Reviews by pappy73
Summary:

While out drunk at the Hampton Inn Ball Room, Emmett convinces each of the couples to get married. One-shot. Inspired by a real event in my family.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3663 Read Count: 299
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Drunk Redneck Wedding

This is the MOST AWESOME story I have read to date.HILARIOUS.Having family from around Arkansas,these really happen believe it or not.But this was so great to read.I try to stay away from those family members, you never know what they will get into.LOL.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

I believe our dear Esme is shy of a few bolts in her rocking chair,yes?

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

I have been following this story so close,but I have just now started to review,and for that I am very sorry.This is by far my favorite chapter.I guess due to the fact he asked her to marry him.Carlisle in this story,I would dearly love to gut.Esme,well she is one demented Bitch.Alice,I LOVE.

I PROMISE,for the rest of this story to review.GREAT story,I don't know where you got the idea for it,but it has an AWESOME plot line to it.Keep up the work doll.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

At this point and time in the game I really hate Edward.He needs to put on his big boy underwear and think of Isabella for once instead of himself.

I have mixed feelings for Carlise.I feel really bad for him,losing the love of his life but then again knowing that he was at fault just as much.

Wonder if Carlisle will give Edward a BIG giant kick in the ass and make him see the light of day with Bella.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note

I can just imagine what kind of pain you must be going through. I was in a horrible drunk driving accident years ago when someone decided he would rather drink at 8 am while I was driving to work. He blew through a stop sign going 85 mph into oncoming traffic. Needless to say, many of us did not see this asshole coming. An 8 yr old was unfortunately killed along with the drunk driver himself. I ended up with a broken back, a broken hip, and a brain injury that has now left me with seizures. 

Back injuries are nothing to laugh or smile about. I'm glad your on the mend and your life is starting to look up. 

As for your writing, I recently ran upon a quote that has helped me with not only my writing, but my everyday struggles. 

It states, "I've seen better days, but I've also seen worse. I don't have everything that I want, but I do have everything that I need. I woke up with some aches and pains, but I woke up. My life may not be perfect, but I'm blessed." 

I don't know if your religious or not, and that's okay, I'm not judging, but when I have a day when I hurt so bad I can't stand it. I pray and ask Him to just make it better.

God Bless, and welcome back my friend.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG!Jacob is there now??I REALLY hope Anderson or Emmett takes him and Jim OUT!!! I think I have a pretty good idea what Jacob could have in mind with our precious Bella,if so,Anderson really needs to take him out and show him who really dominates who.LOL.

Great chapter btw,waiting patiently for next chapter.Love sent you way in R&K bubble.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - I'll pass your message on to Em and Andy - promise

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh God do I hope and pray you continue this!!It was AWESOME!!If you don't mind I would LOVE to pimp (spread the word) this story out.Just let me know if that's alright by you.And please,please.PLEASE consider continuing this story.I would love to find out who and how these two end up.Who ends up being the dom?How do they continue with their relationship?Does Edward really get tatted?Oh my the possibilites are endless,lol.OK I'm rambling.lol Keep up the GREAT work!!

Summary:

One night, I awoke to find his side of the bed empty. I can only describe what happened next to be one of the best nights of my life.

 

Smut, pure and simple. Features a lot of dirty talk.

 

AU-AH, OOC, NC-17 for explicit adult sexual situations and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4225 Read Count: 1343
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Just Thinking - One Shot

That was the most AWESOME ff I have read with that much smut in a VERY VERY long time.Very tastefully written as well.I do hope you will consider writing maybe a longer one if inspiration strikes.Once again GREAT work.



Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment! I'm so glad you liked it! I do have another o/s up on here, feel free to read that as well. Just click on my name and it should take you to a list of my other works. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

Bella got dragged out to a bar one night. Subsequently drinking, she decided to let her old persona float away, and took opportunities that she normally wouldn't have. It was one of the best nights of her life.

Smut, dirty, plain and simple.

AU-AH, OOC, rated NC-17 for language and adult sexual situations.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8035 Read Count: 802
[Report This] Published: 06 May 2010 Updated: 06 May 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lose Yourself - One Shot

Oh sexy,gettin it on in a ally.Holy humpf!!Great as usual doll!!!



