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Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
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Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

If she'll let him in again, he's not leaving without her.

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

But he won't lose his original abilities ....right?

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Can she take him to the wreck?? maybe he can get her out with his vamp strength ...

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Awww :-( ....im sure Carlisle will have a plan...

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Hope Edward has some answers for her! I hope your son gets better soon!

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Please Edward....tell her everything!

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Please don't let her freak!!

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Hope she takes it well.....

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

He's going to have fun proving it to her

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Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

She's going to trip and fall....

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

:( 1 step forward and 2 steps back......

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

What happened??? Is she awake???

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Finally!!! She's awake!!!

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Yikes, Edward must be climbing the walls right now......

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

:-( he should go for a hunt..he needs a distraction

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Apparently she's just as clueless as he is..lol

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Talk to him Bella!

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

baby steps.......

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

:) best teaser!!!! Have a great weekend!

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Hear Me

Damn.....

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

He knows!? How?

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

i love Charlie! he should pass out that knowledge to a whole mess of people around the world!

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I hope your son is ok, you're in my thoughts

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Big step forward!!!!! :-)

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

:-) yes Edward! Be a little selfish for once!

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

:-( poor thing just got his hopes crushed...

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Has Bella made some decisions without letting Edward know???

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Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Such an understanding dad :-D

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

:D yay for Charlie and his advice!!!

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Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Wow! Bold Bella! ;-)

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Whew!....it getting hot in here!!!!!!

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

that was really nice of her, it should give Edward some peace of mind :)

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

She just made him so happy!!!

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

*fans self* Lucky girl!

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

:-D b25;b29;b25;b29;b25;b29;

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Damn he's good...

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Omg! I'm gonna melt...or pass out!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan's intrigued by vampires. Edward Cullen's bored and alone. What happens when they meet? AU, vampire. Inspired by Katy Perry's ET.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72381 Read Count: 14584
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 27 May 2013
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Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

now Demetri needs to keep the conversation shielded from Aro.

Author's Response:

Yep, Demetri knows just how to do that :)  Thanks!

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i like this Billy :) good he gave them a little lead

Author's Response:

Yeah this is a great Billy :)  Thanks!

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such a charmer...lol. that will be hilarious when Jacob finds out about the upgrades, can't wait!

Author's Response:

Haha yeah I can't imagine he'll be too pleased!

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Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

quick thinking on Bella's part. I just wanna hug Emmett, he's such a mush...lol.

Author's Response:

He is that!  Bella's a perfect match for Edward for sure :)  Thanks!

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Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

what a bitter piece of crap Charlie is! Edward, find another loophole! or he could just send Jasper and Emmett to Forks.....js

Author's Response:

Haha I think she covered that loophole earlier with Jacob ;)  But he'd like to!  Thanks!

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Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

:( my heart broke for him. .. at least Jasper can help a little.

Author's Response:

Yeah it was a tough one!  Jasper did help.  Thanks!

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Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Now that is a true mate ;) loved seeing a glimpse of Edward's past

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks!

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

El would have blown their plan, he had to go. strategy time!

Author's Response:

You got that right!  Strategy happening :)  Thanks!

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ok, I'm pumped up for this fight now!!!! Bella is going to hand them their asses!! Hopefully she can learn Chelsea's talent and break the bonds.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're excited!  Should be fun!  Thanks :)

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Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ok, Aro's wife is freaking creepy in her wonky adoration of Edward...just no...lol.

Author's Response:

Haha she is creepy, isn't she?  Such fun!  Thanks :)

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Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Will he spare Marcus?

Author's Response:

We shall see!  Thanks!

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Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

famous last words Heidi.....ok bat shit crazy pseudo mother of Edward, time to drink some Xanax laced blood and go line up for the wedding (freaking loopy hag)

Author's Response:

Hahah Sounds about right :)  Thanks hon!

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Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

The dress was gorgeous! Bella was great! Good thing we didn't lose any on our side!

Author's Response:

Wasn't it??  She did good!  Too powerful :)  Thank you!

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Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

great epi, loved to see Renee take charge like that. see you next story or on FB :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  Thank you!  Back soon :)

Summary:

Edward and his friends spend a day at the pier. They visit the fortune teller and she tells Edward that he will find something, and not to throw it away. She tells him to search for it with all that he has. Will he find it? or will it slip passed him?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54451 Read Count: 22293
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2014
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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

uh oh...what does he have?????

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)make sure you keep on the lookout Edward!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella, you forgot your pics......

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i can't wait till they meet!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

gotta love the pixie and her family.....

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

you found her!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

**squee** !! love it!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

go get your girl Edward!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so sweet!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes please, no drama for the new relationship...please

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great date :)

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

getting warm in here...... ;)

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i think that went well with his pizza....lol

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

patience is a virtue ...

