Reviews by JayNahNah
Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Beautiful!! They did this all their way! Great job!

Summary:

Edward and Bella have been stepsiblings since they were ten, but how long has Edward felt something different for his Sort-of Sister? EPOV of fanfiction MY Other Brother


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6658 Read Count: 3855
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Almost panicked. The genre says romance & HORROR, not humor like fanfic. I hope not horror....love Edward too much!

Author's Response:

LMAO...Ooops...fixed it ;)

Separate Ways by Jennmc75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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Ever wonder how Charlie and Renee met? Why they had a Vegas wedding? Separate Ways is what I think happened to bring Charlie and Renee together and eventually tear them apart.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/Renee
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4365 Read Count: 182
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 20 Sep 2010
Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Change for the Better

Intrigued....can't wait to see how this develops!

BTW - nice to know the apples don't fall far from the tree, if you know what I mean!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are intrigued.  I hope you like what I have planned for Charlie and Renee.

I tried to show some similarities between Bella and Charlie.  I thought it was important since Renee is so opposite to Bella that we see how she is like Charlie :)

Thanks so muich for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312010
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward

Dayum......it is HOT in here! I have to say, that was one of the HOTTEST chapters I've read and it was just the innuendo that did it!
Excellent job....their restraint is admirable. I don't think, no I know I couldn't hold back...no matter what the status of my "innocence" or lack of experience.
Great!!!

Author's Response:

LOL.  Thanks!  I don't know what I'd do if I were Bella.  oh hell yes i do...pffftt....just don't tell the hubs.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

That was a beautiful chapter. You could feel the pain in Edwards words. Great job!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Loved it......Emmett is a hoot!

Author's Response:

he is that!  Thanks so much!

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

Loved it!! They are so sweet! Glad Edward told Charlie everything. I think it helps; especially since Charlie was familiar with the case & false allegations.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks!

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Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows

Yes, yes, yes!!!!!
**sigh**. You did it well!! Cant wait for EPOV!

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Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Was away so I needed to wait & savor.
So good!!

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Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Blessed Events & One Little Year

Amazing!!!  This is the quintessential fairy tale that every little girl dreams of (at least me) - her very own prince!

I've loved it from day one & went through every trial, tribulation, high & low - their morals, values, excitement, hesitancy, baring their souls.....all of it was perfect!

Looking forward to seeing what their future holds!



Author's Response: finally got the author's response to work again!! Anyway, I thank you very much for the lovely review. It means a lot to me that so many people have taken my little story to their hearts. The future take is posted...under Outtakes: Lullabies & Eternal Love. As soon as I've finished with LRM...the sequel will begin....

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

Just found this story and have been reading it since yesterday!!  Great premise.  Was a little worried it would mirror some other Hot Movie Star vs. innocent girl but it's not!  Very original and I'm enjoying your story!  Can't wait to find out why Edward is there and ... Tanya either should come clean or Edward should hold a news conference and too bad so sad! 



Author's Response:

I'll probably update again tomorrow.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vandalism & The Apocalypse

Stupid, martyr feeling idiotic Edward. Get why but still dumb move.
Thank goodness we won't have to suffer through the months of depression!

Author's Response:

yep..thanks for the review!

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

I agree...after saving Edward from "exposing" himself at Volterra, I'd have ripped him a new one as well!
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  next chap probably tomorrow

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

How about Jonny Repp, Dismal Hashington, Bryan Brenolds, Squalett Gorehannsun, Brad Caw, Robert Pinchington, etc.
That way we all know but you don't break the rules!!

Author's Response:

LOL....I'm coming to find you when the time comes!  clint?  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Not much to say...
Hmmm..how about Flint Eastree or Clint Westwood....
Love the quick updates!!

Author's Response:

I heard from another source that I really may have to use code names...soo...I may have to go back and amend those chapters.  At least it's easy to edit on TWCS.  Keeping all your suggestions, I'll give you credit when the time comes!  thanks so much!

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

When you know, you know. Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Wild Turkey & Jedi Training

Edwards pov is always a great idea! Can't wait to find out why D-land security want to talk to them!

Author's Response:

Soon!  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Swing Dancing & The Dearly Departed

Great chapter....so, who is the mystery person?!?  Can't wait to find out.

Glad no one was in trouble at the Happiest Place on Earth!!  Figured it had to be an Emmett cronie!

I love EPOV's and I'm sorry if no one has told you. 

Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I guess i'll post chap 2 before the day is over.  Since Bella and Edward won't be at Emmett's high school reunion, i'm thinking that may be an outtake at some later date.  Lots of plans and ideas...just not enough hours in my day.  lol. 

