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Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Getting Help

Alice is in big trouble! did she find Edward and Bella?

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Alice certainly is in trouble but not of the injury type! If you've read chapter 14, you already know the answer to whether she found E&B. If you haven't, then I won't spoil it for you.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2

oh boy...pissed off mama Esme! Jasper is too quiet, what's he gonna do???

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Pissed off Esme is really popular with the fans.

Next chapter will be posted soon, so stay tuned for more Esme and Jasper reactions.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

Esme and Jasper are too alike...lol! ok kids, mamma bear has spoken and don't even think of crossing her!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Yep, there is always one kid that is most like one of the parents in character and demeanor, and one that is sometimes equal mix - I'm a bit of an equal mix but my brother and sister take after our father. Jasper is most like Esme. Emmett is most like Carlisle and Edward is a bit of a mix.

Esme rocks and rolls. We'll see more of her in later chapters.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues

Love Jasper and his intellect ;-) they will all be so surprised with the soap!!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountain718

Thanks for your review to chapter 17. More on island life coming up in chapter 19.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Soap and Dope

Ah, so i hope the tea works for Alice and Rose . loved the backstory on Bella's heritage .

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

The tea will work and I'm glad you liked the history about Bella's heritage.

Thanks for reviewing as always.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - House Calls

i was wondering about the birth control...guess there isn't a tea for that....i feel so bad for Edward about his arm....:(

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

You know, I bet the Polynesian women did have something they could use as birth control - most ancient cultures did even if the men refused to believe it. Edward still has a career even if it's not on a sub, so chin up. Chapter 21 details are percolating in my head, so hopefully I'll have it posted on the weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Busy Bees

did the pirates see the towels???!! i'm so nervous they're gonna come back in the middle of the night.....

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Pirates will cause some trouble I'm afraid, so keep reading.

Chapter 23 should be posted earlier this coming weekend because I'm off to Melbourne on Sunday. Look out for it on Friday or Saturday instead.

Thanks for reading and reviewing as always.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - We meet again, Red

they're searching for gold, aren't they???? omg, so scary, i hope they find a way to take each of them out one at a time

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

The pirates will get their comeuppance. What goes around, comes around.

Look out for chapter 24 this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - War and Television

they keep this up and they'll make a whole new civilization for themselves. i'm so glad each of them contributes their great ideas and their strengths to keep them surviving

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

A new civilization - what a great idea! Apart from the Hawaiian weapons, which I had to research, the rest of the weapons popped into my mind. Who knew I was aware of so many types of weapons; I hardly even had to think about them!

Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Thanksgiving Games

Omg ! Sick bastard ....is he hoping Bella will lead him to something ??? where are all the others ??? is Emmett ok??? i hope Edward and Jazz hide all the stuff they found....

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reviewing chapter 25.

Jimmy's a nutcase and only he knows why he does the things he does. We will get some incite though in upcoming chapters.

Some of your questions will be answered in chapter 26, so stay tuned in about a week.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - DEFCON ONE

Holy crap ...i wanna rip Jimmy's head off!!!! please let him be a horrible shot ! Edward use that shark tooth duster to rip him to shreds !!

Author's Response:

Hi moutainlion718

Thanks for reviewing chapter 26.

Jimmy might still have his head, but it's very, very broken.

More about Bella in chapter 29 this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

Omg! Yes please!!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for your review of the chapter 27 teaser.

Encouragement is always welcome.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - One down, two to go

Yes!!! Jimmy is toast...literatly :-) so where's the psycho red head hiding??? how bad is Bellas injury?

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 28 - glad you enjoyed it.

Vivi will be back ... sometime.

More about Bella and Rosalie in Chapter 29.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Bullet

looks like Edward is in full military mode now. everyone is going to deal with this aftermath in their own way, i just hope it wont cause anything of them PTSD

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 29.

Yep, Edward is a military man to his very core, and such a terrifying event will take its toll to varying degrees on all of them.

Chapter 30 will be posted this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - North

hope you are doing better, good thing they found all that stuff and that Victoria hasn't shown up

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

I'm feeling better, thanks for your concern. Vivi hasn't turned up yet, but she will before the story ends. We'll find out where she is shortly.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

What!? he never told her??? he just assumed she was or he's never mentioned a word to her about it??

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Yep, he plum forgot.

 

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Date

He did a wonderful job with his proposal!! Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

such great presents! i've heard of Pavlova before, gotta see if they sell it anywhere in NJ....lol!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35.

Pavlova is easy to make if you can't buy it in NJ. If you can make a simple sponge cake, angel cake or meringue, then you can whip up a pavlova. I've included a link on my blog at jkazziefanfiction.wordpress.com for a pavlova recipe on an Aussie website called 'Taste' - it's a pretty simple recipe. The key to success is to do exactly what the recipe says and make sure you convert the oven temperature in the recipe from celsius to farenheit. Decorate the cooled pav with whipped cream and whatever fresh fruit you want - berries are always popular. If you want/need to use canned fruit then drain it really, really well first. Pav is best decorated just before serving otherwise the moisture in the cream and fruit will cause the sugar to weep from the pav. Let me know how you go with it.