Author's Response: Lol! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, sweets!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

Ok the goodbye,totally made me cry.Makes my heart so effin happy to see them making the marriage work out.Edward is so drewl worthy.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I was able to touch you with my words! And I totally agree with you about Edward! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

Oh Baby Cullen PPPLLLLEEAAASSSEEEE *Begs on hands and knees* Great chapter BTW!! This story owns me.LOL

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

And thank you for letting me know what you want!

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420792
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Out of Character.

Even though she is a 25 yr old mom, we all need a break at times.Not saying I condone drug usage,but in this story it seems Bella didn't have that point in her life to just "live a little" or as others put it "sew their wild oats".I've been there,done that.I have SOOO many regrets now.I absolutly LOVE how you did this chapter.This story has really said alot for young women who has taken on responsibilities at very young ages and then not been able to "just live".I love this story,can't wait to see how it ends.



Author's Response:

Wow! I love your review! Thank you for actually seeing the bigger picture. My fans on fanfiction.net, don't seem to agree with you. They act like Bella sucked Randall's D**k for a crack rock or something. Lmao.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254878
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is a question per se for E or B, but I quess I was wondering if your going to have James make a reappearance?If so will Edward put him 6 feet under with Emmett's help or will he go to prison for everything he's put Bella through? Personally I think Bella should get a little vengence for what he's done to her with Rose's help while Edward,Emmett,and Jacob is on the side line making sure James doesn't get out of it.Just a suggestion.Your fic is very well written,I have throughly enjoyed reading,and find myself antisipating the updates for it.
Until next time.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I can not confirm or deny the appearance of James, other then to say he is still breathing ...Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. Becasue it is a Thursday post, I have a teaser for you...lml


“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.
 
“I turned it off”

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

First off,Em, in church,uhh to funny. Secondly,uh oh,Aro..he always spells bad news.

Ok so I am curious,will Em and Alice actually get married here?I know I know,I have to wait.lol...I love reading the Cowboy Edward and Bella,I miss them *pouts*.

As always my sweets an excellent chapter.I am suppose to be on vacay w/ my family ay the river camping.BUT,I couldn't help myself to check for this update and read it. Thank u.Lots of Cowboy Edward love to ya.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you liked the chapter...I hope it was worth missing some vacay time with your family.  Hope you have fun camping (if you're not back yet).

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Hmmm,Rosie will do them all proud,I just know she will.Hopefully Bella will fight the scum off long enough for them to find her.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Oh No!! Miss Rosie is doing a fab job taking care of things,but now she has to take on the responsibility of Tyler's death *shakes head*,poor poor Rosie.

Hope Emmett and the gang can get Bella home safe and sound soon.I don't like Miss Carmen's attitude toward Miss Rosie,she may be going through alot and this may have a setting of in the older days, but Miss Rosie just gave up everything for Emmett,so Miss Carmen needs to build a bridge and get over it already. I also didn't like it that she threw perfect food away out of spite,*shakes head* just isn't right.Well at least there were gentleman present.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I have absolutly fallen in love with this story.It is so refreshing to read something that doesn't have to do with Bella,Edward and the gang in high school and so on. I ADORE THIS STORY!!PLEASE i beg from the bottom of my ff heart to keep up this AWESOME story.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok,Alice all up in Em's chest,Hilarious.Great chapter sweets.Love a fuming Bella.lol...I love the fact that Bella can fluster Edward.Ok now that we have the ok to recommend this trust that I am going to..

BTW..I am VERY much interested in a forum,please let me know the details,if I knew how to set one up for this story I most certainly would be the one doing it. Lots of Cowboy Edward love sent to ya.YUMMY!!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awww poor Em,gotta feel for him.He needs to come right out and tell Rosie and Alice how he feels so Alice can let poor jasper in on everything as well.What happened to our other bb's. Again,I know I know patience, right?

Another wonderful chapter doll.



Author's Response:

I would answer what happened to "our other bb's," but I'm not sure what bb's stands for *LOL* 

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awww, I love me some Auntie Esme.She is the sweetest women.But I RRREEEEAAAALLLYYYY need to know,did she pick up the vibe between Edward and Bella.Huh Huh Huh???? OK  I know I know, wait for the update.*pouts*

Oh, and Edward swooning over Bella,it's just *sigh*.I just lllluuuuvvvv me a cowboy Edward.lol

Wonder what Em has up his sleeve.Is it fixing up Jasper and Alice so he can get his lady love Rosie?Am I close??

