Reviews by Beduder
Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141809
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Beduder Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Just a well-written story! Thank you for sharing your thoughts so freely with us complete strangers :)

SoCal by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SoCal

Being with them wasn't the problem, but losing me was. A life filled with sandy beaches and sunshine, I felt safe here. Nothing bad ever happens in SoCal, except maybe bad Mexican food. Or so I thought. This isn't your everyday love story. Based on the movie Savages.

 

For Annie, an Edward, Bella, Jasper- polyfic    

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218114 Read Count: 43818
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2015 Updated: 11 Feb 2022
Reviewer: Beduder Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What a great story! 

I will never critique as I am not a writer but I will say it is a rare gem of a story that can draw me in completely as this has. 

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

danger

 

A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84407
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Beduder Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeesh! Every chapter I'm hoping for some relief from the intensity but it only builds....this is an amazing story from an incredibly talented writer. 

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53532
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Beduder Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I’m loving this story! Thanks for sharing. 

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: Beduder Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

WOW, I just discovered this and read it straight through!  Can I just say I’ve loved all the chapters instead of commenting on each one? 😍



Author's Response:

Awe Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

waffle

 

Category: Twilight AU

Summary: Life is full of funny twists and turns. Who would have guessed a stop for breakfast would impact so many lives? Whether you like yours scattered, smothered, covered, chunked, or topped, you just might find your destiny at Waffle House. PBJ. Collaboration with happyghost. 1st Pl Public Vote WINNER, and Best Non-Canon in the 2018 For the Love of Jasper Redux Contest.

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Title: She Wasn’t on the Menu at Waffle House

Author: collaboration with happyghost!  

Characters / Pairing: PBJ, Peter/Bella/Jasper

Genre: action, humor   

Rating: MA

Beta/Pre-Reader

Banner by: GeezerWench

Words: total 12,852

Prompt/inspiration: happyghost, Waffle House, and the 2018 For the Love of Jasper Redux Contest

Complete. 8 chapters

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.

A/N: It was a fun contest, and even better working with happyghost! 1st Place Winner in the Public Vote, and voted Best Non-Canon! Thanks to everyone who voted!

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4747010/happyghost

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12947 Read Count: 7218
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2018 Updated: 07 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Beduder Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Waffle House Chapter 1

I like how you wrote the characters personalities. This will be a great story! 



Author's Response:

Good to hear you like the characters. We, pretty much, have them set in our heads.

 

happyghost and I thank you!