Reviews by mountainlion718
Summary: Past Featured Story

Here is my fluffly little twist on the whole electrical charge that Edward and Bella feel. What if it really meant something else, something deeper? Would Edward be able to do what he needs to make sure Bella stays his forever?

Contains explicit adult themes, languages and sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 To Read 2, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 188675 Read Count: 74942
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

yeah, but i love me some sappy ;)

Author's Response:

Glad ya like the sappiness.. hehe

 

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hmm, wonder if her scent is changing along with her bravado.....?

Author's Response:

Hmm that would be a interesting thing.. but I think her bravado was always there!!!

Thanks!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Tough decisions ....but im hoping she's leaning towards deciding for her heart

Author's Response:

It was a tough choice and I was of the mind that SM glossed over it.. I wanted to see Bella sort it all out!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was a beautiful sentiment at the end concerning Charlie .....wonder how they'll do it

Author's Response:

Glad ya liked it!!

I always felt that Bella brushed Charlie aside.. or if she gave it serious consideration.. we never saw that I wanted to see what that would look like!!

Thanks!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Good, this is a happy time in their life, don't let one sour puss bitch mess with their happiness ...

Author's Response:

I think most would agree with you!!!

Glad to know we are of the same mind!

 

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow !!!! And this is human Bella ....Vamp Bella will be like an F5 tornado and a Category 5 hurricane rolled into one.......

Author's Response:

Ohh Ilove how you characterize her.. and I would have to agree.. heh.. she will be one kick ass vamp!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I felt so bad for Em.....:-( hopefully they can work thru this, freaky mate moment....will she have many of them?

Author's Response:

Yea.. I always felt as if Rose never appreciated him.. ahh those pesky mate moments.. naw..there wont be too many!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

talk about an added temptation...lol

Author's Response:

yea.. there are temptations all over the place!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

it's time, it's time!!!...lol wow, i'm shocked about Rose, i thought she'd still be a bit standoffish....

Author's Response:

I wanted my Rose to come to her senses.. I think it is within her reach if she could get past all her bitterness...

glad you liked it!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

i need a fan and a cold drink....whew...HOT!!! keep on bonding ;)

Author's Response:

Yea.. this is the intese sexy times.. can ya handle it??

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

damn, that bonding time is intense and I'll say it again...HOT!

Author's Response:

Ya may need lots of cold shpwers.. just saying!!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

a mating sex a thon...lol, how much can Bella take before she passes out....;)

Author's Response:

hmm he is trying to be gentle.. but hell..if you were Bella.. wouldn't you try to last as long as you could with a vamp Edward?? I would!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awwww!!!! Charlie is gonna have a cow......

Author's Response:

Yea.. I do feel sorry for charlie in this fic.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What an experience :). I just wanna know how she will be able to go back home after she's spent all this time with Edward....

Author's Response:

Yea.. its gonna be hard for her.. but you will see how they cope!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Alice backing down???....shocker....lol! I'm so glad Mike got what was coming to him!

Author's Response:

hehe.. yea.. I wanted to have her not always getting her way!!! Ahh mike.. he is a douche

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

She's going to say bye to Renee.....

Author's Response:

Yea.. she is.. a sad chapter.....

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Hmmm, wonder how she'll answer....lol....I love mamma Esme :)

Author's Response:

Yea.. momma Esme is a cool ass chick!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

he knows how to treat his woman!!! ;)

Author's Response:

ohh does he ever!!! hehe

 

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

awesome banner! i'm so nervous about Charlie when he hears the news :(

Author's Response:

Yea.. I do feel for charlie in this fic.. he does get the raw end!!

Glad you loved the banner.. it fit soo well for that chapter!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

he bit her while she was sleeping???? i thought he'd at least wait till they were in the house....

Author's Response:

Well she did say she wanted it as a surprise... this was a surrpise!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

aww! Bella is a kick ass vamp! :)

Author's Response:

Yea.. I love my vamp bella.. she seems cooler!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

awesome :) she's done so well!

