Reviews by fanficreader83
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315846
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

I am so glad they both realized how wrong things were at the start of the chapter, even if it seemed to be more so jacob... she needs jacob though as he seems level-headed... and woah to the closet scene... I am so happy that they are willing to admit to the strange pull and hope that they can figure things out together, even if it won't be easy!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

I think you have done a great job of showing how Bella struggles (life has not been too kind to her)... Rosalie is a wench and I think is just planting evil thoughts... it is my hope that Edward shows up to save the day in some way!  I look forward to whatever happens next!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Wow... I never doubted Bella and deep down I think Edward might know she wasn't being honest but she definitely hit him with something that could have been a possibility before... I am glad she wants to fix herself and am hoping Edward doesn't revert back to old ways during this separation... either way I look forward to what you have planned next but am hoping that these two will take care of themselves so they can be better together!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Good News and Bad News

That was some good news for bella and I am very interested how they will deal with all that is going on in the company!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

Yeah Aro definitely doesn't give off the warm fuzzies... I look forward to how they will deal with the situations he is causing!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crucial Correspondence

thanks for the glimpse into edward's head!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

I am so happy for them that she could share that news over the phone!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

I really like the possible names she has thought of and am now looking forward to the Chicago meeting!!!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

I love how she took charge and let them have it... can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

definitely love the letters... again it just reminds me that it is such a lost art in our culture!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

That certainly was intense for a moment there!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy

I liked her 'connection' to Edward, even if it was a bit distressing for her the first time around!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

I am definitely looking forward to that next chapter!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

definitely enjoyed the birth of their little one!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

I bet it is good to be home and having someone else that depends on you must be helping her cope!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

Poor Bella had quite the tense moment there!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

There is definitely hope there and I can't wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

So glad he was safe and can't wait for their reunion!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

So a reunion feels so close now!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

That was a great reunion for their family!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

That was wonderful!  Thank you for sharing that even while on your trip!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85885
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

wow... that was intense there for a moment... I am glad they can put all that to rest although I am sure there will be some negative effects from all of this but they have the support to get through it!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I love how everything is turning out for them!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was wonderful for them!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That was great... one baby down, another one to go!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373445
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I definitely like it so far!  I am very curious if the prince will seem familiar to her in any way!  Can't wait to see how this all plays out!!!  :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it!  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

oh boy, Bella will have to show her kindness with Edward and all of his unsavory ways... I have a feeling he will make it up to her at some point!  ;)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

I am glad he was willing to restrain himself and look forward to seeing his ways and how they might change, although, maybe he is not as bad as he has made out to be as you have hinted!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

I can't imagine how she is feeling... hopefully edward will turn things around and show her the side of him that she is actually longing for... that reveal will be very interesting!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Oh, I can't wait for them to find out and am so glad that he is rethinking his ways!!!  ;)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

Thanks for the early update!  I am definitely looking forward to the big day and all that it will reveal!!!  ;)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

I am so thrilled for them and I am even glad that he fessed up about his behavior and that she could look at it in such an understanding way!  can't wait for more!!!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

that was wonderfully done!  they were quite fortunate in how everything worked out and I look forward to seeing more of their future!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

I love their connection and how edward is so proud of her for who she is!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

They have had a nice start together and deserved it!  I look forward to seeing how they deal with life's responsibilities for them!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

I hope they have a pleasant time at this estate to get to enjoy each other!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

I am so glad they were able to have this little retreat!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

It is good that he is trying to take such good care of her... what an extreme though with the thought of beheading those who upset her (ah but these times were certainly different)!  :)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

I am sure this separation will be difficult but hopefully he will return safely!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

That will be a good role for Bella!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

His past is coming back to haunt them a bit, especially Bella... hopefully his return will help her!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

hmmm... is there a reason why she is feeling this way?  I look forward to finding out!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I am glad that he finally had the chance to clear the air with her and for her to give him the news!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

So glad she was taken care of!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

What a thing to cause you to admit your feelings... definitely looking forward to more!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

I love it so far!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

I love imagining this Bella and how you've started their friendship!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

I really like the direction you have things heading, as everything is working them towards it a little more at a time!  :)