to have it up in the next couple of days.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

what a wonderful glimpse into all of Alice's doings

eager to see Edward coming back into the story

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

Excellent ... Fabulous emotions. The intensity at the end was awesome.

My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 BPOV

enjoyed the fluff and comments ... the final laughter was a really good touch



Author's Response:

Hello there new reader :)

You rock my world reading and reviewing this ...

The fluff wont last for long ... you'll be moving onto the angst soon :P

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: My Happy Ending?

awk AWK ... you stopped

oh yeah, I can go to the next chapter already

off to clear up the angst ... great chapter BTW

High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: 9. Choices

I'm just finding your story ... loving the interaction and the angst. Excellent chapter as Bella comes to terms with "what" she is.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: 13. Something Else

Yikes ... cliffhanger ... oh .. yeah ... I can keep reading ... YAY!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: 16. Perspective

YIKES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh NO ... oh NO NO NO!

Hope this works out okay.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Hudson

Yay for the calvary!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Flight

love the plotting ... hope we get to see more of it

I'm also really intrigued about what Carlisle comes up with.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Escape

So I'm completely baffled as to Bella's plan ... you have me completely engrossed in this story. I can't even imagine what those that couldn't read the next chapter right away were feeling ... I'd be insane waiting for an update.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: 20. A Losing Battle

intense

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22. Waiting for Absolution

WOW! Intense story ... I'm overwhelmed for Emmett.

 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: 24. Wolves Defiant

you are really good at cliffhangers ...

hmmmm, let me restate that ...

you have a really "evil" ability to use cliffhangers ...

update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: 25. A new order

they are going to need to be careful ... a law unto themselves ... kind of scary

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

ADKOM banner

Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Excellent scene. I love that Edward is building back Bella's trust in him.

Would love to see more input from Jasper and Carlisle.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Fun fight practice ... love that Bella took down Em.

Poor Ang ... hope those pics don't work Bella up too much. She needs to keep her wits about her.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

love the evolution in this chapter ... I'm going to be very sad when this story ends

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

Right now ... 

Not liking this ...not at all ... I'm conting on that HEA ending that you promised.



Author's Response:

You will definately get it too. We just have a little way to go before we get there. thanks for reviewing and sticking with the story, I appreciate it. :-)

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

heartbreaking chapter

sounds like we are moving on to the good stuff though

thanks for the  update ... excellent chapter as always

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Everyone is struggling so much. Hoping they all heal.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Oh I am liking Bella's emerging strength ... and love love love Carlisle's fierce protectiveness of all his family. He really knows how to protect them from themselves as well (that doesn't quite make sense except in my little brain).

Edward needed Garrett to reign him in this time round ... good for Garrett.

& love the scene with Jasper and Alice .... theyare so good together.

So glad E & B are making up ... can't wait for the next chapter. You are so good at this.



Author's Response:

thank you so much - yeah Carlisle is awesome! *sigh*

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

LOL short but awesome. Wouldn't know there was writer's block from reading it. Love love love Edward's and Bella's talks and growth. Both so very insightful! The fight between Alice and Bella was fantastic. I could "feel" it! Looking forward to next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review and encouraging words - it helps a lot!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I found your story last week. I've become completely and totally addicted to it. WoW! Not sure I wouldn't have reach in a throttled someone if I had to wait for each chapter to post before I could read it. I would have quite plainly gone insane waiting. Love Love Love your characters. You've kept their personalities cannon while creating such a fantastic story around them.

Eager to see the next chapter!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'm so glad I found your story... it's such fun to read.

I love the emotions in this chapter... Bella's need to feel & Rose/Emmett's excitement.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

such an excellent story .. it keeps getting better and better

definitely a favorite



Author's Response:

thank you!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter. Awesome wedding. Even more aswesome honeymoon days, well except when Edward decided to be a moron.

I thought you were going to leave Edward unconscious at the end of the chapter. I was all prepared to be pissed for the cliffie. Thankfully, you woke him at the last minute so I take back all the evil thoughts I was thinking about you.

Hurry and post again!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

excellent chapter

love the glimpse into Edward "the star" & how Bella might fit in to that

great ending with Charlie ... eager to see how this unfolds



Author's Response:

thanks for the review

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

WOW WOW WOW ... that was intense. I became completely enthralled with this chapter. You did an aswesome job of relating the feelings, emotions, the struggles ... just WOW!

 

Thank you for sharing this gift of writing that you have with us readers.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your incredibly kind words

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I love this story. Only found it recently and read 40 chapters over a week time period. I was devasted when I had to start waiting for the next chapter. You do an awesome job updating regularly.

