Reviews by mountainlion718
Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mli

After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Thank god for Jasper ! At least they listened and voiced everything.

Author's Response:

Jasper really gained some followers after the last couple chapters! Thanks so much for reading! As always, I really appreciate the reviews!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Yeah probably Jacob hired Jimmy to beat up Leah......Edward is right to go all caveman!

Author's Response:

Could be, could be...Yay for caveman Eddie! Thank you! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

hope Em will be alright......i can't believe someone would trick out a car just to hurt someone else

Author's Response:

I think Em will be fine ;)  I guess the person responsible, was very determined... Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

so happy they are all ok! yes! Edward is going to propose! the new story look great, can't wait! good luck with your surgery, hope you recover quickly!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice words. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I AM working on the new one... :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Well GO! get a move on and find your woman! please let Bella be ok

Author's Response:

Go Edward!  LOL Thank you for reading-sorry my response was delayed!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

wow, he is sick in the head.....i hope Edward can get her out of there. I hope you feel better soon and that the health issues are not serious.

Author's Response:

I kind of enjoyed writing James in this story. I had to channel my inner psychopath.  LOL  Thanks for the well wishes-and thank you for reading/reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

great ending, glad they are so happy! i can't believe it's over, i'll miss this so much! hope all goes well with your surgery, get well soon!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the well wishes and...I'm posting an outtake when I get caught up on these reviews :)  I hope you'll enjoy it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

love the names! So sad about Bella not being able to have any more babies, but they've got 4 beautiful children:)

Author's Response:

Thank you-I agonized over the names for a while before those just 'came' to me :)  Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Two by vbfb1 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella never expected in less than a year she would be in labour again. Damn Edward’s super sperm.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1714 Read Count: 3032
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great one shot! very sweet!

Summary:

Bella is asked out on a date by fellow student, at Seattle University, Jacob Black. She's somewhat eager to go out with him, having felt some kind of physical attractiont to him.

But what happens when she takes down his number incorrectly?

Bella and Edward had an unusual meeting just over a year ago. When Bella took down a friend's phone number, incorrectly, she proceeded to text Edward instead, forming a fast friendship with him and eventually falling in love. A year later and once again their relationship is via text and email as Edward is gaining some valid work experience while helping those less fortunate, in third world countries. Edward has big plans for his return and Bella has a secret which may throw a spanner in the works.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20337 Read Count: 6726
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!! :) wish i got a wrong number like that....lol!

Author's Response:

Thank you! And I actually did get a wrong number like this. It led to a life long friendship (unfortunately no soul mate at the end of it) and that is what led to this story!

Loud by duhitsangie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

"I bet the neighbors know my name, the way you screamin', scratchin', yellin'." Music inspired One Shot for Friday Night Bites contest. Lemon.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1478 Read Count: 647
[Report This] Published: 16 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great one shot...funny :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167524
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 44: 44 In Tandem

Sometimes you just need a fresh and new pair of eyes to see what you overlooked. i cringed with the collar incident, i thought he'd hit the roof! I don't know about Bella doing a cage dive, that's the ultimate test for her i would think

Author's Response:

We suspect if he hadn't had an extra collar on board, he would not have been so quick to let things go. But we'll never know. He's stubborn as all hell! LOL

A cage dive will be her ultimate test for sure. She's testing her control of her anxiety, her ability to fully trust her teammate, and she has to perform her duties without freezing. We are definitely rooting for her to go for it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 41: 41 End of the Line

beautifully done :) I'm so happy he's done with that line! i can see why Bella was waiting for a freak out, I think they'll balance work and love just fine :D

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: 48 The Iceman Cometh

seems his subconscious is a nudger too....lol. what a way to start a proposal, but it's a story to pass down. they are one big family unit and it's a beautiful thing to see. will Renee pop up?

Author's Response:

We don't believe so. The only change we see in regards to her is Alice taking a much more realistic view of her mom.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 58: 58 I Do Times Two

Wow, I can't believe it's over. I will miss this so much. What an amazing job you've done.. I looked forward to every chapter and everyone's part in this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks, mountainlion. We are going to miss the misfits and all of you too :)

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 52: 52 Octopus Overlords

Sorry, I was ready to wring Jacob's neck ....love how Bella defended and explained everything. Edward's reactions were normal, especially the way Jacob was acting.....