Ok I'll quite bugging you and wait for the update.I LOVED the chapter sweets.Keep em' comin.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh poor poor Jasper,my heart is breaking for him.I can't stand that these poor guys are holding their feelings like this.

Our bb's are going on a ride.i am sqeeing about that though.Will they start courtin???Oh and Edward brought her the kitten,awww so sweet of him.

Great chapter as always sweets.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh I think our bb's are starting to fall in love.Oh I am sooo excited!!!

Em,the big brother,not so happy about the developing couple.Aww so protective.Gotta love him,bless his heart.

As always,another AWESOME chapter.Lots of love to ya.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I can't imagine why Bella wouldn't understand why Edward couldn't talk about his parents,or at least give him time.I'm sure when she stops and thinks about it she'll see that there might be more to it.

Ok our little Alice is a sneaky little thing,God I love her.Poor Em,got stuck with Rev Newton and God awful Miss Stanley.*shudders*.

I wonder if Edward will realize that he has got to trust Bella if he is going to have anything with her?Hmmm.*scratches head*

You are the queen,2 chapters in a day.WOW, you are simply AMAZING doll. And as always another AWESOME chapter. Can't wait for our bb's to start falling in love and showing their affections. Lots of love to ya.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am so very sorry for my late review sweetie.But I am here now.:) Now on to the story. Poor Edward just is so confused about women in general and I think poor Bella is just confusing him more.

As for our sweet couple of Em and Alice, well well well, it looks as if our dear little Alice has put bi bear Em in his place.Go Alice.

Great chapter as usual,and I am moving on since I am 2 chapters down.Sorry again,promise not to let it happen again.Lots of love to ya.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I was seriously laughing so very hard at Em's little umm problem in church.Poor Alice.But I'm with the rest of the crew,I don't honestly think I could have held in my laughter.

Uh oh James is on the prowl,this can't be good.Never is when he's around.

YAY, there's a forum,I'll see you there hopefully!!!

As always awesomeness occured in this chapter.Lots of love to ya!!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh Em almost got himself in some hot water with Alice hehehe.

Hmmm.wonder what Rosile heard,*shrugs sholders*,I hope Mr.Mallory isn't up to no good,but if it's anything like his daughter,he is.

As always my dear,great chapter.Lots of loveto ya.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Awww,it seems that our two bb's are thinking alot of about one another while apart,but yet still second guessing there feelings.i hope and pray they tell one another about them when Edward returns.Hmmm maybe just maybe at the festival.Hmmm *scratches chin*

You are one writing machine.YaY!!! I love these updates, keep them coming sweets!!! Lots of love to ya, and as always EXCELLENT chapter!!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh poor poor Bella,she thought so highly of Em.But she needs to know of the love that his heart holds for Rosalie *shakes head* but this is one way for Alice to be connected to her true love,Sherriff Whitlock *sigh*.

Edward stood up for Bella against James *yay*,somebody needs to teach that rat some manners on how to treat a lady.

I know I missed a couple reviews,but I promise I read the chapters,wouldn't miss a one.My nephew was in a severe motorcycle accident so RL  has gotten to kick my butt.

Keep writing sweetness,and I'll def keep reading,Lots of love to ya.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to hear about your nephew.  I hope that he is doing well.  As the daughter of a Harley rider who has been injured several times on his bike, I can completely understand what you're going through.  I wish him and your family the best!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh poor Rosie!!Wish she could things  more clearer.Maybe Miss Bella can help her.

I as well had problems getting into your forum.

As always great chapter.lots of love sweets.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So very sorry I haven't been reviewing all chapters,but RL has caught up with me.my nephew was in a horrible motorcycle accident so I have been away.

I have now caught up til now,I have fallen in love with this story so much that I keep my family up to date with it.My hubby even asks about it,lol.That is very unusual for him but I have sucked him in on this one.

Have a Happy and Safe Labor Day doll!!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

FINALLY,that comes out,now we have 1 down 2 to go.That was comical,I don't think Emmett was expecting that one.But I do think he will be a little more prepared when Edward approaches him about Bella.That is WHEN he approaches him about Bella,I know all in good time. Good chapter doll. 