Author's Response:

Yea.. the idea that all they do is HS and college just seems soo pointless.. so I fixed that!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake #1

definitely a tearjerker....;(

Author's Response:

yea.. it was.. but at least you got to see Charlie and know that he will be ok...

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Outtake #2

lol! too funny! great way to end it!!!

Author's Response:

Yea... got to end on a high note and what better way then with Em!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324474
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown

the Oscars are going to be nuts! i hope she enjoys is and drama doesn't make it a bad experience for her.....

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Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

that was awesome, but upset that Bella got injured, she probably has a concussion, hope Edward really does sue the both of them!

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

I know he's stressed but he doesn't have to take it out on her.. not good....:-(

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

how could a parent do that to their child! i don't blame him for breaking ties.....

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

good beginning, he must be kicking himself since she's 18

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our First Outing

he's so sweet! it'll be hard to end the night....

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Our First Date

love the dress! omg, how drunk are they????

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Our Mess

jeez that's gorgeous! why aren't they discussing this more????

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament

Renee is a trip...lol i hope they do give it an honest try :)

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home

ok, so now it's decided that they are giving it a go, so she's gotta drop the negativity....

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

wow, beautiful house. i'm sure Carlisle will be over tomorrow to interrogate

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Our First Night

guess they won't be needing that 2nd bedroom after all;)

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Our Name

dinner with Carlisle....*gulp*

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Our Family

damn, Carlisle, that was harsh, wasn't it???

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Our Desire

how long will Carlisle stay away for???

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

is she??? Carlisle will really have a field day with that one....

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage

beautiful car! how's she gonna be treated in school??

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - My First Day

very sneaky Esme!! you better hide from Bella!

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

whew *fans self* very hot!

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Confidant

i wonder how long till the press finds out?

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

Damn.....:(. They are both at fault, but Edward a little more since he doesn't realize how he is affecting her

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

these boys do like messing with Edward, don't they...lol. I'm so sorry about you're grandmother, please accept my condolences.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

must be so frustrating that everyone, is giving them a hard time......

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

such a good hubby! :) can't wait for Edward and Carlisle to talk

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

They had a great time but short.....i hope no drama comes from their outing and airport trip

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks

It's getting worse! I have a feeling she's going to bolt... he needs to talk to her, not blow her off

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

He's got to show her , not just tell her.....

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

good luck Edward....(you're gonna need it)..... good for Carlisle for telling Edward off!

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

Talk about making me cry!!!! Great chapter! ! Let's see how this next month goes!

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer

can't wait for the grand plan!!! hope you have a speedy recovery!

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Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - His Parents

wonder if his mom will try and contact him........?

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Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

=) she did well, hope they wont rip her to shreds tomorrow in the press......

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Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

Damn. ....hopefully that will be the worst of it and things should calm down. I'm glad her friends were understanding, she'll need their help

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Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

jeez the paps can be impossible!

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49588
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a selfish harpy cold hearted bitch!!!!! How could someone be so callous and evil! Poor Edward ....but he was right, he needed a fresh new start. Can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response:

This will be a fluffy, romantic fic, so I had to get the villan out of the way in the beginning :)  She is evil, through and through. Karma is a bitch though...   Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yeah, he was very hard on Bella....i hope he calms that attitude down a little and only directs in to the bitch that deserves it....wonder how Bella will react to find out he is the potential buyer

Author's Response:

You're right, really. Edward was taking out his anger on Bella. He's also deflecting his growing attraction to her, by being snarky and rude. He's kind of a mess, emotionally, but it's going to get better :) Thanks so much for coming back for my new story ;)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

they more they fight the attraction, the more obvious it will get :) love Jake in this, he'll be a great sounding board for her (i guess we're in for some jealousy when Edward sees him...lol)

Author's Response:

There's going to be a little jealousy, yes. It's going to be a couple chapters yet before Edward finds out about Jake. I'm having some fun getting Bella and Edward to butt heads! Thanks for reading & reviewing!!! <3

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Damn ....i think she is way more snarky then he is condescending to her....she dosent even want to give half a chance. too funny that he thinks Jake is the live in boyfriend....wonder who will clear that up for him!

