Reviews by mahitabelle
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995735
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I thought it was a great chapter (they aaalll are). Alice was really pisiing me off. I wanted to spank her. Hee hee.

Author's Response:

now, now, let's leave the spanking to Jasper shall we?  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Great chapter as always. So visual
So poignant. So HOT! I cried and laughed.
I noticed several little typos and mispells. Unusual for you. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

HALLELUJAH!!! It doesn't get any better than that. I'm exhausted.

Author's Response:

Awww - thanks honey!

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Great chapter. I hope Edward left the plug out for the wedding ;) poor girl. When does she get to poop? Heehee. I can't wait for the wedding and what's up with Renee?

Author's Response:

I loved your review! You made me chuckle! Yes, Bella was but free for the ceremony! (I hope!) Renee, well all I can say is she is some work, seriously.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

That was a wonderfully long chapter. The BDSM growing pains are certainly insightful into the lifestyle. I'm amazed at all the emotions and how well written this story is.
I've been a nurse for "ever" and I've never heard the term "fall pregnant". Interesting term.
Thanks for all the time you put into PLU.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

An absolutely brilliant chapter (as every chapter has been). Your updates make my day. Seeing Bella grow stronger emotionally as the Possums grow stronger physically has been inspiring.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Just the thought of this story ending makes my heart hurt. I'm so invested, I may need a hug.

Set in Stone by Psyche001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward saved the life of a girl he was not supposed to save. Bound by secrecy and by the terms of his sentence, he has no choice but to stay away from her. What happens when she accidentally finds him three years after her rescue? What she finds out will turn her life upside down. His time is running out. Will their fate keep them together or tear them apart?

Nominated for an Indie Award!

Romance/Angst/Adventure/No Vampires

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191619 Read Count: 13324
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Twilight

OMG. I'm freaking out!!!

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes me.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Some like it hot. Some like it cold.

Holy crap, that was intense.

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

It had been so long I went back and read the whole thing over again. It was just as good the 2nd time as it was a year ago. I Really look forward to the next chapter. Is it curtain time for James? Will the voturi leave Bella alone? Will Bella feel the need to disappear? That girl never thinks ahead and is too in the moment. Can't wait!

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420935
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Big Day

Perfect.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Following her lead

I am really liking your story. Good plot and it moves along well. It is fairly accurate OR action. I liked that you included the "time out". Emergency c sections in a small hospital can be scary. I did one in the ER one time, it
was aweful.
Do you use a beta? I noticed you have some minor but consistant spelling errors. (Ex. Not starred at me but stared.) Minor, but you don't
want the silly things to distract from the story.
I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you for you time and story.
ps. I'm an OR RN that scrubs.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Lake George Escape

Camping is one of those things that sounds better than it really is and is more trouble than it should be, but always makes memories for a lifetime.The weed storyline was hillarious.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Lingerie and Lasagna

The story is cute. And hot. And the mispelled "STARED" is still making me crazy. But, I still like the writing. How come I never got to work
with a surgeon like Edward? It would have made a low anterior a whole different ballgame.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Colonial Williamsburg

Funny chapter. I haven't been to Williamsberg since I was a kid. Makes me want to go.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255091
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

A very enlightening chapter. As for your critics, what kind of idiot reads a fiction story that comes with a disclaimer and then whines about the content? I'll tell you what kind. A hypocrit idiot.
You write on girl! I'm intrigued and
entertained each and every chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you ... and i intend to write on in the direction i had always planned to go...anyway, thanks for reading until next time...louise

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought you did a good job of explaining Edwards thinking. I only hope those readers that were offended deming themselves, IT IS A STORY!
I was surprised that Esme had issues with Jane. I hope Alice can reign in her disapproval. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I love this story and have enjoyed getting in Bella's head (althIough, I want to thump her sometimes). I am sorry that I don't review, but I do 99% of my reading on my phone and this site isn't set up for reviews from Blackberry's. I just wanted you to know that i am enjoying your story, your writing, your characterizations and yes, the smut. I look forward to every update.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Louise,

I have not sent a review because I do all my reading on my blackberry and this site isn't set up for bb reviews. So first of all, great story, kudos, love it, keep up the great writiing. Ialways get excited when you update.

I couldn't let this slide: a garment is "fire retardant" not fire retarded.