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Awww our babies are making that final turn.I think I even cried a little.It was so sweet and tender how he treated her.

I'm so excited now to be getting to that point in the story where they come together,wonder how big brother Em will take all this.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I seriously lol for a good ten minutes on this chapter.I could actually see Emmett trying to have "the talk".And then wanting to kill Edward.lol oh God to hilarious.

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Oh my sweet lovin goin on with Jasper and Alice,mmm mmm.Oh but we do have a peepin tom,oh naughty, lovin honey.

So glad Em isn't given up on Rose,how sweet and Romantic is that.aww gotta love that teddy bear.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

OMG,I did NOT see that one coming.You are one sneaky devil you are.Poor Em,*shakes head*,he's so in love with with Rosie,but I know you have somethin up you sleeve,so I'll just sit back and wait.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

AWWWWW.Edward proposed,even though big teddy Em kidda jumped the gun, it was so sweet, it got all weepy.I'm glad Em could share it with his baby sis though, that made it that much sweeter.

 

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

awww,I cried so hard when Eleazar said that to Carmen,that had to be the sweetest thing.I am such a sap sometimes *wipes eyes*.

Uh oh,the cattle are dying,no worries they'll catch James and the crew.*crosses fingers*

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Oh God I did not see this coming at all.Poor Eleazar!!I hope he doesn't die,it will crush Carmen.I have NO doubt in my mind that Edward,Emmett, and Jasper will get their paybacks on James and Laurant.Poor guys will not know what hit them.

Bring on the drama!!!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

This chappie made me cry,that's really all I can say.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I really hope they get to Bella soon,I hate seeing Edward so heartbroken.Emmett is going to tear some bodies head off if lil Alice doesn't do it first. Despite James kidnapping Bella he doesn't seem that bad in this story.Hmmm *scratches head and shrugs* Maybe he just wants someone to love.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

That was HILARIOUS!!! Would LOVE to see me some naked Emmett and Edward.YYYUUUUUMMMMYYYY!

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

First off, great chapter. Secondly,CONGRATS DR. I'm sure all your hard work that you have put into your doctorate will now pay off.Again congratulations and may all your dreams come true.

Keep wriitng sweets your an excellent author as well.

Summary:

 

Bella Swan has been crushing on a geeky but very hot Edward Masen. Prom is coming soon. Will Bella's dream come true? Will Edward get the courage to ask Bella? What happens when Edward overhears a very embarrassing conversation about getting laid? AU-AH. One-Shot. Pure fluff.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1903 Read Count: 397
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prom

OMG!!A dominant Bella,gotta love her.Who doesn't love a geeky Edward,Yummy.Maybe u could think of doing a follow up of the prom night,hmmm maybe two virgins that wouldn't be afterwards.Hmmm yeah.

Anyhoo,loved your story doll.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm really glad yo liked it! Your feedback means a lot!

 

And yes, I was thinking of adding a chapter, prom of course. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

Great chapter,love a drunk Bella and Edward!!

So very,very sorry to hear of your baby.My husband and I as well had a very close attachment to our baby like that,he ended up having lymphoma,we put off as long as possible and he started seizing.in the end we had to make the ultimate sacrifice and have him put down.That was the hardest decision I have ever made in my entire life.He was 18yrs old and my baby,but in the end I have his pictures and memories.I still cry every day even though its been a year,their just like a child but with fur.Love him/her until the end.Much love to you and your furry baby and my prayers go out to you.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  We should know tomorrow if it's lymphoma.  She's been such a good companion.  I hope we get to keep her a while longer....if not we'll get through it, it won't be the same though.  Helps to hear other people's stories.  Take care.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

Ok my thoughts are

1)Eric is behind the creepy phone calls,BUT Angela is also helping him.

2)Angela wont give Edward the divorce bc she's plotting with Eric to somehow end Edward thinking that she'll get his money.

Hmmmm am I close.Prob not.



