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Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So....a whore who killed his "son" because she was drunk at the time and was also screwing his best friend.  He's still friends with and visiting and probably screwing.

A woman who loves him and takes care of him and his family while disregarding her own feelings who is also carrying his child....Her he doesn't want, as long as it's on his terms and baby free.

 

Makes absolutely no sence.  I hate him.



Author's Response:

Edward is confused and hurting.  He doesn't make sense (really though, do men really make any sense?).  He isn't the greatest guy at the moment.  I'm thinking about writing an out take form his point of view.  I don't know if it will happen though, however I am working on the next chapter).

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533224
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

And this is why I hate stories that fast forward way in the future.  I was disappointed before, but this chapter ruined the entire story for me.  Sorry for the negative review. Just my opinion.

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: twitipat Signed half-star
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: escapes and goodbyes

I don't care if he is a hormonal teenager. What he did is disgusting. And it ruined this Edward for me.  Sorry. He's pathetic.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am so sorry to hear that this Edward has been ruined for you! I hope that you will give him another chance to redeem himself in the next chapter.

Summary:

Tie Me Up In Tinsel Banner

 

WINNER OF THE 24HR SMUTMAS CHALLENGE!!

 

Edward has always had it bad for sweet and innocent Bella, but avoided her due to his kinky nature. This Christmas could change it all when Bella surprised him with an extra special gift. Merry Christsmut! AH EPOV. Written for the 24 Xmas oneshot contest.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3298 Read Count: 3403
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 02 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christsmut

Nice. Very nice. I love how in the story banner she has no legs! Lol.  I also love,love, love that it's NOT Kristen Stewart. I get so tired of seeing the movie cast in banners.



Author's Response:

LOL she actually does have legs..She was standing with them crossed so they are very close together and the title bar covered most of them. If you look between the words "up" and "in" they are there. I tried making it with Stew at first and it came out horrid. This picture with Reese was just such a perfect fit.

Summary:

Drabble fic - Bella's life was ordinary until a package came and opened old wounds she thought were long since healed over. She thought wrong...

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4579 Read Count: 20769
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love it so far. Even though Edward ever cheating and Tanya's name in any way is usually a hard limit for me.  I almost stopped, but I'm too curious.  

What is the time line in this story? How old are they?  Can you at least say that. One mi ute I think it's been many years then you mention two years. Just wondering. And I love the photos!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad your sticking with me... Thanks.

Okay with the events that have happened the timline is as follows:

Two years ago bella was in the hospital (mentioned in one chapter but also in another of how long it's been since she has talked to him.) 

The many years of being broken up is so I didnt have to put a set time.

Bella is about 24, 25ish...

I hope this helped you, and thanks for the review.

 

Reviewer: twitipat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my god! This is driving me crazy!  In a good way, although I have to keep hiding my phone when my boss comes in my office.  My two cents...her best friend ran off with the guy she loves, now said best friend is dying and wants Bella to take care of him for her. Or something like that???





Author's Response:

I want to say ding ding you got it but its so much more complicated than that. Some of what you said is right, some not. I hope your enjoying this and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Had a feeling there was a baby involved somewhere.  Beautiful photograph.  And may I say how pleased I am with the exception of kellan lutz how pleased I am that the photographs are not of the movie actors.  My pet peeve.  Hate the movies, and I still see my version of the characters in my head.  I love when authors keep their characters generic.



Author's Response:

I dont persay see Emmett like that it just fit... So I used it. I like to have them be different. Everyone see's their characters different, although I am using them I dont see them as the actors who portray them. Thanks for your review and I hope you like it so far.

Reviewer: twitipat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Even though Bella slept with her boyfriend, broken up or not. The second she had second thoughts about giving up her child Alice should have given up.  There are adoption laws where the birth mother has time to change her mind.  Sorry wouldn't cut it.  Although jasper being the father would still complicate things.  Unless they did a runner with the baby. But then the Brandon's wouldn't have a leg to stand on with a restraining order.  she has shit luck with guys.  I know karma is a bitch but damn.



Author's Response:

I even researched these things but I wanted it to seem like a shitty situation... And the next chapter which isnt as much a chapter as the Letter will clear up alot...

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

I'm not crazy about Edward, but I also hate that Angela got what she wanted.  I hate girls like that.  She needs to go down too.



Author's Response:

Hmm, you're the second one to express extreme displeasure with Angela... I may have to see if I can come up with a way for her to get hers.

 

xoxo

tb

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85675 Read Count: 43885
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'd be installing security cameras.  Immediately.

Dearest Edward by Leigh Warner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Bella writes a letter to Edward telling him everything she has felt for him over the years.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4201 Read Count: 1892
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2013 Updated: 29 Jan 2013
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

They weren't best friends and he wouldn't have helped her.  Best friends keep in touch and don't treat their friends the way he did. Best friends are invited to weddings.  And what??  She just didn't keep in touch with Xavier??  If she was his legal guardian she should have.  Pathetic, the both of them.

Summary:

Isabella's stepsister is a royal pain in the ass and has taken something she wants back. She is bounded and determined to make what Rosalie has her own. The questions is does he want her?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Mpreg, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Forbidden Series, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9914 Read Count: 2398
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2013 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: twitipat Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Little Sister Don't You Dare

i know its just a story, but pregnancy isn't the only reason you should wear a condom.  He just admitted that he knew his wife was having an affair.  I would be more worried about getting an std.