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Unsolicited Advice & Airline Wings

Hmmm....I'd love to earn my set of wings with Edward!!

Author's Response:

lol.  you and a whole lot of others!  Thanks!

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

Oohh......very good! Cannot wait for the update!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  more to come soon!

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Boxer Shorts & Serenades

Loved it!!!  Both POV's are fantastic!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Wookies & Good Friday

Actually, thought it was cute when Edward asked if Bella could forget about the Christmas stalker receipt!

Author's Response:

deer in the headlights look..haha.. thanks!

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

Hysterical!!! Loved the last line....Ah yes, every family should have a William Emmettspeare!



Author's Response:

I needed to get even with Emmett for pestering me so much.  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

I get it!! Happy turkey day!!

Author's Response:

yay!  I'm glad.  Thanks!

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

Favorite part? Same as yours...I'm a sucker for romance!

Author's Response:

lots of fun stuff coming up.  Thanks!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Outtake - Magnum Farce

I did enjoy it....thanks!

Loved carlisle's thoughts!

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Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Loved it!! I thought it was adorable that Edward watched her sleep!! Cannot wait for the London reunion.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  he is a little obsessed...

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Thank goodness....the truth will finally be revealed about the baby.
Liked it - especially the sleepy pseudo sex!

Author's Response:

well...now i know where your mind is.  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  LRM shouldn't be much longer...

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

I loved it!! Totally understand Bella's embarrassment but it was for Edward & he lves everything about her!!
Great chapter.....damn, when they do the deed, it'll be explosive with all the UST surrounding them!

Author's Response:

i know...probably cause power outtages..lol.  Thanks!

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Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class

So excited for Bella and Edward! He's going to think Christmas came early!
A bit concerned about Bella's stalker & Renee's cryptic message. I hope it's nothing.....
Great chappie!!
Merry Christmas!!

Author's Response:

Merry Christmas to you too...although I'm a bit late.  Don't worry about the creepy stuff while B's in London.  Thanks!

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises

I loved how flustered & pissed Edward was when he thought a fangirl had snuck into his trailer & his surprise when he saw it was Bella!
Bella's word vomit at immigration was hysterical & Alec's indiscretion.....priceless!!
Great chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks as always.  Glad you enjoyed it...it was fun to write also.  Next one will post soon!

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Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Is it JD?
Loved it.....it seems like Edward wants to propose.
Happy New Year! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

several people have guess Johnny.  I promise you'll find out at the very beginning of  next chap.  Thanks!

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

It is what I think it is, isn't it??? Yes, yes, yes! It's the proposal and it's perfect!!
Edward couldn't have done it any better than he did! Please make it the proposal so we can get some of the tension released! I know they are "innocent" but they've been so good....let's let them fool around a little, okay??
So so good....cannot wait for the next chapter! Really hope it's soon!!!!

Author's Response:

you are making me chuckle.  I think everyone will like the next chapter...even though a lot of people are angry with me for leaving them hanging this time..lol.  Thanks!

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Ok...love the sweet, loving & romantic....and I get Edward not wanting to "do the deed" on their last night together but really?? Boobs revealed and all we got was reverence? Damn....those two have more self control than I could ever have!!
Great job...so glad he did it perfect for them! GR was epic!

Author's Response:

yeah yeah yeah...you and me both!  BUT this only gave Bella's POV...Edward may have been beating his horny side into submission...i guess we won't know until LRM catches up.  Thank you!

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Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

Loved it....especially when Bella tried to sneak a peek!
The stalker is freaking me out a bit but I'm glad Bella called Charlie!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Lots of stuff ahead.  Thanks!

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

Is it James stalking Bella? What a creep!
Great chapter!

Author's Response:

the flower/stalker will be revealed eventually.  Thanks very much!

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Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Kinda suspected Rose but it's still all good!
I loved Edwards commitment bracelet. I know I'd be crying.....but that's another story!
Great job! Cannot wait for the two stories to meld!

Author's Response:

LRM is catching up.. I can't wait either.  The next V&V is almost ready to go.  THanks!

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

Great as always! Col. Whitlock was perfect! Loved the "did I stutter?", etc. Sometimes people forget that appearances aren't everything. Who cares what others think as long as you believe & know the truth.
Btw - love Parma High!!

Author's Response:

I agree.  Rose and Jasper had to have at least one sane parent. lol.  Thanks so much!

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Loved it!!!  Yes, the two of them have remarkable patience!!!  However, in the big scheme of things, if they have waited this long, 3 more months will be fine and make the honeymoon that more special than it will already be!