You have created such a wonderful family and plot. I am loving how this story is evolving. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading it! :)

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

fantastic chapter ... love the interview and the session back at home is ... well ... AWESOME



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Love the scenes with Edward defending what is HIS.



Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Awesome chapter ... I left home in the wee hours of Saturday morning feeling sad that I would have to wait till I came home next weekend to read PLU. At the airport, I realized you had uploaded the next chapter and I had time to download the page and read on the plane ... and then I've read a little l more each night since arriving. Just now finishing ... AWESOME.

Love the mid-week play, love the advice from the boys especially Carlisle and love the homework from Paul.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

great chapter ... love the emotional twists and turns

would love a chapter with more detail on the outings ... some more of the public stuff ... it's intriguing to see the glamorous Edward and Bella learning to cope



Author's Response:

hmmm - okay let's see what I can do for you! xoxo

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Excellent chapter ... loved the look into Bella's artistic passion ... but oooo the repercusions. Yikes!

May the New Year bring many blessings!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

oh oh oh <jumping up and down madly waving hand in the air>

can I vote now?

yes yes yes

loved the chapter

love the story

they are all so real to me

 

did I mention that I vote YES t a sequel?



Author's Response:

My Dearest Dragonfly,

NO MORE COFFEE FOR YOU!!! Thank you so much for your comments - so I'm guessing that you want some more of these crazy characters?? Is that a yes? okay, so to feed your habit, there will be an outtake posted this week - keep an eye out for it and remember - herbal tea only xoxo

Michele

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Awesome chapter ... hugs about the week. This next week should be better ... I hope.

Funny tidbit ... before I opened this chapter to read (& I was thrilled to see the update by the way), I took note at the number of words in this story thinking to myself "wish all my favorite stories were this well written and were as long as this wonderful story!"

On a more serious note, I also thought to myself that you should really be writing for a living ... seriously, you are that good. If you do choose to go that routed, please please please let me know ... I will be buying your book.

HUGS for a better week ahead!



Author's Response:

Oh DF, you are such a flatterer! Thank you so much for your kind and generous words. Thank you so much for your comments and review.

xoxo

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

love the insight into Calisle and Esme ... you portray them so very well

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Great chapter ... Your chacters are like comfortable friends of mine that I can't wait to take out for play. Favorite part was Carlisle when he was in the dog house. Would live to be a fly on the wall when. That comes up in privacy of their own home

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Wow "intense" doesn't even being to describe that chapter. Fantastic as always.



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Awesome chapter! Love the mix of strength and vulnerability. You had me snickering about the car and Bella's rection. It's great to see Edward finally letting Brian be a friend as well as employee.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

AWK ... Only 4 or 5 chapters left! AWK ... What will I do? I love these characters and this story. You've brought them to life over the past year that I've been reading. Loved this chapter. The arrangement is going o be interesting. Bella is learning. Before it would have been her taken out into the car and spanked ... Would love to see a glimpse of what transpired with Jasper and Alice on that incident. I can only imagine Jasper's anger and embarrassment that made him make Alice apologize to her brother as Sir. Loved the pics of the house. So beautiful.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

What a fantastic chapter. Excellent contrast between home/family life and the job. Love that Irena is making things difficult. Loved that Garret the dominant came forth there at the end. Hoping to see some of Edward and Bella together at the set at some point. Edward doesn't give Bella enough credit sometimes. Maybe Brian and Anderson can help out knocking some sense into Edward. Whatever you come up with will be awesome. Love your story. I look forward to my biweekly fix.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow ... Just Wow! Just when I think you can't get any better you give us a chapter like that. Love seeing Edward and Bella interacting with each other, Esme and Carlisle, Jasper and Alice, and the world outside.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your wonderful words - you always make me feel so gushy and warm!!

:)

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Wow ... Love the chapter, love the Uncles, love Lexi's first steps ... Love everything. So don't want this story to end so I give a resounding YES to a sequel. I need my biweekly fix!!!!!

 

Congrats to Fiorella on your niece. Always exciting to welcome we babies!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Wow ... Awesome chapter. Loved every bit of it especially the bit where Master stepped in to take control in the hospital and then Carlisle stepping in to comfort Edward when he broke down in the shower. 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Sob .. Sniffle sniffle ... What will I do without this story and the Cullen family to look forward to every other week. You are such an exceptional writer. Creating real people for us to love and enjoy. Thank you thank you for giving us the give of your talent. I look forward to your next story.

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This could be good ... really really good!

