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Bio:
-OCD about punctuation, spelling, dialogue being broken into paragraphs, stories being in the correct category.
-Started reading on this site as my favorite M stories are being deleted at ff.net.
-I will tell you when I do or don't like something, especially if it's something listed above.
-I hate text/computer speak. I especially hate terms like OMG, TMI, etc. Spell it out people.
See my profile on ff.net below for lots of misspelled words that bug the hell out of me. If you can't get those words straight you shouldn't be writing.
-Yes, I'm a bit of a bitch. I know.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I LOVE you right now! Yeah!
Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.
Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.
The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue
“I’m Mayor Jasper Whitlock-Hale.’
You mean Major?
Author's Response:
Yes! I do mean Major!
Thank you for pointing that out!
You rock!!!
~Mel x x x
Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER. But fate has plans. In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams. It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need. But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....
WARNING: This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content. Hence the NC-17 rating...
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64121
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I don't review much but I had to on this one. It's perfect.
Also- when I got my epidural the doctor hit a nerve or something and my leg jerked, kind of like when they hit the hammer on your knee, and I kicked my dear husband right in the balls.
The doctors laughed so hard I thought we would have to put the c-section on hold.
When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love? Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55115
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
u r forgiven
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
The only things I would change are the abbreviations. Should be I'll instead of I will. I'm instead of I am. Etc. It's much easier to read.
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh, I can't remember what chapter it is and I don't want to go looking but there was one where the top bit was all messed up. It kept repeating and cutting off in weird places. Kind of annoying.
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh, I can't remember what chapter it is and I don't want to go looking but there was one where the top bit was all messed up. It kept repeating and cutting off in weird places. Kind of annoying.
Also- OMG! So irritating and so out of character it's not even funny. I know this is slightly AU and OOC but still, that is where I draw the line. None of these characters would ever use that term. It's so stupid.
Author's Response:
I fixed the chapter that was messed up so thank you for pointing that out.
Sorry you are not enjoying the OOC and AU story that we have written. This was the way we wanted it to play out and what term are you talking about that none of them would use? If you are not enjoying the story then maybe you should stop reading it. The story does pick up when Bella is 21 and older and has been through a lot so she has changed. Edward just lost the last 4 years of his life too. They are going to be different.
This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.
On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.
At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?
Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!
This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!
Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40831
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The meeting
Okay- I was doing well until this chapter. The dialogue needs to be broken up. Each character needs a different paragraph.
Author's Response:
Just wait for it, it's being beta'ed and only the first four chapters are ready ;-)
Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.
**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
The only thing that I would change is the dialogue break up. Every time a new character speaks it should start a new paragraph.
James- Dialogue
Bella- Dialogue
James- Dialogue
Etc.
Much easier to read.
“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?
They said I was going home but where was home now?
OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse Bella x Edward
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I skimmed this chapter and hope to come back to it when I have more time. Just a thought- each character needs a new paragraph when speaking. It's hard to keep track of who is talking when it is formatted the way you have it.
Author's Response:
Please dont hesitate to tell me when I do something confusing. I dont want my work to be junkie and unreadable. So I have fixed those conversations and when you reread it, you will no problems - i hope. Thanks for skimming ti! i hope you enjoy it later!
This story tella the tale of Edward and Bella's honeymoon on Isle Esme and the ensuing events of the pregnancy, and Bella's transformation into her new life.
Contains various pov's through the stories and sexual content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110415 Read Count: 10324
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good so far. Each time a different character speaks though it should be a new paragraph.
Author's Response:
your the first person to tell me that. sorry if it doesn't get fixed, as this story is already completed, but I will try to remember that for any other stories I write.!
Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.
***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything
Won't be reading anymore. This kind of writing to too hard to read. Each character should get a new paragraph when speaking.
This paragraph below gives me and lots of other readers migraines.
I showered quickly, unsure of the hot water. I dressed in a pair of jeans and a long sleeved T and put on my Docs. I left my room and was surprised to see Andy was awake, watching Spongebob. He glanced up at me. "Bad night kid?" "Yeah. Sorry if I woke you." He smiled sadly at me. "It's all good Izz. Just wish you could get some rest." "I'll rest when I'm dead, Andy" I said with a smirk. "Now get your butt into some clothes. We're going to get some breakfast." "Alright Izz, but it's my treat today" he teased as he pulled a twenty out of this pocket. I was touched. Andy didn't keep cash on him long, too tempted by the pharmacy that was his life.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought. I won't waste space with defense of my "early" work, just know that I realize I am a work in progress. I have been working on my dialog format, and believe that later chapters reflect that. At some point, I plan to edit previous chapters, but my real life doesn't allow me that luxury right now.
I would like to mention that while I appreciate very much ANY feedback I receive, positive or negative, you could be more polite. Bitchy reviews give me and lots of other writers migraines. Your point is well taken, and in fact I agree with you, but you really managed to piss me off with the way you said it. No hard feelings, just something to think about next time you review someone.
Hope you found something else that won't give you a headache.
Banner by Kyndall Viscia
What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Holy shit. Not at all what I expected after waiting impatiently for you to catch up on this site. I don't know what it is but being in bed releases the gases for me too... And it always blows right into my husbands face via the fan cause I don't have AC... Poor boys...
"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J
Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32440
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
In response to your authors note- I have a frequent buyer card to my local shop. Every dollar is a point. Every 100 points is a gift certificate for $10 or something like that.
I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26
Is there any way you can adjust the format so it isn't one giant paragraph. I can't read it like this. Chapter 25 was perfect.
Banner by Chandrakanta
Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.
Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.
She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.
He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist.
Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion.
They were Caught in the Flames
Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082126
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Forget about dropping a bomb, and drop a towel instead!
Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn.
After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hey, love the story, any updates coming up?