Reviews by shannonluvstwilight
Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I love your story. I don't however like Quil.. he's a dick. LOL What Bella wants to do is her business, she's the mom... sorry just had to say :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Goodness me your leaving it at that?!?!?! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)



Author's Response:

Your EPOV is coming.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

geez.. hopefully Carlisle can re attach Alice's arm or something. Quil is a butthead.. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Ugh I don't want this to be over. You've done a wonderful job with this story!! Looking forward to the epilogues :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope that you will check out my next stories as well.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: QPOV EPI

What a wonderful ending! You did such a great job. I really enjoyed this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

that was a great story!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

It means a lot to me that you enjoyed it and shared your thoughts with me. :D

~Mel x x x

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ooh LOVE this story!!!!!! can't wait for the next update!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

found your story today and just finished .. ugh what a place to leave off.. I need more :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

AHH!! I need more!!!! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm happy that Edward and Bella are together again and that Jake and Bella will still be friends.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27772
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

I just found your story today and I have to say I just finished it with tears streaming down my face. The whole story was great, but this ending was beautiful.

Great job!

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

I found your story today and couldn't stop reading!!! Can't wait to find out what happens!! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

Looking forward to next update! :) I wonder why Edward was able to "hear" Bella all of a sudden?

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

i'm reading quite a few stories at the moment, but this one is my favorite!!!! Are we going to get maybe Alice's POV at some time and see what's going on in the present? :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much - I'm glad you're liking it. Alice POV? Hmmm... not at the moment. This is Bella's story and we'll have to see it from her viewpoint for the time being.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Goosebumps..... that's what I've been reduced to. That was an amazing chapter!!! I had a feeling this was going to happen. I just.. I have no more words... it was beautiful. I loved when Bella told Carlisle that Edward was the first member of his family and I seriously had tears when Bella told Edward she would see him in biology.

Heartbreaking, but absolutely amazing! :D

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be back on here in two weeks for the next chapter!! :D

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

YAY ALICE!!! :) Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Of Big Bows and Birthing Babies

Need more... I get so excited when I see this story has been updated!! :)



Author's Response:

More's coming... I'm writing as fast as I can! :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper

Love it as always!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions

WOW! Another great chapter!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it... :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

Uh oh James!!  dun dun dun... :D



Author's Response:

Lol! You always here that music when he's mentioned, don't you? :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Of Dancing and Dark Alleys

Great chapter!!!! I'm curious as to what is going on with Alice.



Author's Response:

More on that in the next chapter...

Glad you liked the update - thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

loved the "Oh, I'll kiss you alright" line. Great chapter as usual. I also loved Bella's though about the "less one" "You'll never have Edward... I'm sorry about that."

 

Looking forward to the next update! :)



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it - thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! :D I absolutely loved the whole bit with Edward telling Bella he's tired of saying goodnight when the sun goes down.. so sweet!!



Author's Response:

Oh, so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

GAH! I'm always at the edge of my seat... excellent chapter. I was going crazy without this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks bb! So glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

Excellent chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Fate is a cruel bitch... of course Edward would still get sick .. NO!! Hopefully Bella's idea will help both Edward and Elizabeth pull through. I can't wait to see how you end this story! It's been one heck of a journey!!!! :) Super great chapter! Until next time....

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Wonderful chapter! It was sad reading about everyones goodbyes. Her goodbye with Carlisle was touching. I hope she'll see him again.

I'm curious as to what's going on in the present. I know this story is Bella's, but will we have a peek as to what's going on in the present with Edward and everyone? I wonder if Carlisle has memories of Bella from the past.

Great story, I love this so much. This is truly my favorite!! :) Until next time...



Author's Response:

Carlisle is going to be keeping in touch with Bella to let her know what's happening with the epidemic, so he'll be around to some extent.