Just now finding your story. I love the alternative reaction from Bella. Seems realistic to me.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh I love how the family is behaving ... again, so much more realistic ... starting to really enjoy this story & wanting to see what happens next.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love the dad/son talk & Emmett's plan and the meal ... fun chapter

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great idea the sharing of emotions with songs ... great choices & addon lines



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and Reviewing each chapter! I am so glad you like the story! Next update should be in about a week or so. Thank you again!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

love Bella when she is being fierce



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more with you on that one. it always pissed me off that she stood there without as much as raising her voice or something.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent ... would have like Carlise & Esme to show up and suprise them all, but alas, Alice didn't see that.

Love your writing style ... you make Bella and Edward as well as the rest very believable ... I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! More to come soon.

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oo la la ... the attraction grows

wonder what Jasper is feeling coming from Carlisle

& where are they going?

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Guest

So sad that Esme died ... but all kinds of possibilities can come from the start of this story... on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

now I'm completely puzzled as to what is going on ... good thing I can keep reading

your story is intriging

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Shadows.

"crimson" ... okay, that can't be good

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay, that was different ... liking the story, but so grateful that I can continue reading. I'd be really upset about the cliffies if I had to wait.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

uh oh

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Black Gardenia Ball

really enjoying this story ... and love that Edward has shown up

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

how very confusing ... for Bella

loving your story ... had to wake up this morning and read for a bit

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yum ... little lemons

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Team Carlisle ... but I feel sorry for Edward (although he did bring it on himself)

 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Misguided reality

uh oh ... loving your story

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I keep saying it ... uh oh.

Wonder if Bella's dream has anything to do with where she is going. Off to read another chapter.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: An Interview with the Volturi

You are teasing me ... love the story ... the cliffies are driving me nuts.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

awwww ... sweet!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

lovley lusty lemons ... good job

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yes, you are a tease ... what is Carlisle hiding ... I suspect it's grusome for him to react the way he did

The Faith by TwilightDramaTeach Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The Faith BannerThe Faith BannerIsabella Swan lives a solitary existence.  She is the only child of a single parent father.  Bella is also a daughter of The Faith.  She is isolated and segregated, but all that is about to change.  Today is September 13.  It’s Bella’s sixteenth birthday, and at 11:58 pm, the time of her birth, things will never be the same.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8920 Read Count: 2581
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Faith

That was ... hmmm .... not even sure I have a word for it ... "unique" comes close.

In Bella's place, I would have gone screaming from the room/house although I guess the implication is that she has been raised with this idea. Yikes.

I would love to see this as a full story ... keep going.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I know the idea is different but I'm glad you liked it.  Hopefully this summer I'll have time to start making this a full story.  Thanks again.

TDT

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Liking that Bella is standing up for herself even if she jumps to conclusion ... although I would too.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Your story is so very worth reading ... just saying for anyone out there that's wondering.

More babies ... cool! Glad Tanya is behaving ... wondering what Aro is up to.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh I was shocked when I realized that Rose was gone and Ej hurt ... gasp. Glad all will be well.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart

Edward has got to control that temper ... first with Charlie, then with Gianna and now he's gone and assaulted Collin. Can't wait to see how this resolves itself.

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am just now finding your story. It is excellent. Loving all the twists and turns. I am especially intrigued with how Bree is going to figure in ... and when Bella is waking up.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Excellent chapter ... love watching the evolution of Bella's mind as she comes to terms with the change in her captivity allowing fun back into her life.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Excellent .... love the playtime both in the closet and more intimate. Eager for the next chapter.

Summary:

A tear stained letter is passed to Edward.

Somewhere else Bella faces danger and betrayal.

Edward must save her...but how do you save someone when you don't know what's wrong?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11991 Read Count: 3995
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 24 May 2010
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A short to the point start ... not a clue what they are heading in to, but I'm intrigued.

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 226883
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Oh I really like hearing about Alice and Jasper and how they came to be... great outtake ... would make a great story in its own right!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

oh oh oh ... oh my

not sure if I should laugh or cry

great outtake



Author's Response:

thank you, I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

loving the Jasper & Alice outtakes ... you simply must write their story in full ... it would be awesome



Author's Response:

I'll think about it 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

"boundary issues" ... big smile at that one

awesome outtakes ... you could have a whole new story with any of these couples as the center



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - these characters are rather colorful aren't they?

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

yum ... definitely YUM!

is it Saturday yet?

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ooooooo ... OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... you need to explore Carlisle and Esme some more ... me likey!



Author's Response:

so it looks like someone has been dipping into the eggnogg early???  thank you for the review - and I'm sure we will see peeks of our favorite mom and dom again.

Happy holidays