Author's Response:

Really?  I thought they were both pretty atrocious to each other. Things are going to start changing in the next couple of chapters. and well, Jake is going to clear that up for Edward, in a rather surprising way ;)   thanks so much for reading! and reviewing!!!

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok as long as he didn't sleep with her...lol so come on Bella, reach out to him one more time and see where it goes ...

Author's Response:

*smile   Next chapter, she reaches out again...  Thanks so super much!  lol  Glad you're along for the ride!!

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't wait for home to get the surprise of his life ....lol

Author's Response:

LOL  It's going to be a hoot!  ty ;)

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Damn why doesn't he listen when she says vital info !!! easily distracted man! Lol! nice day they spent together

Author's Response:

LOL  Yep! Convieniently distracted at opportune moments! Guess what's next???  See you Thursday!!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

priceless! that was too funny! what a way to find out :) good now he can pursue!

Author's Response:

I'm happy the reveal was a hit! Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love it, now they're talking and kissing......:) yay!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked the chapter!  The next couple are going to be fun ;)  xoxox

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward's head and heart have to be fully in, i hope Bella can understand that. i know he has to explain that all to her as well. loved the tubing!

Author's Response:

You are so right. He needs to get over his issues. Thank you for reading/reviewing!!  xoxox

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it! i think Bella was about to seriously go off and put some distance between them if he hadn't had the revelation the night before ....!

Author's Response:

Yes, I had considered that myself. If he farted around for much longer, she would have put on the brakes. Thanks so much-glad you liked it!  xoxox

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I think I like Esme....she's a little much at 1st but she explained herself so u think she'll be ok now.....poor Jake, such ignorant and hateful people in the world.....:-( I think Bella blew Edward away with the ILY...his will come in time.....

Author's Response:

Esme is a nice lady, she's just a little overbearing at times. Bella was spontaneous about telling Edward that she loved him-surprising herself as well as Edward. He's getting there :)  xoxox

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Laurent is a dead man! please let him get there quick!!!

Author's Response:

I think you'll be happy with the next chapter ;)   Thanks so much for reading! xoxox

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh I'm so happy for them!!! He's not going to find those pamphlets and get the wrong idea is he???? I voted for you In the poll!!! :)

Author's Response:

I guess I wasn't clear enough (sorry) Bella actually handed back(to the doctor) the ones that were about adoption or termination. So no, he won't see them ;)   Thanks for the vote!  xoxox

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Twins!!!! That's awesome! They are going to be busy bees from now on.....lots to do!

Author's Response:

Yay! It'll be great :) Thanks so much for reading-glad you liked it! xoxox

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter! the ranch seems to be doing well, Esme was so happy about the babies, and hopefully we've seen the last of Kate! I love how he was acting on the plane...lol

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

it's great she has a wonderful support system :) hope she'll be able to carry to full term

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

here come the babies!!!!

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I can't believe it's over, what a great job you did. I loved their journey and the ending was perfect. can't wait for your future works!

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Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

awesome epi!!!! gotta love that Lily...LOL! great job on this! can't wait for your next story!

Watching You by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Edward's been watching Bella for three years during college and now graduation is only one week away! Will he finally man up and ask her out, or will he be too late?

 

watching you


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1971 Read Count: 1999
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
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Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Watching You

strangely cute...lol see what happen when you hesitate!

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113810
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

long overdue talk and homecoming! they are so lucky to have friends like that.....

