Reviews by mountainlion718
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm so glad he's having the apt packed up for her and she doesn't have to go back. Sux to be Jacob and Jim..... Haha! I think B & E will always have these little arguments/stubborn moments, but it's just them, they seem to help strengthen their relationship everytime they reconcile.

Author's Response: They really are impossible, aren't they? As for J&J...hmmm next week... :) thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yup, looks like 'Jim' is really James, Carmen and Eliazar's wayward son..... Crap! Please tell me Esme's tears were happy ones and Bella misunderstood..... Edward's gonna be pissed when he gets up and finds out she's gone, and she's still collared......

Author's Response:

Don't you just love Thanksgiving with the Cullens? Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

What a Thanksgiving! Lol! So glad everything got sorted out, I think it will be better if Charlie comes up, he can see how Edward takes care of her and not that she's just sleeping around with him

Author's Response:

thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh wow, yeah Bella messed up a bit but, I can totally seethe justification in her actions ( not that I'm condoning it) wonder what her punishment will be.....'and what was with the Vanessa chick, he told Bella they wouldn't be "playing" at the party, but then he did that to her in front of Vanessa.....

Author's Response:

thanks as always for your comment and review, xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I hope this 'training' goes well for Bella.. I'm just still really nervous about Jacob and James running around out there

Author's Response:

I think the fun is in the practicing what she's learned :)  James and Jacob - yeah they make me nervous too...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

oh no, James and Jacob are coming, aren't they......Will Anderson be around this weekend with her????? Edward's gonna go ballistic if something happens to her. I like the games, seemed to put her more at ease, plus the benifits of them working with Garrett and Kate

Author's Response:

thanks for the review sweetie :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

big revelations for little Bella there. a lot can happen in those 3 hrs until Anderson comes back to the house. Please let those girls all be ok. I just hope that the feeling that Edward has brings them home early......(is it next Sat. yet...lol)

Author's Response:

sh - I'm thinking about posting a little earlier - but then the next update only be the following weekend... hmm what to do...

thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Fuckawesome chapter!!!!!!! This totally blew me away! I thought I was gonna cry right along with Edward when he found out what was happening. You made me feel every single one of their emotions.... I didn't want this chapter to end (I mean not that I wanted the girls to keep living thru that horror, but it was just so good and so many POV's, I wanted to know what everyone was thinking) between Edward and Anderson, Bell will never be out of either sight for a long while..... Great job!

Author's Response:

you are awesome.  thank you so much for your wonderful words.

xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

:D Rosie's Prego!!!! i'm so glad she's not seriously ill. Just when i think Bella's the perfect picture of a submissive, she goes and hides something from Edward again. trial and error i guess.....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

She's getting there. She's taking 3 steps forward and one step back. But is all a learning experience. I can't wait till he sees his present! I love after the discipline and punishment, they can go right back to being playful with each other

Author's Response:

yes she is getting there! thank you for your review, ml718 xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

i hope the VF interview goes smoothly. i got a bad vibe off Heidi, will she be trouble in the future??? that car ride is gonna be tension filled! i want Charlie to get along with Edward and not have those preconceived assumptions of him

Author's Response:

thanks for the review ml, hmmm Heidi, I'm not sure, what do you think...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

She really needed that, just to get it all out. And Carlisle was right in stopping Edward from rushing out to her, she gotta deal with things on her own sometimes.

Author's Response:

thank you, as always your comments are so insightful

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

great Christmas! i'm so glad Bella & Charlie are in the healing stage now. thinking about the painting she made him, made me cry! i hope Bella's stomach issue isn't anything more serious than nerves. i cannot wait till Edward sees Bella;s other gift!!!

Author's Response:

thanks so much for your comments - next chapter

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

she did great in the interview....i know Jaz and Edward are gonna find out what the Twisters are hiding, and they'll get into even more trouble.

Author's Response:

BURNING BUMS! BURNING BUMS!  I don't want to think about it ....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wow, that was heart breaking , I agree with Carlisle thought, knowing how Bella is and how easily her self esteem is shattered, I think there cod have been a better form of punishment. To totally ignore her and leave her in the dark, was kind of like her nightmare. I mean , yes they deserved to be punished ( even though I was a little shocked that Esme gave a little rant) and agree with separating the girls for a month. I just know that this punishment is messing with her and she does not need any more doubts swirling. Around in her head

Author's Response:

thank you for your great comments, babe - yeah that knee jerk reaction is never a good thing.

xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

omg, talk about riveting!!!! the wedding was beautiful! the honeymoon night....HOT and then Edward became stupid *sigh* but Bella put her big girl panties on and once he recovers he should be SO PROUD the way she handled herself. i can't believe Victoria came out of the wood work like that. i;m so glad he woke up before the end of the chapter....i don't think i could have survived that kind of cliffy.....lol!

