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“Baby, I’m going to have to hear all your shit. I need to know. Because I need to be able to know what’s ok and what’s not. I need to know how far to push you, without causing damage either physically or emotionally and I don’t ever want to hurt you. You are going to have to trust me with everything you have in you. It’s a process, we start out slow, when I can trust you, and you can trust me, without any doubt” He smiled “Baby, that’s when we made it to the top. But it’s a long way up there. There’s going to be lots of tears and letting go.” He took a deep breath, glanced around the street then looked back into my eyes “My question for you is, do you want to climb up that ladder with me?”

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King Edward found his release and that was all he was really looking for. For Bella yes it would have been quite painful. Thanks for reviewing.
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Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

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HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.

We know that the more the story develops the more we all want Edward to just post haste stop going to Aro’s club.  I wanted to give a clear run down on the girls that he sees there, so that we can keep things straight.  Edwards’s girls at Aro’s:  Sally: sex addict 27 tall she about 5ft 8 red shoulder length hair thin and tall. Likes roll play.  Irina: 6ft tall slender and Blond Hair to her cheek bones like rough sex and anal sex. 29 years old.  Carmen: 5ft 6 long black hair enjoys being controlled by men, average weight and size. Likes BDSM and being restrained.  Maria:  5’5 180 pounds curvy and thicker than other girls.  Sandy blonde hair, cute features and very large breasts.  More relaxed and sensual.  Edward only sees her maybe once a month, sometimes longer than that between visits.  He controls her too, but it is all about sensual and erotic pleasure with her than it is about rough and controlling hard core sex.  Some question if he chose Maria the last time and more often, because she reminded him of Bella.  Truth be known Carmen would be the one who resembles Bella the most.  He is not with Maria to pretend she is Bella, but because from Maria he gets the softer more sensual erotic side of sex.  Edward had made the decision a long time ago to make himself this untouchable person, and when it came to the girls most of the time he went with the hard core domination side of the act.  I can’t say that Edward’s visits to the club will cease right away, but I do assure you that soon our professor with the extremely dark view of all women will soon realize that he just can’t do it anymore.  He may be smart and he may be a lot of things, but sometimes when you shut yourself off, it’s hard to wake up those pieces of yourself.  I hope that this helps a little in the explanation of Edward and his tainted views.  I will tell you this, I just got done with my part on a chapter where he comes clean with Bella about what he did when he spent time at the club, and telling the truth can be quite cleansing.

Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 9 Teaser… Subject to changes during BETA process.

“Mr. Masen, I don’t mean to be rude, but where are we going? Do you need me to work at your house today?”

I shake my head as we keep walking.  “No Isabella, as you know all my employees have to have a medical check.  I am accompanying you to yours.”  We stop walking when we arrive at the bus stop. I look at Isabella who is looking upset.

“Mr. Masen, I didn’t bring any money with me.  I can’t afford to have a medical check, I am sorry.” I look down at her and frown.  There is something in her expression that tells me that it’s not just money she is worried about. I look up seeing the bus coming to a stop beside us.

We both get on, but this time I lead her to the seats at the back.  I motion for her to sit and I sit next to her, leaving a little room between us. “Isabella, I set up a medical plan for each of my staff including you. Your medical is a part of that so you don’t have to worry about payment, it has already been covered.” I am not really lying, more like stretching the truth a little. “I know that you don’t like people too close to you, for that reason I am taking you to see a dear friend of mine.” I smile thinking about how to explain Carlisle. “His name is Carlisle, and he is much more than a friend to me.  I guess you could say that he is like a father figure. He is a very compassionate man, and he has an amazing ability to relax people. He will not hurt you. I would never allow him, or anyone to hurt you.” I didn’t really mean for what I said at the end to come out, but as I looked into her eyes it just came out.  She looked me right in the eye for much longer then she usually does.  I watch her reaction and notice her bite her lip, as she nods her head.

“Will you stay with me, the whole time?”  She asks, as her eyes fall to the floor. 

Without meaning to, my hand moves to the underside of her chin.  I feel small sparks on the tips of my fingers as I keep my fingers against her skin.  These are those same comforting sparks I felt the night of my panic attack, I dismiss it.  I slowly tilt her chin up, making her look at me again. “I will stay with you, if that is what you want.  This is your choice Isabella.  I know that I have been ordering you around a lot, but this time it is your complete choice and decision.  If you wish for me to stay in the room with you, then I will.  If you want me to leave, then I will.  This is all about you, and what you want.” 

She keeps looking at me and I could feel her shaking a little, but she never pulls her face away from my hand.  “I would like you to stay in the room please, Mr. Masen.” I nod my head letting her face go.

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And I hope that the director is paying attention cause it is what everyone is saying. Maybe it won't happen in Catching fire.