Reviews by kaybrans
Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Conform

Poor Bella here comes your worst fears in the flesh!! :)

 



Author's Response:

I know, but what lovely flesh!

Duplicity by loopylou992 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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A pair of golden handcuffs keep him married to a woman he despises. Then a chance meeting changes his world, he discovers the true love he always wanted.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54352 Read Count: 8222
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Dec 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like your story so far! Is Maria gonna go all phsyco & boil Edwards bunny???  :)

Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 8286
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah!! they got back together!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter. The next one will post later today.

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

Summary:

Bella has always hated her Christmas birthday, but a visit from a sexy santa might just change her mind!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1200 Read Count: 1324
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2011 Updated: 05 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you should totally continue this story!!! :)



Author's Response:

I think thats been a popular concensus

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218359
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

When he's done with her I could use a good woo!! Update soon!!

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no, out comes the secret!!! Hurry up I want more!!!!!  Ha, ha,ha... yep I am a demanding reader but at least I review!!! ;p

 

Kay



Author's Response:

Hey Kay, you are like a little bird, greedy and demanding, but just like the mama bird, I love you anyway! Thank you so much for your review and the update will be posted over the weekend.

Love,

Michele

xoxo

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

More, more, I want more!!! :)

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

I can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

Thank god Bella is calming down a little!! Now it's school time !! So no actual high school time? Oh well I think I'll trust you just this once!! Looking forward to next week.....

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

It's the Charlie doll, right?? I want those two to start working on getting closer!!!

 

Kay

 

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

Edward really needs his filter replaced!!  :)

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

I'm soooo excited for operation Blue Balls!!! I think he totally deserves it!!! GO BELLA!!!!!!!

 

 

Kay

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames

Balls & Bitches ?? I think I love that idea!!!

 

Kay



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Edward’s view is improving, and he is learning quickly that he is not able to function to his fullest at Aro’s club.  Aro’s club and Aro and some of his girls will remain a vital part of this story.  Having Edward putting on one of Bella’s newly gifted bras was such a fun thing to write about, we hope you all found it just as amusing as we did.  This story has a long way to go.  We have been asked when things will pick up between Bella and Edward.  Well we promise they will be together, but Edward is just learning to change and before he could give himself to her fully, he has to let go of a few things from the past.  There are a few more bricks that need to come down off that wall he has built.  As for Bella, her pure innocence alone is a good reason for things between them to simmer slowly into a boil.  I will tell you this, there first kiss is written already...and Lordy I needed some ice water after that one.  WOOOWHOO!  I know the weekly updates, seem like forever, but if we get things wrapped up and have the story done on our side then we will post faster.  Right now Nikky is working on 25 and I am working on 24 and we know that there will be at least 30-35 chapters.  Thanks again for the story love.  This story is dedicated to those of you who care enough to review!  With our love, and until next week.   Kasi and (Nikky)

Chapter 13 teaser...subject to changes during beta process.

I hear the beep of a horn, and know that the car is here. I grab my overcoat, and I head out for my painful evening.

“Good evening, everyone,” I say as I close the limo door.

“Hello Edward, I see you still haven’t tied your bowtie, Siobhan can tie it for you if you’d like; she’s really good at them.”

I turn to face Alice, trying not to scream at her. “No Alice, I can manage myself, thank you very much. I will tie it right before we arrive at the Autumn Ball.” I feel eyes on me, and my head turn’s to see who else is in the limo. There sits Siobhan, in a…dress? Fuck, it leaves nothing to the imagination, the dress… if that is what you call it. It’s more like a sheer piece in the front, glued to her skin. There doesn’t appear to be any cloth on the sides of her entire body at all. She cannot be possibly wearing anything under the dress. I can see from her armpit to the sole of her foot in the clear stiletto shoes she is wearing, there is nothing but skin. She looks like she should be working for Aro, what a trashy high class whore!  I am sure she thinks it’s attractive, and I am sure everyone will know she is going commando. I mean I like women to go commando, but I also like to be the only one that knows. If I wanted my date to not wear panties, I wouldn’t want every other person in the general vicinity to know too. I don’t want to share! Thank God she isn’t my date! There is another reason on the list of why I won’t date her, or any other women.

“Wow, Edward, you look really good,” Siobhan smirks at me before crossing her legs. She lets her dress fall to the side, I am sure if I was looking I would have seen her pussy. The way she was right now I, or anyone for that matter, could finger fuck her here and now for all to see. I turn my head in disgust at her behavior.

“Edward, are you going to tell us how we all look?” I look back at Alice, with a broad smile on my face. “Sorry, forgive my rudeness. Alice, Rose, Esme, you all look very beautiful.” I give them my best smile that almost says, see I can do nice.