Your questions will be answered eventually... all of them. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

I can't believe this is almost over! I'm so sad ... :(

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Oh my!!!! I just can't take it... I don't want this story to end, but I'm foaming at the mouth to see how you do end this amazing story... AHHH! :D

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I have no words... :D :D :D :D :D :D :D  okay maybe one... brilliant!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

I love how this all ties together... I can't wait to hear what Carlisle has to say. This was an amazing chapter!! :) I love the twists of the time travelling. It's brilliant... your brilliant!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

I loved this!! Such a brilliant storyline. The whole journey was amazing!!!! So sad to see this end, but it was great! :) Looking forward to the epi.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Beautiful ending. Excellent story. A wonderful journey. :)

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

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Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

as always I hope nothing bad happens so that bella and edward can have their HEA .. and the rest of the cullens as well :)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

QUESTION!! I found your story on Fan fiction and read through chapter 19 when it was pulled. I've had it favorited on this website since then, but have been waiting for chapter 20, but I see it's changed. This chapter 19 isn't the same from when it was on fanfiction. Did you change the entire story or just a few chapters? Where should I start from to catch myself up since it's different now? :) Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hi, ya..I changed in chapter 10.. I realized that Bella's character was a little out of place..so chapter 10 and up is all different. Sorry about chapter twenty..she will meet aro again but that is further up.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Superb chapter!!!! Can't wait for me .. I need it!! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OOhhhh can't wait for the next chapter... I noticed some similarities from the FF version :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

wowza!! love it love it love it !!!!! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oohh very good!!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

oohhh very good chappy :) I'm a little behind, but I'm quickly catching up. I loved the whole Charlie bit. That was very clever!! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Ethics Be Damned

awesome!!! You gotta love Charlie!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I LOVED IT! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

great chapter... I don't want this to be over so soon... :(

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great chapter!! I love how Seth almost "spilled the beans" :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I loved this chapter. I'm getting sad that this is almost over, I've loved this story from the beginning in FF :) I'm glad you've stuck with it!!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It's always sad to see a favorite story come to an end, but it was a wonderful journey. You did a great job, I loved every bit of it!! The ending was perfect! I simply cannot wait for the epilogue :)



Author's Response: Thank you so so much for saying such nice things. Thank you for reading :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-The Proposal

This was the first story I've read since returning to the fanfiction world in months.... Your story has to be one of the best I've read! It was beautifully written. It had everything, good suspense, romance, humor.. it was wonderful! I see this was completed about 2 years ago. I hope you wrote the sequel.. I'm going to look for it! :)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I love your story!!! :) Looking forward to the next update :)



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

argh!! You can't leave me hanging!!!! :) That was a great chapter. I loved the pool interaction... What's emmett's problem??? I have an idea :)



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That was a wonderful chapter. I'm getting worried though about Victoria finding out about her son ::coughs:: even though she basically threw him away like garbage. tsk tsk tsk. Looking forward to the next one!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

AHH!!! Leaving it there are you???? I seriously need the next chapter like ... now! :) Great chapter by the way.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Hmm.. I'm not too sure about Marcus...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I don't want this to be over yet.... It's too good :) Really you've done an awesome job with this story! Can't wait to see how you end it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Beautiful ending... I had some laughs and some happy tears. You've done a wonderful job!!! So sad to see this amazing story complete.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183783
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Excellent story!!!!!!!! :)

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58288
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Found your story the other day and I was so happy to see you are doing a sequel :) It's a great story so far!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I just love this story!!!! :)  I get so happy when I see it updated! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ugh, I have goosebumps. So sad.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was so sad and just heartbreaking, but it was a wonderful chapter. Beautifully written for such a painful experience. I love this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

looking forward to the next story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

wlb


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159885
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I've loved this story from the beginning... keep em coming :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter. Happy Holidays to you as well. 

 

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

The last two chaps were so heartbreaking. :(   Keep it coming.. lol :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great story, so sad to see it over. :)

Author's Response:

Me too.

Summary:

Edward and Bella finally found their way back though the darkness that nearly consummed them. Will they be prepared for the wildest ride yet? Canon couples, AH and NC-17 for the usual. Third story in the My Boys series.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86867 Read Count: 38657
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 May 2013
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YAY!! I was waiting for this final installment :)