Author's Response:

thank you for your generous review! She did put her big girl panties on and he is proud of her, even though he isn't a good patient and needs reminding which way is up! xoxo

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

awesome job as always, i hope she can pass this test, if she does, she will freaking explode by the time he just brushes by her...lol

Author's Response:

hmmm - so true! thanks for the review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

i loved how Edward handled Vanessa and Mandy (Bella too) they both did so well at the party. and wow, Carlisle let Edward have hit (and he deserved it) i know they will still have their ups and downs, but it looks like they are on the right track now

Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review as always hon.

:)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

way to put both the pixie and Jazzy in their places Edward...hope they both listen. i like the sessions with Paul, i think they'll do a world of good. she can't be charged with murder!!!! it was self defense!, is Billy STUPID! Jacob forced himself into Rose's home, hit Bella, choked Alice, threatened them, Kate was shot....I see where Jacob got his mental instability from....Billy has lost his mind if he thinks that will stick!

Author's Response:

slow down there sweetie!  thanks for the review - I'm sending a little J & A out take your way!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

whew! crisis averted with all the Jacob stuff.....even though they are going to therapy and getting better, i still love every time they butt heads! both so damn stubborn. love how Edward put his foot in his mouth about the weight issue....too funny, men will never learn ;) i wonder if Anderson used the paparazzi excuse and shoved them all in the car to end the torture of the shopping excursion....lol

Author's Response:

you read my mind about the paps and Andy - you will hear more of his conversation with Brian in the next chapter.  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Heavy chapter! I love Kate and he no nonsense ways. I hope Bella is done hiding things from Edward now. Alice definitely needed an attitude adjustment. she's great and all but such a bad influence.

Author's Response:

I think that Bella has learned her lesson - finally!  thanks for the review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

omg ESME! what were you thinking.....i can't even begin to think what Carlisle is gonna do to you....yikes! Bella needs her little (painful) reminders from time to time

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I'm so glad Carlisle and Esme reconciled, I hated seeing them apart. They are going to need to rent a catering hall just to host the holiday and birthday parties, all these babies and extended family members.... :).

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

i hope her showing does well, and please let her stay out of trouble while Edward is away.....happy holidays

Author's Response:

I promise to look after our girl. the out take will be up in the week. xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

damn, that was a tough punishment, but didn't Edward call her at all from Fri thru Sunday???, isn't kinda his fault too for not checking up on her, maybe if he had called, she would have remembered to sleep and eat

Author's Response:

That was the thing - HE DID CALL HER and she told him that she was fine (you skipped that part of the chapter) and that was one of the reasons why he was so pissed! B had ample opportunity to fess up, but she didn't even think about it.  Now you can't go all Mama Mountainlion protective over her, she was at fault and she knew it.

But, she is stepping up and taking her punishment and it will be good loving time for the next while - promise. Edward wanted her to learn this lesson because you know how much he loves her and worries about her. Filming is about to begin and he needs to know that she will take care of herself while he is away. 

Now, calm down and when you have stopped seeing red, re read the chapter and you will see that he is not going all gungho on her ass for fun. Edward is quite deliberate about his punishments and Bella has learned her lesson. Next chapter is tahoe and the oscars - lots of fun and good lovin'

Thanks for the review, Sweetie. I promise you that it will be okay!

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

now, i remember that part....oops! sorry Edward! *sheepish grin* Pay more attention Bella!...lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Yay, the babies are coming!!! I was crying when Edward felt them kick! So sweet! How awkward would that be if C & E were at the same munch as E & B....lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

great chapter, but what a roller coaster at the end. i'm just glad she had so many looking out for her. and oooo Esme is in TROUBLE!!!....lol I love the inserted pictures :) helps with the visual ;) and HELL YEAH SEQUEL!!!!!!

Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review - outtake up sometime this week xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

love the pics in the chapter, that little girl was SO cute! so many great moments (sad and happy), B & E role reversal, the boys playing b-ball, the wedding, Sue & Bella's talk, setting the date, Edward yelling at his Momma, Brian yelling at Edward, Edward being fed up with Bella and stopping the whole finance discussion, Bella apologizing before leaving, Bella & Jazz's talk, and Alice's reveal. and all the pics were great. i hope they can keep the wedding under wraps..... Sorry you had such a crappy week, hope it gets better for you!

