Reviews by Twylightfan4life
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625220
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

This story...takes my breath away!  I couldn't stop reading and now I'm dying for more.  Please post more soon!  Edward and Bella still have a long road ahead of them, I'm glad that he didn't abuse her in the basement.  Please...please...please post more soon!!!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Please let Edward as his brothers find Bella before Carlisle or Demetri can hurt her.  I think a hit on dear old dad and cousin D are in order and add uncle Marcus for good measure...let's call Jake!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Loved this chapter...you had me in tears!  Glad to see that through all the challenges they were all able to get the help they needed and are moving forward in a positive direction.  I would love to see you complete the novel idea. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Deep!!!  Can't wait to see how Rose will respond to the news of their new addition.



Author's Response:

I'm sure that it will be intense.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315806
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

Strides are being made for the new couple, let's hope they can keep it together when they get back to school

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

It's about damn time they dropped the pretenses.

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77153
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Semibreve

What a fantastic story, I couldn't stop reading it.  I hope these two come clean with each other and finally make the connection.  I can't wait for your next posting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I love writing it! I hopefully won't keep you waiting for the next Chapter! Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bracket

Sounds like little "Eddie" wants to come out and play.  Can't wait to see how everything unfolds in his room tomorrow night.  Damn Cougars!!!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Demisemiquaver

Poor Bella...Rose always has to be the Bitch we all know and love.  I hope that Bella doesn't take to long to go back to the hotel and face Edward.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Hemidemisemiquaver

Poor Edward...the boy really needs to get to the point the next time he's in Bella's presence.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rest

You are a tease!!!  Please let Bella receive the call from Edward already...they are suffering enough apart. 

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Family Time Part I

Great story...interesting how Alice is her personal wardrobe assistant and not a person.  Can't wait to read more, a POV from Edward would be great.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Stepping Forward

Good to see these twoare opening up to the possibilty of "them"

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision

Poor Bella!  I hope that Edward comes to his senses soon

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt

Noooooo....you can't end the chapter like that...I don't like cliffhangers.  Please post more soon.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished

Good to read Edward's POV, but I'm soooo not liking him right now.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28. The Compound

Crazy things are definately going down...I hope the Cullen boys find out what happened to the girls and take steps to help them

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture

Please post more soon...loving it.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Escape

WOW!  Wasn't expecting that but glad that it happened.  Please post your next update quickly.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi

Emmett and Rose are at the house, they had to turn her in order to save her.  This story is getting so good, I'm loving that Bella has these extra powers.  I can't wait to read your next chapter.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

I was not expecting this turn of events...true Edward did need to know there are consequences to his actions, but WOW!  Please post quickly

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

Good to know that karma comes full circle for both E&B.  Can't wait to read the next installment, post quickly!!!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37. Succubae?

Love this story, can't wait to read Edward's POV....please post quickly!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38. Finding Edward

It's about time that Edward comes back to the land of the living.  Can't wait to see what the Cullen women have cooked up for the tramps.  Post quickly!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Great story!  Bella is a strong person, who says love doesn't conquer all?



Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Glad to see there is a happy ending after all!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

Great story...couldn't stop reading it.  Please post the next chapter soon...can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks! The next chapter will be up in the next few days!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Love the Alice and the Rents...they make great points for Bella to think about.  I hope that she doesn't put herself in the line of fire and takes her mother's wonderful advice.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

Great story!  Glad to see that everything came full circle with Edward, Bella, Carlisle, Alice and Jasper.  Can't wait for the epi

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995727
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was a hot scene with the Cullen-Swan camp.  Can't wait to see what they will do with B's apartment.



Author's Response:

me too *wink*

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This is a great story!  Love that Bella is starting to truly trust Edward and understand the dynamic of their relationship full circle.  It's sad to see that she has never had any support in her life until meeting the Cullen's.  Please post more soon....can't wait for the apartment drama.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Lol; those two are insatiable...gotta love it!



Author's Response:

freaking tiring - let me tell you! xoxo

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG!  Great idea...the family getting Bella's apartment secure since she's so stubborn.  What was going on with Edward and the snapping session?  I hope that this can be salvaged.  Communication...that's what Edward has always focused on with Bella...he needs to be reminded it goes both ways.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

LOL; Oh boy, Bella's going to learn the hard way about peer pressure...I can't wait to read your next chapter.  Please post more quickly.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - I have started the next chapter - have patience, Honey!!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter!  Yes, you did cover a lot of information, but it helped to paint a clear picture.  Can't wait to see what's going to happen when they get together.  Also can't wait to see how Edward will react when he finds out who Bella's boss is.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That was hawttt!!!  That was an intense scene in the playroom,  Bella is one lucky girl



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - and yes she is!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Here's hoping Edward calms down before Bella leaves and gets hurt. 