I'm dying to know what corn pie is?

x0

Dee



Author's Response:

Hi Dee...I will post the directions for corn pie at the bottom of the thursday's update....sorry about the word...both M and I try to catch everything. but sometimes ((ok..often)) things get past us ....thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Edwards question is the one I've been asking myself since the beginning!!! What attributes did James possibly have that attracted Bella?
Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Those are the questions Edward wants to know....

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Total *GiggleSnort*
Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Hahahhahah...You Snorted!!!....

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

OMG. Rose? I'm so confused.

Author's Response:

The new chapter will be up soon so your confussion will be eliminated or you can refresh your memory by re-reading chapter 31...when they are at the cabin and the women are sitting in the bedroom having -what Edward called-  a 'tea party'

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Great chapter. Seth?

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Ok. So the bet comes down to whos skills reign. Of course, Edward must win, but only by seconds. He's a Dom.
Esme cracks me up. Edward is going to need to hose her down.
Emmett is a smart guy. A goof, but smart.
You lost me a little at the end. I figure you will straighten me out with the next chapter.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I totally get Bella's issue with the tampon.
Alice is such an elite boor.
James = benzodiazapine
nipple clamps=necrosis
Anal sex without condom, not advised. E-coli doesnt like bladders.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

I am so sorry to hear of your troubles and misadventures due to Sandy. It is so hard when mother nature unleashes her wrath. I hope you get your NORM back soon.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I just love this story. Again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Awesome story. I like the ending.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Marry Me

That was just PERFECT. *sigh

Author's Response:

Hi, Happy Easter if you celebrate it. I know it’s been a bit of a wait for the next chapter of TLA, but I promise it won’t be much longer, just a couple of days at the most. In the meantime here is a teaser to get ya by.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I will never be able to express just how much it is appreciated.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

 

Chapter 31 teaser…

 

Bella was just about to ring for the nurse and beg to use the bathroom when there was a knock on the door to her room followed by it swinging open to reveal Dr. Cooper pushing in an ultrasound machine.

 

“Thank God,” Bella said a little louder than I think she meant to.

 

“Is everything ok?” Dr. Cooper asked when he heard Bella’s remark. Bella promptly turned various different shades of red upon realizing she had been heard.

 

Trying not to laugh at my wife’s embarrassment, because she was damn cute when she was, I answered for her, “Yes.” I couldn’t stop the soft chuckle that escaped as I finished my answer. “I just think Bella is starting to feel a bit water logged and ready to explode.”

 

“Well then let’s get this done before she does,” he said to me with a slight smile on his face and then turned to look at Bella and said. “Now, I know you are probably pretty uncomfortable having a full bladder combined with the pressure from the baby. The test is easier to do while you have a full bladder, however if it becomes too hard for you to wait or it becomes painful let me know.”

 

“Ok,” Bella said and nodded.

 

“Last thing before we get started,” Dr. Cooper said,” is that I need to apply some gel on your stomach for the transducer to move across it easily. It is supposed to be warmed, but sometimes if it’s a new bottle it can be quite cold. So I wanted to warn you in case.”

 

Bella nodded once again and he squirted the gel on her.  It must have been warm since she didn’t seem to react at all to it being on her. I glanced at Bella and saw her chewing nervously on her bottom lip. But I quickly turned my head in the direction of the machine’s monitor as soon as I heard the familiar thump of my and Bella’s baby’s heartbeat. We had heard it at each one of her previous doctor appointments and had become very attached to its sound and became more and more eager to hear it again at each of her visits.

 

The screen remained blank for a minute or two as the doctor moved the device back and forth over Bella’s abdomen. Suddenly there was what appeared to be what almost looked like a…

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

I'm re-reading the story and this chapter and I cracked up again. You do a great jub of describing the scene with Charlie and Edward. Funny.

Author's Response:

Thanks!   I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

I'm digging this story. I wish I could get a picture in my mind of what Edward looks like when he changes. Is he still attractive or more monster? Is he more alien?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yahoooo! I sure hope there is some just desserts
For Charlie.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I keep changing my mind about what will hapen to Charlie, but something bad, I know!

Summary:

In the midst of tragedy, Bella is forced to make a heart-breaking decision. WARNING: Character Death

This was my entry in the The Never Ever Happily Ever After contest.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 1254
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

That was the most heartache ever poured into one chapter. I'm still weeping. Well written.