Btw, did you vote in the ring poll on my blog?

Regards, Jkazzie

 

 

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Cool, can't wait to try it! Yes I voted!!! :).

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

oh boy, all 3 preggos??? Alice is the odd one out...lol. I'm up for how you want to take this, it'd be interesting to have Esme pregnant, but if Bella is and since Rose is, better to have Esme there to lend a hand with the babies

Author's Response:

Hi moutainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. I think they'll build a creche as another reviewer suggested. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

Jealousy from Alice but fear and anger from Jasper...right? it sill might happen for her and like Carlisle said better for her not to be preggo right now with the other 3,Carlisle will have his hands full anyway

Author's Response:

Hi moutainlion718

Right - Alice is jealous, and Jasper is fearful and angry.

Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

So glad they had that intervention, Jazz has every right to be scared but not moody unreasonable firecracker! And Alice, really? ! Sticking Bella with a pin?? What are you 4??? Condition or not, she knew what she was doing and should act like and adult and voice her concerns not lash out!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reveiwing chapter 38 - glad you enjoyed it.

Yep, the intervention was absolutely necessary. Things were spiraling out of control rapidly. Alice is ... well, Alice! She is childish in some ways, because she's also selfish. On the otherhand, she's also very loving, giving and protective. But you're absolutely right - she should have dealt with it in a different way.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

great job on the wedding.....poor Edward, what luck on his honeymoon...lol. oh no, they're are too many Volturi to overpower....what are they gonna do??? Merry Christmas!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the wedding.

The Volturi will make life a little difficult for the Cullen's.

I hope you had a great Christmas. Enjoy your New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

he had no choice to make a deal with the devil....hope Aro takes all of his cronies with him.....

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41.

I agree, Edward had no choice but to agree to the blackmail, but that doesn't mean he's gonna lay down and rollover.

To give you a heads up, Wrecked will come to an end in about 10 chapters and perhaps an epilogue. The Cullen's and Larry will be rescued and returned to Hawaii. The sequel will pick up about 3 years after they return. Aro's reign will fall early on in the sequel, and Edward will not be the pushover he is hoping for.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

1 baby down, 2 to go :) love the name Mia Carlene! i'm sure Esme and Bella won't be forgetting about their husbands withheld info due to Mia being born, i guess a delayed tirade will be coming soon. So glad you have a nice vacation!!! :)

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

good ideas for future defense. so glad they are talking everything out now

Turning Page by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

TP

 

*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

Following her mother's heartbreaking death, Bella moves back to Forks. It's there she reconnects with her father and forms a bond with the next-door neighbor. Is she the one who can heal his wounded heart; or will he hurt her over his fear of falling in love again? 

***1st Place Winner for Favorite Undiscovered FF in 2014* AH/OOC, Olderward/Teenella    

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62443 Read Count: 11553
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 24 Apr 2015
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Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Reminiscing and Making Amends

yikes! very heavy!!! but one question, if he found out she wasn't happy and led this secret life, then why is he still so hung up on her???

Author's Response:

Hi Mountainlion ;) Great to hear from you! Yes very heavy indeed :( And good question. I can get why you are wondering that and I will do my best to explain why he is. I dont want to give too much away. But maybe thats where i went wrong because it seems some readers as confused as to why he still is hung up on her, still loves her even after what she did. But sometimes you cant help who you love and even though she hurt him, the love he has for her isnt easily going away. As much as a part of him wishes he didnt still love her, he loves the woman she was. Not the one he found out that hurt him. You get me? Thats the best way I can explain it. Also the guilt over how she died eats him alive everyday :( Thanks for the great review I really appreciate you reading, xo

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Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears

good interesting beginning :) is Edward thinking of a deceased wife????

Author's Response:

Hi mountain lion :) Thanks very much for the awesome review! Im very glad you enjoyed the prologue :) Wow, you are very very warm, hee about your guess! Okay, you're most likely very correct, and the only one to guess that, lol. Thanks so much for reading! I just sent chap one for my beta to edit and I will post it as soon as shes finished. I appreciate the review, ttys ;)

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Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green

so only Edward thinks he sees ghosts, he must be really messed up about said person dying :(

Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Edward :( He is dealing with too much pain and grief and its been going on for a long time. Yeah the death of mentioned perosn, really messed him up. You all will find out in chapter 3 when its his pov. Thanks so much for the great review Mountainlion and for reading! xo, Leslie

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Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

Well, he's a character , that's for sure....Bella's curiosity it going to go into overdrive with him. loved the dream ...lol

Author's Response:

Yes he is quite the character for sure Mountainlion, lol. You will learn much more about him in the next chapter ;) Oh yeah Bella's curiosity will go into overdrive and get the better of her, as you all will find out in the chapter after next. Im so glad you loved the dream, it was fun to write, hee. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it, till next time :)

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Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward

So sad :-( was that his wedding video he was watching ?? he had a baby too???? did Kate kill herself ??? can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review mountainlion! I enjoy hearing from you :) Yes it is very very sad ;( My heart just breaks for Edward. It was a tough chapter to write. The next one is even more sad ;( Um, no not his wedding video, good guess though. Um, yes he sort of had a baby and wow you may be pretty close about Kate. I promise these qs will be answered in chap 5. Well, some of will be answered. Thank you so much for your support and for reading, it means so much! ttys, Leslie

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Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

Well at least he knows he's being a jerk ....wonder what he's gonna do to Tyler ....

