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An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?
This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits
Love it, you made my day by posting this today! Nothing like abusing a Cullen while taking a break from studying. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi Jill...I like abusing the Cullen's. In real life I think I might want to kiss at least two of them. Thanks I love coffee, Diane.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh holy hell, Bella's gone crazy!! Oh man in shock here, nothing more to say. I'll be in my own happy little place bleaching that image of Jasper out of my brain.
By the way, why has Alice not seen any of this (did I miss that explination?)
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that's why I wrote that little warning on there. I keep trying to come up with all kinds of crazy for this story. The wolves stop Alice from seeing most things. Bella calls them in when needed. Plus Bella has Margie, she has the same gift as Alice with the added bonus of witchlike powers. I wouldn't say that Alice never see's anything, especially whenever it comes to Jazz. However, Bella has them under-ground. No street signs and she's very careful with things knowing all their strengths and weakness's She'll have to deal with the ' and I'm sure the women will be pissed off over their men. But for right now Bella has her own agenda.
I'm glad you reviewed and thanks for the coffee. I love it! Diane
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 After the Transformation
Do a Esme point of view, it would be great to see how pissed she is about what is going on, hummm who is the coven leader now? Love this story, great evilness and OCC, which makes it even better. Maybe later in the story, twist it around, have the Cullens find Bella, resque a stunned Jasper, change Carlisle back and mess with Bella, maybe have her changed into a vampire agenst her will and kept weak like she did to her captives... just an idea. Regardless this story is the best!
Author's Response:
That's two votes for Esme. I am so glad that you love this story. You're close to being on the same wave length as I am with it. Except, I have the story out-lined differently but, some of the results are the same in the end.
There will be a lot of drama and evilness ahead for the Cullens. But Peter is going to bring in some comic relief here and there. Peter Facinelli is one funny dude in real life and a fireball of energy. I just couldn't resist writing him in, although it will suck when he has to be written out.
Thanks for the encouraging words and I hope I continue to write this story in a way that keeps you so excited. :) Thanks for the coffee....Diane
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?
This story is great beyond words!! Pissed off Esme, yes!! Don't mess with this angry mother hen Vampire!! Her mate is gone and she's pissed beyond words! Her character is smarter then many given her credit for and not enough time or plot was given to her in the series (or Dr C for that matter)! Anyway, Esme and Rose are out for revenge and may have to tie Edward up to keep him out of the way, which would probaly be a good idea (his emo a$$ needs a reality check). Looking forward to the next chapter! Lets rescue the 300+ year old vampire and get him back to his old blood drinking self (let me guess, his alter Peter (hahah totally missed that one last chapter, haha) is going to like being human, maybe he will like Esme better then his 'wife' Bella) and get revenge on bada$$ Bella! :)
Author's Response:
I so agree with you that Carlisle and Esme didn't get enough time in the series. The women are most certainly pissed off and who can blame them. Peter doesn't have any vampire memories. He was a clean slate for Bella to do with as she pleases. Evil Isabella still has a few tricks up her sleeve and so far she's getting her way. Their all very smart, it will be interesting to see who wins in the end. Thanks for the review and you know I love the coffee. :)
-Diane
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons
For who wins, well Im rooting for the Cullen women, its about time someone gives them some credit. As for the Peter situation (I still roll my eyes and laugh at that, its great- real life meets fan fiction in a way and its not a stupid real life FF, where a made up character or real person meets the actor from twilght and they fall in love, yuck, not for me), it would be great if Peter the human ment Esme and fell in love with her despite what Evil Bella did (maybe good Bella is still in there after all and it's a trick by the Volutori, new form of mind control that can get around Bella's human mind's sheild). Regardless this is one of the best FF stories and the most original plot I have read. Ps Im going to pimp out this story on Facebook's Twilight Fanfiction Recommindations Page, if you would let me... :)
Author's Response:
Pimp Me out all you would like to Jilli. I certainly will take that as a compliment. I would actually like to have that link, so I can find some good ff myself. I have a Facebook but I don't say too much about my writing there, unless it's to my beta.
I'm over on ff under the same screen name. I really like this site though, It seems much more personal to me. Thanks for taking the time to read and now recommend me as well. :) I really don't know what else to say other than a big THANK YOU! Take care and thanks for all that coffee.