Author's Response:

thank you darling for your wonderful comments and review. as always you are so good for my inspiration to keep on going.

Love and hugs,

Michele

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

they started off so well and then 'boom' big rough patch, but they worked it out, they need to keep up the communications. I felt so bad for Brian, being caught in the middle like that, but he is a trooper :)

Author's Response:

Hey there ML, thanks for the comments and the review - don't worry, Brian will have his say in the next chapter! Happy V Day babe.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

she better get those silly notions out of her head. i love the names and the pics of the babies....so cute!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

wow, tons happened this chapter...jeez, Alice was a monster...lol. The baby is too cute!!! love the wedding outfits, especially Esme's, so classy. Bella seems to be holding her tongue much better :)

Author's Response:

Oh my, you spoke too soon ML718,  Bella's mouth is getting her into trouble in next chapter! Silly Girl - doesn't she know that Domward isn't going to take her nonsense xoxo

Thanks so much for your review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

um.....how is that possible?????????? well i'm glad they were cleared for extra curricular activities ;) i think Bella gave Heidi and Felix the best bitch out ever :) can't wait to hear what Renee did.......

Author's Response:

come on ml718 - you need to get that diabolical logic working - hmmm "if I were Renee, a cold, hard, crazy bitch, what would I do to trap some poor unsuspecting policeman??....."

Update on time, promise!

Mwah!

Michele

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

holy crap!, you weren't kidding when you said her mouth would get her into trouble this chapter....damn! the scene at the munch was HOT! great job!. Imma bout to smack Charlie, but it seems Sue will beat me to it....lol and the Uncles.....let's just say EW! haha! the letter, that damn letter....i hope it will not hurt her and she can finally move on, but i know there will be some effed up crap in there. can't wait for the ceremony! Event of the year!!!

Author's Response:

soon, I promise, soon.  That damn letter - yeah, not so much good news, but that depends on how you look at it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

more tears this chapter! especially when he was missing Bella so much after he was such an ass! I loved how she handled those guys @ the hotel retaurant! Anderson would be so proud. Oh and when Edward broke down with Garrett, forget it, i needed tissues! good thing he read the journal and it sparked the conversation, she was so lost there for a bit. Hope you had a wonderful Easter!! till next time.....

Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review and the comments, I'm glad that this story still touches you. xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

that whole thing with Renee is crazy, but thank god she's not related in anyway......i wonder what Bella's hiding now, they're doing so well in the communication dept. Edward should just confront her about what she's hiding

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

holy mackerel!...lol yes it was long but soooo good! yes! she's preggo!!! so happy for them! so now there are going to be babies everywhere!!! the 2 pics of Bean and Alice's baby were too freaking cute!!!!

Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

i can't believe Edward was going to challenge Charlie......lol. i love the idea of the ranch :) still a lot of months left for Bella's hormones to go all wacky and piss Edward off.....lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

loved how she stood up for herself!!! and that Edward got to hear it. 'Dana' was great :) i guess no one told the delivery guy to keep hush, hush about the price.....yikes@ Edward is in so much trouble!!!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

i'm so glad Bella finally let Alice have it...and that Edward and Jazz stayed out of it.

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Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

yikes, i hope this doesn't bring out crazy insecurity in Bella.....that girl sounds like a bitch!back off skank! i don't think Edward should hide what happened, it may bite him in the ass.....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

omg! i could kiss Ernst and Nicholas! love them, so loyal and mischievous :) can't believe the possums are 1 already, they're growing so fast!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

awesome chapter! so much happened! i thought i was gonna lose it when the kids raided the pantry :) and OMG! 2 Academy Awards! Stellar!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

BRAVO! this was absolutely freaking amazing! i can't believe it's over. you've had me hooked since i found this. i can't wait to read the next one! you should be so proud!

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84834
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Outtake 2: Gettin' Our Honeymoon On

very sweet!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

great Christmas! 7 kids between them, so sweet!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

whew.....that was a welcomed homecoming for Edward....lol

Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good beginning! Hope Edward will make a move!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awww :( things should be looking up soon....right?

Author's Response:

They will, I promise!  ;)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

sounds like fun! how are tehy going to move that furniture off the truck?

Author's Response:

Lots of help.  ;)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

can't wait to see the links! yes, please send them!