Author's Response:

hahahhha ur theories are great. Were getting closer to finding out who's behind stuff. xoxoxoxo trhanks for reviewing.....let me know if u want a teaser

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

OH GOD!!*shakes head* Edward is such a dick. Bella should make him suffer for that stunt.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I can't wait to see him grovel at her feet.I really hope Bella puts him through hell before she even considers taking his ass back.I'm no man hater,but I have seen what my sister went through and is still going through in this same situation.

AWESOME chappy deary. LOVE LOVED it.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Hmmm, Edward is trying, I can understand the hurt from Bella's side, but she really needs to open her mind to see where he is coming from as well. If I was told I couldn't conceive a child,then my "girlfriend" tells me that she is pregnant, yea I would do some questioning as well.I think Bella is being to stubborn and her wanting to prove she can take care of herself is what is stopping her from getting back together with Edward.

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672314
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

This story is some awesome shit.When I started reading,I literally could not put it down.Now i can't wait for updates.

It's seems so real to how everday life really is,the streets,gangs,mafia,really all of it.Just one question really,are you or your family involved in this?BC that would really be sooo neat.I always wondered if it was as really awesome as ppl put it in there stories.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Poker Face

What should Edward do with Jane? Easy,kill the bitch.She set up Alec,almost ruined Carlise and Esme,and tried stepping in on Edward and Bella.Srike three your out!!

Girl you rock!But I don't want to see anything happen to Aro,i know it probably doesn't happen like that in their world, due to respect and all,but Aro has to try to earn respect of his own if he can't get the upper "bosses" to stand up for him,right?

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Oh my,Edwards being questioned and Bella's getting pissed,YAY,I love a fiesty Bella,or is she a hormonal Bella.Hmmm.

Can't wait to see if she's pregnant either.Wonder if she will give those FBI guys a piece of that fiesty Bella mind of hers,now that would be a sight to see,hahahha.

Excellent chappy deary.On my way to vote now.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

OH MY HOLY JESUS!!! A gun weilding Bella is fucking HAWT!!!!!! At this point and time and I BEGGING for the next chapter,I'm dying to see what happens with Edward and Marcus.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

Awww i can just picture those fat chubby little legs and cheeks. Both my girls were little babies,so I could just picture this one.And how sweet was it that Edward was so emotional with his birth.*sigh*.I loved this chapter.

Summary:

Bella, tired with her static routine in life and unfulfilling sexual experiences, decides to try something new. When she comes across a BDSM website, she discovers that it leaves her mind awakened and her body tingling, and she wants more.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4522 Read Count: 2370
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: O.O. O/S

I think you make a PERFECT writer for BDSM..I have read quite a few fics including the BDSM..I truly hope you consider contuining this one as they explore they D/s lifestyle.



Author's Response:

First off, sorry I'm just now receiving this! I need to get better at checking reviews over here! 

Secondly, thank you so much for your kind words! I was really nervous writing this story, so to hear that is so flattering. I'm working on my first multi-chap story right now, and I'm trying to give that all my attention until it's up and running. But I definitely haven't ruled out the possibility of continuing this story :)

Thanks again!

-shpwhitney

Summary:

bannar

BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74921
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

I left my review for the end of this story.

I am a southern girl through and through.I dearly loved this story.There was times I laughed,cried,and even got jealous along with them.You pulled off the southern Edward and Bella perfectly.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532878
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

Happy New Year!!! AWESOME Last couple of chapters..I was starting to worry about B&E..They don't seem to have that same passion they used to have..but then I started thinking,3 kids,mob boss,yea who would.B had a valid point about having another kid and E was being waaaayyy to selfish.But the end,yea he's still the adorable,lovable mob boss we love.But something tells me its gonna change.No?

Last chapter.that was wicked hot for Carlise to kill Esme's lover.First time for soft Carlise to get his hands dirty without being told..YUMMY..

Summary:

fvwl

A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126160
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: pappy73 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You mentioned in your group that cheating is cheating? No matter with who or how? This proves that theory. They both cheated. Obviously he did, and Bella did as a way of revenge. But, is what Bella did really cheating? 

Some would say yes, some no. She took a job. A job to support her, feed her and possibly put her through college. On the other hand, she took it to prove what he had done with Heidi was deceiful and hurtful. by the men groping her, gawking at her that was still a form as well? Hard to say, women take those sorts of jobs everyday, for various reasons.

I loveed the update. Very eye opening and detailed. Excellent job as always doll!