Geri Chance got what was due to her but I'm still worried about Bella's stalker. 

Hope nothing impedes their reunion and wedding.  They both have had enough angst to last a lifetime.  Let the stalker be the idiot Mike or James, they get caught and then be done with!!

Looking forward to the next one!!



Author's Response:

i agree ...3 months is nothing....   I enjoyed writing this chapter very much, and will enjoy Edward's POV when I get to that chapter in LRM.  There will still be some drama ahead...BUT...the wedding will still happen ..this is definitely a HEA story.  Don't worry.  Thanks!

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

He is perfect....***sigh***
great chapter as always.....

Author's Response:

Thank you!  glad you liked it.

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Chris is one of a kind! Loved it!

Author's Response:

thanks!  I agree.

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

So sweet!! Wish Edward was at my prom! Great job as usual....the UST is so high! Combustion s imminent!

Author's Response:

even more so from EPOV.  Just posted a new one.  Poor Eddie.  Glad you liked it!  Thanks.

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Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Workouts & Sex Drinks

It was awesome!!!
Damn....the teasing in the club was fantastic! Ive had some, but not all. Hmmm....seems like some research is needed!?
Great job!

Author's Response: I'm always looking for a good excuse to drink. lol. Thanks very much!

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

Seriously?? There's NO way his MTV date is really carrying Edwards baby, is it?
Edward is just upset because of all this crap from his past continues to come up & screw things with his and BElla's happiness, right?
I understand that she's hurt that Edward pushed her away but he's a guy & sometimes they need time to sort it out in their own mind.
Great chapter! Especially loved the t shirt strip!

Author's Response:

Edward's still carrying his v-card, so no, baby is definitely not his.  rest your mind.  lol. A lot of guys do behave like that when they're upset.  next chapter...  I've got to finish a double LRM first though.  Thanks!

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Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Absolutely awesome as always!! I cannot WAIT to see what happens with the lying preggy skank! It's not Alec's is it?
Anyway...glad to see the two stories merging soon!
Keep writing......it's so exciting to see these two & the movie bump?? Perfection! It was meant to be.
I always think the world is a marauders map (HP Reference) & fate is just waiting for us to bump into each other.

Author's Response:

more about the pregnant chick in the next 2? chaps, i think.  Thanks...very glad you like the stories.  Alec's? LOL  that would have been hilarious.  next up lrm...then...

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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Very good. I knew there had to be a funny there but I also appreciated the "pay it forward" as well.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.  It was a little different for me.

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Poor boy.....so glad he has Bella to help. They are so right together!
Great chapter....can't wait for the updates!!

Author's Response:

that chapter was up and down and all over the place....ah well.  Thanks so much!

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Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

Oohh......I hope Edward destroys James! He deserves it; what a pig!
Great chapter Mama!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

Lol - havebto say Bella's dream and awakening was classic!!
Loved it!

Author's Response:

Wouldn't we all like to wake up with a handful of Edward.  :P  Thanks so much!

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

Nickel between the knees, huh??
Great chapter! Hope Oprah can work her magic!

Author's Response:

i truly intended to explain that in the author's note..i forgot.  Okay---If a female holds a nickel between her knees, it makes it impossible to 'spread her legs'  Therefore, impossible to have sex/get pregnant.  Crude...but every Emmett.  *sorry*  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Teepees & Tribal Law

Fantastic ... I hope Bella's Connie Confrontation doesn't come back to hurt them.
Go Oprah!

Author's Response:

we shall see.  Thanks so much!

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Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Lol .... Can't wait to see what those naughty boys have been up to. So sweet Edward is coming to Bella!

Author's Response:

yeppers.  and by now you've read the other side of this...so much fun to write...  Thanks!

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Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Very good! I know it's fiction but I truly believe in the goodness some celebrities have for giving back.
The UST is sky high! Their wedding night is going to explosive in do many ways!

Author's Response:

i can't argue with that!  Thanks very much.....new chapter just posted !

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Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Loved it! Nice pacing....you give us a little taste of our fav couple!!

Btw -heard our boy packs 9"! Dayum!

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

So glad to see things progressing. Cannot wait for the honeymoon!!
Surprised by the Dryden interview. Thought Oprah squashed it. Hmmm.....the Internet can be an evil thing!
Loved the reception bitches!

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Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

Awesome. Thanks for not making it Brazil. Love the honeymoon!
Did Atlantis sub tour in Aruba. Fantastic!

Author's Response: wasn't it awesome? I'm sure my description didn't do it justice...but just gah! I was afraid I might be claustraphobic...you never really know until you're faced with that sort of situation. Thanks so much!