Author's Response:

Jacob went full protective mode without a pause for breathing! LOL  But Leah knew he would pull himself out of it - that's why she didn't smack him upside his big head. LOL

Edward did a great job controlling his temper and being open to B's friends. Very proud of him!

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Date: 22 May 2015 Title: Chapter 50: 50 Traditions Old & New

heart attack city with the shark!....sheesh! i love all the pov's.

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Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 55: 55 Secrets & Societies

Aww, I love Gopher's wedding idea....so romantic! Good for the girls finally clearing the air. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a very happy New Year!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 51: 51 'Ohana of Characters

I look forward to every update :) wonder if the Renee issue will cause friction in the future.

Author's Response:

:) So glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 56: 56 A Fighter and A Queen

So proud of her work with the shark! She did great! I would have been pissed with the laughing too...lol! Awesome surprise wedding! Awww Lee was so happy! !!!

Author's Response:

Oh yeah! EA and I would have been livid too. But we also get where he's coming from in his explanation of it so we'd have to forgive him pretty quick too. LOL

 

Lee was so very happy. It was great to do something sweet for her and Emmett. :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 34: 34 What Do I Stand For

wow, great chapter! Alice really does need to go and i'm glad it was Carlisle who gave her that talk. that should make for a very interesting morning meeting! I was so proud of Bella the way she handled herself on that skiff, she trusted Masen and followed his instructions and helped protect her team.

Author's Response:

Bella did such a great job!! We are so proud of her!!

Yeah, Alice needs to hit her bottom so she can really begin getting her head straight!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 36: 36 Mermaids & Moonlight Kisses

there are just no words for Alice's behavior.....jeez! it's best for all of them to just ignore her till the go on the next location

Author's Response:

Nope. No words. Not until she explains herself and even then maybe not.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 37: 37 Tsunami of Emotion

very productive day for Bella and Edward. Alice is......treading a very thin line, she hasn't got much time left.

Author's Response:

No, Alice's time has definitely started to run out.  B&E had a great day :)  Thanks, ml!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 38: 38 Confession & Contrition

wow, look who did a 180! well as long as she doesn't slip back into "brat" Alice mode. i see Lee throwing her overboard if she makes or pulls any drma

Author's Response:

LOL  Yes, Lee would definitely make the attempt to toss Alice overboard! And it would take Gopher and Whit and Masen all together to stop her. LOL

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: 39 Trapped In A Rip Tide

once you're pissed at yourself, usually everyone else is a target for you, and anything said is just a trigger to snap. glad he finally realized and went to wait outside her room. i was just shocked that the other 3 were telling him what an ass he was being and he was acting like a child and saying they were taking sides.....what a mule!

Author's Response:

You called this so right!!  And yes, he was being an absolute mule - he could not for the life of him grasp why his friends were not siding with him for the first time ever and was stubbornly convinced the only rational explanation was a mutiny. LOL  Thankfully his time alone helped him realize he was a giant jerk and he had a good idea on how to start fixing things. :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 40: 40 Doubt vs Desire

love Esme and her wisdom :) Carlisle had good input too. can't wait for their dinner!

Author's Response:

We are very interested in finding out Edward's version of a date. The stubborn goober won't tell us any details. He says we have to wait just like his kapu. LOL

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 42: 42 Got Lucky

gotta love spending time with the family. whit and Esme are a riot..... Alice has to reel it in a little, it was like she had a large double caffeine coffee with a shot of espresso. ;D

Author's Response:

That is an excellent description of Alice! But reeling it in? Not gonna happen with this one. LOL

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 43: 43 Holding On & Letting Go

wow, that had to be hard for Masen, but he'll be so busy on the boat that time will fly and the iPads will help. Carlisle scared me there for a minute too...lol. can't wait to see what's up next!

Author's Response:

It's going to be a new kind of challenge for Masen to be without Esme, but he knows it's what she needs and he would do anything for her. Carlisle did such a great job being fake scary that the guys better make sure they never make him actually scary! LOL

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 45: 45 Decisions Are Made

Love Bella and Lee's bonding time. I think it meant a lot to Lee tha Bella was concerned about her reaction to not being on the skiff. So proud of Gopher, cracking up that he kept chanting to himself. Masen 's soft side is showing more and more especially with the little things he does for Bella, bringing back those little stingers meant so much and I was so happy about her taking the permanent position and confirming the cage dive! I'll be nervous for her but she is ready!