“Siobhan, your dress is very…nice?” I make my statement sound like a question because I real don’t know what she has on. Siobhan laughs and goes to touch my arm, and I shrug away from her.  I see she’s about to speak, so I jumped in first. “And of course Charlotte, you look beautiful as always. Peter is an extremely lucky guy, and if he does not mind me stealing you for a few minutes tonight, I would like to ask you something?”

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Walls We Build

I think Edward needs a new house keeper & he should be buying an Ipod for Bella too!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing our story.  Nikky and I are very proud of this story and it takes a lot to write things sometimes that even upset us.  We really needed to show just how darkly tainted Edward is, and unfortunately right now many of you hate him.  I know it will take a lot for you to relinquish those hatred feelings, but we hope that we are great enough writers and story tellers to achieve making you like him again.  We know it is always easier to burn a bridge than it is to rebuild it, but we promise to put forth the effort in doing so.  We want to thank you in advance for your votes, support, rec’s, and for just being on this twisted journey with us.  This story will be somewhere around 30 chapters when all is done and said.  We hope that you continue to read and review and share with us your thoughts.  From the bottom of our hearts, and to the moon and beyond... Thank you.

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 6 Teaser… All Subject to change during the beta process…
The shitting feeling is still there, and I have no idea what the fuck I can do to get rid of it.  I head over to Jasper’s office hoping to see him.

“Jasper says that you can go in now.” I look at the woman speaking, and I give her a curt nod as I head into his office. “Edward,” I look at him and he stops talking, and tilts his head to the side.  “Okay, what is going on, what happened?” He asks as he waves at me to sit.  I sit down on the seat across from him and rub my face.  I sigh unsure where to start, so I jump up and start to pace the floor.

“I screwed up, and I mean I really screwed up this time.  Jazz, I fucking hurt her, and I mean really fucking hurt her.  I don’t know how to fix it.  How I can get her to forgive me for what I have done?  I mean, fuck I’ll be lucky if she even speaks to me again.  Well really I know she will because she, fuck, I don’t want to say she is weak, but if I talk to her she will reply. How do I make right Jazz, without putting myself out there?  I don’t want to get hurt again, I could with her and I can’t go through that again.  Fuck, but I don’t think she do that, to anyone really.  She’s not made that way, but I have really gone and hurt her bad.  I never gave her a chance, I was still. . . no, I am to fucking scared.  In this case I think I made a new friend, but the dream. . . and I thought she stabbed me in the back like all the others.  I see her face in my dreams, the last two nights have been worse than all the rest.  I can see how much I hurt her, and the bad thing is she did nothing to warrant my anger.  All she did was fucking help me, time after time.  So many times, and she has been so hurt before and I know it’s been bad.  I can see it clearly in her eyes, the pain and the fear.  What if I push it what if she can never let anyone in ever again because what I did.”  I am still pacing and pulling my hair, I am so upset.  “Fuck Jazz I was a real fucking prick, and complete asshole to her.  Tell me what I can do?  Please I need to fix this, tell me how I can fix it please?”  I beg him as I feel my breathing speed up.  Jasper who was still sitting in his chair looks at me and suddenly comes out of his trance, as I feel the cold sweats start.  “Please Jazz you need to tell me how to fix this.”

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack

I hope Cayden is doing well & you will be in my prayers!!

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Explanations

Great chapter can't wait for more!!

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

I love your crazy AN!! It's pretty funny! :)

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Emergency

Well I love a mom protecting her baby!! ":)

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

OK I love spunky Bella!! I'm not sure about Rosalie but President Assward is hot!!! :)

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Oh no, now she will be forced to stay at the white house so Eddie can keep her safe??? Oh, please say it's so????? Can't wait for more.....

 

Kay

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

Write fast I want to know what happens!!!!!! I love the sense of humor you have through out the whole story!! I'm looking forward to your next chapter! :)

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Nancy Drew (verb)

Can't wait for more!! Just wishing you updated sooner but I will just try to be paitient!!  :)

 

Kay

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coffee, Tea or Me?

I really like the chemistry!! And yes I mean between Edward & ME!!! Ha,ha, ha..... Great story so far & I can't wait for more!!

 

Kay

Summary:

Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, one of the most powerful men in the business industry. She left Forks years ago, acquired her MBA and set out for New York with a head full of dreams only to discover the only job she could get was working for an asshole as his personal assistant and being available for his every beck and call. Bella hates Edward but her feelings soon start to change as they go on a run of the mill business trip to Los Angeles. AH. AU. M for Lemony lemons.

 

**Moved from FFn**

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30733 Read Count: 5523
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OK that is juat mean!! I love the clifee though.....   See you next week!!!  :)

 

Kay

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248525
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

You are evil!!! Hurry up with that update PLEASE!!!!!!!!   :)

 

Kay

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: kaybrans Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Year Two; Day One

Is this where I beg for more???? Can't wait!!!

 

Kay