She better not fuck James! She needs to take her ass back to Edward and grow up! I get people have hurt her...but Edward hasn't been one of those people. She needs to stop punishing him for everyone elses mistakes!

I remember nesting! I drove my husband literally insane. I vacuumed so much that I wore a bald spot in the carpet! LOL

$10 billion???

It's about time! Her wallowing was starting to frustrate me! =)

OMG! The end with webcams made me tear up! "You can sleep now, I've got you"...is one of my new favorite quotes!

So far I am loving this. At first I was shocked that they jumped into bed so quickly, but you remedied that by balancing their feelings. I can't wait to see how things materialize once they are separated!

Great chapter...but I thought Emma's middle name was Grace?

This chapter made me cry! Emma running up to the Police Officer for help...that tore my heart out! Not to mention the fact that Kate is my daughters name, so the emotions are totally conflicting.

I hope that Edward isn't the father of Alice's baby...it just doesn't seem right. Although the tuft of auburn hair probably means that he is. I just can't wrap my head around it!

I know I sound like a broken record, but I can't wrap my head around Edward and Alice having a child together. It just feels all wrong. I was wondering though...maybe you could have Bella get a Chorionic villus sampling when she's 3 months along to see who the father of the baby she's carrying is. Please don't tell me Jasper...I don't think I could handle it and I really don't need a self hugging jacket!!!

Another girl! Please tell me that Edward is the father! I know, I need to get over it, but I just can't fathom Jasper and Bella having a child together. I still can't get past Edward and Alice having Whitley together...I prefer not too, actually. I pretend she's Edward and Bella's! LOL

Oh man! Is she Jasper's? I am trying to wrap my head around it...but I can't!

Haha...you used the "You're shitting me" quote from Sweet Home Alabama! I LOVE that movie!!! Great chapter.

Alright, I am just going to say this. I have been following this story for awhile and was waiting to comment to see where the author took us. After these last two chapters, I went back and read some of the reviews and was SHOCKED at how ruthless and mean people can actually be. I am an author of many FF stories myself and it never ceases to amazes me that people think a good story can be written without some angst and drama. Seriously people, would the Twilight books have caught on the way they did, if Bella had skipped happily into the sunset with her vampire? NO! We came back for more, because we wanted what was next! And see who was going to try and tear them apart this time!

In my opinion, this is a great story. It's not loaded with trivial B.S. and dead end story lines that go no where. Shut up, ride out the angst and celebrate when they come out happy, healthy and stronger on the other side! For the person who suggested that E&B act like children...who doesn't? I've been married 17 years and my husband and I still compete with our 17 and 15  year old children to see who can act more childish! It happens. Love. Feelings. Emotions. They all combine and become combustible and bring out the worst in us in tense situations.

And for the Nit Picker who ran through all the legal logistics of the story line...IT'S A FAN FICTION STORY! Nothing is going into publication. The beauty of these stories, is that you can hold creative license over everything. It's your world and anything can happen any damn way you want it! If you want accuracy and a book that's gone through the whole editing and licensing process...GO TO BARNS AND NOBLE!!!

For now I give my props to the Author. You've given us a story that makes us empathize with the characters...that's not easy to do! Congrats and keep up the good work! :)

That was unexpectedly hot! I thought I would lose respect for Edward if he took it up the tail pipe, but strangly, it's quite the opposite! It takes a confident man to let his wife do that. I hope Bella has respect for the amount of trust it took for him to allow her to do that with no experience. That was total submission.

I LOVE EDWARD!!! Where can I get one?

This story rocks! Quick read and great bones! It would have been an injustice to FF readers everywhere if you didn't publish it! :)

Okay, Rose needs to go to the deepest, darkest recesses of HELL and stay there! I'm sorry, they dealt with this inappropriately. Edward deserved the opportunity to tell Bella all of this himself. Therefore, they should have gone to him, not Bella. Talk about winding an already bad situation up and making it 10x worse! And Rose...he owes all of them an explanation? Is she high? Aside from being Bella's friend, she has NOTHING to do with any of this? She's not a good friend, she's a vicious pit bull and Dictator! Sorry Bells, do yourself a favor and kick her to the curb. Any friend who can't look at situation objectively and deal with it in a way that puts your feelings before their own...is NOT a friend! Sorry, but she was more worried about herself in this situation. And the way she's treating Emmett? Get a grip! He with held information that had absolutely nothing to do with her. Is she kidding me by racking him over the coals FOR THAT? Nope, not a fan of Rose at all. Especially since it appears that before Alice stepped in, and clarified that the bet was called off and Edward's feelings were real, she never had any intension of disclosing that part. She just busted out the worst of it and let it ride. How do you do that to a friend? This was not a friend sticking up for friend. This was a Drama Queen, with a trumped up ego and god complex, gone mad! Rose needs to go....Kick that bitch to the curb!