Author's Response:

It definitely meant a lot to Lee - her friendship with Bella is quickly growing as important to her as her other friendships, which is huge considering where they started. Gopher did such a great job and got to be the star for a change :) The cage dive will be nerve wracking for everyone but the entire team is ready for it and Bella will gain so much from it. We can't wait to share it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 46: 46 Tshirts & Talks

see, this is why i love them, they have they're little quirks (tantrums) but they talk and resolve, each are calm while the other is in their 'mood' but they listen a make their point like adults should. I got a little surprised by Esme and Carlisle with their concerns, i thought at first they were going to keep their reservations about them living together, but that's me, i react 1st and listen 2nd. once everyone spoke their mind, i got where everyone was coming from and the concerns they voiced. Loved that Edward said he needed help and would screw up in the beginning, no one is perfect..... Hope you have a very Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year!!!!!

Author's Response:

Esme and Carlisle would have loved nothing more than to congratulate them right away but they both feel such a deep responsibility that they couldn't express their joy until they'd made sure Edward and Bella had truly considered all possible outcomes. Have Edward admit that he isn't perfect is so big for him bc he's tried so many times to be perfect only to have things go so very wrong. We think he'll have an easier time adapting to life with a partner now that he's not expecting perfection.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 47: 47 Say Cheese

Im so proud of her!!! (Scared to hell that something might happen to her, Edward or Gopher) she did great talking herself back into researcher mode. Her blog is going to be amazing!

Author's Response:

Yeah!! A little scare and a lot of pride was exactly what we were hoping for!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: 49 From Predator to Prey

lots of opinions this chapter, i really thought Edward was going to stick his foot in his mouth again..... Loved his speeches!

Author's Response:

He could have easily put his foot right back in his mouth but he actually paused and thought about all he'd learned this summer first. Real progress with him!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 53: 53 With A What

Awww! I'm so excited and happy for them! !! Jeez, Edward's stomach must have dropped out when he heard "ultrasound" hope Alice will be just as happy for them

Author's Response:

His stomach dropped hard. But thankfully he didn't have to feel that way for long. Esme was there to calm his fears and give him some really great news.

 

Alice will definitely be happy. She loves babies and baby clothes so she'll be all involved - when Edward lets. LOL

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 57: 57 California Dreamin

Masen was just too adorable with Carly!! That melts my heart! Being goofy during a meeting happens sometimes, it was funny, (but not the bathroom duty )...lol

Author's Response:

LOL  Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 54: 54 New Addition Old Wounds

Alice, Alice, Alice....... (shakes head) ay, this girl, I know it wasn't done maliciously, but damn........ they'll need to sit down at some point but Bella has to cool off 1st. Love Bella s baby name suggestion. Awww, and Lilo :) yeah, Masen never had a chance. ..lol

Author's Response:

You are so right!! Masen never stood a chance at all!

Summary:

Bella never gave up hope that one day Edward would return, even though everyone told her it wasn't going to happen. Find out that in that sometimes when there's nothing left to hold onto except for Hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4751 Read Count: 639
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2011 Updated: 29 Nov 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!!! so touching!!!

Summary:

What happens when Bella tries to get out of an abusive relationship? Will her friends that she hasn't been able to be around be there to help her out?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8158 Read Count: 737
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great job! glad she had the courage to get out

Author's Response:

Eternally Gifted by Alley Cat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

He gently pulled me down the bed, bringing my legs over his shoulders. He kneeled, and a moment later, I felt those wonderful fingers of his spread me for him in slow passes. It was a play on my fantasy, and I didn't hold in the cry of pleasure when I felt his mouth-slightly chilly-touch my most sensitive spot. I felt myself arch, and my hands grabbed his head, holding on to the silk strands of his hair as he began licking and lapping and driving me completely beyond reasonable thought.

A little plot, a lot of lemon.

Eternally Gifted


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8601 Read Count: 3564
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 14 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Eternally Gifted

loved it! great job! that had to be the most relaxing massage ever!...lol

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

hs22

"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218368
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

omg!, she's losing the baby :( what's Edward gonna think? I could hug Emmett for how fiercely protective he is being about her.

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Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

*shakes head* has he learned nothing!!!!! first you sneak out like a thief in the night and leave without saying goodbye and now you make that kind of comment while shes throwing herself at you, how the hell do you think she is going to feel and react Edward!!!!! *huffs*

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

drunk Bella is too funny ...lol. well, she wasn't upset the 2nd time he mentioned babies, so maybe that's a good sign???

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Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Summer Time

love Peter and Garrett, so glad Bella has a connection with them.

