Reviews by aborealis7
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella pretends to be a coma patient's fiancee just to be able to keep seeing him. What happens when he wakes up from coma? What will she do when his brother begins to suspect she's lying? AH, AU, OOC, Cannon, E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52812 Read Count: 15309
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Late Night Visits

Yikes! She just gets in deeper!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Borrowed Family

Oh no! Vicky huh?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Suspicions

Good chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Plan In Motion: Part 1

Mass was hilarious! Jake is so gross, lol, could he be anymore vulgar?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Understandings

Hell no! Keep on writing! You are very good at it!

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Poor Bebe!

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Damn! This is so well written and compelling!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Wow! Amazing chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

I can't brlieve how good this story is! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Good chapter!! Ilike Bach and Pani! Looling forward to the next chapter ~ what are those humans doing?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!  And regarding the humans, you're just going to have to wait and find out! bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Poor Bebe! Men are gross! It always boil down to their (ahem), needs! I'm loving this story ~ thanks for posting and, if you celebrate ~ Happy Thanksgiving!



Author's Response:

We're not only celebrating.  Due to everyone's conflicting work schedules, we're celebrating today.  Ugh.  I have to start cooking now. lol

I'm glad you're loving the story!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Goodness! I thought B was going to have to put up with those horndogs! I get that they are men,b but, ugh!Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

LOVED IT! You are such a fantastic writer! I just want to sit here and keep on reading!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Great chapter! Poor Tral ~ he feels the need to take action, and, does! I hope it doesn't bite him back!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Since I can't answer that without a spoiler, I'll just have to make you wait for it. :)

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Fabulous chapter! Aren't you just brilliant! I love this story, love your style of writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliment!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

LOVED IT! That's all I've got, Loved it! What else are you working on? Because I really enjoy reading your work!



Author's Response:

I was on the final 2 chapters of Incubus Moon before I let myself get distracted by the NaNoWriMo.  So I am picking that back up today and plan to have it finished hopefully by the end of January.  It don't yet know what alias I'll be putting it under.  There's no bdsm or spanking in it, just lots of sex.  So, I'll have to see.

Forbidden by Jennmc75, TheSpoiltOne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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Hate can be passionate and cloud your judgement. Hermione and Draco share a secret passion fueled by their mutual hatred of each other.

 

Can they keep their meetings a secret? Do their friends notice changes in their behaviour? Will the guilt eat at Hermione and cause her destruction?  Can she change their hatred into something more without losing their passion?


Categories: Harry Potter, Hogwarts, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6743 Read Count: 4391
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2010
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Love this pairing! It will intriguing to see how they work this out!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Failure

Good chapter! Thanks for posting!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 -Disaster

Cocky isn't he!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

Phew! Stunning chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

Whooo! Who knew? Great chapter! Happy Holidays to you both!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

And Happy Holidays to you too =)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Damn, great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Whoa! So, things don't look like they will bode well for those 2 vamps! They have no clue!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review =) Things will get...messy. lol

And thank you for reading!

 

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Well!  What a tale! Very exciting and scary, like a big ass rollercoaster, I'm dreading and enjoying it! Poor Bella (and all the humans!) for that to be their reality! I'm wondering why Bellas' "Parents" didn't search for her ? Surely they have phones,no? They cared for her enough to raise her as theirs. And, Jasper! Isn't he sly~ but, he would have to be, to be raised in that environment. To be debased and made to feel little all his life. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Great question! They could search for her, but it wouldn't do any good. She doesn't belong to them any longer. Once a human is taken and collared, they become that vampire's property. I know that sounds bad, really bad. And Bella did wear an ID collar, but no one was there to protect her or keep her from getting stolen. The human trade/slave market is so corrupt, anything goes. And Peter and  Char took that risk by ripping off her collar and taking her, claiming her as their own.

Yeah Jasper, he is sly isn't he? lol

Thanks so much! We hope you'll like the 2nd half.

Thanks again =)

Summary:

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Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Girl! Relegated to the homestead! I hope she explains why she was seen in the saloons ~ looking for that drunk! I love that Carmen is her Abuelita!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, I'm thrilled, ready for the next era in their lives! Great start!

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter! I love how he thinks he's outgrown the town! The ladies are already loving him!

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks for the family tree! Good chapter! The tomboy grew up,lol! So much for the young Dr. leaving town!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't help but, smirk! She's going to give him a run for the money! I doubt he has ever encountered anyone like our girl! Good chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So happy to see that you posted! Loved it! I am looking forward to the get together at the ranch!!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aw, sweet! So happy you posted! I love this continuation of your 1st story!