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Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

Fantastic!
I love how Bella is becoming more self confident with herself and Edward. It's a beautiful thing to witness.
Edward is amazingly thoughtful, protective and loving. It's as if he's almost afraid she's been a dream.
I can see the end on the horizon but I'm loving the journey and cannot wait to read more and hopefully, the sequel.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm working on the first chapter of the sequel at the moment, so you should't have to wait too much longer for it. So glad you liked the chapter!

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Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I loved it!!  They are so sweet. I don't think their honeymoon will ever end!



Author's Response:

Summary:

Social reject Bella Swan finds her whole life changing before her eyes after her first encounter with the cute boy at the Concrete Canal. Three years later, she shows her uppity classmates that she's so much more than they ever thought possible.

Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 29.

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I actually won Kharizzmatic's Pick in the A Picture Says It All Contest! I'm so honored and excited. This was my prize, make my Khar herself!
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7251 Read Count: 4260
[Report This] Published: 16 Oct 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Someday

Revenge is best served cold to shallow, bitchy classmates!
I like this! Good job!

Time of Dying by KitsuShel Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Summary: A madman breaks into Bella's home on Halloween and destroys her life.

~My entry in the All Hallow's Eve Contest~

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3208 Read Count: 485
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Time of Dying

They're both crazy, James & Victoria. James blaming Edward for their daughters death when she had cancer, Victoria trying to free Bella, James shooting Victoria then the police shooting James and now Victoria blaming Bella? Nuts!
Great job on the o/s but can't wait for more Parchute ;)

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
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Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

;-) !!!
Really great chapter!! Poor Edward - I really felt his fear and pain!

Author's Response:

he's getting better.  next chapter is posted...hope you like it.  Thanks!

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Calm Before The Storm

Thanks!

Author's Response:

you're welcome.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Valentines For The Enamored

Very sweet!! I agree...Emmett has a gift!

Author's Response:

the gift of flatulence at will.  lol  Thanks!

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Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

Very cute! What I wouldn't do to have Grinchward under my Christmas tree!!

Author's Response:

hahaha!  too true!  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

I love both V&V as well as LRM AND REALLY how you write and post them. It's nice to hear Edwards thoughts!
Continue what you're doing, it's great!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! makes me happy to hear.

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

Great chapter! Halloween not my favorite but if a certain 109 perpetually 17 year old bronze haired, originally from Chicago male vampire happened to trick or treat at my house, I think I'd acquiesce & give him a trick & a treat! ;)

Author's Response:

LOL.  my sentiments exactly!  Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

Loved it!! Edward is so sweet & cute!

Author's Response:

he is a mess though...makes me chuckle.  THanks!

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Feel free to be sophomoric. ;)
Loved this chapter....the dream sequence was hysterical.

Author's Response:

sophomoric is sometimes my middle name....well actually it's Marie.  my hubs tries to pretend to be dignified...i really screw up the illusion.  you can see how things works at our house....LOL.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Resolutions For The New Year

Loved it. Makes us all believe in true love!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like it.

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Making Plans For A New Start

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Destiny Interrupted

Good!

Author's Response:

THanks!

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

Excellent!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

Love EPOV's. Emmett is hysterical!
Still hard to believe Edward is a virgin but then again, I love how they'll both be each others first and last!

Author's Response:

Just posted 17...will post 18 later today.  my powere cord died on my laptop...and i had to borrow the hubs' or one of my dauthers' computers for the last few days...it was not pleasant.lol..Now i've got a new cord so i'm finally back!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Edward has to be a virgin ...i know it's hard to believe...hopefully at some point i'll do an outtake of his drunken 'close calls'....it will be later though.  Thanks again!!

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

Excellent!!!  The Rocky Horror "Virgin" comment by Emmett was pure Emmett!

Good job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! next one is posted....next up more V&V.

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Prelude To Aspen

Love hearing Edward's thoughts and his slam down of Nicole was perfect.  I can see the "nice guy" trying to be polite, etc., but some girls just don't get the hint.  I think there are nice people out there who would really, just want to be friends with someone because they may feel a connection but I feel bad for celebrities....they probably could use a friend but with the business they're in, how will they know or get the chance to see if someone wants to know them or use them?

Great job on clearing Edward's head!!  He's a keeper!!   



Author's Response:

Edward still has a problem not being a jerk when Bella's not around.  He did it for so long.  He may have been a little harsh...but that's who he is/was.  I like him too.  Thanks!

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Long Awaited Reunion

Loved it!!!  Edward is so HIM!



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Setback To A Full Recovery

Love hearing Edwards thought. Charlie was perfect & I loved how Edward knows the quiet strength that is Charlie!