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:-D good for you Edward !!!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward is gonna be so surprised!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hope she feels the same way.....

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward will be so surprised.....ugh, can't Benjamin leave her alone!!!

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

:) can't wait till they're living together!!! wonder what those 2 ex's are up to??????

Summary:

Newly divorced Bella meets just back from Europe Edward. He asks her for coffee, they talk and feel a connection to each other. He asks if she'd like to go somewhere, so they end up at a motel and fun happens. But one phone call changes everything.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21846 Read Count: 3136
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

why did she freak like that??? Alice wouldn't have been upset????

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

how long is Bella planning on being gone??? Shane has school, and i'm sure Bella has a job....

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

please talk to him Bella!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i hope they don't miss each other while traveling....

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

he's such a sweetheart :)

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:) i'm so happy she's being treated well now

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

very sweet! i hope she is preggo

Summary:

The girls take Bella on an extended vacation to show her that life is worth living, just as the guys take Edward on a vacation. What happens when they all meet and see what destiny has in store for them? Some fun in the sun and a bit of drama thrown in.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7952 Read Count: 437
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it's fate Edward....don't fight it

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lol, Bella and Em are going to be constantly at each other...lol

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:( poor Bella.....she's having a rough time......

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i like his way of thinking.....

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When Bella saw Edward for the first time, she became obsessed. What will she do to make sure Edward is hers? TFA 2011 Summer Fantasy Contest- Public's Pick Winner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8927 Read Count: 1773
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
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Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!!! great job!! Hockeyward is my dream...lol

Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

Here is my fluffly little twist on the whole electrical charge that Edward and Bella feel. What if it really meant something else, something deeper? Would Edward be able to do what he needs to make sure Bella stays his forever?

Contains explicit adult themes, languages and sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 To Read 2, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 188675 Read Count: 74942
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good beginning! i hope he doesn't try to resist......

Author's Response:

what would the fun be in that??!!! it is a fluffy story!

Thanks for reading!!!

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:). He looks receptive!!!! Hope the will become close soon :)

Author's Response:

He is very receptive.. as for the closeness.. hmm I think it will come!!!

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He's awesome!! I can't wait till he realizes ......

Author's Response:

Hmmm yea.. I love this Edward.. he is much more a 17 yr old teen than 109yr old vamp

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

*sigh*. So dreamy......lol. Studying will be so fun and interesting !

Author's Response:

Yea.. this Edward is dreamy.. I fell in love with him!!!

Thanks!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Go get your girl Edward !!!!

Author's Response:

Hmm I am sure he will have no problem with getting his girl!!

Thanks!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Important dying for them to talk about this thing between them!!!! i love possessive Edward !!!

Author's Response:

Ohh they will talk.. its coming up soon.. give them some time!!

I love a possesive Edward as well!

Thanks!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Man, i hope Emmett didn'tcome home early and hear that ......

Author's Response:

Ohh I think if he did.. Emmett will have made it known!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Things are getting warm in here...lol! damn , where was Edward when i was in school ....lol

Author's Response:

Yea..I hear ya... I wanted an Edward in my school and bio classes like they have!

Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love it!!! i want her to say it to him too :) hmmm..what would happen if one of the Forks skanks tried to hit on Edward with Bella standing there??? would she be all possessive too??

Author's Response:

Hmm that may come in a later chapter.. hold on!!

Thanks for reading!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

can you clone him????? please???

Author's Response:

Hmm I wish I could.. but I'm not that smart!!

Thanks!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

what? what happened?: did she notice something????

Author's Response:

Ohh my Bella is a smart one... kinda like the book one!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

and this is why Jacob Black has no redeeming qualities in my eyes, i can't stand that immature little brat!

Author's Response:

hehe.. which is just how I wanted him to come off as.. hehe.... good thing hes not around in my story!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:D so happy for them!

Author's Response:

Yea.. these two are soo sweet they will give ya a tooth ache!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

what a way to be interrupted!!!!....:( but if it's for the best.......

Author's Response:

yea.. I know.. I am such a meanie!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

that's cause he's focusing with all his willpower :D

Author's Response:

hehe.. he does have good concentration!!!

Thanks!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh my damn! Bella was awesome! but you wanna talk about a pissed off vamp when Edward finds out what Rose said....LOOK OUT! and poor Em, i hope he's not hurt when he finds out what his bitch wife said....omg and Carlisle too, WTF is wrong with her???

Author's Response:

Yea.. lots of people love this one... they wish that this would have happened in the book... *sigh*

Glad you liked it!!

Thanks!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good, they needed that talk....

Author's Response:

Yea.. they do a lot of talking in this story..something I feel is missing from the books.. ohh well!

Thanks for reading!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

that would have made an awesome outtake scene for the movie...lol

Author's Response:

Aww... what an awesome compliment... I love this meadow scene... *sigh*

Thanks!