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Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i understand Jasper being cautious, but he want about it the wrong way. i hope this doesn't do anything to set Bella and Edward back

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hope she does well with the new job. it'll be good for her to get along with Bree

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

all the little pushes and nudges help, there will be backlash but she'll move forward afterwards....i hope you are feeling better and will recover quickly

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

good for Carlisle and Esme for setting everyone straight...but where did Edward go after they argued?? that Brady is a heartbreaker...too freaking cute !! i hope they found your car, i'm so sorry you had to go thru that!! ((hugs))

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father

yeah, i lost it at the ceremony part.....that was tough :( but she's a strong girl, cause she's coping wonderfully .

Author's Response:

me too, but thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

wow.....to walk in on hearing that....that man has a ton of self control...lol. but the good thing is they've dealt with it and are moving on :) (she's THAT bad on skates???)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!

great ending, what a wonderful loving family to find, Bella is one lucky girl. I can't believe it's almost over, what a ride, but as always this was amazing, thank you :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

:) progress between the 2 stubborn mules...lol That Brady is the cutest thing ever! don't think he'll take too kindly to Edward trying to get to know Bella better

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

great beginning! Bella's a little bad ass isn't she. :) hopefully going with Billy to Hope Springs will help in changing her attitude and she can take better care of herself and the baby to be

Author's Response:

Hey Honey! It's good to hear from you.  Thanks so much for reading. Yeah, our new girl is a little prickly (to say the least!).  Next chapter is up soon. xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

how did Jenna die???? piercings?!...interesting :)

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

oh boy, great 1st impression..... i hope Billy catches up to her, cause where is she gonna run to? And taking off is gonna trigger Jasper'a cop mode cause it looks like she's guilty of something by running

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Esme is no joke...lol looks like Edwards been thru alot. I hope he won't give Bella too hard of time, but Jazz looks like he may keep his suspicions around a while longer

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Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

oh man :( i know he had to leave, but that was the worst way for him to do it.....i wonder if when Edward returns, will Bella act indifferent with him? or tell him off?

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:( that was so sad, you did a wonderful job writing it, the emotions and all the Cullen's coming together to help her. can't wait for Esme to show up, that'll be another tearjerker, i'm sure

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

that was an amazing from Carlisle and Esme. seems Bella has found herself a furry 4 legged friend :)

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Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

i hope this news won't be too hard to hear, she doesn't need anymore to stress about. i'm so glad she's determined to stay in Hope Springs now.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

thank you so much for the update!!! can't wait to see the reunited! is Edward going to have a chance to get jealous of the Barry guy???

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

loved the epi!!! great to see how everyone is doing in ten years :)

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Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

i love Jealousward!!! are they going to use the new doc for their plan???? can't wait!

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Date: 16 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

so glad he saved her in time!!! damn, i thought the jealously was going to have him go all caveman on her...lol

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Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

i can't believe the nerve of that teacher asking Bella if she was slumming it...stereotype much teach???? he better back off now! can't wait for their time together!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

he's so good with her and to her, they need to talk like that about everything in the future :)

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

I actually think Jasper got off way too easy but who knows what Alice put him thru...lol. the needed that time in Burlington together alone. I'm so happy they are going with the original wedding date.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Moving on

i really think she should have mentioned to Edward that Mark was living in the same house and that he is harassing her!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Mama said there'll be days like this...

i still think that Mark is gonna pull something......

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

oh yes please, that will be perfect!!! i wanna see that poor excuse of a teacher get a visit from 6 angry men!!!

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Here comes trouble....

great chapter! so proud of Roscoe! what an awesome dog!! good thing her "uncles" and "brothers" were all there when the attack happened (hope they all got their shots in)

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

That is the cutest Shepard I've ever seen! aww Roscoe has a friend :) Esme is no joke when she's pissed.....great chapter

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Moving on - Enough is enough!!

Wow, I didn't see that coming, thank goodness for Carlisle! Can't wait till they are back with each other!!!

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

What an amazing birthday and proposal!!!! He pulled is off flawlessly !! So happy for them!!!!

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

*sniff* oh boy the tears the are going to be shed while going thru those boxes.......

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Making Plans

weddings just make people crazy...lol

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

holy crap! do you have any idea how much i wanted to throttle that bitch from the beginning. then forget it by the end, i wanted her 6ft under! it was killing me that Edward and Bella were driven so apart by all this, they need to lock themselves away with no outside interruption for a bit

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Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - “Going to the chapel and we’re…” (Or are we?)

what a beautiful wedding and honeymoon!!! great pics! as much as these 2 have been thru, i don't want this to end...lol

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - a new kind of normal

i hope someone caught her!!!! damn nosy people can't mind their business!!!