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Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm happy to see the whole family coming together and stepping up where its needed.....I hope Anderson and Brian can get more info and stop any tradigies from happening. Glad to hear your RL is settling down. Wishing you calm and peace at home :) stay strong!

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Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

beautiful renewal ceremony!!! omg, Peter an chief Black are pretty sick individuals. i hope Daryl can screw up their plans enough.....

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Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Darryl better hurry up and sing like a freaking canary! if anyone in that family is touched, there will be a massacre of epic proportions ( and i don't know who will strike 1st, the Cullen's or their loyal security team). and who's this Morgan dude, one of Larry's sick followers??? Love the time with Sam, it's gotta be a great weight off his shoulders now that his parents know and are supporting him.

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Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

thank goodness both girls are ok! please, whatever can go wrong with Larry's plan, let it go wrong!

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Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor Max, i do hope he does say more about the bad man......Bella will be so surprised and happy with he renewing of the vows! so happy they are getting back on track. Hope you heal quickly!!!

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Date: 26 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Omg, I'm bitting the crap out of my nails! I hope all goes well with Em and Edward's rescue plans. Who just found out about Alexis? ?? Charlie or Esme??? I'm so excited you updated, I hope all is well and can't wait for the next chapter

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great conversations all around. We'll see haw Edward handles the Rio situation next chapter i guess...... I'm just surprised they didn't have any security this trip considering what's going on......

Author's Response:

the security was 'lurking' in the background, babe - sorry I should have put that in there.  Next chapter up in the next few days - just waiting to get it back. xoxo

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What is wrong with Seth???!! and who's the creep taking pictures for??? I hope Anderson keeps staying alert, it's all gonna explode soon......

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Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

that whole "mission impossible" sequence was hilarious...lol. i don't know how they'll all hold it together, to stomach that man while waiting to apprehend him will be the greatest act they'll ever have to pull off

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well you certainly like to start off the new year and a new story with a bang....lol. I'm so excited to read this! Has Bella voiced this at all with Paul??? Didn't he give her advice on how to deal with this with Edward?? And I guess Edward hasn't confided in Garrett at all cause he would have kicked his ass by now. Looks like I have a new character to despise......Whitney! Happy New Year sweets!!!! :)

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well at least Bella had the sense to talk to Garrett, but what has she been doing at the club??? So Jackson and Nick are like their dad??? Jasper knows, doesn't he..... Love this story line already!

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so Nick and Jackson..following in daddy's footsteps, i think Bella will be more understanding the Edward will.. aww and Anderson! (Jason Statham...love him!)i don't even know how Edward is going to start the conversation tomorrow.....

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Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

who the hell is that??? one of Jacob's descendants????

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

uh oh, so now there's at least 2 to watch out for...... Loved Jazz's talk with Jackson, that helped him so much as did talking with his twin, i just hope she stays safe if she starts digging around for info......

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Date: 31 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i know teenagers are stubborn, but if he sees how happy Bella is and that Edward has changed his ways, maybe he wont be so angry and the animosity will only last till that have a father / son heart to heart?

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Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow, Bella sure put Sam in his place quick! can't wait for that talk. please tell me Rio has nothing to do with the revenge plot! Anderson's group is so detailed, how did that bitch get thru!?

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Date: 03 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh thank goodness the kids were found safe, and Peter and Calvino took themselves out. I can't wait for everyone to be home

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Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

grrr, i'm dying for this crazy diabolical plan to blow up in the chiefs face!!! i hope they find Kathy soon and Erica finds her way to safety

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Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

thx for the explanation about Larry, i was trying to make sense of it but didn't want to look like an ass if everyone had figured it out and not me...lol *sighs* oh Edward, you and your temper....better reign it in when it comes to Alexis, i heard it's pretty lonely on the couch......how soon till Larry and Peter make a move (and please tell me it will be foiled) So Bonnie is cool right, not working for anyone???????

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Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i'm getting more and more nervous.....jeez i hope Darryl says something before its too late!