Summary:

You Know What You Are

Who is in control? Jasper thinks he has settled into his existence, but Alice brings an earthquake of doubt to crack his foundation. AU


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6789 Read Count: 78
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Dec 2010
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You Know What You Are

Loved it! Well written!



Author's Response:

thanks so much! :)

Summary:

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After spending years in love with her best friend, Bella deals with heartache and learns to grow when he chooses another. 

 

My winning entry for the FanFicAholics Anon's 100 Pictures Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 1391
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Not That Girl

Terribly sweet! I loved it!

Defection by faerie_kitten Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A young Roman soldier walking the wall sees something that he doesn’t agree with and takes matters into his own hands.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1782 Read Count: 44
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting! I am intrigued!



Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks for your review, sorry it's taken so long to reply! Glad you enjoyed it! There isn't any more to it at the moment, as it was written for a workshop early last year, but it was fun to write.

Chelle

Midnight Carnival by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Killer chapter! So glad J and V got what they deserved! I'm hoping B is safe !



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I hope the second chapter with Bella safe with Edward was what you expected.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is what happens when you watch TV commercials, you end up in Seattle at the St. Patrick's Day parade. Are the Cullen's and Swan's Irish?  Find out in this fluffy humor filled one shot.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4803 Read Count: 112
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Party On

Really cute story! When I saw the pic of Em I LMAO, then I had to read your story ~ really enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was a holiday I could just see Emmett celebrating in full force.  First time I made a banner myself, I know it's a bit crude, but you have to start someplace to learn all the tricks. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

Image and video hosting by TinyPic

-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One

Yikes! Could that little bomb be dropped at a better time?  And, is Edward on to Bella's plot with regards to his book?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two

I'm impressed that he could prioritize! Wow, well she is playing him soooo, he's going to play her! It's getting really fun!

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Player

Yikes! I have no fear of Edward and her parents together, but...him at Jake's wedding? I hope he doesn't humiliate her at the wedding. As bitchy and underhanded as she is does she merit that sort of cruelty? Good chapter!!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid

Oh Lord, B! When it starts raining it will really pour! Trouble ahead!

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One

Loved it!!!!

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

Pretty cool chapter!



Author's Response:

Pretty cool review! ;)

Thanks!

xoxo

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Phew! Good chapter! Now I don't mean to sound cranky or bitchy, BUT, the not knowing what the hell is going on is driving me crazy,lol! C'mon, you have to give us something to hold on to!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Ok, it's absurd that someone "reported" you! Good chapter!

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Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Whoooeee! Killer chapter! Who would have thought that he actually had a soul? 

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Amazing chapter!

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Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!!

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Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Good chapter! Definite progress!

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Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great chapter! Some progress has been made, but, it sure takes them eons to sort themselves out, lol!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Good chapter! Phew these two! I think it's interesting that he felt the need to abuse her for his own feelings of insecurity. That he saw himself in her and her situation! They are slowly bridging the gap, I think that they actually need each other. Bella's mom is a piece of work,ugh! She is never going to be happy for her daughter or even love her.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surviving the fisrt day

He is in a word, a DICK. He takes pleasure in others misfortunes...yeah, and, surrounds himself with people of the same ilk.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Adaptation

Good chapter! Happy Holidays!

Two by mizz_france Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Thanks to the wonderful  Mehek18 for the banner!

 

Thanks to the wonderful mehek18 for the beautiful banner!

Bella Swan loved her boys, they were her world. After the accident that took their life, some might say she went a little crazy.* Winner for peoples choice runner up. A hardcore horror one shot contest*

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Tragic Affairs
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2594 Read Count: 288
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The poor dog, Rosalie did not deserve that! I'm all for her getting her revenge,lol, but, not abusing the dog!

Deadly Sin by Allegra D Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In hindsight I suppose, I should have read the signs, not obvious, but subtle…  The evidence was there.  I thought I’d become immune to the constant disappointment, when an arranged outing or visit from him just didn’t materialise. I’d learnt over the years not to ask any questions.  It was his job, his business and that was that! But it never stopped me from being curious.  So little did I know…?


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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42152 Read Count: 649
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2011 Updated: 04 Nov 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Package

Great start!

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Inferno

Oh Gurl! I was praying she wouldn't make a sound! So glad she con her way out!

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Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Cryptic Clues

Omg! Scary and exciting!

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Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Crossfire

Good chapter!



Author's Response:

aborealis7  Hoping you're enjoy Allegra's antics, unfortunately things are about to get a little interesting.  The story is already written and I should be posting regularly, but I'm glad you seem to be enjoying.