Author's Response:

Hi Mountainlion! Always happy to hear from you hun ;) Haa, yes at least he gets that he was being a jerk. I agree bb! Oh and just you wait about what happens with Tyler. I will say there wont be any fighting going on, haa. But some harsh words will be thrown out there. Its going to be very tense. Anyhow, thanks for reading and for reviewing! I really appreciate it, xoxo

Wild Flower by Alley Cat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Wild Flower

Bella found the field of wildflowers purely by accident when she went riding one day. She did not expect to meet a certain blue-green-eyed man there, nor did she expect to fall in love with him. He broke her heart in that field, but he had also mended it.

This story was written for CharTwilightMom using her specifications (and throwing in some of my imagination) in the Easter Bunny Twilight Fic Swap Event. It was changed to Jasper/Bella pairing with her permission as I thought it would work better this way. Thank you for the prompt, hon, and I hope that you like this final version of the story!

WINNER Best Cullen Lovin' in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17687 Read Count: 2751
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2012 Updated: 10 May 2012
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Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Wild Flower - Part I

Good beginning !! Edward isn't with anyone ....is he????

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
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Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well you know Rose will be a big fat "hell no". .....If Bella is in the house, Edward will grow accustomed to her scent daily and make it easier on him....right?

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

:-) im so excited for her to be there !!!! Edward is going to be doting on her constantly

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Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

That blood is not going to affect Edward Bella...right ?

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Yay!!! Progress!

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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Aww ....now they have to find a way out.

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Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So she is responding to Edward ???

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

:-( i thought Jazz would have been able to get a reaction.....

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Poor Edward......

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Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

:-( poor Charlie .....so sad....i hope Edward can make some progress

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Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:( does she get pulled deeper into her mind at times??? is that why the reaction is on and off???

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Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Please say yes Charlie !!??

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Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

can't wait to see what Edward comes up with

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Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i guess she won't come out of that state if she has no will to live.....poor girl.....

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I can't wait to see what happens! hope he can get her out of the car for good

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Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good beginning! are the files about Bella??

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Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope his idea works ....

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Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I wish he could play for her....certain music is know to be very therapeutic

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Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

:) now he's got a little more incentive!

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Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Will Charlie be agreeable if Carlisle will treat Bella at his house ????

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Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i hope it does....the Edward can spend all the time he wants with her

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Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

knew Rose would be the stubborn mule....*sighs*

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Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

keep trying Edward!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I feel so bad for Charlie ....:-(

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope she has a reaction to his piano playing....

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i love when he gets all possessive :)

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Come on Bella, follow the music and Edward's voice and maybe you'll come out of it quickly

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

she's not dying, is she????

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please let that kiss spark a fight in her to live!!!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Clap, clap clap!!! you get Edward to get that girl.to.react and come back from the brink!!!!!

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

I hope she won't be so mad at him ....

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

omg! i thought she was gonna respond to the kiss!! fight Bella...please!!! i hope you feel better soon from your migraine, i suffer from them as well so i know your pain :(

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yes, teaser please!!! hurry Carlisle !!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Whew, thank goodness for Alice !!!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

how are they going to constantly keep all this stuff from Charlie??

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

i hope he will start to hear her again......

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Finally , he's getting a clear read on her

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Maybe now she'll fight to stick around for him....

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I hope she'll fight to keep his image with her and find a way out of the mental prison she's in..

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

:) fight Bella, get to Edward!

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Is he in her mind because of Jasper's help ???

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ugh...so close! I know Edward is so frustrated now.....

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Damn , Carlisle ruined their moment ! Edward is not gonna be very pleasant to deal with....

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Maybe now they can have a conversation ????

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

:-D wonder how long their connection will last....?

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Don't mess with papa C Edward ...lol

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Is that because they were separated ?

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wonder what she'll wish for next ?

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Im so had she's more comfortable with him now

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Uh oh...Edward is pissed !! Hope your pup is feeling better soon!

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Edward better hurry up and get into bed...

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

She's got the determination now! Edward will just help her strengthen it

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Yes, she's fighting to recover

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Happy to be back in his bubble again :-)

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

lol...temper, temper Bella :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Good quick thinking Edward !

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Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

:( damn, he;s gone again!

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

:-( she sees no future at all??? i hope he can bring her out of her fog

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Ask and you shall receive!! :)

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Yes they need to keep talking too!

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yay the meadow!!!!!! She'll love it there!

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Love it! :D

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I hope this won't set her back....

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Oh no, she's not going to let him back in now......

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

This is going to kill Edward .....but will Bell feel the loss of him as well?

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I don't think its the best idea to go over there alone Bella ..

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I hope that will help her out of the car....maybe she'll need Edward's help???

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

poor girl, i hope she finds peace soon.....