Author's Response:

i luv Charlie...i actually hate it when some stories have him as a villain...it's hard to take. lol.  Thanks!

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Warm Love For The Impatient

Poor Edward. I'd be frustrated too. 2 months is more than enough time!

Author's Response:

although...they don't know what they are missing...i think that makes it a little different....maybe...probably...oh who the h*ll knows...lol  THanks!

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Crash And Burn

Excellent! Typical Edward....martyr at it's best. So glad he has Alice to call him on his shit!
So good....it's a good thing Bella is getting stronger so she an tell Edward how she feels. I think previously, she'd have just let Edward go without saying anything!

Author's Response:

i agree with everything you said.  Happy New Year! and thank you.

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Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

I love shy, nervous, unsure Edward!!! Just makes me want to wrap him up and hold him tight!!!!
Great chapter ~ as always, love hearing EPOV's!!
So glad Bella told him how it is. Edward wants to protect people; especially those he loves that he goes about it assbackwards!!
Listen to Alice....that Tink knows her stuff!!

Author's Response:

he may finally have learned his lesson...i think....maybe...oh who knows?  Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Not sure why this doesn't have more reviews! It's so neat to get another POV, especially Edwards!
Maybe when the two finally mesh, more will read!
Great as always!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate that.

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

That's why it's fiction **sigh** Edward is just too perfect!! ;-}

Author's Response:

no kidding ...he borders on being a 'stepford husband' sometimes.  lol.  Thanks!

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Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool

So cute!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Give And Take

See, me? I do want to just talk to Edward cause I'm too old! He's just too pretty!
Love he he shot Angel down!

Author's Response:

i'm too old too...lol.  oh well..one can dream.  Thanks!

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

I love this! Can only imagine the look of pure fear on Edwards face when Bella found the motel receipt.
Loved the stuttered question with Esme! Edward was thinking proposal already!
**sigh** oh to be young again....

Author's Response:

i feel your pain...lol.  Glad you liked it...more to come soon.  Thanks!

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Ugly Truths

;-}
love it!! Edward is so cute....innocent, worldly, possessive caveman!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I like him too.  a lot.

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Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Sage Advice For The Overworked

I really enjoyed this one. The skyping, JD interaction, etc.
Really well done!

Author's Response:

thankx very much!  there's a sneak peek of next V&V on the blog. Take care.

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

So cute!! Charlie was cool!
Love nervous, shy, normal, real Edward!!
Great job! Cant wait for more. I see the "blend" soon!

Author's Response:

it's definitely getting closer.  just posted another LRM..V&V will be next.  THanks!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

I actually thought it was sweet that they couldn't bear to disconnect skype!
Good job! Edward is too perfect for words!

Author's Response:

i know...i keep expecting him to do something bad....better not hold my breath for that one.  lol.  thanks!

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

Damn.....that was so unbelievably sweet & sexy!!
Again....pure perfection...he's ruin it for all other men! ;)

Author's Response:

thanks again!  see the link for the sneak peek:  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Prelude To A Proposal

Again....he's perfect! Completely agree with Gordon.....he makes all men look likes asses!
Great job....so glad the two stories are getting closer together!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  here's the link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy!  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

So cute! Yes, I see that the two are getting closer & closer!

Author's Response:

very close now.  just posted the next one.  Thanks!

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

That was so sweet! No Bella & Edward goes into withdrawals!
Loved it....cannot wait for the merge!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.

http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050

any probs, let me know.

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Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

**big smiles**
Yay!! So glad for them but honestly.....can't wait for the fluff!

Author's Response:

me too.  Thanks!

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

Yay!! Getting closer!
Great job....Edward is perfection! Lucky girl!

Author's Response:

he's not completely perfect...as we found out in the latest V&V...sorry for that btw.  Thanks!

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Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Night Terrors for the Fatigued

Oh Edward.....***sigh***
Great job!

Author's Response:

the poor boy's a mess.  Thanks!

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

Thank you! Love hearing Edwards POV. Loony tunes grandma! Classic!
So excited to see the two stories melding!
Great job!

Author's Response:

We are finally caught up!  yay!  Thanks!

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Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Nice hearing from Edward.
Can't wait for the false allegation fallout!
It's gonna be good; I can tell!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

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Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Loved it!! I like you intertwine their POV's. Edward's dream & Bella's reality on the boob squeeze & thrusts! Great job!

Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks so much!

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Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Tying Up Loose Ends

I'm glad Edward forgave Meghan. Now he & Bella can go forward with no past horrors unresolved.

Author's Response:

lots of issues are being resolved lately.  Thanks!