 

Deb

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Resources

Goodness! All these hijinks, I hope she can stay safe!

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Say Goodbye Banner by FrozenSoldier

Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27183
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In with the New

I'm really enjoying this tale of yours! She most certainly cleaned house! Too bad she waited a year, but, better late than never! It's amazing what one will compromise on or give into when n a relationship! A bad realtionship....!



Author's Response:

Thank you. We've all been there on some level, right? 

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Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words

OMG, she really went there! Lol, she's lethal! But, I think she needs to do the ex in too!



Author's Response:

Brilliant minds think alike, perhaps ;)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope

Good chapter! I love all her internal chatter!



Author's Response:

She's a bit twisted, perhaps, but THANK YOU! ;)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Easy

Loved it! I can't help it, you always make me laugh! The engraved invite set me off! Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Well, I'm honored to be responsible for your laughter. Bella is too ;)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Warm

Loved It! You clever little minx! What an awesome twist!

(the wonderful thing about Tiggers is Tiggers are wonderful things!)

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

The Calm before the Storm Banner 1


The Calm before the Storm Banner 2





Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Good chapter!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU :O)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Good chapter! That was tragic, poor Charlie never got over her...

Bella is going to fall apart ~ she was most def  a Mama's girl. There is no option for her now, and Phil in the institution? Good fake out.

After the week you have had you deserve the whole bottle of wine! I'm so sorry you lost your job, sending you Good Wishes! ab7



Author's Response:

FYI -- I did drink that entire bottle of wine (with a little help from my husband, of course!).

Thank you for the good wishes.  

Bless :o)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15B

Good chapter! I think Bella should tell her father the whole story ~ he is her Dad and a Cop. This is something that she can't solve on her own, and most of all dangerous and frightening!

Alice is hilarious! Stealing like a little klepto! I love that crazy dog Wallace! Tearing up Charlies paper! Mhm, I've got a husky named Lily who delights in all manner of newpapers and catlogues!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter (make sure you check out the pictures I added).

I love Wallace, too! Too bad Bella doesn't! LOL!!!! Lily is a great name for your husky :o)

Hopefully, Bella will be able to sit down with Charlie to talk about that letter.......

Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Omg, the devil is in town,lol!

Could Newton be more in love with himself? Good chapter!

I'm sorry to hear you have been so ill, and, It sounds like you are swamped with catching up! I hope you are feeling better soon ~ my Mom always makes me rice pudding with cinnamon when I'm sick~ I'm hoping you have something comforting to ease your way back to being well!

I'm just happy when ever you post!



Author's Response:

Michael is such an asshat!!!!

Thank you for your well wishes.  I'm feeling better but unfortunately, I have this chronic cough that won't go away and now they want more chest x-rays.  Lovely.........

By the way, I love rice pudding with cinnamon (without the raisins - bleh!). 

Thank you for reviewing :o)

 

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

He really is a nasty piece of work...I hope that the country "bumpkins" can sniff out a rat! Good chapter! Hope you and yours are better soon!

(I love that when you write I can visualize everything so clearly! You leave nothing to chance!)



Author's Response:

Phil really is a despicable man!!! 

Thank you for your good wishes.  Everyone is well except for me -- I developed pneumonia two days ago but I'm hanging in there.  I'm sitting in bed right now drinking some hot tea/honey that my husband made for me and will be taking a nap along with some very strong meds shortly.

I am thrilled that you are able to 'see' what I am writing.  Thank you so much for letting me know that.....

Thanks for reviewing :o)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

All kinds of mixed messages!



Author's Response:

You can say that again!!!!!!! I swear -- I just wanted to slap Edward upside the head, didn't you? LOL!!

Thank you for reviewing :o)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Certainly intriguing! Nasty ol' Phil has a body to dispose of...? I like the era you have chosen to work your story in! It will be interesting to see where this goes! Well written!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I have always been fascinated by life during the Great Depression.  Back then, people had to depend on each other and no one took anything for granted.  My Grandmom told me she never threw anything away.  Nothing went to waste......

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great chapter!!! Could Phil and his hired help be any sleezier?



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Yes, Phil and Winston are total sleazebags in this story........

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great chapter! If Renee is that desperate to get Bella out oof town  ~ it's got to be something that's really awful is about to go down...

Look forward to whatever is in that envelope!



Author's Response:

Yes, some awful things will happen but not just yet.  As for the letter, will Bella even get the chance to read it?

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I have no idea how people lived in the heat without a/c!