Author's Response:

Be aware, there are pics in here for later chapters, so you're likely to be spoiled.  ;)  DESTINY PICS

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

they are such good friends, i know saying goodbye will be so painful :(

Author's Response:

It will. But they'll see each other again.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

they are so cute! can't get any better than him saving her *swoon*

Author's Response:

Hehehe Very Twilight-esque, no?  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella's in for a surprise :)

Author's Response:

hehe Thanks for the reviews.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

it's gonna be so sad when they leave :(

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

so sad....hope Edward can cheer her up! so glad she threw the card away

Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

*squee* so cute! yay!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D  hehe

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

:) great date! they can have dinner every night!

Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thanks.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

cool! he has a mountain lion tattoo! he's so good to her, i hope she continues to let him in

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review.  :)  I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

whew! steamy :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

poor Bella, i hope James can never get out......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

give Bella a little alcohol and lookout! lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yay! that was perfect :) and the ILY's, so happy!

Author's Response:

hehe Thank you for your continued reviews!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

freaky Laurent, bet you James sent him.......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

awww, he's so caring, i'm glad they exchanged keys and now she's got the security system

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

TP is a great game :) glad it all went so well

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

uh oh.....something happened to her store.......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

very personal stuff......i see a hidden message in that act

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

i don't think any amt of cleaning would get me to stay in that apt anymore

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

loved that proposal!!!! :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

nice family Christmas :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

nice gifts!!! i can't wait to see the puppies!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

what a way to ring in the new year....lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

too funny!, B & E have the right idea going to Vegas!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

loved the vows! so beautiful!! where are they going????

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

i can't believe it's almost over :(

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

awesome ending!!!! loved it, great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I'll post the 2 outtakes soon.  :)  I really appreciate all the reviews!

Summary:

Bella doesn't want to go out, Alice and Rosalie force her to join in on the fun! What happens when a gorgeous stranger spills his drink on her? AH/AU OOC ExB One-shot for St. Patty's Day!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3907 Read Count: 621
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Mar 2010
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Alice, Alice, Alice.....what are besties for....LOL

Author's Response:

LOL!  True...true!!  Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol, gotta love Alice! will you continue?

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm glad you liked it!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me

Great story, I'm so hooked. I hope Bella can cope being in the limelight now and hope Edward can cope being away from her when she goes back home

Author's Response:

I know! That is definately going to be hard on them...what will he do? :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

Rosalie is seriously sick in the head...i feel so bad for Emmett

Author's Response:

me too...thanks for your review!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me

again, i say poor Emmett....he freaking knows....ugh, she's gonna push him to a point where he's just gonna tell her to take a hike

Author's Response:

I know, Rosalie is such a bitch...selfish, self-centered and rude lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

hmmm, either Rose or Gianna messed with the dress. jealous bitches!

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Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

Jeez, it seems Rosalie is just getting worse and worse. can't wait till these two have an all out war

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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace

arrggh! damn him and his childish temper! go back and TALK to her you moron (if she's even there when you get back)

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell

i can't wait till they move in. i think a Doberman is perfect!

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry

i really hope that video doesn't fall into the wrong hands......

Author's Response:

right? I told them...but they don't listen haha. Lets see how B fares meeting the rest of his family, it ought to be interesting to say the least!

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

nice bachelor party...lol. hope they catch Gianna and she better not interfere with the wedding.

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Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

omg, Edward's parents are awesome! love how Esme took out the 'trash' ...lol ..i wonder what the hell Tanya is up to....evil sneaky bitch

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

Nice ideas with the tats. Crap, someone has that video right?

Author's Response:

As always, thanks for reviewing! God, that would suck. That video does not need to be floating around the internet! lol

Thanks again and see you soon!

Laila

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Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

damn, i thought we could have gotten rid of Gianna easier

Author's Response:

Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone

man, poor Bella can't catch a break.....I have no problems with the way Edward acted, Mateo was being an ass

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

i totally get where Edward is coming from with the anger and jealously....i think it's warrented, but there are always 2 sides so you just gotta deal and move on.....;)

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

Glad he had it out with Jasper, I hope this interview goes well, they need some peace

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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long

Great, Renee had to open her big mouth! i could just imagine what she said

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

i knew that damn video was gonna make an appearance. great, keeping this from Edward is gonna cause a HUGE fight!

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Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: I Want You

No need for Charlie to be so extremely rude! i hope he doesn't start with him at the pool hall.....

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady

Yes, he dropped the charges! And Rosalie is gone! Now just get rid of Gianna and we'll be good

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart

oh no!, freaking set up! damn, how is he gonna get out of this...! LOVE Capo, good boy!

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun

Pleas let her fine the juiciest, dirtiest, secret she can find on that dirtbag Colin! It'll keep her distracted enough so time will go fast and Edward will be back ASAP