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved this chapter, glad to see the happy couple has venturedoutside the confines of their love nest.  I can't wait to see what's going to take place next now that they have been outted.  Please post quickly...i love this story!



Author's Response:

I am working on it!

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Edward continously impresses me with his undying loyalty to Bella.  This story is getting better and better all the time.  I can't wait for your next posting.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Loved this chapter, those two are insatiable!  The Sqweeler sounds like a dream toy for a girl...I will have to check that one out.  Glad to see that Bella's confidence is growing.  Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Those two are beyond words...they have such a sexually charged loving relationship.  Can't wait to read your next chapter, you are right...none of the Cullens can keep it in their pants. :)



Author's Response: thank you for the review xoxo

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Ok  so the perv James is Tanya's brother that was disowned.  Can't wait to read more...the scenes with E&B are hottt as always.  Great job!



Author's Response:

thank you and thank you and I switch the fan on regularly

;)

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Glad that Bella is allowing this family to shower her with love.  Edward is Domward mode is too funny...I love when he takes charge. 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and I love Domward too :)

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I for one don't feel Bella failed at that party.  Edward on the other hand needs to control those bitches...allowing a woman to kiss his mouth in front of Bella is unacceptable.  I think it's time that he got a taste of his own medicine, perhaps a drive by at the art gallery when Riley is in town and admiring Bella's beauty and paying her serious compliments on how she's doing at the gallery...that bastard deserves a taste of his own medicine.



Author's Response:

thanks for your comments and your review

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

Wow!   B is going to take the plunge at a wedding reception? :)  What a way to end a chapter....glad to see she's getting curious on the sexual front, hope to see her overcome that situation as well, she's waisting a totally hot man



Author's Response:

Maybe she did, maybe she didn't ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Keep writing and edit them later...great story!  Can't wait to find out all the details of Bella and Edwards sorted past.  Can't wait til your next update.



Author's Response:

I will keep writing, the next update will be tomorrow (Sunday)! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

Great story!  Young boys often do the craziest things instead of owning up to their feelings.  Can't wait to see where you are taking this story.



Author's Response:

Than you!

Yeah I know from own experiences that they do ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

Moving in time was fun, can't wait to read the next posting

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

Glad to see Edward is a rock for Bella who is obviously suffering from a deep depression.



Author's Response:

Yes, I am, too.

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

It's refreshing to see Tanya not making a move on Edward.   Love that Bella is trusting Edward and allowing him into her heart.  Thanks for the early update! 



Author's Response:

I know, it's not so 'klishéed'.

You're welcome, thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

Sounds like those two are no longer in a pretend marriage.  Glad to see Edward is open & honest with his feelings.



Author's Response:

We'll see what they'll do about the rules ;)

Thank you,

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

Jealousward is hawt!  Can't wait to see how he's going to make up with B after that little act.



Author's Response:

Haha yeah I know. I want one of him as well ;)

Just keep on reading and you'll find out.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

oh no...poor  Bella



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know..

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

So glad there two are moving in the right direction...pretty hot petting scenes, can't wait for them to seel the deal.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

Say it already Bella!



Author's Response:

She will!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

Love that Bella took the next step!  Can't wait til they let it be known there will be no annulment



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And that will happen within the next three chapters, I promise!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

Tease!!!  Looks like Bella is wearing her big girl thong today! 



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that you think so! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

Atlast!  Glad to see the happy couple has sealed the deal.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, then! :)

Thanks for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

Great chapter...glad to see they were able to overcome that little tift.  I am so loving your story...don't think that we've abandoned you...people are probably on vacation.  Please continue to post as I'm sure others like myself look forward to your story.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

Bella's mom is a piece of work...M.I.A. and passing judgement on everything and everyone...WOW!  I'm glad to see that Rose put her in her place and that Edward was able to calm Bella down. 

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

Yes!  When it's right, it's right! Baby Cullen is a definate go!



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

Seems Edward is planning for the little pitter patter of feet in the near future.



Author's Response:

Maybe he does! ;)

I loved that expression (?). 'Little pitter patter of feet' Sounds so cute!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

Yippee!!! Glad to see that the newlyweds will experience parenthood as well.  When I was pregnant with my son, I had mad cravings...McDonald's french fries and a vanilla soft serve ice cream cone where my favorites, when eaten together.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing! That was a very strange craving, haha! But McDonald's=yummy! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

This was classic with Charlie and him knowing that they were acting strange.  Can't wait to see how the pregnancy is going to progress.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

Great chapter!  Glad to see Bella extended herself to her mom...please don't let her loose the baby.

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26670
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Conclusion

WOW!  This was sick!  The family dynamics of these 3 is crazy as heck.