Reviews by akf2386
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625349
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh wow! Only thing worse than Demetri would have to be Carlisle....crap. Poor, Poor Bella. She can not catch a break.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Avoiding and Consequences

Love your story. So dark and twisted..lol. Hope our girls give em' hell.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

Lovied it. So great. The quick updates have been awesome. I think it would be great to see a major confrontation go down between the 6 guys. See who handles jealousy the best/worst. Of course for it to really be effective the guys are gonna have to bend on their plan and approach the girls. I think it would also be funny if maybe the girls weren't so indifferent to their guys. I'm sure that their attractions/feelings didn't just disappear. PLease update soon.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13. Feeling The Burn Twice

Ok i  feel like im stalking the page for updates..lol. Great job. The longer chapter was much appreciated.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap

So surprised by the pregnancy. Feel kinda weird about Bella losing it to Demetri...but I guess it is reasonable under the circumstances. Can't wait to see their reactions to what has been done to "their" girls

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)

Great update! Can't wait for more. I don't get the compound thing though. The guys seem kinda dumb...obviously the pregnant "breeders" have to be put somewhere ya know? Weird.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step

Great update...looking forward to more soon.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21. The Twilight Zone

Awesome update. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )

Interesting update. Hope to see more soon. Love this story.

 

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )

love the update. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision

Edward pisses me off. Jasper seems to have a chance to redeem himself, but poor Emmett. He's the only decent one outta the trio right now and its his love interest thats locked up. Edward is an idiot to let the Demetri thing bug him that much.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28. The Compound

Im starting to get confused. But I still love this story and am sticking with it. Update soon.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29. Kidnapped

Well now Im dying to read the next one. Update soon. Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture

Hmm ok so Demetri is behind the wolves. Glad it wasn't the Quileutes. So worried for Alice right now...I hope Aro does punish the boys even if Jasper, Em, and Ed don't get to them first. Things are obviously heating up. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Escape

Cliffy?! Thats just torture. Im so eager for the next chapter. I'm also freaking out about Rose and Alice. Whats happened to them? Write, Write Write!!!

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32. Bella's New World

Aw I missed your fic. Great update! Hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi

I really hope its Rose and Emmett. Bellas power is very cool. Update soon.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Wow...so much new drama. Love it. Your right...he kinda did deserve it. At the same time Bella now has no right to act superior or the more devoted party since she did disregard their bond so easily. Edward did everything before they mated...she did this now. Sorry about the disappearance of my reviews...I haven't been getting notified of your updates until today. Crazy stuff.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

Hmm Ok glad you made her suffer for that...I mean it was pretty messed up. I hope the Cullens are ok. I wonder if Rose did make it...wouldn't that be awesome? I guess you will be filling in all these answers soon. Can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37. Succubae?

So excited..can't wait for Edwards POV. Sad to see hes back to being a vampwhore. lol

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38. Finding Edward

Great update. I kinda want to stab his little groupie vamps. Especially that Alina chick. He is so messed up he can't even recognize Bella's scent? Not good.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39. The Coven

uh oh...Edward is gonna flip out about Demetri. Bella better watch out.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Shaken to the Core

Wow....I love this story. So twisted. And quite a cliff hanger. Please update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373464
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Aww i really love this story

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

Loved the update!

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

Uh-oh...poor Edward. He doesn't know just how bad thats going to seem to Bella does he? Shes gonna think he was with Tanya. She is also getting sick...hmm pregnancy perhaps?

Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow did not see that coming. Oh how I hate Tanya.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow! Amazing chapter....so did not see that coming.

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow! Amazing update. Poor Edward hes gonna be too late. Please update soon.