-Diane
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire
Evil Bella, yha!! OMG (very over used, but appropriate here). Evil Bella got what she deserved, yay Jasper, stand up for yourself for once. Now how pissed off is Alice going to be and I thought it was in bad taste for her to threaten Rose that way, evil Bella you suck. What about Charlie in all this, would he not be ashamed of his daughters behavior? Or did Victoria get him? Back to Dr C/Peter (I laugh at that every time I think about it), who is baby sitting him when she is at work or does she drug him or bring him with her? What is keeping the Cullens away from him while she's not home? So if and when Dr C/Peter is turned back into a vampire, will he survive, will he get his previous memories back? Or will he be like a new born vampire, blood lust and all (that would be cool, no more perfect Carlisle...). Bella needs a serious ass kicking in this story, please do not have her get pregnant with Carlisle/Peters baby, that would just be awful, but that could go in a whole other weird direction, haha the baby could be half vampire b/c his sperm still contained vampire dna (do vampires have dna in your stories world?). You could do so many strange things with that one...
Love your story Diane, going to pimp out the new chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
laters and all that jazz
Jilly
Author's Response:
I'm lovin' this review girl.
Okay, I haven't thought too much about Charlie as of yet. Isabella is so independent that I doubt Charlie knows how bad she really is. I would think he is off telling all of his friends what a big success his daughter is being a brain and all. Some of your questions have been answered in the next chapter that I have partially mapped out already. Some of your questions I can't give away the answers for, and others, I am really happy you have asked. I don't want any loop holes in this story, so I love getting questions. This way I also know what's on everyone's mind, and I can guide things in a certain direction. Thanks for pimpin' me out girl you have gotten me some votes and for that I am grateful.
Thanks for the review and the coffee I love that stuff...Diane
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.
yay!! You made my day great! Somethign to read while my back heals. Evil Bella is one ruthless b*tch! She lives right across the street from wolves and Peter (hahah, still laugh at that, so sorry)is convenitly best friends with Sam, hahah thats great! The B*tch! But how is she going to explain away Esme and Im sure the others will visit Peter too, especally Alice sence she wants Jasper back, unless Jasper has his own plan of escape cooking (Im sure he does). How about having Esme come back with the Denali Caln to help her or trade winny Edward for Peter (hahaha). Now Evil Bella, I think your little vampire changing process is flawed, hahahaha! Peter/Carlisle is starting to get his memory back, Bella you are a sucky person, hahah(every guy should get the car he wants, Screw the Subaru, the black Mercedes wins)! Oh yha maybe have Peter start to have flashbacks to being Carlisle or maybe dreams, that would be cool and maybe have him ask Sam or even Emily about his "life" before the house fire and have one of them slip up and tell Peter his real identity. Maybe better yet have Esme just change him or have Peter and Bella get into a car accident and both of them have to be changed and Peter remembers he's actually Carlisle after the change and evil Bella losses her memory and is somehow 18 or 19 again (mentally and physically) errr could happen and she loves Edward again, that way everyone gets a happy ending and the Voltori stay blisfully unware of what happened. I love this story! I adore the new and improved Esme with guts as the Clan/Family leader. Don't mess with her, she will slap you silly into next week!! Im all for girl power! How about Peter/Carlisle starts craving blood and his body automatically starts changing back to vampire becuase his soul knows what it should be, that would be intresting to see happen. Or he suddenly remembers who he really is and contacts the Cullens or goes to visit them...
Ps Peter: women do not have power over men, yes we love our men and fight with them but no one has power over another person's life or mind(cults maybe but that's a whole other story Im writing). Pss: who cares about pissing off your wife, she's Evil Bella, she's pissed off anyway, one big case of PMS or should I say VHS (Vampire Hating Symdrom). I personally think he needs to grow a pare of balls like Esme did and get a life of his own (hopefully) or just leave Evil Bella, resque Jasper and get on with things, after all Evil Bella is a B*tch. How about sissy Edward, does he want or get anything out of this? How does he feel about the whole thing? How about Jake, maybe he could help the Cullens somehow? You could do so much with this story, it just blows my mind and I love it!! Looking forward to the next update!
Jilly :)
Author's Response:
Oh Jilly I love the way your mind works. We need to get together and write some dark fiction girl. The idea's are just flowing out of you. I want so much to spill my guts and tell you what I have planned and then let you put your own spin on it. Thats why I say maybe at some point we can do that. I want to write a Darlisle story next.
You got to admit that moving Sam in across the street was a stroke of Smart-evil on her part. Peter being Sam's new friend and taking him to do things is a good way to keep tabs and block Alice. She has plenty of money to buy Sams time after all. The tattoo will never go away, even if he does become a vampire again, it will be right there for Esme as a reminder.
I really don't plan on bringing Edward in until the last few chapters with good reason. I have thought about Peter having dreams. Also the things like him fixing her up so well a doctor would be impressed. That was the Carlsile in him as well as the kind of car he wanted. The playful, hyper, joking Peter is like the one I met in real life. So I am trying to border them on each other. Sam kind of explained that Bella had enemies and Bella told him what Esme was and that she wanted to bite him. So he knows he's on dangerous ground right now. I do have plans on Peter finding his real idenity out, but not in the way one would expect.
I am almost scared that our minds think so much alike on things. My hubby teases me about my mind being scary like S. King. But I am really an easy going person, hell I honestly wont kill a bug, if I can catch it, I'll put it back outside. But I don't care to torture fictional people. How messed up am I? Honestly.
I'll talk to you soon...Diane
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Then and Now
Still love pissed off Esme. They should abduct Evil Bella until the child is born, so Esme and Caslisle can be parents and raise it (don't name it Rensemse- yuck!). Love pissed off Vampire Women. But the wolves have to go, they are just anoying. Could bringing in the Danali coven help the Cullens win? just something to think about. So Peter/Carlisle is starting to remember, to dream about his former life, how long is he going to be in denial about "loving Bella"? Poor Jasper, he cannot win no matter what he trys to do. But it does seem like Alice still stands by him. Maybe they can salvage their relationship with a few changes of course. But something needs to be done about Evil Bella and help Esme get her relationship/husband back. Love it and Evil Jill is getting ready to strike again soon. Love this story, you made my day!
Author's Response:
Hi Jill,
Thank You for the coffee, it makes it worth all the hours I actually spend trying to get things right. I love those pissed off vampire women as well, but all Bella really has going for her now is her brains, the wolves, and her pregnancy. All that combined would not help her against them if it came down to it. But when it comes to matters of the heart she already has Peter's. The next chapter Bella is going to have to get a few ducks in a row if she wants to survive after the baby comes. TTYL. :)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.
Ah, yes Jasper with balls, great!! Go Jasper, Go, get Evil Bella!! Now here comes Edward, yha that might not be a good thing, that has the posablitly to be very ugly! What about this Dr Mason, and what part does he or she have to do with in this story? Vampire insurance, ha, I hope Esme gauges Evil Bella's eyes out for abusing her children and raping husband. On the topic of Esme, angry Esme is great, so when is she coming back to visit? I cannot wait for her to make another apperance. Maybe the girls should try to take Peter back when Bella is at work and the wolves are having hot sex with their imprints... that would be great!! Please don't name this baby Renesmee (no you cannot steal Vanessa either, she's mine to be mean too!) By the way did you see the interview on the Wendy Williams show with the real Peter last week, it was great!
Laters and all that stuff
Jilly :)
Author's Response:
HI Jilly,
I like Jasper with balls, yeah baby. I'm actually not 100 percent sure in what direction I am taking the next chapter to yet. I think I might have upset a few people today with allowing Jasper to be the father. To be honest I hadn't even thought about a name for the baby yet. I didn't see Peter on that show. I don't think I've even heard of her. But I am sure Peter has a link posted somewhere to it. :) Thanks for the coffee.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle
Thank goodness you updated today, you brightened my long and crapy day here in rainy Southeastern Pa. I feel so sad for Esme, her heart is broken and her family betrayed. I hope Evil Bella will not do anything to hurt Rose and Emmett, they are both minor players in this play of betrayal. As for evil Bella, she should be locked in the Cullens basement, away from her child for the first ten years of her vampire life (assuming she does not die in childbirth). As for peter/Carilse sparkling again, I cannot wait to see the cercumstances his change back occures in, who changes him and how he turns out. Now in your universe, does he remember his vampire life, does he have to go back to medical school (does Dr Cullen desire to even practice medicine again?), how will Carilsle feel about Bella's trickery when he is changed back into a vampire? Will the good Doctor/Passafist forgive Bella for her evilness? Love this story sooooooooooooooooo much!!
After my long day at school, your update was a great relaxer!! Now Im off to abuse my own characters, i just have to deside who to play with, Sam has been stamping her foot this past week looking for some attention (I think she wants a lemon or two with her boy). But I did leave a adorable child in a basement, if you know what I mean and the Paster might be getting ressless...
Laters
Jilly
Author's Response:
Hey there Jilly,
Well in my universe the sexy as f--k Doctor Cullen will remember much of this former life with Isabella. When he changes there will be so much hurt and betrayal felt by Peter, but also love. I would like to think that all of those years he was a doctor will come back to him. I just can't make up my mind as to how close to right that would sound. The other things that you have mentioned will be played out for the most part in later chapters.
I think after everything that the Sam in your story has been through that you need to let that poor girl get some from her handsome man, and please write more about her father as well. Yes I have daddy issues...lol. I never got to be a daddy's little girl... 'stomping my foot like a child'. Okay Laters to you as well and Thanks for filling my coffee cups all the way up. :)
-Diane
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies
OMG, love it to pieces!!! Love this chapter so much!! Yes, score Carsile!! Glad to finally see the former vampire act like the 23 year old his character is, to act nothing like perfect protrayed in the books. I would also like to think some real life people (ahahm Peter F), no matter how nice they are have moments they would and do flip off people in private. hahaha. Now my question is will Peter/Carsile turn Bella over to Esme and Rose (who are probaly pissed and playing rock, paper sizzors with real rocks to see who gets Bella's baby. But really it should be Esme). Now what does wussie edward think of all this mess? Does he still want Bella back? When will Carsile/Peter be changed back to a vampire? Esme should do it, after all she was sired by the good doctor vimpire with his venium in her veins, so she should change him and he'll get his venum back (yah does it work that way in your vampire world?) Maybe there should be a car crash and Esme will have not choice but to change Peter back. Love how you referanced Judas, haha greatness!! Now will the personalitys of Carilse/Peter turn into one when he is changed or will Carsile be the first vampire in history to have multipule personality disorder? Haha I crack myself up!! (Sorry, long day and I cannot spell anymore). Your story is bananas!! Love it! See all the freting and rewriting and worrying was worth it, the chapter turned out great! Evil Bella got caught and is now facing the consequenses and emotional distruction of her actions. love it!! Cannot wait for the next chapter as always!
Laters and all that jazz
Jilly
Ps (Sam is going to have a few depressing pages this instalment, don't be mad at me, he's very beat up and needs time to recover, no you cannot help, evil charater stalker!) :)
Author's Response:
LOL...But I love PAPA Jill...you never allow me to play with him. And as long as I stalk fictional characters I won't go to jail...lol.
I also think that Esme should be the one to turn Carlisle and give him his own venom back. Right now I am at a cross roads with what direction to go in with Evil Isabella. Should she get depressed and suicidal or vengeful and deadly again?
I think in real life Peter has more than likely flipped a bird or two as well...hehe. But hey he thought Sam was his friend, and he has been betrayed by everyone he thought had loved him. He's slightly bitter I guess.
Laters back and love the coffee, Diane.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Goodbye
Oh shit, that's great!! Stupid, evil Bella! I hope Esme cuts her into itty bitty peices and takes the baby for herself after turning Evil Bella into a vampire so she can be in pain for the rest of her exhistance! I love this story and your evil mind, but my mind is evilier then yours if not worse!! Haha! So I question that plagued my mind is where does Edward (not my favorite vampire) come into all this? Would he still take Bella as a mate if she still would want him? Maybe all the memories Bella created with Peter/Carisle all these few months will be erased after each is turned into a vampire (assuming Bella is turned and Peter lives long enough to get to Esme). You make my mondays girl!! Love it! Yha I know I over use exclimation points, but they are soo fun! But not as fun as Dr Hottie Cullen, without the discusting fake blond hair! Oh wait thats my hottie with the gun, haha, nha his hair is blacker then black and curly! Well back to studying and writing Sam's latest adventure :)
Author's Response:
Hi Jilli,
I love it when you curse at me first thing...lol. That means I did good ! I have no problem with !!!! . Keep em' coming. I can deal with Doctor 'HOTTIE' Cullen and his fake hair. Because if I pull the wig off I still get a doctor 'Coop'. : ) So sexy *sighs*. Okay so you may have a mind that is more evil than mine but, in my defense, I am still watering mine so it will grow. j/k. Edward in this story would always take Bella back, she has outgrown him. Thanks for the coffee and please feel free to offer some to Sam's Dad for me.
-Diane
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.
Oh shit, the women are in charge!!! love it!! I just adore a pissed off Esme and cannot wait to see what will happen next! Back to writing Papa and Sam, sorry they are distracting me from a good review. :)Love this story and I hope Evil Bella dies a evil death and that Edward does not change her and if he does, that she becomes a zombie vampire for what she did to the Cullens! :)
Author's Response:
Hey as long as I get a smiley face or coffee I am happy. Um, sometimes Evil has to win... ;)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up
Vampire-napped, so funny, you crack me up. I think I really, really like the new and improved Carlsile Cullen MD, but the Bella infatucation really bothers me. Cannot wait for Carlsile to write out and put down his new laws, hah that should be great to read!! :) (no more makeovers Alice, no sex Esme, everyone keep their hands off the baby!)
Author's Response:
There's my coffee...Oh come on Bella Boner was good too...lol. Yelp next chapter Carlisle will lay it all out and he will be respected and feared. And a little crude sexually! yummy. Thanks for reviewing for me sweetie. TTYL, Diane.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Family Meeting
Yes, love it, every part of it!! Sequal, even better!! Dominate Carlisle is great and th part with Alice etting in trouble for Bella Barbie, great, looking forward to that!! Esme's new roll seems intresting and I can't wait to see how that turns out. I was getting worried, though you dropped off the face of the writting world for a second. Isen't writers bloack a bitch. Can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
Ps there will bw a present in your inbox by the end of the week, yay, Jillys sick mind stricks again!
laters and stuff
Jilly :)
Author's Response:
I got pretty sick for a good while Jilli...I hate leaving people hanging I like to update weekly. Hey I never did get my present and I have checked my inbox lately. Where's my PAPA!!! hehehehehehe
Thanks for the review and the coffee hun. Diane
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Bella's Escape
Love it poor Em, I really hope he won't endup dead. Can't wait to see whats next. How evil will the plot get? hehehehh :)
Author's Response:
Hi Jilli...Emmett wont end up dead don't worry. He needs to stand up and be a man vamp as well as the others. I think he has a lot to offfer and maybe his part needs to be explored a little more. SM didn't really give us much to go on with him. So it's all open to interpataion. :)
Thanks for the review and as always the coffee smells so good. I still haven't gotten to read my present as of yet but I will get to it soon I promise. There's just been so much to be done now that I'm feeling better. Take Care and I hope to talk to you soon, Diane.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Carlisle's Day Out
The Smut is back!! That was some great smut, just what I needed to brighten my day! Can't wait to see what happens next (more smut or another round of Evil Carsisle laying down the law).
Author's Response:
Thanks Jilli,
Actually the next chapter is going to lead us into the second series of this story. Everyone will find out a surprise or two which will hopefully get everyone curious enough to follow. :)
I to love the smut :)!!!
Thanks for the review and the coffee as well lady!
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Wow, this story is better then good or great, its amazing. Its a whole new twist on Bella's characters gift. Can;t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
WOW!!!! Thank you... I am happy you are enjoying my story
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Love it
Author's Response:
I'm so happy, thanks for reading
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238947
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is good, I like it!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow, great story. Umm anyone see anything wrong with a human in a vampire school?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you like so far =) LOL yeah there's something wrong alright. Hope I can keep you interested!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
wow, weird but good, almost like a nightmare.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I do enjoy horror movies and stories, although it's not dark compared to some of other stories I have written which I haven't posted. LOL
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This is a great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you are still enjoying it =)
Thanks for reading and commenting, totally appreciate it!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
wow! So messed up! love it!
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =)
Thanks for reading/commenting!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Love it!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =D Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
wow, that stinks for Bella
Author's Response:
Yes, it does. =( But Edward's on his way, he felt Bella's fear and pain. Let's hope he get's there in time.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served
love it!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Oh wow, this is a great start, keep going!
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving it a shot. I am very excited about this story so I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring
This is good, looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank You! Next chapter is almost done, I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming
this is good!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad you liked it. More to come soon,
Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school. They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos. Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man? Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone. If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: 44 days and counting
This good, keep on writing!!
Author's Response:
Hey Jilli90~
Thanks for the kind words! It started off as a wreck but we are bringing her back and reviving her! I really love reviews they make me smile! I am glad that you are liking the story. It is going to get really good really soon! Chapter 4 will have a POV from the stalker don't miss that!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel
This story is awsome, I spent my whole day reading it, to catch up. So excited to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Jill~
Thank you for reading my story and thank you for the story love! I am glad that you read it all so far. I am jsut in love with these characters so much and I am glad to share them with you!
I have sent you the preview to chapter 34 to you via the contact me button on your profile. watch for a email from maakrace on a hot mail account.
Thank you again for reading and taking the time to review. Reviews do mean EVERYTHING me.
Kasi~
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions
wow, thats not good...
Author's Response:
*Hiding while typing*
Don't be too mad yet. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I think the preview I send you will at least make you feel better a little anyway. Sending via the contact button on your profile.
Kasi
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
So creapy! Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Next chapter posts soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue: Thirteen Years, Down the Road
Ok, they do not need anymore children!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Kasi
Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Please do continue, its a excelent start. looking forward to reading more.
Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C
Banner By: Rachel MS
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28911
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Howdy, Jill! Thanks for the review! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 39. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 40…
BPOV
Jasper tightened his grip on me, as the full impact of had happened really started to kick in. How in the hell did Caius think that making that self-centered, hateful, egotistic, self-absorbed, narcissistic, bigheaded, arrogant, Hippie Bitch a vampire, that would live forever was beyond me, and I wanted N.O.T.H.I.N.G. to do with it.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Shit (sorry best expression to put here), now I feel really old, I know all the popculture stuff (I was in middle school when Cobian died and some girl carved CC into her arm) and anchient items such as record, rotery telephone ect ect and Im not that old (born in the early 1980's)! Your story is great, a bit strange when it comes to elves, and enjoyable! :)
Jilly
Author's Response:
Thanks Jilly, I know it takes some getting used to, but I do have a plan for all of it! Most of the 'plan' comes together right before the wedding! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 34! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 35~
Hugs~Izzy
I couldn’t believe that my girl had pulled the wool over my eyes like that. I’m an empathic vampire, for fuck’s sake. She really had Peter, Char, and me going there for a few minutes, and I was starting to really wonder what in the hell teacher’s were teaching this new generation.
After getting lost in a foreign city, and with a very peculiar guide, Edward's life is completely altered after an unexpected encounter surrounded with blossoming cherry trees, staring at a pair of stunning blue eyes and a mysterious handsome man. After a passionate stolen kiss, Edward realizes something has changed in him and wants his mystery man back.
Will Edward be able to cast aside social conventions and family expectations, to be with the one he loves? There is more than meets the eye about Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Will Edward be able to make him open up and given them a chance?
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Slash, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31842 Read Count: 3214
Edward was changed in 1918, unaware that his betrothed lay dying in the alley near the hospital she was on her way to see him.
Every 18 years she comes back, and every 18 years they meet, only for her to die burning in agony a month before her birthday.
Can they find a way to stop it before it's too late?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19784 Read Count: 1340
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Love it!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you liked it
We all have something that slightly irks us about the events in the Twilight Saga. For me, it was the fact that Edward's family seemed okay with him abandoning Bella in New Moon. I just couldn't swallow that. Surely, Esme and Carlisle had something to say about Edward's ridiculous decision to leave! So here is my version of what happened at the Cullen household leading up to the day they leave from Esme's POV…
Winner of the Judge's Pick - Summer 2010's Most Tragic Hour Writing Challenge and a 2011 winner of the Vampie's Awards One Trick Vampie (best one shot)
Part of the Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes Series
SM owns all of Twilight.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4021 Read Count: 267
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thank God someone finally wrote the PARENTS point of view of New Moon, I always wondered why Edward got away with what he did. Maybe the author should write and post that outtake on her website!
Author's Response:
Exactly! I did wonder how Esme, of all 'people', could go along with Edward's cracked decision. I hope you enjoyed it, though it is a bit sad to read. Thank you for the review!
The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into. NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.
This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.
Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;
http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me
Wow good story so far, love it. Lets see what kind of trouble Edward can get into next. HHHHmMMMMM is he calling Alice?
Author's Response:
lol love your excitment, sorry to say that is not alice, thanks :)
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389633
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade. But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.
Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters. She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life. She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves. And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.
Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I was half way through this story and now Iam very disapointed that to finish, I will have to PAY for the pubished work. I have bought work i read on FF sites, both electronically and splurged for the traditional paper books and might have bought yours, but now I most likly will not. Very disapointed.
Author's Response:
Sorry your disappointed, but I left plenty of notice and plenty of time. I don't begrude you the way you make your living. Please don't begrudge me the way I make mine.
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.
Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.
L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie
Tkegl...Thank you!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
OMG love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I hope that you will like this twisted version of LAV.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate
love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! We're glad you enjoyed it =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning
Great Story, love little Edward growling from inside his moma.
Author's Response:
Hiya!
Thank you =) Glad you're enjoying it!
Yeah, little baby Edward is fiesty. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up
LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
We'll post more soon.
Thank you for commenting.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken
great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We are happy that you like it!
Thank you for reading and your review. We appreciate it!
~Jells
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull
OHG, love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for reeading and reviewing, hope you enjoyed it!
~Tyggy~
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit
wow, like these dark vampires!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
And thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Jells
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1
intresting ending.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Hope you'll like part 2.
New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!
In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?
AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh wow, speechless person here, just wow!
Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17466
From the author of The Dream of Becoming a Star. Charlie has no choice but to leave his youngest daughter, Bella, to take his place in captivity. Bella finds herself falling for her master. When she returns home, she finds herself trapped as the family she lost tries to hold onto her and take her away from her true love. My entry for the Twisted Twilight Tales.
Neither Twilight nor Beauty and The Beast was mine.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8225 Read Count: 619
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
awwww, cute! :) Wish there was more to read
Author's Response:
Thanks. Next time I'll do my best to lengthen the fic.
AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
For those of you who read "The Perfect Wife" this takes place twelve years after the epilogue. You do not need to read TPW, but an understanding of the story is helpful.
Carlisle ran a human trafficking ring. He was an abusive husband and father. Esme suffered cruel and horrific atrocities at her husband’s hand. Her sons, Emmett, Jasper and Edward were raised to treat her no better than a slave; undeserving of love and respect. Rosalie, Alice and Bella are brought into this life as their wives and together these women fight to change their outlook on life and women. At the end of TPW, Em/J/E have learned to change and passionately love and respect their wives. Carlisle is finally killed when he attempts to hurt Bella, freeing Esme from a lifetime of abuse. His will stated he wanted to be cremated so his ashes would remain with his family, forever a symbol of his power over his family. Esme refuses to let him control her life any longer and takes his urn from the house returning empty-handed hours later. TPW was Bella and Edward’s story. This is Esme’s story.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4083 Read Count: 7763
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Your work rocks!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Jasper missed his chance in college, but when Bella and Edward's marriage falls apart 15 years later and he helps pick up the pieces, will Jasper finally get the chance at happiness he always longed for? J&B Eventually. Fair warning, this is major heartfail in the beginning, but will end up with a typical ACW ending.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42200 Read Count: 16481
The Cullen crime family has been a problem for the law officers of Chicago for over fifty years. After dozens of failed attempts to infiltrate the family, the FBI decides it's time to send in more undercover agents, Edwards and Whitlock. However, the Feds do not realize that Edwards has an agenda all of her own, which doesn't necessarily include putting a stop to the family's business.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 44260
Working in one of the busiest ERs in Chicago, Edward and Bella are colleagues who are meant for more than just a work relationship. As they grow closer, will the past allow them to be happy or will it return to rip them apart? AH, mature themes.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46238 Read Count: 2463
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
addicted to this story!!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for reading! :)
Edward is running out of time to find his mate before the Volturi will demand his allegiance. It will take more than just infatuation to make it out on the other side. A story of vamps, witches and more. NC-17 for lang, violence and mature content.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15131 Read Count: 1698
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
creeptastic, love it!!!
Author's Response:
LOL... Thank you so much Jilli90... I really appreciate you reading and enjoying!
xoxo
texasbella
Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221097
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
People are crapy.
Your story is the best!!
its actually a 10++++ but theres no button for that
:)