Author's Response:

It isn't easy.  I actually did without A/C for the first 18 years of my life.  Ugh!

Thanks for the review, aborealis7 !!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Loved it! Great chapter! She really doesn't know any other way of life,lol ~poor girl!

Happy Holidays !



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it :)

Yes, Bella really doesn't know any other way of life but she's going to have to learn!

I don't know how you guys feel about Bella but as much as I want to feel sorry for her, I want to smack the shit out of her, too!!

Happy Holidays to you, too!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, aborealis7.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Ahaha! Love that list! Poor girl, such a rude awakening! Does Charlie know exactly what type of man that creepy stepfather is? I'm still worried about all the nonsense she escaped from...



Author's Response: No, Charlie does not know about Phil....yet.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Ouch! Who sent the telegram? How did they know who to send it to? How safe can she be if they know where she is? Lol, I know ,50 questions!



Author's Response:

Actually, you have very good questions but unfortunately, I can't give you the answers to them right now.  LOL!!!

In the next chapter, you will find out who sent the telegram and what it said.  

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Loved it! I can't help but sit here and laugh! He doesn't know if he's coming or going! (no pun intended)



Author's Response:

LOL!!!!!!!! Thank you for reviewing and for making soda come out my nose!!

xoxox

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Ahaha! The last sentence and then "Have a wonderful weekend"! Gurl, you jst crack me up! Good chapter! Now you know we are all going Who, what where? You scamp, you have a great weekend with your hubby!



Author's Response:

LOL!! Thank you, aborealis7  :o)

Hopefully, this weekend will improve -- my husband's car broke down on the way home from work last night.  He's not a happy camper right now.......sniff.

Enjoy your weekend, too :)

Summary:



I felt bad for denying him for so long, for the pain that I must have caused him. I would make it up to him. I would show him the love and affection that he'd been denied for his whole life. I would show him what it was like to have someone who loved you unconditionally.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2683 Read Count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! Trick or Treat and Happy BDay!

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Sigh...swoon...! What can one say? Wonderfully written!



Author's Response:

Thanks, great reviews, encourages me loads xx

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Consumed

Wow, Charlie really is as good as gold! What a lovely man, "forgiveness" in his heart as he assumes his end is near.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Feelings

Ack! Charlie would have a fit,lol! A bit of self discovery there! Good chapter, is Edward already there?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Enraptured

I thought she was going to put up more of a fight,lol!



Author's Response:

I did try writing it with more of a fight, but then he fought and it became more of a wrestling match...so I had her give in like a good girl and let him have his way...perhaps this is more my fantasy!

Summary:

 

A vicious beast is lurking and prowling on Fork's street. This monster is vengeful, something no one can conquer. Can he be out smarted? Thwarted? Read the 3rd person P.O.V, Fairytale like poem, of the travesty bestowed on the damned town of Forks.    

Winner of Judges Choice: Modern Day Grimm. (Very Old Contest)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, One-Shot, Poetry
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3338 Read Count: 258
[Report This] Published: 29 Feb 2012 Updated: 29 Feb 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Poetic Justice.

Really fun! I flashed back to when I read Dr. Seuss every night to my girls! I can recite All his books in my sleep!

A Saucy Tale by Deirdre Gold Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Fleeing the Terror in Paris, 1793, Marianne meets Guy Mansell In Edinburgh. She is too quick to trust this charming, and oh so handsome, man who seems to hold the answer to her prayers. He is playing a double game but his deepening and powerful attraction to this lovely woman makes him question his long held beliefs. She is swept up in a new and glorious passion but he holds a secret which may destroy her trust forever.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Historical, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15737 Read Count: 305
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A saucy taleindeed! Really enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it. As my first attempt at a steamy, historical romance, I was hoping for some feedback to let me know if I'm on the right track. So your kind words have really boosted me. Thanks again, love Deirdre. 

People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter! Uh, engaged in what,lol?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ooh! She should have kneed him in the crotch ~ he deserves it,lol!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So, a magical tranformation happened?

Good chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I thought that was going to smoothly! Good chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really, he is a grade A ass! Mean and a bit sociopathic!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

Oh no! I'm feeling really sick....!

Baby Creeps by DurtyNelly Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A little creep can go a long way....   


Genre: Extreme Horror

Rating: M (for now)

Length: Drabbles and micro fiction, 100 - 1000 word stories.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108 Read Count: 320
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Walter

OMG! I did not see that coming ~ grisly and oddly funny!



Author's Response:

"Grisly and oddly funny" 

You made my day, doll. 

Thanks for reading! :)