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!

I'm lovin the Jeffers character! can't wait for the baby to get her and what name they'll pick!

Compromise by Alley Cat Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Twilight Post Script Challenge entry.

New Moon AU. Edward leaves Bella in the woods after breaking up with her, but even as he tries to stay away, his heart is telling him that which his mind is refusing to accept. Finally, he gives in to his heart's desire and turns back. This is a wish my inner fangirl had made when I first read through the Saga.

Winner of 3rd place in public vote and 2nd place in judges' vote.

Sequel is up! It's called "A Perfect Match" and can be foudn on my profile.

Compromise


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5414 Read Count: 1094
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2011 Updated: 20 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Compromise

great job!, i wish he would have really gone back in NM

Summary: Past Featured Story

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It's Christmas Eve in Forks and a lonely Bella goes out for a   drive.She stops to help a motorist whose car is broken down on the road. What happens when she knows the person and drives him home. Watch as the love unfolds between our characters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22843 Read Count: 8260
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! Great job! Merry Christmas!!!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:) I'm so glad she's going with him to the party and to spring training!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

kick his ass Edward!!

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

i liked reading about what is happening away from the island :)

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Love Shack

Very hot!! :). They needed to de-stress a bit...I think that did the trick!

Author's Response:

Hi moutainlion718

Glad you liked the lemon. Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Ghosts or Goats

Omg!!!! What an ordeal.....they are going to need major recuperation after this and it seems Emmett must have gotten stung by something......good luck milking that goat.....she's probably a kicker.....

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for your review.

Yep, major rest and recreation is part of Daddy C's prescription for a return to good health.

You might be onto something with Emmett. ;)

Thanks for the goat comment - you gave me an idea for a future chapter. :)

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Question and Answer

That's so romantic that he wants to do a commitment ceremony !! wonder what else is at Larrys camp that will be helpful to them

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 30. Look out for Edward's marriage proposal in chapter 31. They'll find some useful things at the pirate camp that will make life a little happier for a little while - hmmm perhaps a can of coffee!

I'm launching a ring poll shortly so that readers can choose their favorite wedding rings. More on that in the next chapter AN.

Kind regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)

Now where did Alice go???? Carlisle is gonna have his hands full when they get back to camp......

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Carlisle certainly will have his hands full. We'll find Alice soon.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

glad they are home safe!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

did he burn Bella??? after he gets what he wants, he's going to kill them anyway...right?

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40. Demitri would have burned Bella, but Emmett saved the day and then ended it with his big mouth. There will be NO Cullen or Larry deaths, but getting out of the current situation relatively unscathed will come at a cost - to one of them in particular.

I'm working on chapter 41, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 "Land"

That was a close call for Bella, lucky Edward saved her

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Edward will always save Bella!

Thanks for reading and review.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Ship Wrecked

At least they didn't have to leave the boat and abandon it, they can keep the heavy things handy

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Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Making Camp

I hope Bella doesn't get worse. Are they going to use the sails for shelter, like a canopy?

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Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Working Together

Can't wait to see what Emmett comes up with shelter wise

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Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Making Plans

Everything is coming together ! :)

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for all of your reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying their adventures.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Moving House

Wow, Emmett is really good at what he does

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Emmett certainly is good at what he does. They all are.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"

Omg, Emmett is freaking hilarious! Be careful with that pig, they're dangerous!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

If anyone was going to get their grizzly on about food, it was gonna be Emmett. He's always good for a laugh.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

Well that is ominous! I wonder who's gonna need treatment

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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Temple

I hope that tube will be safe to navigate. it's good Bella grew up knowing all about plants and living off the land, who would have thought she would need to use it 100% of the time

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

They all bring skills to the island, some of which they never thought would be so important to their comfort and survival.

Lava tube should be a real adventure.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Making a Move

Good, i'm glad they were straightforward with each other (now) but he still has to get her back for going in the tubes with them...lol

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks so much for all of your reviews.

I'm glad that you're enjoying Wrecked with Bella. And, it wasmtime for E&B to be straight with each other.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube

oh no, they both seriously hurt! how are they going to get out of that hole????

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Rest assured, they will get out the hole.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie